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Lodestone #1
The Sea of Storms
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Ail-Kar, a white-hole portal from another universe, rains meteoroids onto the surface of the planet Kelanni. But the so-called "lodestones" behave according to different physical laws, transforming Kelanni's society. With the aid of the fearsome Keltar in their flying cloaks, the Kelanni are being put to forced labor to mine the lodestones. Shann, an orphan with a fiery disposition, witnesses a battle between a Keltar and a stranger bearing a similar flying cloak. She tracks down the stranger, and learns of the technology behind the Keltars' power, joining him on a mission to free the slaves and cut off their supply of lodestones. Meanwhile Keris, a Keltar, is sent on a mission to track down the rebels. She is attacked by a flying creature and saved by the enigmatic Chandara. At their Great Tree, she learns that a mysterious "Prophet" is out to destroy the Kelanni people. Their only hope is a powerful instrument hidden in the distant past. Pursued by Keltar, the party will encounter bizarre creatures, ancient technologies and terrifying dangers. Finally, they must seek to cross a massive storm barrier in order to reach the other side of their world, where a world-shaking revelation awaits.
First Place Award Winner - 2010 Premier Book Awards.
First Place Award Winner (New Author) - 2011 Royal Dragonfly Book Awards.
First Place Award Winner (Science Fiction) - 2011 Royal Dragonfly Book Awards.
First Place Award Winner (Young Adult) - 2011 Royal Dragonfly Book Awards.
First Place Award Winner (Science Fiction) - 2011 Purple Dragonfly Book Awards.
First Place Award Winner (Young Adult) - 2011 Purple Dragonfly Book Awards.
Global European Award Winner - 2010 Reader Views Awards.
Second Place Award Winner (Young Adult) - 2010 Reader Views Awards.
Bronze Award Winner - 2010 Readers Favorite Book Awards.
Second Place Award Winner - 2010 Written Art Awards.
Finalist - 2010 Foreword Book of the Year Award.
(Excerpt) Madness? Obsession? Keris knew little of such things. It was impossible to believe that this was the same man; the man who had taken her in and nurtured her; who had impressed on her the conviction that the Kelanni needed to be protected and cared for. Yet somehow he had turned into a monster.
His hands slipped to one end of his staff and he swung it towards her in a wide arc. She jumped back instinctively, the diamond blade passing inches from her midriff. "I'm gratified to see that your reflexes are as keen as ever, Keris." He spun around and then leapt into the air a short distance, aiming the staff at her head. She side stepped neatly, and the blade flashed past her harmlessly. "Good, very good," he approved. "Now are you going to obey my wishes or are you going to defend yourself?"
He was advancing on her again. Keris felt as if she were in a waking dream. One hand moved involuntarily to her own staff, gripping the smooth darkwood. It felt solid, reassuring. Her other hand moved to her neck control and she adjusted the bronze layer of her cloak, seeking the pressure of natural lodestone. As she registered the strengths and directions of the familiar push of the ore, it was bizarrely the words of Mordal himself that came back to her, spoken in a different place and at a different time.
"Battling another Keltar is unlike any other battle you will ever fight. When encountering anyone else, the lodestone will furnish you with a decisive advantage in height and momentum. However, when you are facing another Keltar, those advantages are cancelled out. Instead, the field of battle and the configuration of lodestone deposits become all important. A clash between Keltar is primarily a battle of tactics. Even superior strength and agility can be overcome by superior positioning and spatial orientation. You must immediately determine the location and strength of any deposits and then 'own' them, denying your opponent any advantage." (Continued)
Ail-Kar, a white-hole portal from another universe, rains meteoroids onto the surface of the planet Kelanni. But the so-called "lodestones" behave according to different physical laws, transforming Kelanni's society. With the aid of the fearsome Keltar in their flying cloaks, the Kelanni are being put to forced labor to mine the lodestones. Shann, an orphan with a fiery disposition, witnesses a battle between a Keltar and a stranger bearing a similar flying cloak. She tracks down the stranger, and learns of the technology behind the Keltars' power, joining him on a mission to free the slaves and cut off their supply of lodestones. Meanwhile Keris, a Keltar, is sent on a mission to track down the rebels. She is attacked by a flying creature and saved by the enigmatic Chandara. At their Great Tree, she learns that a mysterious "Prophet" is out to destroy the Kelanni people. Their only hope is a powerful instrument hidden in the distant past. Pursued by Keltar, the party will encounter bizarre creatures, ancient technologies and terrifying dangers. Finally, they must seek to cross a massive storm barrier in order to reach the other side of their world, where a world-shaking revelation awaits.
First Place Award Winner - 2010 Premier Book Awards.
First Place Award Winner (New Author) - 2011 Royal Dragonfly Book Awards.
First Place Award Winner (Science Fiction) - 2011 Royal Dragonfly Book Awards.
First Place Award Winner (Young Adult) - 2011 Royal Dragonfly Book Awards.
First Place Award Winner (Science Fiction) - 2011 Purple Dragonfly Book Awards.
First Place Award Winner (Young Adult) - 2011 Purple Dragonfly Book Awards.
Global European Award Winner - 2010 Reader Views Awards.
Second Place Award Winner (Young Adult) - 2010 Reader Views Awards.
Bronze Award Winner - 2010 Readers Favorite Book Awards.
Second Place Award Winner - 2010 Written Art Awards.
Finalist - 2010 Foreword Book of the Year Award.
(Excerpt) Madness? Obsession? Keris knew little of such things. It was impossible to believe that this was the same man; the man who had taken her in and nurtured her; who had impressed on her the conviction that the Kelanni needed to be protected and cared for. Yet somehow he had turned into a monster.
His hands slipped to one end of his staff and he swung it towards her in a wide arc. She jumped back instinctively, the diamond blade passing inches from her midriff. "I'm gratified to see that your reflexes are as keen as ever, Keris." He spun around and then leapt into the air a short distance, aiming the staff at her head. She side stepped neatly, and the blade flashed past her harmlessly. "Good, very good," he approved. "Now are you going to obey my wishes or are you going to defend yourself?"
He was advancing on her again. Keris felt as if she were in a waking dream. One hand moved involuntarily to her own staff, gripping the smooth darkwood. It felt solid, reassuring. Her other hand moved to her neck control and she adjusted the bronze layer of her cloak, seeking the pressure of natural lodestone. As she registered the strengths and directions of the familiar push of the ore, it was bizarrely the words of Mordal himself that came back to her, spoken in a different place and at a different time.
"Battling another Keltar is unlike any other battle you will ever fight. When encountering anyone else, the lodestone will furnish you with a decisive advantage in height and momentum. However, when you are facing another Keltar, those advantages are cancelled out. Instead, the field of battle and the configuration of lodestone deposits become all important. A clash between Keltar is primarily a battle of tactics. Even superior strength and agility can be overcome by superior positioning and spatial orientation. You must immediately determine the location and strength of any deposits and then 'own' them, denying your opponent any advantage." (Continued)
290 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 12, 2010
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Mark Whiteway
29 books50 followersMark Whiteway (1959- ) lives in rural West Sussex, England, near the former home of H G Wells. The Lodestone series of novels is built around the concept of negative matter-an extension of Einstein's Theory of General Relativity.
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July 7, 2014
A few weeks ago I was looking for some books to read/review when I came across "Lodestone, Book One: The Sea of Storms." I definitely found the title to be unique so I popped over to Amazon in order to learn more about it.
Ail-Kar, a white-hole portal from another universe, consistently rains meteors down on a planet called Kelanni. These meteors, also called "lodestones" behave according to different physical laws due to the fact that they are from another planet. These "lodestones" and their unusual properties transform Kelanni's society. Unfortunately there always some who look for ways to capitalize on other people's ignorance, naiveté and / or superstitions. Such is the case with the Keltars who have helped to enslave the Kelanni people; forcing them to mine this meteoric ore all in the name of the one known as "The Prophet."
Shann is an orphan with an incredibly fiery disposition. One night she witnesses a fierce battle between one of the feared Keltars and a stranger who uses the same Keltar technology. After saving his life she joins this man in his quest to free the enslaved Kelanni people.
Keris is a Keltar who has been sent to hunt down and destroy this small band of rebels. Along the way she is attacked by a huge winged predator only to be saved by an almost forgotten race known as the Chandara. The Chandara's home is known as the "Great Tree" and while she is there she learns the true nature of "The Prophet." She is made to understand that the prophet's ultimate goal is the complete eradication of the Kelanni people. Somehow this small group must now put their differences and hatreds aside and work together in an attempt to save their people.
As I read "Lodestone, Book One: The Sea of Storms" by author Mark Whiteway I have to say I was impressed with his writing ability. There were multiple storylines throughout this book and yet Whiteway managed to seamlessly bring them together into a cohesive and interesting tale. The world he has dreamed up comes across as larger than life and I dare say anyone who reads this book will follow its tale with bated breath. There's definitely a cliffhanger of an ending which of course is a great lead-in for "Lodestone, Book Two: The World of Ice and Stars." Luckily for me I just happen to have a copy of this one already in my possession...
