**This book was given to The Book Hookup but it did not affect the review**
Initial thoughts: Ellie, a local coffee shop owner, has just divorced Jake and is in a bit of a personal slump. Her friend and employee, Linda, throws a dinner party in her mansion on the lake in order to help Ellie get back into the social scene. The party ends on a very strange note with Linda and her male companion leaving town immediately. They then ask Ellie to house sit for them in what turns out to be an almost haunted house…this was the beginning of the mystery.
Setting: I could envision it all! A small town with a cute main street, which is exactly where I pictured Ellie’s coffee shop to be. I loved all the regulars that came into the shop, the whole place gave off a great vibe. I would absolutely want to stop in for my daily coffee if I lived there! Besides the coffee shop, I could totally see the mansion on the lake in my mind. Especially on the night of Linda’s dinner party – it sounded divine.
Characters: I liked Ellie and her love interest, David. I was definitely interested in seeing the romance bloom. I was hoping it would heat up a little more, but with Ellie a little skittish about relationships I could see why it would be slow going. I also loved Kevin, Ellie’s best friend and employee at the coffee shop. He seemed hilarious and I wish we could be friends in real life. Linda was an odd one from the beginning….I wasn’t sure what to make of her.
Plot: I knew Linda’s house was creepy, it almost seemed haunted. Somehow this was the core of the mystery, although I wasn’t sure exactly what or who Ellie was up against.
Ending: I don’t know what happened. The first three quarters of the book were slower, and I found myself able to put the book down easily. However, all of a sudden there was a lot of very serious action and the ending was so rushed. For me, that made the story very uneven. I’m also not really sure what events transpired at the end. I understand who was evil, but it was not clear what happened to them, who they “worked for” or what type of deal was made. Why was Ellie even able to make a deal?
Overall: *warning-spoilerish* The story had potential, but I just don’t think it was executed as well as it could have been. I wasn’t sure of the plot to begin with, but instead of gaining clarity as I read, I had even more questions….
Some of my questions: Who or what is The Third? The Third seemed to be a major entity, yet only had a brief appearance and mention. The introduction of Jenny seemed awkward, was there a bigger reason Jenny was included in the story? Did her child have abilities like Jake? Is that why she was interesting? Then, who was Jake? Why didn’t Ellie share with the reader all the strange things Jake had been doing while they had been married? Such as talking to himself, chanting, and blacking out windows? How did Joe Klein fit into this? He seemed so random. How were people’s minds seemingly erased and emotions swayed? Ellie’s dreams were interesting, but it wasn’t clear why she was having them. While we now knew more about David, who he was just didn’t sit well with me. I couldn’t believe they were so calm and accepting by the end. Those key details and answers were left out and I had no closure.
Would I rec this book? Eventually…..I think the story definitely has potential, it just needs some of the kinks worked out.