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Humiliator
"D", a submissive man, replies to a personals ad offering discipline training, hoping for a "a selfish, greedy, demanding bastard" who will offer him deep humiliation.
Brigadier Hugh Markman-Ryder gives "D" what he's looking for: but perhaps there's a good reason we don't always get what we want.
WARNING: Contains extreme D/s activities, including piss and scat play. Absolutely no fluff included.
39 Chapters - M/m slash
Brigadier Hugh Markman-Ryder gives "D" what he's looking for: but perhaps there's a good reason we don't always get what we want.
WARNING: Contains extreme D/s activities, including piss and scat play. Absolutely no fluff included.
39 Chapters - M/m slash
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First published March 2, 2001
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November 12, 2011
This is a Nifty story, and is frankly hard to read, due to the extreme nature of the humiliation heaped upon the MC. God, I wanted him to leave his arsehole Dom, or at least for "D" to get just a single kind word or tender touch. This isn't that kind of story. No kitten, bunnies, or reciprocal love involved. No HEA. No HFN. No H.
This story is the antithesis of a Sean Michael BDSM story, where it's all:
"Love"
"Love"
"Mine"
"Yours, all yours, forever"
The story is episodic, with each chapter describing one session with the Brigadier, and so does not have the traditional structure of a novel. We never see the Brigadier's pov, for example, and we only have D's responses and thoughts. However good fiction should leave the characters as different people than they were when we first encountered them, and that's certainly the case here. I found myself thinking about D long after I finished the story. I was left tantalised at the thought of where D was going to go from here: wait, maybe that was appalled and horrified at where it looks like D is going to go from here
I find Humiliator depicts one aspect of D/s very very well: if you want to get involved in a "relationship" with someone who will give you deep humiliation, ignore all your voiced concerns, and repeatedly take you past your limits, then do not be suprised when you realise that person is a sociopath.
This story is the antithesis of a Sean Michael BDSM story, where it's all:
"Love"
"Love"
"Mine"
"Yours, all yours, forever"
The story is episodic, with each chapter describing one session with the Brigadier, and so does not have the traditional structure of a novel. We never see the Brigadier's pov, for example, and we only have D's responses and thoughts. However good fiction should leave the characters as different people than they were when we first encountered them, and that's certainly the case here. I found myself thinking about D long after I finished the story. I was left tantalised at the thought of where D was going to go from here: wait, maybe that was appalled and horrified at where it looks like D is going to go from here
I find Humiliator depicts one aspect of D/s very very well: if you want to get involved in a "relationship" with someone who will give you deep humiliation, ignore all your voiced concerns, and repeatedly take you past your limits, then do not be suprised when you realise that person is a sociopath.
October 3, 2015
Just a few sentences from this story:
Boring to read about dragging misery? Of course it is. Not half as boring as living it though!
Ask anyone to define the meaning of "sadist" and they will come back very quickly with something to the effect "someone who gets sexual pleasure from inflicting pain". Everyone knows that - and everyone is wrong, or at least missing the real point. Pain really is not the OBJECT. Pain is merely one MEANS to achieve the true aim of the sadist, which is power and domination.
In the majority of S/M relationships this first rule does not apply, which means that what you have is two consenting adults PLAYING AT being master and slave.
..., the real point is that the slave has been ordered to offer his arse to the cane and is doing it, voluntarily, not because he is eager for the pain but because he is eager to demonstrate his submission to the dominant male, even at the cost of pain.
The sadist gets his kicks from domination and the exercise of brute power, the masochist from submission and obedience...
...what he [the masochist] gets is the euphoric pleasure of complete surrender. He abdicates from worry and responsibility into a warm marshmallow world where all he has to do is submit and obey. Let someone else take the decisions. He regresses into a childlike state of dependence.
His life is governed by the three rules of slavery; submission, submission and submission. And that is the way he likes it.
Paradoxically, it requires real strength. Physical strength to stand up to the demands of the master, but even more important, it demands strength of character. It takes courage, and dedication, and commitment. And SELF discipline too!
No, serving a man like that is not easy and is no job for the faint hearted. It takes guts to be a slave!
Power and submission, THAT's what S/M is about.
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What could I say about that? Everything is TRUE, TRUE, TRUE AND TRUE!
