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Timing Is Everything
A surprise for Tasha's kinky new boyfriend turns into a compromising position when her roommate's plans fall through. Now she's cuffed to the bed, he's due any minute, and Katrina would just as soon start without him.
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8 pages, ebook
First published November 3, 2011
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December 8, 2011
This is my first taste from Mr. Altharas. I say taste because that's all he gave me in this short story. I REALLY liked it. Hot. It was too short for me though. I wanted more. I wanted to know what happened next. I want a whole weekend filled with kinky BDSM play! (I'm a greedy little glut, aren't I?) I want to read more about Marcus Dom-ing two women. I want to read more about Tasha maybe being a switch. Will she continue to Domme Katrina? Or will Tasha become the weekend plaything? What dastardly kinky sex acts will Marcus force Katrina to suffer through with lustful pleasure? What other toys will be used? Oh my imagination is going wild! Would I rather be Tasha or Katrina? Decisions, decisions...
February 15, 2012
4 stars 4/5 hotness score
I'm really happy to have found this author. A descent story with some great steam. I loved the whole date gone bad turned good thing. But what a way to get caught by your roommate! I'm not sure how I would have felt if it were me getting walked in on and found in such a compromising position LOL!
I'm really happy to have found this author. A descent story with some great steam. I loved the whole date gone bad turned good thing. But what a way to get caught by your roommate! I'm not sure how I would have felt if it were me getting walked in on and found in such a compromising position LOL!
November 20, 2011
And this author does Contemporary BDSM erotica just as well as his fantasy writings!
I sooooo wanted more at the in of this, the big tease. I have a feeling people are shorting this author a star because they like his writing but they don't want to like the subject matter.
Well, the writing is fantastic, and I live BDSM and am an avid fan when authors get it right! And this author GETS IT RIGHT! Bravo!
I sooooo wanted more at the in of this, the big tease. I have a feeling people are shorting this author a star because they like his writing but they don't want to like the subject matter.
Well, the writing is fantastic, and I live BDSM and am an avid fan when authors get it right! And this author GETS IT RIGHT! Bravo!
March 14, 2012
Very nice, steamy lunchtime read! I want to read more about their weekend! This was my first read from J.V. Altharas, and I plan on reading his other material. (BTW- he has a great podcast too, that I just recently learned about...it's making my work commute really fun!)
December 31, 2011
This was fun steamy quickie. The only thing I didn't like was how rushed it felt. I would have enjoyed reading a full length story about this budding relationship.
March 12, 2016
My first read by this author. I've forgotten what this is supposed to be about or why I initially wanted to read this story at some point. But I have it, free, and it came up in a random challenge (as in the challenge is to read whatever comes up randomly). And so read it I do.
Okay, let's see - woman has newish roommate (hot chick) and newish boyfriend. Tasha, the main character, was told by Marcus, the dude, that he's very kinky. He told her on their first date. She's found out since what he meant, and has had a quite enjoyable time. Roommate's going out, at least for a full weekend, and boyfriend's coming over. Tasha's all excited.
So, boyfriend is due in 20 minutes. She's told him to be there then, "exactly at eight" and that the door would be unlocked. She then proceeds to do other quite dangerous things. I say this before I get anywhere. First - unlocked door. Second - light candles. Both are quite 'stupid dangerous' because she cuffed her wrists to her bed. So, anyone could come in and find her like that (door unlocked). And anything might happen with those candles. Oh, and the third is to lock yourself to something without a way to get out with the expectation of 1) roommate will be gone for a while, and 2) boyfriend will be over shortly. By that I mean, if the roommate really is gone for the weekend, then, then anything that happens to the boyfriend - hit by a car, becomes ill, whatever, that prevents him from showing up would mean that Tasha is going to be locked up for a while. Without access to food or anything else. With candles burning. She could easily end up starving to death, or burnt alive.
Hmm. Story took a turn didn't expect. I mean, woman, Tasha, locks herself to her bed thinking her boyfriend is going to show up. Instead her hot female roommate turns up unexpectedly. Catches her on the bed. One thing leads to another, and after lots and lots of talk about making sure it's alright and stuff, the roommate, Katrina, begins playing with and licking Tasha. Then the boyfriend turns up right then and there to catch the action (lucky the roommated did not 1) find it strange that the apartment door was unlocked when she arrived, and 2) lock the door after she entered . . . I'm actually having a small problem with that second part, that she wouldn't lock the door after she entered).
