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The Dica Series #1
Leiyatel's Embrace
Leiyatel, the once-invincible power of the vast and ancient castle realm of Dica, has long been weakening, leaving the castle to slumber on through its twilight years. Only the inevitable fall of the realm lies ahead. As the king has lost his mind, who can then be expected to defend it when a wholly unexpected invasion threatens, and when no one can even remember when Dica last had any need of an army?
This story follows those idiosyncratically unique characters who rise to the challenge, who seek a solution amidst the vast and convoluted spread of the castle, and in so doing, uncover much about Dica’s history and about themselves. They also discover that there may very well be a way of renewing Leiyatel, and so restoring Dica.
Their journey proves far from straightforward, though, full of surprising twists and turns, and all within a world rich in the awe-inspiring and the downright weird. From vast vistas to exquisite detail, the castle and its realm are brought vividly to life, as though the reader has walked through its wonders in the company of close friends.
Although largely a tale of mystery, it’s also laced with constant surprises: the conflict between man and nature, the often wry and ironic clash of monarchy and republic, and the humour, pain and pathos of characters at odds with each other or touchingly close. In a subtle and enchanting way, it explores much of the mystery of life itself.
This is most certainly an epic tale, a tale that ineluctably draws to a thrilling, strange, and totally surprising climax. A tale that will enthral, that will stay with the reader for a long time—a very long time, indeed
This story follows those idiosyncratically unique characters who rise to the challenge, who seek a solution amidst the vast and convoluted spread of the castle, and in so doing, uncover much about Dica’s history and about themselves. They also discover that there may very well be a way of renewing Leiyatel, and so restoring Dica.
Their journey proves far from straightforward, though, full of surprising twists and turns, and all within a world rich in the awe-inspiring and the downright weird. From vast vistas to exquisite detail, the castle and its realm are brought vividly to life, as though the reader has walked through its wonders in the company of close friends.
Although largely a tale of mystery, it’s also laced with constant surprises: the conflict between man and nature, the often wry and ironic clash of monarchy and republic, and the humour, pain and pathos of characters at odds with each other or touchingly close. In a subtle and enchanting way, it explores much of the mystery of life itself.
This is most certainly an epic tale, a tale that ineluctably draws to a thrilling, strange, and totally surprising climax. A tale that will enthral, that will stay with the reader for a long time—a very long time, indeed
- GenresFantasy
473 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 4, 2011
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Clive S. Johnson
12 books360 followersBritish author of Speculative Fiction, Science Fiction and Timeslip Historical Fiction, as well as Poetry and Short Stories.
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June 13, 2012
Firstly, do not go into this book expecting a sword waving, all battle, beasties and knights type fantasy. You won't get it. It was described to me before I started as a prefect book for a day when you just have time to sink and indulge your senses, and this is true.
At the start of the book I was rather taken aback by the contemporary opening, quickly forgotten as I moved into the substance of the work. It wasn't until the end of the book that I actually found out how it all tied in. I had to read it twice, and it still fascinates me how the beginning and ending can make so much sense of some of the content within the book.
Some readers may find the book too slow paced and struggle with word use that may seem exotic. If you are that reader, slow down, re-read if necessary. Soon you will begin to see how the verbiage sets up the fantstical tone of the book. The plot is a slow cooker, and you should not expect this to be a book where you can instantly identify with the characters either. The author takes time to make the characters individual, but also to emphasise the differences between the races portrayed. In some cases he draws, rather cunningly, on Yorkshire dialect and stereotypes to define a nation, reflective of the authors own heritage. The characters develop, take on colour and definition throughout the book. Also they change, grow in nobility, are swayed by decisions and circumstances, or shrink into their own incapability.
Towards the last third of the book I thought I had the plot mostly worked out. Well, I was a bit premature! I had worked some of it out right, but other developments were a total surprise. I had to read the ending twice, and then go back to the beginning as well to get to grips with the denouement. A nice surprise.
In conclusion the book benefits from the investment of time and intelligence when reading. If you give the author this gift, you will be rewarded.
At the start of the book I was rather taken aback by the contemporary opening, quickly forgotten as I moved into the substance of the work. It wasn't until the end of the book that I actually found out how it all tied in. I had to read it twice, and it still fascinates me how the beginning and ending can make so much sense of some of the content within the book.
Some readers may find the book too slow paced and struggle with word use that may seem exotic. If you are that reader, slow down, re-read if necessary. Soon you will begin to see how the verbiage sets up the fantstical tone of the book. The plot is a slow cooker, and you should not expect this to be a book where you can instantly identify with the characters either. The author takes time to make the characters individual, but also to emphasise the differences between the races portrayed. In some cases he draws, rather cunningly, on Yorkshire dialect and stereotypes to define a nation, reflective of the authors own heritage. The characters develop, take on colour and definition throughout the book. Also they change, grow in nobility, are swayed by decisions and circumstances, or shrink into their own incapability.
Towards the last third of the book I thought I had the plot mostly worked out. Well, I was a bit premature! I had worked some of it out right, but other developments were a total surprise. I had to read the ending twice, and then go back to the beginning as well to get to grips with the denouement. A nice surprise.
In conclusion the book benefits from the investment of time and intelligence when reading. If you give the author this gift, you will be rewarded.
November 1, 2012
I gave this book 5 stars but I would have gave more. It's meticulously written. I've never read a book like this one, I've read historical books about castles and kings, land barons and such, this book is more than that. The wit and beautiful way this author uses his words is poetry for the eyes. The title itself Leiyatel's Embrace is beautiful.Read slowly to take it all in. The use of the superb map was brilliant. The map helped immensely to journey through this book. The characters are described in great detail. The author describes the land, castles, what the character clothing is like so you see this clearly in your mind. Names were even like poetry, Falmeard and Geran are just a few. People are losing land that has been in their families for generations for different reasons. Read this wonderful book and find out who, how and why. There's lots of twist and turns as the author keeps your mind wondering through out the chapters. If you think you know the out come think again. This book has to be read by someone who loves slow reads, take your time and take it all in. You might need a dictionary as I found it useful. Thank you Clive for writing this lovely book. You can find it one Amazon. com. This book reminds me of the author. I can see Clive in the century this book was written in.