(Reviewed in association with Rebecca's Reads).
Ail-Kar, a white-hole portal from another universe, consistently rains meteors down on a planet called Kelanni. These meteors, also called "lodestones" behave according to different physical laws due to the fact that they are from another planet. These "lodestones" and their unusual properties transform Kelanni's society. Unfortunately there always some who look for ways to capitalize on other people's ignorance, naiveté and / or superstitions. Such is the case with the Keltars who have helped to enslave the Kelanni people; forcing them to mine this meteoric ore all in the name of the one known as "The Prophet."
Shann is an orphan with an incredibly fiery disposition. One night she witnesses a fierce battle between one of the feared Keltars and a stranger who uses the same Keltar technology. After saving his life she joins this man in his quest to free the enslaved Kelanni people.
Keris is a Keltar who has been sent to hunt down and destroy this small band of rebels. Along the way she is attacked by a huge winged predator only to be saved by an almost forgotten race known as the Chandara. The Chandara's home is known as the "Great Tree" and while she is there she learns the true nature of "The Prophet." She is made to understand that the prophet's ultimate goal is the complete eradication of the Kelanni people. Somehow this small group must now put their differences and hatreds aside and work together in an attempt to save their people.
As I read "Lodestone, Book One: The Sea of Storms" by author Mark Whiteway I have to say I was impressed with his writing ability. There were multiple storylines throughout this book and yet Whiteway managed to seamlessly bring them together into a cohesive and interesting tale. The world he has dreamed up comes across as larger than life and I dare say anyone who reads this book will follow its tale with bated breath. There's definitely a cliffhanger of an ending which of course is a great lead-in for "Lodestone, Book Two: The World of Ice and Stars." Luckily for me I just happen to have a copy of this one already in my possession...
(Reviewed in association with Rebecca's Reads).
September 22, 2012
I am neither a sci-fi aficionado nor an adventure freak, and rather prefer reading books that teach social values and personal development. But The Sea of Storms is an exemption. Beneath the book's breathtaking, heart-pounding stunts and endless struggles lie deeper lessons in life that the author effectively conveyed. Please allow me to share how this book unexpectedly touched my life...
Lesson 1: It is amazing how the main characters- Lyall, Shann, Keris, and Alondo - found each other and became an indomitable team that would determine the fate of everyone's existence. It was not easy to trust a stranger and, much more, to keep everyone intact despite having diverse personalities. But because they share a common goal, they put aside their differences and stay united. Lyall's leadership style is inspiring and worth emulating. Their teamwork made their combined strengths exponentially powerful than any number of keltars and enemies.
Lesson 2: The book also tackled how to manage one's strengths and weaknesses, and to accept those of others. While a weak Shann discovered her new strengths, the strong Keris learned that she has weaknesses. Both characters struggled to maintain equilibrium. Overcoming weaknesses and managing new-found strengths are hidden treasures that the readers can dig within the book's pages.
Lesson 3: The most important lesson that I've learned from the book, among many more, is the value of selflessness. The characters shared their unique ways of offering their lives for the sake of others- family, friends, and fellow Kelanni. They have risked their lives and faced whatever challenges that lie ahead because someone depends on them. It was said that "the greatest love is laying down one's life for another", and the characters have, without a doubt, generously demonstrated it throughout the story.
I had so much fun reading the book as I explored every corner of Kelanni in my imagination. With the author's clear and effective descriptions, I felt comfortable putting myself in the characters' shoes. I allowed my creativity to work for me and felt free in building the images in my mind. And while I took pleasure in reading the book, I appreciate the lessons it instilled in my heart.
Lesson 1: It is amazing how the main characters- Lyall, Shann, Keris, and Alondo - found each other and became an indomitable team that would determine the fate of everyone's existence. It was not easy to trust a stranger and, much more, to keep everyone intact despite having diverse personalities. But because they share a common goal, they put aside their differences and stay united. Lyall's leadership style is inspiring and worth emulating. Their teamwork made their combined strengths exponentially powerful than any number of keltars and enemies.
Lesson 2: The book also tackled how to manage one's strengths and weaknesses, and to accept those of others. While a weak Shann discovered her new strengths, the strong Keris learned that she has weaknesses. Both characters struggled to maintain equilibrium. Overcoming weaknesses and managing new-found strengths are hidden treasures that the readers can dig within the book's pages.
Lesson 3: The most important lesson that I've learned from the book, among many more, is the value of selflessness. The characters shared their unique ways of offering their lives for the sake of others- family, friends, and fellow Kelanni. They have risked their lives and faced whatever challenges that lie ahead because someone depends on them. It was said that "the greatest love is laying down one's life for another", and the characters have, without a doubt, generously demonstrated it throughout the story.
I had so much fun reading the book as I explored every corner of Kelanni in my imagination. With the author's clear and effective descriptions, I felt comfortable putting myself in the characters' shoes. I allowed my creativity to work for me and felt free in building the images in my mind. And while I took pleasure in reading the book, I appreciate the lessons it instilled in my heart.
May 14, 2016
It was awhile ago that I read this book so I can't give it a comprehensive review like I usually do. I will tell you that I remember that the characters were interesting with a guy that could fly with the use of magical/science-based loadstones and a woman and a young girl who were unlikely teammates.
They meet and you learn some about their backgrounds in this story based in a world of different and yet similar creatures to what we have on Earth. At the end of the book the group makes it to the sea. This is the first book in a promising series and very much worth a read by SciFI and Fantasy readers and you can read it free so there is no risk. I give it five out of five stars.
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They meet and you learn some about their backgrounds in this story based in a world of different and yet similar creatures to what we have on Earth. At the end of the book the group makes it to the sea. This is the first book in a promising series and very much worth a read by SciFI and Fantasy readers and you can read it free so there is no risk. I give it five out of five stars.
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May 15, 2011
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One of my favorite things about books is that they have the power to transport the reader anywhere in the world, even if that means transporting them to a different world. Whiteway capitalizes on this power, and uses it to his advantage to bring the reader a creative story filled with crazy animals, gliding cloaks, and star-crossed destiny. At first, the the book appears to be strictly science fiction. The story takes place in the world of Kelanni--a planet devoid of human life, yet incredibly human at the same time. Its inhabitants are being oppressed by the Keltar, guardians of the Prophet who have abused their power in the name of their savior. But when one of the characters receives an important message from the past, an epic journey begins and the characters embark on a quest to travel beyond the Sea of Storms. In the tradition of J.R.R’s Lord of the Rings, after the quest is received, the plot becomes fast paced and action filed. There is little down time to become bored, especially in between events like escaping a slave camp or rescuing a comrade from a giant lava snake’s den. The world was rich with its own customs, natural laws, crazy creatures and landscapes that, when combined, had me wishing that my jacket was filled with lodestones.
However, despite the exciting pacing of the plot and the amazing amount of easy-to-understand detail that Whiteway puts into the more alien aspects of his novel, reading the first 100 pages or so was difficult for me. Not because I didn’t like was I was reading, but because I couldn’t connect to the characters. There wasn’t enough background information given about most of the main characters to make me identify what drove them to embark on the dangerous quest, other than the reason that the world depended on it. I needed that emotional connection, the one that makes me go, “Aww…she has no other choice,” or “Oh snap, he’s going for revenge!” and really believe it. Regardless, Shann, Alando, Lyall, and Keris provided an even balance of skills to the group, and their personalities played well off of each other--especially towards the end. It was hard to choose a favorite, but if I had to, it would probably be Alando. His light-hearted comments relieved some of the tension of the story, and I enjoyed listening to his well placed words of wisdom.
Overall, the novel was very well done, and the end had me sitting on the edge of my seat. Even though the beginning was a little slow, once the edges of the plot were outlined it became a roller coaster of action and adventure. If you're into books that blend science fiction and fantasy (and blend it extremely well), then I highly recommend you pick up the first book in the Lodestone series. A fair warning, though: The end is a cliffhanger, and a seriously painful one! I know I’ll have to get my hands on the sequel as soon as I get the chance.
One of my favorite things about books is that they have the power to transport the reader anywhere in the world, even if that means transporting them to a different world. Whiteway capitalizes on this power, and uses it to his advantage to bring the reader a creative story filled with crazy animals, gliding cloaks, and star-crossed destiny. At first, the the book appears to be strictly science fiction. The story takes place in the world of Kelanni--a planet devoid of human life, yet incredibly human at the same time. Its inhabitants are being oppressed by the Keltar, guardians of the Prophet who have abused their power in the name of their savior. But when one of the characters receives an important message from the past, an epic journey begins and the characters embark on a quest to travel beyond the Sea of Storms. In the tradition of J.R.R’s Lord of the Rings, after the quest is received, the plot becomes fast paced and action filed. There is little down time to become bored, especially in between events like escaping a slave camp or rescuing a comrade from a giant lava snake’s den. The world was rich with its own customs, natural laws, crazy creatures and landscapes that, when combined, had me wishing that my jacket was filled with lodestones.