There is a lot of mistakes and too much shit and piss in it, but...
Wow! What a story!!
Boring to read about dragging misery? Of course it is. Not half as boring as living it though!
Ask anyone to define the meaning of "sadist" and they will come back very quickly with something to the effect "someone who gets sexual pleasure from inflicting pain". Everyone knows that - and everyone is wrong, or at least missing the real point. Pain really is not the OBJECT. Pain is merely one MEANS to achieve the true aim of the sadist, which is power and domination.
In the majority of S/M relationships this first rule does not apply, which means that what you have is two consenting adults PLAYING AT being master and slave.
..., the real point is that the slave has been ordered to offer his arse to the cane and is doing it, voluntarily, not because he is eager for the pain but because he is eager to demonstrate his submission to the dominant male, even at the cost of pain.
The sadist gets his kicks from domination and the exercise of brute power, the masochist from submission and obedience...
...what he [the masochist] gets is the euphoric pleasure of complete surrender. He abdicates from worry and responsibility into a warm marshmallow world where all he has to do is submit and obey. Let someone else take the decisions. He regresses into a childlike state of dependence.
His life is governed by the three rules of slavery; submission, submission and submission. And that is the way he likes it.
Paradoxically, it requires real strength. Physical strength to stand up to the demands of the master, but even more important, it demands strength of character. It takes courage, and dedication, and commitment. And SELF discipline too!
No, serving a man like that is not easy and is no job for the faint hearted. It takes guts to be a slave!
Power and submission, THAT's what S/M is about.
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What could I say about that? Everything is TRUE, TRUE, TRUE AND TRUE!
There is a lot of mistakes and too much shit and piss in it, but...
Wow! What a story!!
December 24, 2018
**** 3.5 Stars ****
I had great expectations for this one, but sadly I didn't hit the jack pot.
D, aka fuck face, was quite the character. Interesting, solid, kink wise unapologetic, making him fascinating.
On the other hand, TH, aka The Humilliator, left a lot to be desired.
Sometimes, even without a character's POV, we can see him. That didn't happen here, I couldn't read TH at all. Who was he? Was it on purpose? Not sure what to make of it.
One thing for sure, his kink was hardcore.
I had great expectations for this one, but sadly I didn't hit the jack pot.
D, aka fuck face, was quite the character. Interesting, solid, kink wise unapologetic, making him fascinating.
On the other hand, TH, aka The Humilliator, left a lot to be desired.
Sometimes, even without a character's POV, we can see him. That didn't happen here, I couldn't read TH at all. Who was he? Was it on purpose? Not sure what to make of it.
One thing for sure, his kink was hardcore.
December 16, 2012
This story was very well written for a Nifty. There were a couple of scenes that were tough to read because the writer was actually making me feel what the slave feeling. In one place he was having trouble breathing and I found myself feeling like I had the jock over my face. You either know the scene or will know it.
I liked the way that the story was written like a journal, it made it feel even more real. Submission is not something that I personally would give so I got annoyed with slave when he argued with master over a punishment or something terribly humiliating. Slave KNEW what he was getting into when he applied and certainly did not have to go back if he didn't get satisfaction out of his weekend. You do not submit half way, except maybe in the Sean Michael role playing games. Total and absolute control goes to the master and even though slave had been with other masters, he really did not seem to want to surrender totally in my opinion. This may sound crazy but I believe that the story did have a HEA in that both men got what they were looking for out of the relationship. This story was by no means a sweet love story and is definitely not for the squeamish but if you can make it past chapter 10, you'll make it to the end.
I liked the way that the story was written like a journal, it made it feel even more real. Submission is not something that I personally would give so I got annoyed with slave when he argued with master over a punishment or something terribly humiliating. Slave KNEW what he was getting into when he applied and certainly did not have to go back if he didn't get satisfaction out of his weekend. You do not submit half way, except maybe in the Sean Michael role playing games. Total and absolute control goes to the master and even though slave had been with other masters, he really did not seem to want to surrender totally in my opinion. This may sound crazy but I believe that the story did have a HEA in that both men got what they were looking for out of the relationship. This story was by no means a sweet love story and is definitely not for the squeamish but if you can make it past chapter 10, you'll make it to the end.