September 16, 2012
A beautiful world that drew me in:
The writing of this beautiful book is in the tradition of the best fantasy authors, lyrical, poetic, deep. I was drawn into the story from the very start. Clive S. Johnson creates a world that I wanted to return to over and again, eagerly stealing moments from my busy day to immerse myself once more. There many layers of meaning, and the plot builds step by step, enfolding and engrossing the reader. The whole work is a rich and many coloured example of story telling at its best.
I don't want to go into a blow by blow account of the plot and characters as the book is too subtle to precis in that way. Just read the look inside on amazon and you will have a flavour of what is on offer. I loved it!
Merged review:
A beautiful world that drew me in:
The writing of this beautiful book is in the tradition of the best fantasy authors, lyrical, poetic, deep. I was drawn into the story from the very start. Clive S. Johnson creates a world that I wanted to return to over and again, eagerly stealing moments from my busy day to immerse myself once more. There many layers of meaning, and the plot builds step by step, enfolding and engrossing the reader. The whole work is a rich and many coloured example of story tel...more
The writing of this beautiful book is in the tradition of the best fantasy authors, lyrical, poetic, deep. I was drawn into the story from the very start. Clive S. Johnson creates a world that I wanted to return to over and again, eagerly stealing moments from my busy day to immerse myself once more. There many layers of meaning, and the plot builds step by step, enfolding and engrossing the reader. The whole work is a rich and many coloured example of story telling at its best.
I don't want to go into a blow by blow account of the plot and characters as the book is too subtle to precis in that way. Just read the look inside on amazon and you will have a flavour of what is on offer. I loved it!
Merged review:
A beautiful world that drew me in:
The writing of this beautiful book is in the tradition of the best fantasy authors, lyrical, poetic, deep. I was drawn into the story from the very start. Clive S. Johnson creates a world that I wanted to return to over and again, eagerly stealing moments from my busy day to immerse myself once more. There many layers of meaning, and the plot builds step by step, enfolding and engrossing the reader. The whole work is a rich and many coloured example of story tel...more
April 4, 2012
A Breath of Fresh Fantasy and Mystery!
I just finished Clive S. Johnson's first novel entitled Leiyatel's Embrace. Touted as a speculative fiction mystery, Leiyatel's Embrace certainly held all of these elements. From the beginning the author uses language forged together from past, present and future and encompassing more than one dialect to draw the reader into a new world of what could be and glimpses of what has come before. Mystery and intrigue threaten around every corner and yet the characters take us leisurely from element to element allowing one to catch their breath before the next reveal.
Rich characters and detailed descriptions of each location pull you deep into the realm of Dica. Dica is a castle realm of immensity now fallen into decay and disarray. Conflict soon arrives at the gates in the form of a mysterious army. We then follow a ragtag collection of characters led by the ancient Lord Nephril on a quest to find not only the origin and identity of the army, but the cause for the decline of Dica and Leiyatel the living green stone tree.
I was impressed with the authors ability to envision beautifully flowing landscapes and weave them deftly into the story line. with each step taken by the characters I felt myself moving through this world of wonder. The author uses characters who begin as reclusive individuals, and pulls them out of their comfort zones into a broader and more populated world. Through this device we the reader discover their world through fresh and almost child like eyes.
Having discovered that not everything or everyone is who or what they seem at first, Mr. Johnson sets the stage for the next adventure. The soon to be released Of Weft and Weave (Book Two) will be highly anticipated by anyone who has read this first masterpiece.
Review by Brian Randleas
I just finished Clive S. Johnson's first novel entitled Leiyatel's Embrace. Touted as a speculative fiction mystery, Leiyatel's Embrace certainly held all of these elements. From the beginning the author uses language forged together from past, present and future and encompassing more than one dialect to draw the reader into a new world of what could be and glimpses of what has come before. Mystery and intrigue threaten around every corner and yet the characters take us leisurely from element to element allowing one to catch their breath before the next reveal.
Rich characters and detailed descriptions of each location pull you deep into the realm of Dica. Dica is a castle realm of immensity now fallen into decay and disarray. Conflict soon arrives at the gates in the form of a mysterious army. We then follow a ragtag collection of characters led by the ancient Lord Nephril on a quest to find not only the origin and identity of the army, but the cause for the decline of Dica and Leiyatel the living green stone tree.
I was impressed with the authors ability to envision beautifully flowing landscapes and weave them deftly into the story line. with each step taken by the characters I felt myself moving through this world of wonder. The author uses characters who begin as reclusive individuals, and pulls them out of their comfort zones into a broader and more populated world. Through this device we the reader discover their world through fresh and almost child like eyes.
Having discovered that not everything or everyone is who or what they seem at first, Mr. Johnson sets the stage for the next adventure. The soon to be released Of Weft and Weave (Book Two) will be highly anticipated by anyone who has read this first masterpiece.
Review by Brian Randleas
November 30, 2011
Johnson's rich book pulls one into what can be just a beautifully crafted fantasy, or can be a glimpse into a dystopian future; the verdict remains resolutely with the reader. It is unusual to be left with such a freedom of interpretation, in a story with so many both wide and minutely detailed elements to its tapestry. The detail is at times exquisite. The backdrop does on occasion get a touch overdone for my individual liking, as it threatens to over delay the flow of the story.
In the weave of the adventure we get elementals from the works of many great authors. The influences that particularly struck me were T.H. White, Tolkien, Mervyn Peake, and Lewis Carroll. To these writers great literary waves Johnson adds his own intricate currents. He draws strongly from northern English landscapes and the vernacular of its people, past and present. We sense the grand architectures of long inheritance, from mediaeval castles, to cobbled shambles, to the bleak modern concrete of industrialisation. At one moment we see a Camelot, then the harsh grandeur of what might be a modern power-station still standing in a technologically less advanced future. We feel the weather of Britain, whilst in the distance beyond Grey Mountains we hear that there lays a wide desert. Whether these arid lands are the result of pollution, or of climate, is left to our own thoughts.
This is not a book that explodes at you, one for instant gratification. It does require effort on the part of the reader, but it is worth it. The biggest rewards from Johnson's book are the wonderful vistas he paints. These are wide landscapes and small views, which are probably easiest to conjure for those familiar with northern England, but this is certainly not a requirement. We are not, after all on a documental journey with Wainwright, but rather with Johnson as our guide through his particular fantasy. The end is a satisfactory pause. That is all I feel it can be, because despite the books length there is still so much left to explore. I think this is a book that would feed the mind anew with a second reading, and one day I will make sure I find the time. It does not conclude with a fashionable hiatus of activity, Johnson is anything but a writer of fashion. This is a book of craft, of experiment, of exacting inspection, of the interested traveller for whom there is no determination to arrive. On this guided tour we eventually run out of steam, but never for a moment run short of interesting invention.