However, despite the exciting pacing of the plot and the amazing amount of easy-to-understand detail that Whiteway puts into the more alien aspects of his novel, reading the first 100 pages or so was difficult for me. Not because I didn’t like was I was reading, but because I couldn’t connect to the characters. There wasn’t enough background information given about most of the main characters to make me identify what drove them to embark on the dangerous quest, other than the reason that the world depended on it. I needed that emotional connection, the one that makes me go, “Aww…she has no other choice,” or “Oh snap, he’s going for revenge!” and really believe it. Regardless, Shann, Alando, Lyall, and Keris provided an even balance of skills to the group, and their personalities played well off of each other--especially towards the end. It was hard to choose a favorite, but if I had to, it would probably be Alando. His light-hearted comments relieved some of the tension of the story, and I enjoyed listening to his well placed words of wisdom.
Overall, the novel was very well done, and the end had me sitting on the edge of my seat. Even though the beginning was a little slow, once the edges of the plot were outlined it became a roller coaster of action and adventure. If you're into books that blend science fiction and fantasy (and blend it extremely well), then I highly recommend you pick up the first book in the Lodestone series. A fair warning, though: The end is a cliffhanger, and a seriously painful one! I know I’ll have to get my hands on the sequel as soon as I get the chance.
January 19, 2011
(from Murphy's Library - http://www.murphyslibrary.com/ - rated 3 and a half there)
Kelanni is a planet ruled by a dictator, The Prophet. He has what we could call an army, a loyal one, the Keltar, who are responsible to make sure no one rebels against their leader. The Prophet is a master in the explorations of the lodestone that arrives with meteor showers in Kelanni. All is functioning as The Prophet expects, but there are people out there that are getting tired of his domain.
This book, the first in the Lodestone series that Whiteway wrote, is really an introducing book. You take some time to get used to the universe he created, but once you get to know the details about the planet, the lodestone and the wants of The Prophet, you can't put the story down. I've been reading lots of books with different creatures, fantasies and paranormal subjects, but a pure and truly good fantasy and just fantasy book hasn't got into my hands in a long long time. Lodestone is a good fantasy book.
Lyall, Alonso, Shann and Keris are really good characters and I thought their personalities are well put in this book. Lyall is very well built and I really like him, and Shann is a great character, who I often wanted to hear more from. Alonso made me laugh, even his seriousness can be great. It took me some time to warm up to Keris, but soon I was okay reading her lines too.
The narrative is good, but sometimes I got a little confused by some of the longer paragraphs—maybe it happened because I was getting to know everything about this universe, and it can be a little overwhelming. The constant reminds of the facts during the narrative, however, are always helping me. In this case, it is good that this book repeats some things.
It was as good book, and I look forward to continue reading this series, especially with that ending. The book, in the last pages, made me breathless. Mark Whiteway had my congratulations for this book. He was truly carefull creating his story and putting all pieces of this puzzle together, in a way they just fit. Very good work.
Kelanni is a planet ruled by a dictator, The Prophet. He has what we could call an army, a loyal one, the Keltar, who are responsible to make sure no one rebels against their leader. The Prophet is a master in the explorations of the lodestone that arrives with meteor showers in Kelanni. All is functioning as The Prophet expects, but there are people out there that are getting tired of his domain.
This book, the first in the Lodestone series that Whiteway wrote, is really an introducing book. You take some time to get used to the universe he created, but once you get to know the details about the planet, the lodestone and the wants of The Prophet, you can't put the story down. I've been reading lots of books with different creatures, fantasies and paranormal subjects, but a pure and truly good fantasy and just fantasy book hasn't got into my hands in a long long time. Lodestone is a good fantasy book.
Lyall, Alonso, Shann and Keris are really good characters and I thought their personalities are well put in this book. Lyall is very well built and I really like him, and Shann is a great character, who I often wanted to hear more from. Alonso made me laugh, even his seriousness can be great. It took me some time to warm up to Keris, but soon I was okay reading her lines too.
The narrative is good, but sometimes I got a little confused by some of the longer paragraphs—maybe it happened because I was getting to know everything about this universe, and it can be a little overwhelming. The constant reminds of the facts during the narrative, however, are always helping me. In this case, it is good that this book repeats some things.
It was as good book, and I look forward to continue reading this series, especially with that ending. The book, in the last pages, made me breathless. Mark Whiteway had my congratulations for this book. He was truly carefull creating his story and putting all pieces of this puzzle together, in a way they just fit. Very good work.
September 7, 2012
Sea of Storm is the first book if the Lodestone Series which I was able to
download for Kindle via Amazon. Considering that this is author Mark
Whiteway’s first major creation – it is a brilliant way to forge a bright
career in the Sci-Fi Fantasy genre. Without spoiling the plot too much; the
story evolves around a planet called Kelanni and its people; set in a
distant planet where it is ruled by 3 suns and has an abundance of supply
of lodestones. These powerful lodestones are used as a tool of power and
immense energy by the high authorities in Kelanni also known as Keltars.
They are the eyes and ears of a high power they all serve called the
Prophet. The Keltars gather tributes from the villages in Kelanni and
enslave them to mine lodestones for the Prophet. Four members of this race
are brought together; an orphaned teenage girl Shann, a gallant former
Keltar trainee and group leader Lyall, a mechanical genius and carefree
artisan Alondo and a reformed Keltar Keris; on a journey that would test
their courage, bravery, beliefs and friendship in their quest to stop a
common enemy who have not only long oppressed their people but who also
threaten their very existence. With the aid of the Chandara Boxx; an
ancient creature with mysterious qualities and insightful thoughts - they
journey through their kingdom on a mission for justice and liberty and at
the same time a journey of self discovery. I was impressed by Mr.
Whiteway’s dazzling imagination in his creation of this special place at
times while reading I feel as if I was embarking on the same journey as
well. This book is without a doubt a great form of escapism and one that is
filled with so much heart you can’t help but feel and root for their
victory.
download for Kindle via Amazon. Considering that this is author Mark
Whiteway’s first major creation – it is a brilliant way to forge a bright
career in the Sci-Fi Fantasy genre. Without spoiling the plot too much; the
story evolves around a planet called Kelanni and its people; set in a
distant planet where it is ruled by 3 suns and has an abundance of supply
of lodestones. These powerful lodestones are used as a tool of power and
immense energy by the high authorities in Kelanni also known as Keltars.
They are the eyes and ears of a high power they all serve called the
Prophet. The Keltars gather tributes from the villages in Kelanni and
enslave them to mine lodestones for the Prophet. Four members of this race
are brought together; an orphaned teenage girl Shann, a gallant former
Keltar trainee and group leader Lyall, a mechanical genius and carefree
artisan Alondo and a reformed Keltar Keris; on a journey that would test
their courage, bravery, beliefs and friendship in their quest to stop a
common enemy who have not only long oppressed their people but who also
threaten their very existence. With the aid of the Chandara Boxx; an
ancient creature with mysterious qualities and insightful thoughts - they
journey through their kingdom on a mission for justice and liberty and at
the same time a journey of self discovery. I was impressed by Mr.
Whiteway’s dazzling imagination in his creation of this special place at
times while reading I feel as if I was embarking on the same journey as
well. This book is without a doubt a great form of escapism and one that is
filled with so much heart you can’t help but feel and root for their
victory.
February 27, 2012
From the blurb I knew this was going to be an interesting book but I didn't realise how interested I would become in this novel. I found myself completely absorbed in the Kelanni world.
I did feel that this boom did start out slow as all the various characters were introduced and there various parts to play introduced. However the novel soon picked up pace and I found it a thrilling read.
I found this novel to be really good for a debut author. He managed to suck the readers into this fantasy world and I feel left me wanting more.I thought this book was unique and I feel it is going to be a rewarding series to read for all that have been graced with reading this book.
The characters appear flawless and the reader can really engage with them and their world. I am really looking forward to reading the next installment.
Recommended to readers who enjoy sci-fi/fantasy reads.
This review was first published on http://everybookhasasoul.wordpress.com
I did feel that this boom did start out slow as all the various characters were introduced and there various parts to play introduced. However the novel soon picked up pace and I found it a thrilling read.
I found this novel to be really good for a debut author. He managed to suck the readers into this fantasy world and I feel left me wanting more.I thought this book was unique and I feel it is going to be a rewarding series to read for all that have been graced with reading this book.
The characters appear flawless and the reader can really engage with them and their world. I am really looking forward to reading the next installment.
