I like these books. I like that Airel isn't some bratty, self depreciating attention whore. But she doesn't quite meet bad ass criteria.
I found it odd that she didn't really give a shit about her supposed best friend. For the most part she left her to herself. I just didn't see the legitimacy in that. She was also the last to notice severe drastic changes in her. She kept pushing aside thoughts about it, instead of addressing them and seeing how her friend was truly holding up.
I liked all the mini stories, but they were lacking a lot of relevance. I know they served a purpose, which was to give you a bread crumb trail for the opposition, but they weren't incorporated very well. Ultimately, they were throw away scenes and characters, which really pulled this story down, rather than added to the thrill.
How did Airel's father know who Harry was? I was so confused by that whole encounter. It made no sense, and again, it distracted me from the read, versus enhancing it.
I felt that the confirmation about Kim should have been from Airel's perspective rather than Michael's. There was certain reactions missing from her, that should have been included, considering the nature of their relationship and the circumstances they found themselves in.
I would also recommend re-reading Airel, or at least skimming it, because it had been a while since I read it, and I was really confused as to what was going on. It came together in the end, but there was not a whole lot of adequate references to the happenings in Airel, which left me scouring my brain for connections.
There were a few grammatical errors, but not so many that it was much of an issue.
Sadly, the book was really quite predictable. Especially the end.
But the story was still awesome. I love the plot. I even like the way that it shifts between characters and time. It is also written rather poetically at times, and I devoured this easily.
I am looking forward to Uriel.