None of that in the prior paragraph is the 'turn didn't expect.' No, it's when Marcus asks Katrina if she wanted to be their 'toy' for the weekend. And she agrees. Gets cuffed, and finds herself on a door. Way things were going I kind of expected Tasha would end up being dominated by both Katrina and Marcus. Not that Marcus would dominate two women at the same time. Actually, I worded something wrong. Nope, rereading I didn't word it wrong. The 'their toy' part. So, the story does involve man dominating a woman who in turn dominates another. The women just weren't in the order I thought they would end up being in.
So, then the story abruptly ended. Right when things were turning even more exciting. Oh well. The tiny part I got to read was a lot more interesting and exciting than I expected.
Okay, let's see - woman has newish roommate (hot chick) and newish boyfriend. Tasha, the main character, was told by Marcus, the dude, that he's very kinky. He told her on their first date. She's found out since what he meant, and has had a quite enjoyable time. Roommate's going out, at least for a full weekend, and boyfriend's coming over. Tasha's all excited.
So, boyfriend is due in 20 minutes. She's told him to be there then, "exactly at eight" and that the door would be unlocked. She then proceeds to do other quite dangerous things. I say this before I get anywhere. First - unlocked door. Second - light candles. Both are quite 'stupid dangerous' because she cuffed her wrists to her bed. So, anyone could come in and find her like that (door unlocked). And anything might happen with those candles. Oh, and the third is to lock yourself to something without a way to get out with the expectation of 1) roommate will be gone for a while, and 2) boyfriend will be over shortly. By that I mean, if the roommate really is gone for the weekend, then, then anything that happens to the boyfriend - hit by a car, becomes ill, whatever, that prevents him from showing up would mean that Tasha is going to be locked up for a while. Without access to food or anything else. With candles burning. She could easily end up starving to death, or burnt alive.
Hmm. Story took a turn didn't expect. I mean, woman, Tasha, locks herself to her bed thinking her boyfriend is going to show up. Instead her hot female roommate turns up unexpectedly. Catches her on the bed. One thing leads to another, and after lots and lots of talk about making sure it's alright and stuff, the roommate, Katrina, begins playing with and licking Tasha. Then the boyfriend turns up right then and there to catch the action (lucky the roommated did not 1) find it strange that the apartment door was unlocked when she arrived, and 2) lock the door after she entered . . . I'm actually having a small problem with that second part, that she wouldn't lock the door after she entered).
None of that in the prior paragraph is the 'turn didn't expect.' No, it's when Marcus asks Katrina if she wanted to be their 'toy' for the weekend. And she agrees. Gets cuffed, and finds herself on a door. Way things were going I kind of expected Tasha would end up being dominated by both Katrina and Marcus. Not that Marcus would dominate two women at the same time. Actually, I worded something wrong. Nope, rereading I didn't word it wrong. The 'their toy' part. So, the story does involve man dominating a woman who in turn dominates another. The women just weren't in the order I thought they would end up being in.
So, then the story abruptly ended. Right when things were turning even more exciting. Oh well. The tiny part I got to read was a lot more interesting and exciting than I expected.
August 13, 2012
Disappointed.
The only way to describe how you feel after reading this. While it keeps you interested until the end, that is where it disappoints because you want to find out what happens next, but there is no next.
It is almost as if the author ran out of ideas when he finished the first chapter of this book and decided to release it as a short story.
The only way to describe how you feel after reading this. While it keeps you interested until the end, that is where it disappoints because you want to find out what happens next, but there is no next.
It is almost as if the author ran out of ideas when he finished the first chapter of this book and decided to release it as a short story.
June 8, 2018
A surprise for Tasha's kinky new boyfriend turns into a compromising position when her roommate's plans fall through. Now she's cuffed to the bed, he's due any minute, and Katrina would just as soon start without him.
Short,Sexy Threesome encounter!
Short,Sexy Threesome encounter!
March 12, 2012
From what was available it was good. Way to short though. The story ends right when things are getting good. A story about their entire weekend would have been fantastic.
August 18, 2012
Absolutely incredible :)
But . . .
Way too short
May 5, 2013
Quick lunchtime read, too short though
July 19, 2013
Pretty hot read. Some ff play
September 24, 2012
2 ½ stars – Contemporary Erotic/Ménage Quickie/Freebie
December 28, 2012
Short story. 8 pages.
This author sure knows how to write erotic stories.
This author sure knows how to write erotic stories.
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May 24, 2013It was a good read but we need to know what happened next and how the weekend turned out
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