Recommended to readers who enjoy sci-fi/fantasy reads.
This review was first published on http://everybookhasasoul.wordpress.com
August 2, 2010
This is a fast paced and drag you along for the ride fantasy. I was breathless at points cheering the action and frustrated at times when the characters showed their flaws. A wonderful cast of characters annoying at times and alternately heroic at others. The mix of characters play well off each other, they make you want to cheer or in some cases box their ears. The story is easy to get into and the book hard to put down. I am looking forward to the next installment. I believe that Mark Whiteway has put together a world that is both dangerous and ingenious. The Characters are rich and bold with both flaws and great courage. A great read.
Rating 5/5
This Review is based off a book obtained from the author. I am not receiving any compensation and all opinions are my own based of my independent reading of this material.
Rating 5/5
This Review is based off a book obtained from the author. I am not receiving any compensation and all opinions are my own based of my independent reading of this material.
May 15, 2015
The Sea of Storms by Mark Whiteway is an excellent fantasy adventure that is full of action and intrigue. It will keep you glued to its pages from start to finish.
I really enjoyed the way author developed a tale that grabbed my interest and kept it throughout the story. It was fast paced and full of little plot twist that kept the excitement building going. Even with all the action and twist it was still easy to read and follow.
Mark Whiteway did a great job of creating characters that were both real and easy to identify. I found myself following along as an unseen character as I became so wrapped up in the story.
I really liked The Sea of Storms by Mark Whiteway and I highly recommend this book to all readers.
I really enjoyed the way author developed a tale that grabbed my interest and kept it throughout the story. It was fast paced and full of little plot twist that kept the excitement building going. Even with all the action and twist it was still easy to read and follow.
Mark Whiteway did a great job of creating characters that were both real and easy to identify. I found myself following along as an unseen character as I became so wrapped up in the story.
I really liked The Sea of Storms by Mark Whiteway and I highly recommend this book to all readers.
November 27, 2012
On the planet Kelanni, life is cheap.
With the aid of the fearsome "Keltar" enforcers, in their flying cloaks, a ruthless invader is forcing the native people to mine the colloquially named "lodestone" - a substance from another universe with infinitely destructive power.
The only ones who can stop him are a tiny girl with fiery disposition, a
former Keltar, a failed revolutionary, a musician and the mysterious creature, Boxx, who seems to speak only in riddles.
With the aid of the fearsome "Keltar" enforcers, in their flying cloaks, a ruthless invader is forcing the native people to mine the colloquially named "lodestone" - a substance from another universe with infinitely destructive power.
The only ones who can stop him are a tiny girl with fiery disposition, a
former Keltar, a failed revolutionary, a musician and the mysterious creature, Boxx, who seems to speak only in riddles.
April 5, 2013
I really enjoyed this book, and as a an added bonus, it was free on my Kindle.
Mismatched characters come together to help over throw The Prophet, an evil leader of the Kelanni people.
It is very well written and has a little bit of everything in it including plenty of suspense and adventure.
I am looking forward to purchasing and reading part two in the series.
Mismatched characters come together to help over throw The Prophet, an evil leader of the Kelanni people.
It is very well written and has a little bit of everything in it including plenty of suspense and adventure.
I am looking forward to purchasing and reading part two in the series.
June 17, 2012
I like the tone of this story, and its characters. Shann is relatable, and Boxx’s uniqueness adds so much. Definitely worth the low cost for Kindle!
December 23, 2010
Read the full review @ Frazzled Book Nommer.
Initially, it was very difficult for me to get into this book. I felt like I was being bombarded with new customs and everyday life, and it was very slow (despite its action-packed pacing). In fact, despite all the action that was in the beginning, the book didn’t really pick up for me until about ¼ of the way in. The beginning was pretty much getting introductions to the characters done, and weaving a plot to get them together. However, when all of the members of the “team” joined forces with one another, the book picked up the pace considerably. Once this happened, I was done – I was totally hooked.
I never anticipated how absorbed I would become into the novel due to the initial slowness of the book. But the world of the Kelanni was so intriguing. There’s unknown terrain and a lot of land to explore, as well as new creatures (like the Chandara and graylesh). There were so many customs and society norms to get accustomed too. The Kelanni themselves were an enigma we had to figure out – they are the “alien” race of the planet Kelanni, with animal-like tails and ears. (I kept picturing them as a scaled down version of Viera from Final Fantasy). They worship the 3 suns (yes, three suns!), Ail-Mazzorth, Ail-Gan, and Ail-Kar, and never see nighttime (or at least, the nighttime that we know of).
All of these customs are a bit overwhelming, actually, which happens to be one of the downfalls I found with this book. With any fantasy or science fiction novel, the authors need to ease their audience into the new world – explain things, hold their hand, etc. With this book, only a few things were explained (like the suns and their “religion”). I suppose that gave me a lot of leeway with my imagination, but I would have liked to have more things explained to me.
The characters were mostly enjoyable. I wasn’t able to connect with any of them, with the exception of Keris, but they were very fun to read about. Alondo was the “comedian” of the group, and I absolutely loved every time he spoke. Keris was a Keltar (one who is sworn an oath to the Prophet), but renounced her ways after an incident (vagueness is vague!). She had never been one to form close bonds to others, ever since she was a kid, and preferred to working alone than in a team. Lyall is haunted by his past and strives to actively change Kelanni for the greater good.
Shann is a young rebellious spirit that annoyed the crap out of me. I can appreciate her braveness and her spirit, but she had this unfounded vendetta against Keris that I saw was stemmed from jealousy and pettiness. Shann hated being treated like a child, but her actions and mistrust of Keris was the very epitome of childish. I can appreciate the doubt she had with Keris (since the group wasn’t sure of where Keris’s allegiance lay), but she doubted Keris too much. So much that it was unbelievable. And annoying. Time and time again, the “evidence” on Keris would be cleared, yet Shann remained doubtful. Ugh! Lastly, Boxx, the Chandara, is the last of the group, and my personal favorite. Chandara don’t have names or genders, but Boxx was called Boxx (“The Key”), and I always associated it as a him. He (in my mind, at least) was a cross between a centipede and a pillbug (roly poly) and had a different way of speaking that was adorable.
Despite my few misgivings with characters, inconsistencies, and lack of detail, this book was so entertaining after the beginning. The book is pitched as science fiction, and while it does retain a lot of sci-fi elements, I felt it had a more fantasy vibe to it.
Overall, this was a very well-done science-fiction and fantasy novel! The beginning is slow, but the pace began to pick up after all of the characters joined forces. There is tons of adventure and action packed into this book, as well as new creatures and lands. Kelanni was an interesting place to read about, and I found myself constantly wanting more! I was almost outraged at where Mark decided to cut the book off – I can’t wait to see what happens in book two!
Initially, it was very difficult for me to get into this book. I felt like I was being bombarded with new customs and everyday life, and it was very slow (despite its action-packed pacing). In fact, despite all the action that was in the beginning, the book didn’t really pick up for me until about ¼ of the way in. The beginning was pretty much getting introductions to the characters done, and weaving a plot to get them together. However, when all of the members of the “team” joined forces with one another, the book picked up the pace considerably. Once this happened, I was done – I was totally hooked.
I never anticipated how absorbed I would become into the novel due to the initial slowness of the book. But the world of the Kelanni was so intriguing. There’s unknown terrain and a lot of land to explore, as well as new creatures (like the Chandara and graylesh). There were so many customs and society norms to get accustomed too. The Kelanni themselves were an enigma we had to figure out – they are the “alien” race of the planet Kelanni, with animal-like tails and ears. (I kept picturing them as a scaled down version of Viera from Final Fantasy). They worship the 3 suns (yes, three suns!), Ail-Mazzorth, Ail-Gan, and Ail-Kar, and never see nighttime (or at least, the nighttime that we know of).
All of these customs are a bit overwhelming, actually, which happens to be one of the downfalls I found with this book. With any fantasy or science fiction novel, the authors need to ease their audience into the new world – explain things, hold their hand, etc. With this book, only a few things were explained (like the suns and their “religion”). I suppose that gave me a lot of leeway with my imagination, but I would have liked to have more things explained to me.
The characters were mostly enjoyable. I wasn’t able to connect with any of them, with the exception of Keris, but they were very fun to read about. Alondo was the “comedian” of the group, and I absolutely loved every time he spoke. Keris was a Keltar (one who is sworn an oath to the Prophet), but renounced her ways after an incident (vagueness is vague!). She had never been one to form close bonds to others, ever since she was a kid, and preferred to working alone than in a team. Lyall is haunted by his past and strives to actively change Kelanni for the greater good.