In the weave of the adventure we get elementals from the works of many great authors. The influences that particularly struck me were T.H. White, Tolkien, Mervyn Peake, and Lewis Carroll. To these writers great literary waves Johnson adds his own intricate currents. He draws strongly from northern English landscapes and the vernacular of its people, past and present. We sense the grand architectures of long inheritance, from mediaeval castles, to cobbled shambles, to the bleak modern concrete of industrialisation. At one moment we see a Camelot, then the harsh grandeur of what might be a modern power-station still standing in a technologically less advanced future. We feel the weather of Britain, whilst in the distance beyond Grey Mountains we hear that there lays a wide desert. Whether these arid lands are the result of pollution, or of climate, is left to our own thoughts.
This is not a book that explodes at you, one for instant gratification. It does require effort on the part of the reader, but it is worth it. The biggest rewards from Johnson's book are the wonderful vistas he paints. These are wide landscapes and small views, which are probably easiest to conjure for those familiar with northern England, but this is certainly not a requirement. We are not, after all on a documental journey with Wainwright, but rather with Johnson as our guide through his particular fantasy. The end is a satisfactory pause. That is all I feel it can be, because despite the books length there is still so much left to explore. I think this is a book that would feed the mind anew with a second reading, and one day I will make sure I find the time. It does not conclude with a fashionable hiatus of activity, Johnson is anything but a writer of fashion. This is a book of craft, of experiment, of exacting inspection, of the interested traveller for whom there is no determination to arrive. On this guided tour we eventually run out of steam, but never for a moment run short of interesting invention.
January 11, 2015
This fine first novel in Clive S. Johnson’s Dica series hooked me on the first page. If you like poetic writing with a keen eye for detail, this book is for you. If you like well-drawn, fully developed characters, this book is for you. If you like sharp dialogue and immersing yourself in a richly cultivated world, this book is for you. Be warned, however, Leiyatel’s Embrace is not a quick read.
In the beginning, Leiyatel’s Embrace reminded me very much of Tolkien, due in particular to the opulent setting Mr. Johnson has created. However, this novel is not high fantasy—there are no elves, dwarves, goblins, etc. Yet as with Tolkien, Mr. Johnson weaves a lyrical story that calls for nothing short of a warm fire and a pint of stout so one can forget about the world for a while and simply read.
I wonder how much the author intended Leiyatel’s Embrace to be allegorical. I found myself often contemplating the Eden-like realm of Dica with its snake in the grass—yet who is the true snake?—and the curious innocence of many of its inhabitants. Do we have paradise lost, or paradise that never was, as there are serious issues beneath the seemingly calm façade. How society treats our natural resources while maintaining healthy sustainability being but one. Of course in Dica the natural resources also have a say in events.
Pleasantly, there were a couple of plot twists that I didn’t see coming. They make perfect sense and add to the marvel of the story, at one point bringing it full circle.
I would like to see more scenes along the lines of Pettar’s rescue of Braygar. Mr. Johnson proves to be quite adept at ratcheting up tension in adventurous situations. Then again, four books follow Leiyatel’s Embrace so it remains to be seen if I get my wish. (Yes, I already have Of Weft and Weave, the next journey through Dica.)
Leiyatel’s Embrace is a novel that will linger in your mind long after you’ve read the final sentence. I highly recommend it.
In the beginning, Leiyatel’s Embrace reminded me very much of Tolkien, due in particular to the opulent setting Mr. Johnson has created. However, this novel is not high fantasy—there are no elves, dwarves, goblins, etc. Yet as with Tolkien, Mr. Johnson weaves a lyrical story that calls for nothing short of a warm fire and a pint of stout so one can forget about the world for a while and simply read.
I wonder how much the author intended Leiyatel’s Embrace to be allegorical. I found myself often contemplating the Eden-like realm of Dica with its snake in the grass—yet who is the true snake?—and the curious innocence of many of its inhabitants. Do we have paradise lost, or paradise that never was, as there are serious issues beneath the seemingly calm façade. How society treats our natural resources while maintaining healthy sustainability being but one. Of course in Dica the natural resources also have a say in events.
Pleasantly, there were a couple of plot twists that I didn’t see coming. They make perfect sense and add to the marvel of the story, at one point bringing it full circle.
I would like to see more scenes along the lines of Pettar’s rescue of Braygar. Mr. Johnson proves to be quite adept at ratcheting up tension in adventurous situations. Then again, four books follow Leiyatel’s Embrace so it remains to be seen if I get my wish. (Yes, I already have Of Weft and Weave, the next journey through Dica.)
Leiyatel’s Embrace is a novel that will linger in your mind long after you’ve read the final sentence. I highly recommend it.
July 18, 2012
I loved this book! The prose of the author is evocative, the landscapes and characters are vividly described.
It's not a book you can read in a rush from start to end, if you are looking for something like that don't start this book, but believe me, if you start and pursue the read you will be greatly rewarded. Everything will fall into place.
Definitely a book I will read again to look for something I might have missed!
Now I'm looking forward to read the sequel Of Weft and Weave
Thanks Clive S. Johnson for writing this book!
It's not a book you can read in a rush from start to end, if you are looking for something like that don't start this book, but believe me, if you start and pursue the read you will be greatly rewarded. Everything will fall into place.
Definitely a book I will read again to look for something I might have missed!
Now I'm looking forward to read the sequel Of Weft and Weave
Thanks Clive S. Johnson for writing this book!
May 21, 2012
Leiyatel’s Embrace is destined to be welcomed into the fold of great literature. It is easy to tell right away that Clive Johnson is not only an author but an artist too. Each sentence, character and landscape is crafted and painted with such wonderful descriptive and beautiful words. This is not a book to be rushed through but you should plan to savor every moment during your travels into Mr. Johnson’s world. Enjoy the intrigue but relish the delightful prose.