November 7, 2012
Written in the form of a diary, this story taught me several things, chief among them that I had better stick to stuff with at least a semblance of a happy ending. At the end of this one, I was left scratching my head in thought: had I just invested a couple of days' reading time for this?
It has potential, because I was able to visualize and at times (not pleasant, thank you!) empathize with the narrator. The Dom behaves exactly as the sub dreamed and yearned for, fulfills all the sub's expectations, getting plenty in return himself. According to most, that is a successful Master/slave relationship. But even though I went in knowing what to expect, it still left me feeling empty and dissatisfied at the end.
So, beware, all the warnings apply: waterworks, scat, dub-con body modification, true humiliation in all the ways you can possibly think of and a few very creative ones. There's hardcore S/M between men who feel nothing for each other, beyond the excitement of their shared interests in BDSM. If that is what you're looking for, you've found it. Enjoy!
It has potential, because I was able to visualize and at times (not pleasant, thank you!) empathize with the narrator. The Dom behaves exactly as the sub dreamed and yearned for, fulfills all the sub's expectations, getting plenty in return himself. According to most, that is a successful Master/slave relationship. But even though I went in knowing what to expect, it still left me feeling empty and dissatisfied at the end.
So, beware, all the warnings apply: waterworks, scat, dub-con body modification, true humiliation in all the ways you can possibly think of and a few very creative ones. There's hardcore S/M between men who feel nothing for each other, beyond the excitement of their shared interests in BDSM. If that is what you're looking for, you've found it. Enjoy!
January 8, 2013
Definitely intriguing to get into the mind of a person seeking extreme humiliation. This is hardcore degradation with watersports, scat, and SM. I don't recommend this to anyone, but HARDCORE degradation lovers--it is not a romance!
The end leaves me with questions about the lines separating abuse, submission and psychosis.
The end leaves me with questions about the lines separating abuse, submission and psychosis.
December 19, 2012
Fascinating. Thought provoking. I had a few freak-out moments, but I could not leave any of it unread.
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May 30, 2020I thought I could manage to finish this but was wrong.(Read chapters 1-9; 32-34 out of 39) Too hardcore and it felt like reading graphic torture. Chapter 32 made me physically sick.
But I amused myself with thinking if Ana Steele would have found Christian Grey (Fifty Shades of Grey)still irresistible if he treated her like that? :)
It is not fair to compare this book with that book. Sorry. This one is well written and I have impression that author knows what he is writing about.
But I amused myself with thinking if Ana Steele would have found Christian Grey (Fifty Shades of Grey)still irresistible if he treated her like that? :)
It is not fair to compare this book with that book. Sorry. This one is well written and I have impression that author knows what he is writing about.
July 6, 2016
I usually like this type of fic but this just didn't quite do it for me.
December 18, 2024
Sue me, this book made me laugh so hard, multiple times that I think my humor radar is broken.
Mom, I doubt my sanity.
D's character was absolutely good written, his train of thoughts made me laugh so many times. He felt real and that really drew me in. D having a life, a successful one at that even while drowning in the dirtiest pit of degradation was something I appreciated. The ending, where D, was such a pleasant surprise for me! I truly didn't see it coming at all.
On the other hand who the fuck is H? Some ink on paper. By Ch 30, I was really hoping to get at least a single chapter from H's pov. However, the author had other ideas. Instead of telling us, he showed us. I spent half the book wondering what D meant to him. It turns out that to H, D is By the end, we got as much insight into H. as a slave could dare hope to get, and that's quite something.
Oh note that each ch is a report of one session with H. They don't even follow a linear time. This was dirty, exciting, surprising and beyond kinky.
D's character was absolutely good written, his train of thoughts made me laugh so many times. He felt real and that really drew me in. D having a life, a successful one at that even while drowning in the dirtiest pit of degradation was something I appreciated. The ending, where D, was such a pleasant surprise for me! I truly didn't see it coming at all.
On the other hand who the fuck is H? Some ink on paper. By Ch 30, I was really hoping to get at least a single chapter from H's pov. However, the author had other ideas. Instead of telling us, he showed us. I spent half the book wondering what D meant to him. It turns out that to H, D is By the end, we got as much insight into H. as a slave could dare hope to get, and that's quite something.