Shann is a young rebellious spirit that annoyed the crap out of me. I can appreciate her braveness and her spirit, but she had this unfounded vendetta against Keris that I saw was stemmed from jealousy and pettiness. Shann hated being treated like a child, but her actions and mistrust of Keris was the very epitome of childish. I can appreciate the doubt she had with Keris (since the group wasn’t sure of where Keris’s allegiance lay), but she doubted Keris too much. So much that it was unbelievable. And annoying. Time and time again, the “evidence” on Keris would be cleared, yet Shann remained doubtful. Ugh! Lastly, Boxx, the Chandara, is the last of the group, and my personal favorite. Chandara don’t have names or genders, but Boxx was called Boxx (“The Key”), and I always associated it as a him. He (in my mind, at least) was a cross between a centipede and a pillbug (roly poly) and had a different way of speaking that was adorable.
Despite my few misgivings with characters, inconsistencies, and lack of detail, this book was so entertaining after the beginning. The book is pitched as science fiction, and while it does retain a lot of sci-fi elements, I felt it had a more fantasy vibe to it.
Overall, this was a very well-done science-fiction and fantasy novel! The beginning is slow, but the pace began to pick up after all of the characters joined forces. There is tons of adventure and action packed into this book, as well as new creatures and lands. Kelanni was an interesting place to read about, and I found myself constantly wanting more! I was almost outraged at where Mark decided to cut the book off – I can’t wait to see what happens in book two!
November 1, 2011
The first book in the Lodestone series comes to you with awards while offering many rewards to the reader. For those who read both science fiction and fantasy, “Book One: The Sea of Storms” is a recommended read. Mr. Whiteway does an excellent job of honoring the forms of those he admires, such as Jules Verne, while creating a new world and journey of his own making.
The book contrasts a society with cues both reptilian and humanoid. This first part of the larger story introduces classic conflicts of science and religion well-reflected in cultural values of the elite versus other groups. Based on an ensemble cast, each reader will find at least one character easy to identify with, propelling the story forward. Thanks to inclusion of a young woman, a musician, a holy warrior, a mysterious revolutionary, and an inscrutable insectiod, the action leads strongly through the book.
The dominant culture presented on this planet appears to not have much advanced technology. As things progress, the main characters must confront contrary evidence about religious believes, the political ramifications, and personal choices as a result of such changes. Perhaps the current state of their society is not a real representation of their history and heritage.
Challenges abound, ensuring characters have the opportunity to grow, change, and discover more about themselves. This is an important aspect to successful, modern speculative fiction that effortlessly presents in this book. Additionally, the story arc is reasonably accessible to mature-thinkers of younger age. This book does need to be limited to only an adult audience. It makes a good foil for younger readers who follow world news or events and would enjoy exploring some of the same topics in a different world through the eyes of a different species.
The Chandara, a race living on the plant in Lodestone who are aliens to the other inhabitants, are particularly well realized. I’m sure as this entire story unfolds, many readers will enjoy this book and those that follow courtesy of Mr. Whiteway.
As you know, one of the best comments anyone can make about a book is “I couldn’t go to sleep until I’d finished the final chapter”. Stopping before the end wasn’t an option. Perhaps you’ll find, as I do, skimming the prologue and then diving into the rest of the book is a great way to start a new series. I know I’m looking forward to the next book. If the characters or story sound like something you might enjoy, I encourage you to give this accomplished, new author a try.
The book contrasts a society with cues both reptilian and humanoid. This first part of the larger story introduces classic conflicts of science and religion well-reflected in cultural values of the elite versus other groups. Based on an ensemble cast, each reader will find at least one character easy to identify with, propelling the story forward. Thanks to inclusion of a young woman, a musician, a holy warrior, a mysterious revolutionary, and an inscrutable insectiod, the action leads strongly through the book.
The dominant culture presented on this planet appears to not have much advanced technology. As things progress, the main characters must confront contrary evidence about religious believes, the political ramifications, and personal choices as a result of such changes. Perhaps the current state of their society is not a real representation of their history and heritage.
Challenges abound, ensuring characters have the opportunity to grow, change, and discover more about themselves. This is an important aspect to successful, modern speculative fiction that effortlessly presents in this book. Additionally, the story arc is reasonably accessible to mature-thinkers of younger age. This book does need to be limited to only an adult audience. It makes a good foil for younger readers who follow world news or events and would enjoy exploring some of the same topics in a different world through the eyes of a different species.
The Chandara, a race living on the plant in Lodestone who are aliens to the other inhabitants, are particularly well realized. I’m sure as this entire story unfolds, many readers will enjoy this book and those that follow courtesy of Mr. Whiteway.
As you know, one of the best comments anyone can make about a book is “I couldn’t go to sleep until I’d finished the final chapter”. Stopping before the end wasn’t an option. Perhaps you’ll find, as I do, skimming the prologue and then diving into the rest of the book is a great way to start a new series. I know I’m looking forward to the next book. If the characters or story sound like something you might enjoy, I encourage you to give this accomplished, new author a try.
September 3, 2011
Concept/World
This is a complex world both physically and culturally. Physically it has three suns, mysterious lodestones and a variety of alien creatures. Culturally it is almost medieval in feel, dominated by a tyrannical religion. The concept of the book is almost more fantasy than science fiction. I would have been perfectly happy to accept the lodestones as magical and wasn’t entirely convinced by the scientific explanation of the lodestones or by the science underlying the “storm barrier”. It is a mark of the quality of the writing, however, that I didn’t start to question the scientific feasibility of the storm barrier until I was reading it for the second time, analytically, for review.
Story
The plot moves along at a good pace. There are surprises and mysteries that kept me reading late into the night to find out what was going to happen. There was one inconsistency that poked me in the eye – Shann is described as riding a graylesh early in the story and then later has to learn to ride one because it says she’s never ridden one before. That did stop me reading as I had to go back then and check that I’d read it right the first time.
Characters
The characters are a great strength of this book. The Kelanni are not human but think and behave like humans. I really liked Shann to begin with though she became a rather whiny adolescent in her rivalry with Keris, a tormented soul with fierce combat skills. Lyall reminded me of Don Quixote, a would-be hero who just doesn’t quite have the skills to pull it off. I liked Alonso and his dry humour. My favourite, however, was Boxx, truly alien in the way that he/it thinks. I loved his/its cryptic pronouncements, baffling the heck out of everyone else. Mark Whiteway also pulls off the feat of creating a really terrifying villain. I thought he (no spoilers) was just a fanatic until the showdown between him and Keris. That scene actually made me shiver as his insanity became apparent.
Overall
This is a powerful story with some chilling, disturbing scenes, without ever resorting to gore. It is deeply absorbing and has moments that I know I will remember for a long time, certainly any time I see a wisp of smoke rising on the horizon. The final paragraphs were breathtaking and managed to give a satisfying sense of ending to that book whilst at the same time making me want to buy the next one immediately. Highly recommended.
This is a complex world both physically and culturally. Physically it has three suns, mysterious lodestones and a variety of alien creatures. Culturally it is almost medieval in feel, dominated by a tyrannical religion. The concept of the book is almost more fantasy than science fiction. I would have been perfectly happy to accept the lodestones as magical and wasn’t entirely convinced by the scientific explanation of the lodestones or by the science underlying the “storm barrier”. It is a mark of the quality of the writing, however, that I didn’t start to question the scientific feasibility of the storm barrier until I was reading it for the second time, analytically, for review.
Story
The plot moves along at a good pace. There are surprises and mysteries that kept me reading late into the night to find out what was going to happen. There was one inconsistency that poked me in the eye – Shann is described as riding a graylesh early in the story and then later has to learn to ride one because it says she’s never ridden one before. That did stop me reading as I had to go back then and check that I’d read it right the first time.
Characters
The characters are a great strength of this book. The Kelanni are not human but think and behave like humans. I really liked Shann to begin with though she became a rather whiny adolescent in her rivalry with Keris, a tormented soul with fierce combat skills. Lyall reminded me of Don Quixote, a would-be hero who just doesn’t quite have the skills to pull it off. I liked Alonso and his dry humour. My favourite, however, was Boxx, truly alien in the way that he/it thinks. I loved his/its cryptic pronouncements, baffling the heck out of everyone else. Mark Whiteway also pulls off the feat of creating a really terrifying villain. I thought he (no spoilers) was just a fanatic until the showdown between him and Keris. That scene actually made me shiver as his insanity became apparent.
Overall
This is a powerful story with some chilling, disturbing scenes, without ever resorting to gore. It is deeply absorbing and has moments that I know I will remember for a long time, certainly any time I see a wisp of smoke rising on the horizon. The final paragraphs were breathtaking and managed to give a satisfying sense of ending to that book whilst at the same time making me want to buy the next one immediately. Highly recommended.
May 9, 2013
Having just come off reading a favorite series I was a little hesitant to start this book. I had just had a fabulous reading experience and didn't want that to affect my review of the next book I read by an as yet unknown to me author, but I'd been curious about this one and it had been hanging around on my Kindle for a while so off I went to a new world.