June 5, 2012
Leiyatel's Embrace is described as a fantasy novel. I must say to begin with that I have never been entirely predisposed to fantasy. I have read Lord of the Rings several times and love it. I have started The Chronicles of Thomas Covenant The Unbeliever several times but just can't seem to get through even the first book. So that my friends is the sum total of my exposure to fantasy - discounting of course the little world of my own creation in which I have scrabbled around for the past forty-three years...
And you know what else? I can't remember why I decided to buy Leiyatel's Embrace, which is rather ironic given one of the major themes of the novel.
Leiyatel's Embrace is set in an alternate world and is a tale told on several levels. There is the thread of the story that begins with an impending invasion of the castle realm of Dica and the response by what is left of the local poplulace to this threat. Dica has been in decline for many years and is no longer a Kingdom able to defend itself. It's King has lost his mind and his subjects have been either scattered throughout the land or have just dwindled away. There are just a few people who have both the knowledge and courage to try and discover what is going on and it is their efforts that occupy the majority of the novel. The characters are wonderfully realised, each unique in both their mannerisms and their speech, responding in ways that define their individual characteristics.
The story is exceedingly clever. There are plot twists galore and twists and turns that will delight and enthrall. But for me, the story, wonderful though it is, is only a part of the novel.
To craft a novel of this complexity takes an incredible amount of talent - particularly when the world in which it occurs is entirely fictional - not that you would know it. The world is described in absolute detail with precicion when needed, poetic brilliance when necessary and a love for nature at its core. Much of the book is taken up following the various characters on their journeys around Dica and I felt I was travelling with each and every one of them - seeing what they saw, smelling what they smelled and feeling their awe at the spectacular sites. I honestly feel like I've been to Dica! Perhaps I have and have just forgotten...
So to the themes. I guess this is a very subjective thing as different parts of a novel will resonate for different people depending upon their experiences and reflections. For me, there are three main themes: man vs nature, monarchy vs republic and finally the process of life itself. I will speak only of the last of these themes as touching on the other two may give away too much of the storyline.
As I said above, the characters go on a physical journey, many in fact, but that runs parallel with the feeling, the intense feeling, that with every step taken, something is being eroded, lost to time. There were some passages that were so poignant on this subject that I had to stop and think about how this all related to myself. I have, mainly by neglect, a poor memory. Some parts of my life are a complete blank. Years run into themselves and I struggle to put even the major events of my life into the correct sequence. Like one of the central characters in Leiyetal's Embrace I yearn to recall every detail but somehow things slip away, much like the Kingdom of Dica, much like the passing of time. Make no mistake - this is not a fantasy story about dwarfs and goblins and monsters and dragons. None of these things appear. And it's not about big battles and magic and sorcery. It's about good people trying to make sense of what is going on around them as their lives ebb away.
I may not remember clearly how I came to read Leiyatel's Embrace but having read it, I shan't forget this book for a long, long time.
And you know what else? I can't remember why I decided to buy Leiyatel's Embrace, which is rather ironic given one of the major themes of the novel.
Leiyatel's Embrace is set in an alternate world and is a tale told on several levels. There is the thread of the story that begins with an impending invasion of the castle realm of Dica and the response by what is left of the local poplulace to this threat. Dica has been in decline for many years and is no longer a Kingdom able to defend itself. It's King has lost his mind and his subjects have been either scattered throughout the land or have just dwindled away. There are just a few people who have both the knowledge and courage to try and discover what is going on and it is their efforts that occupy the majority of the novel. The characters are wonderfully realised, each unique in both their mannerisms and their speech, responding in ways that define their individual characteristics.
The story is exceedingly clever. There are plot twists galore and twists and turns that will delight and enthrall. But for me, the story, wonderful though it is, is only a part of the novel.
To craft a novel of this complexity takes an incredible amount of talent - particularly when the world in which it occurs is entirely fictional - not that you would know it. The world is described in absolute detail with precicion when needed, poetic brilliance when necessary and a love for nature at its core. Much of the book is taken up following the various characters on their journeys around Dica and I felt I was travelling with each and every one of them - seeing what they saw, smelling what they smelled and feeling their awe at the spectacular sites. I honestly feel like I've been to Dica! Perhaps I have and have just forgotten...
So to the themes. I guess this is a very subjective thing as different parts of a novel will resonate for different people depending upon their experiences and reflections. For me, there are three main themes: man vs nature, monarchy vs republic and finally the process of life itself. I will speak only of the last of these themes as touching on the other two may give away too much of the storyline.
As I said above, the characters go on a physical journey, many in fact, but that runs parallel with the feeling, the intense feeling, that with every step taken, something is being eroded, lost to time. There were some passages that were so poignant on this subject that I had to stop and think about how this all related to myself. I have, mainly by neglect, a poor memory. Some parts of my life are a complete blank. Years run into themselves and I struggle to put even the major events of my life into the correct sequence. Like one of the central characters in Leiyetal's Embrace I yearn to recall every detail but somehow things slip away, much like the Kingdom of Dica, much like the passing of time. Make no mistake - this is not a fantasy story about dwarfs and goblins and monsters and dragons. None of these things appear. And it's not about big battles and magic and sorcery. It's about good people trying to make sense of what is going on around them as their lives ebb away.
I may not remember clearly how I came to read Leiyatel's Embrace but having read it, I shan't forget this book for a long, long time.
July 7, 2012
‘Leiyatel’s Embrace’ is a warm comforter of a novel. Clive Johnson brings us a rich punch made from an ancient recipe and full of things to make us feel good. And yet, it has a kick to it which takes the reader by surprise.
The characters are from another world, but ring true in this one. Their names – Falmeard, Penolith, Nephril – have an ancient and Tolkienish feel to them and when they speak, it is in a manner which is a bottomless chasm away from our sound bite society. They fear not the adjective nor adverb, nor are they shy to say forty words when ten would have done.
Johnson’s people live in a land which he has created, with craggy mountains, broad plains, rambling castles and ancient dwellings. This land is a character in the story, but never dominates. Rather, the reader is absorbed into its many facets and feels comfortable to be part of it and its many wonderful place names. The story and its setting bring to mind ‘The Lord of The Rings,” but there are no orcs, or ents or elfs in this tale.
