I liked it. I thought it could be better though. I think the beginning set up the story well, the middle was great, but the concluding story was just alright.
My favourite part was Marisol crying after Kimbrough confronted her. Kimbrough came in all puffed up and outraged, demanding Marisol issue a retraction to the paper. He was worried over scandal because he had a young sister who needed to have a good standing reputation for her debut to society. Meanwhile, Marisol had been dealing with all the stress over her husband's death, specifically, being accused of being the murderer. She is also pregnant and Kimbrough in a high dudgeon was the last straw. She started sobbing and Kimbrough realized he was way over his head, which took the wind out of his angry sails.
Speaking of sails, I think my enjoyment really took a dip at the revelation that the maid was raped. It was all good fun to have Marisol's husband writing very specific situations for his will. The story at that point was lighthearted regency farce. I mean it is apparent that the husband was a bastard but it could be more or less be comedic. However, it took a dark turn real fast when the maid revealed she was raped. I didn't like that at all. I especially didn't like that they were all judging the fate of the two servants as if they had a right to it. Marisol really disappointed me at this point. She was very naive in even suggesting they come forward with the self defence story. I also think she lacked compassion when she was judging the maid for not wanting the baby. Other than this part of the story, Marisol had been great. The last part of the story was really a downer. Prior to that, it was slightly comedic, filled with running gags about the inspector slowly setting up his relatives to better lives, by giving out referrals whenever there was a need for a hand.
The story revolves around Marisol and Kimbrough. They get brought together by her dead husband's will. The husband assigned Kimbrough guardianship over his heir, which Kimbrough would have happily declined if not for the land the husband dangled over his head. The land was Kimbrough's to begin with but the husband rerouted the stream and took it over. Kimbrough had been after the land for a while to save his tenants so he was willing to be the guardian, even if it meant further association with the husband's affairs.
Marisol was heavily pregnant amidst all the turmoil over her husband's death. He was caught in bed with the neighbour, which the rags played up. The angle was Marisol killed her husband after catching him cheating on her. Marisol couldn't have cared less but the people speculated that she was the murderer.
The murderer was no one. He died by accident. The servant was wrestling the gun away from him. The servant was demanding he do right by the maid he raped. The servant, prior to this, had been asking the husband for permission to marry the maid. The husband declined every time. What's more, he decided to rape the maid. Only then did he give permission for the servant to marry the maid, because she was pregnant. When the servant spat in the husband's face, the husband drew a gun. The servant was wrestling the husband to point the gun in another direction when it fired and killed the husband.
The story was a story about the cast of characters all with sufficient motive to murder the husband. The inspector was investigating everybody from the foppish brother, the disgruntled neighbour, and the wronged wife. Each of the characters were introduced well and the story beyond their affiliation with the husband blossomed from there.
Marisol's story was being a protective mother and being vigilant about possible harms. She was paranoid over the murderer being at large and the possibility of her baby being attacked.
Kimbrough's story was taking his duty very seriously. He took over the guardian role and was very hands on. It helped that he was falling for Marisol and she him but it isn't explicitly stated until near the end.
Marisol's brother was a discontented youth who finds his way after Kimbrough gives guidance in the right direction. He turned into a heroic soldier and Kimbrough's sister takes notice.
The inspector solves the murder and does a satisfactory job, enough to get a promotion.