Oh note that each ch is a report of one session with H. They don't even follow a linear time. This was dirty, exciting, surprising and beyond kinky.
I screamed threats and obscenities at him and he lashed me. I sobbed and howled and begged for mercy and he lashed me. I promised obedience and total servitude and he lashed me.
I wailed, begging him not to beat me any more, pleading with him, and even as I did so, wondering why, because experience had shown that if there was one thing guaranteed to rouse a sadist, it was to plead for mercy.
Hatred? What hatred? As his strong tongue swept around inside my mouth, I simply adored him.
Suddenly he got to his feet, urgently swept a clear space among the papers on his desk and put me across it. He invoiced me and filed me and taxed me and returned me and double-entried me(ouch!) until finally he invested in me. Heavily!
December 17, 2012
This is not a romantic m/m book at all........
This is not even general dominant submissive you find in erotic books.
This is hardcore, master and slave relationship with lots of details. It is written as a diary from fuckface (one of his slave names) and once started you won't want to stop reading it. Yes it's all about sex, degradation, submitting and total humilition but that is what the slave wants and craves, even if at times it was hard to see why you would want someone to piss on you!!
Only read this if you can handle the subject matter, it is hardcore but really draws you in.
Contains beatings, thrashing, oral sex, anal sex and lots of other things not for feint hearted but intriguing.
This is not even general dominant submissive you find in erotic books.
This is hardcore, master and slave relationship with lots of details. It is written as a diary from fuckface (one of his slave names) and once started you won't want to stop reading it. Yes it's all about sex, degradation, submitting and total humilition but that is what the slave wants and craves, even if at times it was hard to see why you would want someone to piss on you!!
Only read this if you can handle the subject matter, it is hardcore but really draws you in.
Contains beatings, thrashing, oral sex, anal sex and lots of other things not for feint hearted but intriguing.
September 2, 2018
This is not your usual bdsm story. This book is really hardcore. I thought it had an interesting twist at the end. Just don’t expect any kindness from this master.
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December 19, 2012Ugh. Too many conflicted emotions on this one. I can't rate it.
I did, however, really enjoy Chapter 26...or whichever Chapter he went into a detailed description of a sadist, mascochist, master and slave.
I did, however, really enjoy Chapter 26...or whichever Chapter he went into a detailed description of a sadist, mascochist, master and slave.
July 17, 2014
Review later--what a mindfuck! ;)
skip-or-dnf
April 3, 2020DNF. Not really for me, surprisingly. Just didn't grab my attention. Felt like the wrong mix of some of my favorite ingredients, and with too many of my least favorite ones... It was totally me, though. Not the story. Writing seemed good. This will probably be enjoyed by someone whose tastes are more in line with it.
August 15, 2019
The lack of a safeword scares me.
For me, this is not BDSM: this is abuse.
For me, this is not BDSM: this is abuse.
December 24, 2016
Ouf ! Quelle histoire. Je n'ai pu m'empêcher d'y trouver des éléments qui m'ont fait croire à la véracité de cette histoire plutôt cruelle. Peut-être que tout n'a pas été vécu, mais une partie l'a fort probablement été et ouch ! Ce dominateur n'a rien d'un tendre. Il aime dominer, humilier, faire souffrir de toutes les façons. Et si le soumis n'arrive pas à suivre, et bien tant pis pour lui. Non, pas tout à fait ; il a tout de même expliqué ses raisons une fois ou deux. Mais il ne faut pas trop en demander.
Ceux qui n'aiment les romans BDSM que s'ils sont des romans d'amours teintés de BDSM seront déçus. Mais si ce que vous recherchez vraiment, c'est la Domination/soumission la plus totale, vous la trouverez ici.
Ceux qui n'aiment les romans BDSM que s'ils sont des romans d'amours teintés de BDSM seront déçus. Mais si ce que vous recherchez vraiment, c'est la Domination/soumission la plus totale, vous la trouverez ici.
December 30, 2012
This was a hard read and I really had to think on how to review it. Very hardcore with extreme debasement and violence. I'm not sure I enjoyed reading it as it skated too close to my limits. I could't stop reading though!
April 30, 2015
extreme and hardcore, and (I can't believe I'm saying this) very educational....
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