The plot is a long, slow simmer of an affair with a clever twist at the end which brings the reader back to where he or she started, blinking in surprise. Leiyatel and her embrace turn out to bear no relation to anything that this reader conjectured from the novel’s title and the ancient source of life’s energy and meaning turns out to have more in common with aspects of science than ancient legend. Very clever, Mr. Johnson.
‘Leiyatel’s Embrace’ is a story which can be read on several levels. As an adventure which is about a people’s response to threat and possible extinction, interwoven with the history of a fictional land and the relationships between the various characters, it works well. But there is a deeper level, open to interpretation by the reader, which is about our own situation as a human race, the challenges that we face and, especially, our ability to be able to deal with our spiritual and physical power without creating the seeds of our own destruction.
Ultimately, for all the story’s many qualities, it is Johnson’s expressive and rich prose which carries the reader along. This is a novel to be savoured rather than rushed, preferably over a cup of hot chocolate or, perhaps, some mulled wine.
I thoroughly recommend it and look forward to reading the sequel.
The characters are from another world, but ring true in this one. Their names – Falmeard, Penolith, Nephril – have an ancient and Tolkienish feel to them and when they speak, it is in a manner which is a bottomless chasm away from our sound bite society. They fear not the adjective nor adverb, nor are they shy to say forty words when ten would have done.
Johnson’s people live in a land which he has created, with craggy mountains, broad plains, rambling castles and ancient dwellings. This land is a character in the story, but never dominates. Rather, the reader is absorbed into its many facets and feels comfortable to be part of it and its many wonderful place names. The story and its setting bring to mind ‘The Lord of The Rings,” but there are no orcs, or ents or elfs in this tale.
The plot is a long, slow simmer of an affair with a clever twist at the end which brings the reader back to where he or she started, blinking in surprise. Leiyatel and her embrace turn out to bear no relation to anything that this reader conjectured from the novel’s title and the ancient source of life’s energy and meaning turns out to have more in common with aspects of science than ancient legend. Very clever, Mr. Johnson.
‘Leiyatel’s Embrace’ is a story which can be read on several levels. As an adventure which is about a people’s response to threat and possible extinction, interwoven with the history of a fictional land and the relationships between the various characters, it works well. But there is a deeper level, open to interpretation by the reader, which is about our own situation as a human race, the challenges that we face and, especially, our ability to be able to deal with our spiritual and physical power without creating the seeds of our own destruction.
Ultimately, for all the story’s many qualities, it is Johnson’s expressive and rich prose which carries the reader along. This is a novel to be savoured rather than rushed, preferably over a cup of hot chocolate or, perhaps, some mulled wine.
I thoroughly recommend it and look forward to reading the sequel.
June 8, 2012
There is an overall beauty and genuine feel to Leiyatel’s Embrace and the enjoyment of its’ reading is not one that should be rushed. The imagery, pace and voice reminds me of tales by authors like Jack Whyte and his Arthurian legend novels, and Ken Follett’s many historical novels. As it is with those author’s works, C.S. Johnson’s novel should be savoured and the exquisite writing appreciated.
The words…evocative. The detail…breathtaking. The writing…melodic.
There were a few parts I found myself reading more than once because of its poetic brilliance or just because it simply resonated with me on some level. As an example, this quote particularly resonated on a spiritual level…
“His memories had begun to flood back, to fill his mind to bursting, their sharp detail just too exquisite. He saw, before him, his whole long life play out, unbidden and unbridled. Whilst he was sitting there, in wonder, an immeasurably ancient self suddenly strode, confidently, into his being, reached down and took his pliant hand.
It gently pulled him to his feet, embraced his heart and there whispered into his ears the many truths he’d lost. Before him, his own face smiled, leant forward and then gently kissed him on the lips. There, through that simple act, limitless vigour then passed into his heart, made him open his eyes to Leiyatel.”
Yet, resonating on an entirely different kind of of level, this quote had me seriously laughing out loud…
“It’s an odd effect watching an extremely irate man try to vent his spleen in a low and subdued voice, trying to impart venom and acid without advantage of a full range of tone and volume. Breadgrinder wasn’t built for such constrictions, so his face was gradually turning puce and his frame becoming fixed and rigid, within his frustrated indignation.”
The characterization is brilliant with each one developed thoroughly making it impossible not to invest in their plights and struggles to understand what’s happening to their beloved Dica and what it means to their future.
The action rises and falls nicely, however, it’s the breathtaking imagery and stirring poetry that I found most enjoyable.
Bottom line is this novel is golden and one best enjoyed when you aren’t in a hurry to start and finish.
Happy Reading!!
The words…evocative. The detail…breathtaking. The writing…melodic.
There were a few parts I found myself reading more than once because of its poetic brilliance or just because it simply resonated with me on some level. As an example, this quote particularly resonated on a spiritual level…
“His memories had begun to flood back, to fill his mind to bursting, their sharp detail just too exquisite. He saw, before him, his whole long life play out, unbidden and unbridled. Whilst he was sitting there, in wonder, an immeasurably ancient self suddenly strode, confidently, into his being, reached down and took his pliant hand.
It gently pulled him to his feet, embraced his heart and there whispered into his ears the many truths he’d lost. Before him, his own face smiled, leant forward and then gently kissed him on the lips. There, through that simple act, limitless vigour then passed into his heart, made him open his eyes to Leiyatel.”
Yet, resonating on an entirely different kind of of level, this quote had me seriously laughing out loud…
“It’s an odd effect watching an extremely irate man try to vent his spleen in a low and subdued voice, trying to impart venom and acid without advantage of a full range of tone and volume. Breadgrinder wasn’t built for such constrictions, so his face was gradually turning puce and his frame becoming fixed and rigid, within his frustrated indignation.”
The characterization is brilliant with each one developed thoroughly making it impossible not to invest in their plights and struggles to understand what’s happening to their beloved Dica and what it means to their future.
The action rises and falls nicely, however, it’s the breathtaking imagery and stirring poetry that I found most enjoyable.
Bottom line is this novel is golden and one best enjoyed when you aren’t in a hurry to start and finish.
Happy Reading!!
November 23, 2012
Leiyatel's Embrace was one of the more unique fantasy books that I've read in the last few years. It tells the story of a vast castle which extends out for miles around a collection of lands where they border the sea. The lands and the castle have undergone a decline such that most of the interior is abandoned and desolate, populated by a quirky group of people and ruled by an insane king and a dusty bunch of nobles.