I must say that I was more than pleasantly surprised. I really enjoyed it. It was little dark in places, but I still consider it a fun read. There was action and there were tender moments, but mostly there was a good ensemble cast of characters that carried it off. There were some rough patches so it gets a 4, but that just means that I really liked it instead of loving it because there were moments where things seemed a little too familiar, but heroes do need adventure and obstacles to overcome and there are only so many. I'll happily read the next book in the series and who knows by the second or third book I may love it. The characters were interesting as was the overall story and all in all it was a good adventure.
The Kelanni are not human which is very obvious from the start of the book, but before long you're involved in the book, its characters and the flow of the story, easily forgetting this mundane detail until one of them swishes their tail or something. The Keltar are a menacing lot, but every adventure needs a bad guy to overcome. And then there's Boxx. I'm curious about Boxx who is a strange little character indeed, but it's obvious that finding out more about this character will come later in the series. I liked the varied uses for the lodestones throughout the story and how the story hinged around them in its own way, without that detail being the only focus. On the whole it's a tale of friendship, hardship, adventure and the personal journeys we make where we may come out the other end as better people. The world building for the Kelanni civilization was pretty well done and I readily admit that I enjoyed my journey with these characters as they set out to save the people of their world. I'm hoping the next book in the series is as good if not better.
This review originally posted at http://tjsbookblog.blogspot.com/
I must say that I was more than pleasantly surprised. I really enjoyed it. It was little dark in places, but I still consider it a fun read. There was action and there were tender moments, but mostly there was a good ensemble cast of characters that carried it off. There were some rough patches so it gets a 4, but that just means that I really liked it instead of loving it because there were moments where things seemed a little too familiar, but heroes do need adventure and obstacles to overcome and there are only so many. I'll happily read the next book in the series and who knows by the second or third book I may love it. The characters were interesting as was the overall story and all in all it was a good adventure.
The Kelanni are not human which is very obvious from the start of the book, but before long you're involved in the book, its characters and the flow of the story, easily forgetting this mundane detail until one of them swishes their tail or something. The Keltar are a menacing lot, but every adventure needs a bad guy to overcome. And then there's Boxx. I'm curious about Boxx who is a strange little character indeed, but it's obvious that finding out more about this character will come later in the series. I liked the varied uses for the lodestones throughout the story and how the story hinged around them in its own way, without that detail being the only focus. On the whole it's a tale of friendship, hardship, adventure and the personal journeys we make where we may come out the other end as better people. The world building for the Kelanni civilization was pretty well done and I readily admit that I enjoyed my journey with these characters as they set out to save the people of their world. I'm hoping the next book in the series is as good if not better.
This review originally posted at http://tjsbookblog.blogspot.com/
March 2, 2011
As an indie book reviewer, I come across a lot of, um, less than stellar fiction. Then, once in a while, I come across a self-published book like The Sea of Storms and I am reminded of why I do this in the first place. Planet Kelanni has three suns: a white and yellow that move across the sky much like our own Sun, and a large, dim, red sun that never moves, in much the same way as the Earth doesn't when viewed from the Moon. The inhabitants of this planet, though never described in detail, are (presumably) humanoid creatures ruled by a mysterious Prophet and his Keltar emissaries who routinely collect citizens as "tributes," never to be seen again. A young girl named Shann joins two men - Lyall and Alondo - in their quest to overthrow the Prophet and free the tributes. Meanwhile, forbidding Keltar Keris receives shocking information from the strange, somewhat beetle-like creatures known as Chandara, information that turns her world completely upside-down. Woven throughout the drama is a mysterious and precious mineral known as lodestone.
Though the book's title is somewhat misleading - the Sea of Storms is not actually reached until the last few pages - the story itself is quite good. The action is well-paced and the world is solidly constructed. I especially liked that while there were creatures clearly meant to stand in for familiar animals such as dogs and horses, nothing was described in comparison with Earth since, obviously, the Kelanni know nothing of Earth. Shann, Keris, Lyall, and Alondo are engaging characters, easily distinguishable without relying on stereotypes. Oliah came out of left-field, making her relationship with the leads rather unbelievable, but her appearance is so brief I can almost ignore it. The rest of the book is a marvelous trek through a fantastic new world.
I'm glad I was warned in the title that this is not a standalone novel, or I would have been irritated at the cliffhanger ending. As it stands, I'll have to see about getting my hands on the next installment in this promising new fantasy series.
Though the book's title is somewhat misleading - the Sea of Storms is not actually reached until the last few pages - the story itself is quite good. The action is well-paced and the world is solidly constructed. I especially liked that while there were creatures clearly meant to stand in for familiar animals such as dogs and horses, nothing was described in comparison with Earth since, obviously, the Kelanni know nothing of Earth. Shann, Keris, Lyall, and Alondo are engaging characters, easily distinguishable without relying on stereotypes. Oliah came out of left-field, making her relationship with the leads rather unbelievable, but her appearance is so brief I can almost ignore it. The rest of the book is a marvelous trek through a fantastic new world.
I'm glad I was warned in the title that this is not a standalone novel, or I would have been irritated at the cliffhanger ending. As it stands, I'll have to see about getting my hands on the next installment in this promising new fantasy series.
May 23, 2016
Read this review and more at The Bohemian Housewife Blog
I love audiobooks! I listen to them while I clean, workout, and while in the car. They make things go by so much faster. I haven't listened to a science fiction/fantasy book yet and jumped on the chance to review The Sea Of Storms. I had previously never heard of this series, but I'm glad I listened to it.
I had a few thoughts on the narration as I'm getting picky when it comes to my narrators. At first, I wasn't a fan of Nathan William Heller but he really grew on me by a couple of chapters. It just took me a bit to get used to his style, and I would listen to other series narrated by him now. The book itself is only 280 pages, but the audiobook was 15hrs/33mins - which, in my opinion, is pretty long for the number of pages in the book. Though, I didn't mind it; the story felt like it flowed very well and I couldn't imagine Nathan talking any faster. Very smooth and interesting.
Now to get on to the story, I enjoyed it more than I thought I would in the beginning. The first few chapters had some elements from one of my favorite fantasy series. I wasn't sure how it was going, or if it would be too similar for my liking. They went their separate paths a bit into the story. The plot was just fantastic, and I'm really interested in what happens in the next book. Even though I had listened for over 15 hours, I was sad that I didn't have more when I hit the end. Mark Whiteway is certainly a storyteller. His characters were just perfect as well, humanlike but alien. I enjoyed them all, but I think Boxx might be my favorite.
As I listened to the audiobook, I can't comment on editing errors, but I highly doubt there are any. The Sea of Storms seems like a well-rounded book and I'm sure it's edited well with how much work has gone into it. It's currently free on amazon, and I think you should grab it if you're interested. Who knows? You might find it's a series you love! I know I enjoyed it.
I love audiobooks! I listen to them while I clean, workout, and while in the car. They make things go by so much faster. I haven't listened to a science fiction/fantasy book yet and jumped on the chance to review The Sea Of Storms. I had previously never heard of this series, but I'm glad I listened to it.
I had a few thoughts on the narration as I'm getting picky when it comes to my narrators. At first, I wasn't a fan of Nathan William Heller but he really grew on me by a couple of chapters. It just took me a bit to get used to his style, and I would listen to other series narrated by him now. The book itself is only 280 pages, but the audiobook was 15hrs/33mins - which, in my opinion, is pretty long for the number of pages in the book. Though, I didn't mind it; the story felt like it flowed very well and I couldn't imagine Nathan talking any faster. Very smooth and interesting.
Now to get on to the story, I enjoyed it more than I thought I would in the beginning. The first few chapters had some elements from one of my favorite fantasy series. I wasn't sure how it was going, or if it would be too similar for my liking. They went their separate paths a bit into the story. The plot was just fantastic, and I'm really interested in what happens in the next book. Even though I had listened for over 15 hours, I was sad that I didn't have more when I hit the end. Mark Whiteway is certainly a storyteller. His characters were just perfect as well, humanlike but alien. I enjoyed them all, but I think Boxx might be my favorite.
As I listened to the audiobook, I can't comment on editing errors, but I highly doubt there are any. The Sea of Storms seems like a well-rounded book and I'm sure it's edited well with how much work has gone into it. It's currently free on amazon, and I think you should grab it if you're interested. Who knows? You might find it's a series you love! I know I enjoyed it.
June 23, 2014
Shann wasn’t sure why she helped the stranger. She knew it meant certain death now if she is caught. But what of the strange disc he had pressed into her hand sticky and yet so unusual as she had never known anything like it before. She couldn’t help but wonder who was he to stand up to the Keltar like that and yet he was dressed like a Keltar he even had the flying cloak. The words he said echoed in her head “run” and that was exactly what she was doing…running for her life….
