Just average read with a juvenile writing style
This is my first woman's murder club book, and probably my last based on the poor quality of the writing. The potential that the actual person who wrote this is the writer of all the other books in the series clouds my desire to read anymore, because it certainly isn't Patterson who wrote this. As I read the story and became more and more invested in it, I started to ask myself is this book ghostwritten?
I had heard that this was a good book, it is a high star rating, and so I thought another Patterson book that should be a good read. What I didn't realize at the time I ordered the book, was that the actual author is Maxine Paetro while Patterson only placed his name on the book to get sales apparently. I will never read another book that has the name Maxine Paetro listed as an author or co-author.
Reading the description of the book it sounded very interesting and had a good storyline, so I thought for sure I would enjoy the story. Sadly, I was disappointed. The buildup sounded much better than the actual writing made it in the end.
Firstly, there was a lot of wasted time building up the narrative, much of which led me to put the book down over and over again. When it finally became interesting and fast-paced enough to read through the poor writing style, bam it's done.
Speaking of poor writing style, let's get into that starting with the excessive use of: I said, s/he said...said...said...said... Nearly every dialogue in the entire book began with the words he, or she, or I said, and on the rare occasion ended with I said, he said, or she said! Does Maxine Paetro not realize there are more ways to introduce or end dialogue, than using the word "said" so abusively! She even asked questions, but used the introduction of, I said rather than the appropriate, I asked, or some other variant . For example: * Conklin said, "killed question why?"* The sentence clearly ends in a question mark. The sentence clearly deserves to be written as "Conklin asked", not "Conklin said"! The use of said was used so much as to make the writing unclear at points, and created the need to reread parts in order to understand what was actually going on in the story. The book is just 380 pages long, around 77,000 words, and use the word "said" roughly a thousand times or more...I lost count. While counting I noticed, "I said" at least 200 times! It was very monotonous, and distracted from the story. Add that to the he said, she said, specific character name said....bleh!
Sadly, the poor writing style Overshadowed the actual storyline which deserved better attention in editing. Is there no copyeditor when a big name is on the cover of a book? Is it not the job of an editor to make suggestions that make the book better? If this is in fact the 18th installment of the *Women's Murder Club*, it seems that the writer should have honed her skills a bit better at this point.