Things are stirred up when an army is sighted approaching the castle and seemingly laying waste to a village on the way. The main characters then begin to try and galvanise the king and the occupants of Dica into action in anticipation of the invaders. Part of this involves the rediscovery of ancient lore and ultimately a multitude of revelations about the inhabitants.
The most striking things about the book are the density and detail of the prose, and the macabre characters. Of the latter, Clive Johnson takes great delight in detailing characters that range from the atypical to the frankly grotesque. They are richly drawn and often satirical in their portrayal, but always convincing and enjoyable.
The style of the book is very detailed, and often this shines in its lyricism, especially in the description of the perfectly realised fantasy world. The down-side is that it slows down the plot in a number of places--I found the dialogue suffered at times, and the repeated descriptions of expressions and thoughts hampered the flow in some of the less pacey parts of the novel.
The plot has enough twists and turns to compensate for this and it held my attention until the rather bizarre ending. Certainly, when I plough through my TBR pile, I'll be returning to Dica for book two and three.
In short, the scope and breadth of the realm of Dica was admirable. The author has created a setting so real that I could close my eyes and almost be there. I'm not sure I'd necessarily want to visit, especially if the Kings Council were waiting, but the option would be there.
Things are stirred up when an army is sighted approaching the castle and seemingly laying waste to a village on the way. The main characters then begin to try and galvanise the king and the occupants of Dica into action in anticipation of the invaders. Part of this involves the rediscovery of ancient lore and ultimately a multitude of revelations about the inhabitants.
The most striking things about the book are the density and detail of the prose, and the macabre characters. Of the latter, Clive Johnson takes great delight in detailing characters that range from the atypical to the frankly grotesque. They are richly drawn and often satirical in their portrayal, but always convincing and enjoyable.
The style of the book is very detailed, and often this shines in its lyricism, especially in the description of the perfectly realised fantasy world. The down-side is that it slows down the plot in a number of places--I found the dialogue suffered at times, and the repeated descriptions of expressions and thoughts hampered the flow in some of the less pacey parts of the novel.
The plot has enough twists and turns to compensate for this and it held my attention until the rather bizarre ending. Certainly, when I plough through my TBR pile, I'll be returning to Dica for book two and three.
In short, the scope and breadth of the realm of Dica was admirable. The author has created a setting so real that I could close my eyes and almost be there. I'm not sure I'd necessarily want to visit, especially if the Kings Council were waiting, but the option would be there.
April 20, 2013
To the prose! The prose that roll and fold like a moon driven wave. To the prose! That wrap around you as a subtle blanket on a warm winters night. To Clive S Johnson and his writing and ability to produce a piece of literature that is not bound by today’s need constraints. Shall I explain?
I first read the “look inside” of this book a number of months ago and discarded it, but something niggled me; itched my neck. So a few days ago I plunged into the “Dica” pool and brought the 77p novel. Yes 77p.
Mr Johnson, how best can I describe him as an author and writer? My most useful comparison is to that of a fisherman. Modern authors use the first 1500 words or so to scoop up their readers in a huge net of intrigue. Do not expect this of Clive, he teases you and traps you so subtly that you don’t even realise that you have been caught. Clive S Johnson is more a fly fisherman.
To the book and the adventures of an unlikely man named Falmeard. Now I am stumped, mainly because I do not want to describe the story, the magnificent characters and the scenery so beautifully described. I feel my task here is merely to get you to read this magnificent book. Had this book been written in the thirties and not 2011 it would already be recognised as a unique work. As unique it is. I read fantasy and am well versed in the genre but I am not going to compare it to any other author because that would degrade what I believe to be the most unique piece I have read in a decade.
It is your choice; read a fast flowing modern book that flattens and dies or let yourself get slowly embraced by Leiyatel and enjoy the plot as it twists and turns in the narrow lanes and overhung alleyways of castle Dica.
I have done my bit, no do yours and press the buy button, relax in a comfortable chair and leave your troubles where they lay.
I first read the “look inside” of this book a number of months ago and discarded it, but something niggled me; itched my neck. So a few days ago I plunged into the “Dica” pool and brought the 77p novel. Yes 77p.
Mr Johnson, how best can I describe him as an author and writer? My most useful comparison is to that of a fisherman. Modern authors use the first 1500 words or so to scoop up their readers in a huge net of intrigue. Do not expect this of Clive, he teases you and traps you so subtly that you don’t even realise that you have been caught. Clive S Johnson is more a fly fisherman.
To the book and the adventures of an unlikely man named Falmeard. Now I am stumped, mainly because I do not want to describe the story, the magnificent characters and the scenery so beautifully described. I feel my task here is merely to get you to read this magnificent book. Had this book been written in the thirties and not 2011 it would already be recognised as a unique work. As unique it is. I read fantasy and am well versed in the genre but I am not going to compare it to any other author because that would degrade what I believe to be the most unique piece I have read in a decade.
It is your choice; read a fast flowing modern book that flattens and dies or let yourself get slowly embraced by Leiyatel and enjoy the plot as it twists and turns in the narrow lanes and overhung alleyways of castle Dica.
I have done my bit, no do yours and press the buy button, relax in a comfortable chair and leave your troubles where they lay.
April 29, 2013
In Leiyatel's Embrace (The Dica Series) author Clive S Johnson holds the reader in the embrace of his wonderfully descriptive prose. A unique story and unlike any fantasy I have previously had the pleasure to read.
The story begins with Falmeard a simple character you warm too as the story is spun out like fine silk from the authors mind and onto the page. Dica is an ancient, once prosperous civilisation and we learn through the beauty of the written word and by the superb characterisation how the once great Kingdom has slipped into a relative slumber like it’s King, who awakens from the grip of temporary madness brought on by grief. He does so when an army from the north in spotted is combat with a nearby settlement.
There are twists and turns and a series of most surprising events. But this is no fast paced high octane read. In this novel the author has gone to great lengths to weave his story carefully and the great wordsmith succeeds most successfully, as the story flows through the reader like a fine warming drink. I found myself caring so much for the three dimensional characters, as they stood up from the page and having completed the book this morning, I’m feeling a sense of loss only ever experienced after a profoundly good read.
I will read the other books in the series and I urge you to do the same, if you’re a lover of great literature.