I love Whiteway’s writing style so free-flowing not difficult to read like most sci-fi adventures. But there is more than sci-fi to enjoy as there is something for everyone from sci-fi, fantasy, adventure and mystery that excites the imagination from page one. Reading like a Scottish folktale I found myself lost within the pages not wanting the story to end.
The characters are so deep, Shann with her bold desire to be strong but yet has such a child-like innocence, Lyall the rebel with a young adventurous heart who has a desire to save his homeland and poor Alondo who seems to have such a little boy heart but is somehow always caught up in Lyall’s adventures. There are so many others to relate to from Keris and Mordal to even the mysterious Prophet that is at the heart of the story leaving me to wonder how people could just be ripped from those they love to serve and obey.
I recommend this story from young to old especially looking for adventure that is powerful and exciting, also for a story rich in lessons to be learned along the way. But also anyone seeking something that is an excellent change from the same-old storyline that will clearly whisk the reader to another time and place and even cause one to ponder and think…
I love Whiteway’s writing style so free-flowing not difficult to read like most sci-fi adventures. But there is more than sci-fi to enjoy as there is something for everyone from sci-fi, fantasy, adventure and mystery that excites the imagination from page one. Reading like a Scottish folktale I found myself lost within the pages not wanting the story to end.
The characters are so deep, Shann with her bold desire to be strong but yet has such a child-like innocence, Lyall the rebel with a young adventurous heart who has a desire to save his homeland and poor Alondo who seems to have such a little boy heart but is somehow always caught up in Lyall’s adventures. There are so many others to relate to from Keris and Mordal to even the mysterious Prophet that is at the heart of the story leaving me to wonder how people could just be ripped from those they love to serve and obey.
I recommend this story from young to old especially looking for adventure that is powerful and exciting, also for a story rich in lessons to be learned along the way. But also anyone seeking something that is an excellent change from the same-old storyline that will clearly whisk the reader to another time and place and even cause one to ponder and think…
June 28, 2014
Great Start to a New Sci-Fi Series
I wanted to start this series because I had a friend that is already to book 5 and swears that the author is one of his favorites. So I thought to myself “sure, why not try it out?” and started the series. Looking on Amazon and to my utter delight, the author made the first book in the series free! I was sold off the bat with that price. Also, I looked ahead and noticed that the next books in the series are modestly priced at $3.99. Anyways, let me start by saying that my friend was right! I think I may have found a new favorite Sci-fi author and I’m only on Book 1! The Sea of Storms takes place on the planet Kelanni, where the basic story line is about a group of revolutionaries looking to overthrow the tyrant of their people, who is known as “the Prophet”. The Prophet uses enforcers to mine lodestones in order to use their power for evil. When a message from the past is played to the five characters, the group bands together on a quest to save their world and their people on it. There is way more to the plot than just that but I don’t want to spend all day talking about it. I need to spend my time moving to the next book! But lastly I will say this. The characters, world-building, and even the small details about the animals so similar to those on Earth make this book well worth your time. I can’t wait to start Book 2 in the series and I will definitely add this author to my favorites list.
I wanted to start this series because I had a friend that is already to book 5 and swears that the author is one of his favorites. So I thought to myself “sure, why not try it out?” and started the series. Looking on Amazon and to my utter delight, the author made the first book in the series free! I was sold off the bat with that price. Also, I looked ahead and noticed that the next books in the series are modestly priced at $3.99. Anyways, let me start by saying that my friend was right! I think I may have found a new favorite Sci-fi author and I’m only on Book 1! The Sea of Storms takes place on the planet Kelanni, where the basic story line is about a group of revolutionaries looking to overthrow the tyrant of their people, who is known as “the Prophet”. The Prophet uses enforcers to mine lodestones in order to use their power for evil. When a message from the past is played to the five characters, the group bands together on a quest to save their world and their people on it. There is way more to the plot than just that but I don’t want to spend all day talking about it. I need to spend my time moving to the next book! But lastly I will say this. The characters, world-building, and even the small details about the animals so similar to those on Earth make this book well worth your time. I can’t wait to start Book 2 in the series and I will definitely add this author to my favorites list.
August 7, 2019
An intriguing, character-driven, fantasy-adventure story.
Shann is an orphan, working in the kitchens of a local Inn, when she witnesses a confrontation between one of the Prophet’s Keltar, who is collecting tribute for the Prophet, and a sandy-haired stranger. An impulse leads Shann to aid the stranger, resulting in her being pursued by the Prophet’s soldiers and forced to leave Corte, her home town.
“Flying cloaks,” “graylesh” and “sand scarags” are just some of the things you will be introduced to in this, book one of the “Lodestone Trilogy.” In a world with three suns, where diamonds are a common commodity, and the people are under the control of “the Prophet,” it is the characters who really drive the story. You will forget that Shann, Keris, Lyall and Alondo have tails and bleed white, and will be eager to discover their fate, which is only partially revealed by the semi-cliffhanger at the end of this book.
There were sections of the book which were less engaging than others, but overall, this world, it’s characters, and the challenges they encounter are well-written and, as an added bonus, there is no gratuitous sex or overly graphic violence.
Shann is an orphan, working in the kitchens of a local Inn, when she witnesses a confrontation between one of the Prophet’s Keltar, who is collecting tribute for the Prophet, and a sandy-haired stranger. An impulse leads Shann to aid the stranger, resulting in her being pursued by the Prophet’s soldiers and forced to leave Corte, her home town.
“Flying cloaks,” “graylesh” and “sand scarags” are just some of the things you will be introduced to in this, book one of the “Lodestone Trilogy.” In a world with three suns, where diamonds are a common commodity, and the people are under the control of “the Prophet,” it is the characters who really drive the story. You will forget that Shann, Keris, Lyall and Alondo have tails and bleed white, and will be eager to discover their fate, which is only partially revealed by the semi-cliffhanger at the end of this book.
There were sections of the book which were less engaging than others, but overall, this world, it’s characters, and the challenges they encounter are well-written and, as an added bonus, there is no gratuitous sex or overly graphic violence.
August 14, 2010
The rebels are forming and plotting by their leader known only as "The Prophet." The Kelanni are being forced to harvest the lodestones. When Keris, a Keltar questioning her work for "The Prohpet," learns that the Kelanni people are in more trouble than is realized, she sets out to find a way to save them. The journey takes a group of five, including Keris, Shann-a village girl, and Boxx-a creature with powers, on an adventure that will reveal astonishing truths and dangerous encounters.
Author Mark Whiteway makes his novel debut with the first book in his Lodestone series. He creates a fantastical world that is easy to get sucked into. The plot is unique and easily keeps the attention of the reader. Whiteway's writing is smooth and consistent. It has the simplicity to hold the attention of kids and teens while weaving in ideas to appeal to adults as well. The characters more than simple creations. Whiteway creates characters that the reader will love and root for. This is the first book in a series that will surely be loved by children, teens, and adults!
July 25, 2022
This book 1 in the Lodestone series really set the tone and I am excited to delve into the remainder of the series.
Mark Whiteway transported me to this new world thru his details and wonderful characters. Amazingly, you almost forget that the Kelanni are not human in the traditional sense until you get the reminder about tails or remembering that the Chandara has multiple limbs. But is does not distract because I felt connected with Shann, Lyall, Alondo, Keris, and even Boxx throughout this story.
To me, it did start a little slow but it could be because I just finished a non sci-fi series so my mind had to adjust. It did take a chapter or two but once the story got going however, oh my, so much action for the heroes. Nail biting situations that make this book a page turner.
At the end of book one, all I could think was nooooo, I need just one more page. So if you cannot tell, I am ready to go on to book 2. Quick read, this book, so excited for the next adventures and to see what lies ahead for our band of heroes.
Mark Whiteway transported me to this new world thru his details and wonderful characters. Amazingly, you almost forget that the Kelanni are not human in the traditional sense until you get the reminder about tails or remembering that the Chandara has multiple limbs. But is does not distract because I felt connected with Shann, Lyall, Alondo, Keris, and even Boxx throughout this story.
To me, it did start a little slow but it could be because I just finished a non sci-fi series so my mind had to adjust. It did take a chapter or two but once the story got going however, oh my, so much action for the heroes. Nail biting situations that make this book a page turner.
At the end of book one, all I could think was nooooo, I need just one more page. So if you cannot tell, I am ready to go on to book 2. Quick read, this book, so excited for the next adventures and to see what lies ahead for our band of heroes.
May 17, 2019
Lodestone Book One: Sea of Storms by Mark Whiteway
This book peaked my interest right away. It has a prologue-I'm not sure it needs one- the author gave it one so I guess that's that.
