2.5/5
This was a nostalgic read for me, considering I first read it many years ago on Wattpad, and so I was grateful for the chance to read it again. However, it was a tougher read without the rose-colored glasses of my youth.
What I Liked:
- General vibes
- Setting
- Mythology
What I disliked:
- Main character
- Character relationships
- Overall plot
When I crave a good mermaid story, this is what I like to read. I love a small island town that has a secret to hide. I love the wind swept hair, the hidden beach coves, the complicated familial lineage and drama that comes with it. I feel like most siren/mermaid stories are pirate related and that's fine, but I enjoy this setting so much more personally. Additionally, the mythology of the Finfolk was enough that I was satisfied with what I was reading, however I think there is considerably more that could be expanded upon. It seems like the author took those steps in the following sequels based on the synopsis, but I have yet to read them so I can't say for sure. It's a unique enough take on the mermaid mythology to keep me interested, while also fitting the vibes of the book and the island. One thing I could've used more of was underwater scenes. I personally feel like the magic of the underwater world could have been explored in a way that added to the wonder that the Mara might feel. I was missing that feeling on my end as a reader.
As far as the characters and the story itself, there was quite a bit I felt as though I was missing. I understand that Mara has trauma, however I feel like it wasn't entirely worked out. She was often selfish in a way that inspired anger rather than sympathy from me. I will say that she felt like the most real character out of everybody, though Josh is a close second. The rest of them felt very superficial to me, including her dad. The actions of many of the side characters, such as Luke, Dylan, and Sailor were always out of left field, or weird and unwarranted. Sailor being so cruel to Mara from the get-go really rubbed me the wrong way. As a girl who lost her parents, you'd think she'd be more sympathetic to someone in a similar position rather than playing her trump car of TWO dead parents over Mara's one constantly. Luke was another problem, he made no attempt to get to know Mara in a real way or explain the Finfolk of the island, and then used the excuse of "I was trying to tell you" when in reality her never did. The secret was kept from her for waaaaaay too long in my opinion.
Overall the plot was more basic, but kept me engaged enough. I think the author was trying to go for mystery, but instead of there being many things to untangle, there was only one thing and she just dragged her feet in revealing it.
I was craving this vibe when I picked the book up, and I got it. However, if you don't go in with the expectations I had, I can see how this read may be slower and mildly disappointing.