The story begins with Falmeard a simple character you warm too as the story is spun out like fine silk from the authors mind and onto the page. Dica is an ancient, once prosperous civilisation and we learn through the beauty of the written word and by the superb characterisation how the once great Kingdom has slipped into a relative slumber like it’s King, who awakens from the grip of temporary madness brought on by grief. He does so when an army from the north in spotted is combat with a nearby settlement.
There are twists and turns and a series of most surprising events. But this is no fast paced high octane read. In this novel the author has gone to great lengths to weave his story carefully and the great wordsmith succeeds most successfully, as the story flows through the reader like a fine warming drink. I found myself caring so much for the three dimensional characters, as they stood up from the page and having completed the book this morning, I’m feeling a sense of loss only ever experienced after a profoundly good read.
I will read the other books in the series and I urge you to do the same, if you’re a lover of great literature.
January 8, 2013
Leiyatals Embrace is a book you read more than once; it is a "keeper". A book that you pick up and read again like Lord of the Rings. It should be on an oak book-shelf, its cover finely tooled in brown leather by Folio.
Dica, feels like our world, past or future, it feels like home and yet is totally alien, stirring deep recesses of your brain where dusty, torn pages of long-lost books lie hidden, vaguely remembered. Yet it is unique; unlike any other book.
I loved the sheer scale of the buildings, the sense of decay, of great age. I wanted to walk through all the places so lovingly described by the author, to glance over balconies at views as magnificent as the edifice upon which I stood, wondering who had done the same and why were they gone? It is mysterious; the plot twists and turns - just when you think you understand, you learn more and the direction changes. The dialogue is delightful. The characters are complex yet recognisable. It unfurls slowly, it is a book to savour slowly like fine wine or brandy, not to be rushed. I look forward to reading the next instalments in the Dica series; I need many questions answered.
Dica, feels like our world, past or future, it feels like home and yet is totally alien, stirring deep recesses of your brain where dusty, torn pages of long-lost books lie hidden, vaguely remembered. Yet it is unique; unlike any other book.
I loved the sheer scale of the buildings, the sense of decay, of great age. I wanted to walk through all the places so lovingly described by the author, to glance over balconies at views as magnificent as the edifice upon which I stood, wondering who had done the same and why were they gone? It is mysterious; the plot twists and turns - just when you think you understand, you learn more and the direction changes. The dialogue is delightful. The characters are complex yet recognisable. It unfurls slowly, it is a book to savour slowly like fine wine or brandy, not to be rushed. I look forward to reading the next instalments in the Dica series; I need many questions answered.
January 23, 2012
Leiyatel’s Embrace was an engaging and thought provoking mystery set in a fantasy world of Johnson’s own creation. This wasn’t a quick read for me, and I wasn’t on the edge of my seat over the unknowns, but I still found myself sucked in to the story and enjoyed it very much. A powerful vision is painted of the Realm of Dica and its inhabitants, and Johnson’s beautiful prose and attention to detail hooked me from the first chapter. World building can be difficult and falls flat if it’s not done properly, but that isn’t the case with this novel. I’m pleased to see that a sequel is forthcoming and look forward to another great read from Clive Johnson in the near future.
November 13, 2012
I eased into this novel by Clive Johnson with a bit of trepidation, not at all sure I'd like his style of writing, at first finding the flow of his unique prose a tad challenging to my simple minded self. At the end of the first chapter he had me drawn in with a 'what in the hell just happened?' closing scene. Still, however, I wasn't sure I could stay engaged with the poetic cadence.
Then he opened chapter 2 with this:
Off we then charged on a fantasy adventure in a castle that appeared to encompass an entire mountain or an entire land, full of people who not only don't do war but have, over the centuries, forgotten what war was. With his words, Clive Johnson painted an ancient yet futuristic setting evoking a flavor of J.R.R. Tolkien while weaving in Henry David Thoreau's lyrical prose.
I must say that Johnson's style is not for everyone, though maybe it should be. In a time full of unrest and chaos, or at the end of the daily grind, would it not be a relief to escape into a world of adventure at a lyrical cadence pace. In Lord Nephril's words, "By all that be precious, where am I, and who be holding me aloft?"
I highly recommend this for everyone to give a try. You may be pleasantly surprised.
Then he opened chapter 2 with this:
"Still and cold and dark, not a mote of light could be found to alleviate the eternal depth of the blackness, nor the buzz of gossamer wings nor the scrape of sharp clawed feet to scratch at the dead silence that lay so still within. Time itself seemed frozen and, with it, all knowing of life, or thought, or hope."
Off we then charged on a fantasy adventure in a castle that appeared to encompass an entire mountain or an entire land, full of people who not only don't do war but have, over the centuries, forgotten what war was. With his words, Clive Johnson painted an ancient yet futuristic setting evoking a flavor of J.R.R. Tolkien while weaving in Henry David Thoreau's lyrical prose.
I must say that Johnson's style is not for everyone, though maybe it should be. In a time full of unrest and chaos, or at the end of the daily grind, would it not be a relief to escape into a world of adventure at a lyrical cadence pace. In Lord Nephril's words, "By all that be precious, where am I, and who be holding me aloft?"
I highly recommend this for everyone to give a try. You may be pleasantly surprised.
May 26, 2013
It took me a long time to read this novel. In fact, it took me so long that I lost the thread several times. This was not the fault of the author, but rather the result of an enormous TBR list and lack of time.
So, my personal problems aside, what about “Leiyatel's Embrace?”
I loved the prose: wonderful, often lyrical and evocative writing reminiscent of Mervyn Peake, but make no mistake, it’s all Clive Johnson and quite unique in tone and style. This book is not a page-turner and I mean that in the best possible way, but a slow burner that grips by the persistence of its vision and rewards the reader who stays the course. The author paints the world of Dica in fine detail and involves us in the fate of his characters in a subtle and quite delightful manner. There may be a little too much detail at times and this tends to slow the pace of the story, but this book is not one for those with impatience, but one to be savoured for the intricacy of the world-building and the quality of the writing. There is drama, comedy and pathos.
I won’t delve into the plot and storyline - you will have to explore the characters of Dica for yourselves, but in short, I enjoyed the book and will be reading the others in the series to further appreciate the terrific prose and find out how the elements of the saga tie together. Recommended for connoisseurs of fantasy.
So, my personal problems aside, what about “Leiyatel's Embrace?”