This is the story of Shann - a young girl with a history that puts her at odds with the prophet and his religious order. As it turns out a lot of people don't like them, but she in particular has lost her parents to them. She lives with her relatives and helps them with their Inn. As the story opens we find Lyall trying to free the slaves being taken from Shann's village. Lyall is posing as a Keltar- one of the prophets enforcer guards. Lyall fights another Keltar and almost loses his life- Shann helps him to recover and escape.
This makes Shann a fugitive who will be pursued by many Keltar including Keris who throughout seems to be questioning what she and the other Keltar are doing for the prophet. Eventually Keris will join with Shann, Lyall and Alondo in the fight against oppression. Keris will have to first meet Boxx, a Chandara(bug like being about the size of a child), who will have the evidence she needs to persuade her to go against her beliefs and join the rebellion.
From here the five of them are on the run from the Keltar while trying to reach a tower that has a transporter that will take them to the other side of the Sea of Storms. Throughout we learn of how the lodestones are used to help the Keltar fight and to fly. Shann is trained to fight as a Keltar and though Lyall doesn't at first think he needs to learn he learns to fight better than he has in the past.
Alondo has a neat deadly musical instrument which seems to almost come out of one of those MMORPGs that are so popular these days. There's an ancient communicator that talks to the past.There are plenty of conflicts on the way to make things interesting. Eventually thing go such that there is a need to make a voyage across the Sea of Storms.
Many aspects of the world-building seemed to be sketchy. The lodestones take the forefront. What's missing is how the three suns sustain a world with life and whether the planet rotates on its axis and if not how that might effect the atmosphere which protects the planet's life from radiation.(ie; there might not be a field that blocks the solar radiation that would burn most the planet life away.)Those are not showstoppers for me but some people need to know these things. Also more emphasis on the fact that the Kalanni have tails might have been in order since it seems to be important to the story. Sometimes they all seemed just too human; though it's easy to see they are not on earth and the indigenous life is all quite new and strange.
The story is well told though sometimes there are terms that leak in from British English and take a moment to think about. There are some words who's usage might be indicative of the same situation, but struck me as a sort of word of the day - use this word in a sentence- type of usage. It seems almost to be a signature trait.If the whole novel had been filled with colorful and flowery language these few gems, which are now among common stones might have been less noticed.
There are more novel's to this series but it was quite satisfactory in itself, though somewhat cliffhanger -ish.
If you like fantasy with some heavy world building and science fiction with a bit less world building and romance and mystery and adventure, this series has a great start with a lot of potential.
J.L. Dobias
This book peaked my interest right away. It has a prologue-I'm not sure it needs one- the author gave it one so I guess that's that.
This is the story of Shann - a young girl with a history that puts her at odds with the prophet and his religious order. As it turns out a lot of people don't like them, but she in particular has lost her parents to them. She lives with her relatives and helps them with their Inn. As the story opens we find Lyall trying to free the slaves being taken from Shann's village. Lyall is posing as a Keltar- one of the prophets enforcer guards. Lyall fights another Keltar and almost loses his life- Shann helps him to recover and escape.
This makes Shann a fugitive who will be pursued by many Keltar including Keris who throughout seems to be questioning what she and the other Keltar are doing for the prophet. Eventually Keris will join with Shann, Lyall and Alondo in the fight against oppression. Keris will have to first meet Boxx, a Chandara(bug like being about the size of a child), who will have the evidence she needs to persuade her to go against her beliefs and join the rebellion.
From here the five of them are on the run from the Keltar while trying to reach a tower that has a transporter that will take them to the other side of the Sea of Storms. Throughout we learn of how the lodestones are used to help the Keltar fight and to fly. Shann is trained to fight as a Keltar and though Lyall doesn't at first think he needs to learn he learns to fight better than he has in the past.
Alondo has a neat deadly musical instrument which seems to almost come out of one of those MMORPGs that are so popular these days. There's an ancient communicator that talks to the past.There are plenty of conflicts on the way to make things interesting. Eventually thing go such that there is a need to make a voyage across the Sea of Storms.
Many aspects of the world-building seemed to be sketchy. The lodestones take the forefront. What's missing is how the three suns sustain a world with life and whether the planet rotates on its axis and if not how that might effect the atmosphere which protects the planet's life from radiation.(ie; there might not be a field that blocks the solar radiation that would burn most the planet life away.)Those are not showstoppers for me but some people need to know these things. Also more emphasis on the fact that the Kalanni have tails might have been in order since it seems to be important to the story. Sometimes they all seemed just too human; though it's easy to see they are not on earth and the indigenous life is all quite new and strange.
The story is well told though sometimes there are terms that leak in from British English and take a moment to think about. There are some words who's usage might be indicative of the same situation, but struck me as a sort of word of the day - use this word in a sentence- type of usage. It seems almost to be a signature trait.If the whole novel had been filled with colorful and flowery language these few gems, which are now among common stones might have been less noticed.
There are more novel's to this series but it was quite satisfactory in itself, though somewhat cliffhanger -ish.
If you like fantasy with some heavy world building and science fiction with a bit less world building and romance and mystery and adventure, this series has a great start with a lot of potential.
J.L. Dobias
November 13, 2020
A real struggle
What can I say, it was a struggle to get through this, a tedious read. Stick to a consistent use of italics, it's either inside voice or outside voice, half the time I couldn't tell if the dialogue was spoken or thought. This is not science fiction, this is a blow by blow of some terrible japanese animation, the characters were really bad, half the time acting like spoiled brats, the other half pretending to be adventurers, I was to say the least disappointed, read the next in the series, only if I commit a serious crime and am forced to. You can't just add space things to your story and call it sci fi, the magnet thing defies the laws of physics and attempts to behave as a perpetual motion machine with no regard to losses, stay away is my opinion.
What can I say, it was a struggle to get through this, a tedious read. Stick to a consistent use of italics, it's either inside voice or outside voice, half the time I couldn't tell if the dialogue was spoken or thought. This is not science fiction, this is a blow by blow of some terrible japanese animation, the characters were really bad, half the time acting like spoiled brats, the other half pretending to be adventurers, I was to say the least disappointed, read the next in the series, only if I commit a serious crime and am forced to. You can't just add space things to your story and call it sci fi, the magnet thing defies the laws of physics and attempts to behave as a perpetual motion machine with no regard to losses, stay away is my opinion.
February 21, 2019
I did a hybrid read: listened to the audiobook and read the kindle. The narrator wasn't my favorite: he was slow and changed his volume from low to high when he spoke dialogue. This made it fairly difficult to listen to in the car since I was constantly adjusting the volume.
The story and characters were a lot of fun though and I found myself enjoying this book - especially since it was such a simple story but with nice, unexpected twists. My first venture into Fantasy was Terry Brooks' Shannara series and I really liked Whiteway's style of writing much better. I will continue the series and I recommend.
The story and characters were a lot of fun though and I found myself enjoying this book - especially since it was such a simple story but with nice, unexpected twists. My first venture into Fantasy was Terry Brooks' Shannara series and I really liked Whiteway's style of writing much better. I will continue the series and I recommend.
January 25, 2018
A SyFy Novel of Planet Across the Galaxy
MW has penned a SyFy novel that shows how people live on a different planet. The ruling masses have the ability to fly across sky. This ability has seismic reaction against the peoples whom are and are existing in a manner now. This is an odd, but exceptional piece of SyFy that each reader will thoroughly enjoy. This is an excellent read for the genre.....ER
MW has penned a SyFy novel that shows how people live on a different planet. The ruling masses have the ability to fly across sky. This ability has seismic reaction against the peoples whom are and are existing in a manner now. This is an odd, but exceptional piece of SyFy that each reader will thoroughly enjoy. This is an excellent read for the genre.....ER
September 17, 2018
A fantastic read.
I love science fiction. And I love that this book kept me wanting more. Once I started reading I found it difficult to put down. I would recommend this book to any one who loves fantasy sci-fi and thrilling adventure. The story line and the characters are wonderful.
I love science fiction. And I love that this book kept me wanting more. Once I started reading I found it difficult to put down. I would recommend this book to any one who loves fantasy sci-fi and thrilling adventure. The story line and the characters are wonderful.
April 4, 2021
Good Read
A cast of characters thrown together by chance go a journey to save their fellow man. Set upon by forces so that the odds seem slim. Yes a good read with characters well fleshed out. And just when you get started good time for the second installment.
A cast of characters thrown together by chance go a journey to save their fellow man. Set upon by forces so that the odds seem slim. Yes a good read with characters well fleshed out. And just when you get started good time for the second installment.
February 26, 2022
Sea of Storms
Great thriller, Fantasy, Si-Fi story of good vs evil which moves at a good pace. The characters are well developed and grow within the story. I look forward to read the complete series. Enjoy reading 2013
Great thriller, Fantasy, Si-Fi story of good vs evil which moves at a good pace. The characters are well developed and grow within the story. I look forward to read the complete series. Enjoy reading 2013
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