I loved the prose: wonderful, often lyrical and evocative writing reminiscent of Mervyn Peake, but make no mistake, it’s all Clive Johnson and quite unique in tone and style. This book is not a page-turner and I mean that in the best possible way, but a slow burner that grips by the persistence of its vision and rewards the reader who stays the course. The author paints the world of Dica in fine detail and involves us in the fate of his characters in a subtle and quite delightful manner. There may be a little too much detail at times and this tends to slow the pace of the story, but this book is not one for those with impatience, but one to be savoured for the intricacy of the world-building and the quality of the writing. There is drama, comedy and pathos.
I won’t delve into the plot and storyline - you will have to explore the characters of Dica for yourselves, but in short, I enjoyed the book and will be reading the others in the series to further appreciate the terrific prose and find out how the elements of the saga tie together. Recommended for connoisseurs of fantasy.
January 25, 2013
Leiyatel's Embrace is not a book to pick up on a whim, but it is one that I nevertheless heartily recommend. You have to let the world and the characters that Clive S. Johnson has conjured grow on you. You have to give them room to breathe, let them pull you in. And - trust me - they will pull if you give them the rope.
There's not a lot I can give away about the plot since I hate giving away spoilers. Trust me that you will find fantasy-based characters in a relatable world, with a story that suits them. Except where Johnson changes things up, and to tell you more would take away from your enjoyment of the story. By the end, you will know what I mean, and like me, you will look forward to reading more.
Johnson has a style of prose all his own. For the first couple chapters, it took me a few passes to really get into it. By halfway through the book, however, that very style was a part of the novel's charm, and I would not change it. Johnson's story-telling devices are just as important as his take on the fantasy landscape, so to speak, as are his characters.
5/5 (Mostly because I appreciate fantasy that twists its take. Non-Fantasy readers might have a more difficult time getting into it, although they will enjoy it if they stick with it.)
There's not a lot I can give away about the plot since I hate giving away spoilers. Trust me that you will find fantasy-based characters in a relatable world, with a story that suits them. Except where Johnson changes things up, and to tell you more would take away from your enjoyment of the story. By the end, you will know what I mean, and like me, you will look forward to reading more.
Johnson has a style of prose all his own. For the first couple chapters, it took me a few passes to really get into it. By halfway through the book, however, that very style was a part of the novel's charm, and I would not change it. Johnson's story-telling devices are just as important as his take on the fantasy landscape, so to speak, as are his characters.
5/5 (Mostly because I appreciate fantasy that twists its take. Non-Fantasy readers might have a more difficult time getting into it, although they will enjoy it if they stick with it.)
December 31, 2013
The realm of Dica, long protected by the Certain Power of the Living Green Stone Tree, Leiyatel, is now in a state of vast decline, currently neglected by the current King Namweed, gone mad with grief over the loss of his queen, when the realm's long-lived Master of Ceremonies, Nephril, and a local friend, Falmeard, bring him news of a host of armed men that have appeared outside of the castle walls. After Pettar rescues Nephril and Falmeard from the king's dungeon, the three head south to Galgaverre, a mysterious structure of priests, to meet with Pettar's sister and head Guardian, Lady Penolith, in hopes of discovering where this army has come from and the traitor who is about to provide them entrance into the mighty walls protecting Dica. This book is not a simple read as it has been crafted in a more elaborate style of Elizabethan prose flavored with Celtic spice and Jane Austen civility. The highly flourished and very descriptive pace in a maze of a landscape provides tough sledding through a plot that turns on a twist of perspective near its climax. For those who treasure high artistry in language will find worth in this tale if they have the patience.
January 11, 2015
As I first set eyes on Clive’s book, I was thrilled. I have a love for classic language and enjoy reads from ancient age, and was well rewarded by Clive’s fantastic tale. Embarking from modern day, it spun itself into the mythical land of Dica. A large cast of characters shines a light into what at first seemed a cold and dreary place.
I spent so much time in Dica that I nearly forgot it originated in our world. On that point I felt it was a bit long or perhaps I was just a might impatient. For sticking to it, I was well rewarded with a stunning journey amongst colorfully drawn settings.
Even though at times the dialogue in archaic accents seemed inconsistent, blending modern colloquialisms with ancient speech; it was only a minor hurdle.
The last third of the book held me captive as the story hurtled back towards the modern age, arriving there only on the last few pages.
Clive is a great artist indeed, skillfully detailing the characters and lands. It was a true joy to read. The Dica series is sure to be a classic in years to come. I look forward to reading more.
I spent so much time in Dica that I nearly forgot it originated in our world. On that point I felt it was a bit long or perhaps I was just a might impatient. For sticking to it, I was well rewarded with a stunning journey amongst colorfully drawn settings.
Even though at times the dialogue in archaic accents seemed inconsistent, blending modern colloquialisms with ancient speech; it was only a minor hurdle.
The last third of the book held me captive as the story hurtled back towards the modern age, arriving there only on the last few pages.
Clive is a great artist indeed, skillfully detailing the characters and lands. It was a true joy to read. The Dica series is sure to be a classic in years to come. I look forward to reading more.
July 13, 2013
In Leiyatel’s Embrace, Clive S. Johnson has created the wonderful world of Dica. Having never read a fantasy novel before, I came to this story not knowing what to expect but was instantly captivated. This is in no small part down to Johnson’s use of language, which is so beautiful it’s almost poetic. I often found myself reading phrases or trying out words again and again because they were so thrilling. The descriptions of the different settings within the novel are so painstakingly detailed; the reader is almost able to see them. The story centres around the need for a small cast of characters to bond together and form a community in the face of an external threat. It is a story that clearly resonates as we navigate our own tricky times. Whether fantasy is your preferred genre or not, I think there is a lot to love about this novel and you may find yourself completely immersed in the world of Dica.
May 17, 2013
I think this may be the first book I have ever felt the need to read aloud for the simple joy of running the delicious prose over my tongue, to hear it flow into my ears, in silken sound. With a bit of a Narnian twist, Mr. Johnson drew me into the mystical kingdom of Dica with the introduction of eccentric and sometimes bizarre characters. I am still cringing when I remember the mouse scene, and I was very glad to see a certain character "get it" in the end. Fantasy fans should love this book. The only thing that would make it better is have it available as an audiobook.
August 8, 2025
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