🌟: 2.5/5
We get it. Serena is not like other girls.
But I'm getting ahead of myself.
First off, I really was intrigued by the concept of this one. Historical setting, with a woman who is a witch and a brooding hero? Sign me up. And in many ways, this was a solid start to a romance series. In fact, I think I will at least tune in to the next two books, if only to get Cade's story, because he was definitely the character that interested me the most.
However, there were many things that kept me from getting fully invested in this one, and sadly the relationship between Serena and Drogan was one of them. The book starts moments after the pair seeing each other for the first time. Consequently, the story starts with the characters already being intrigued (or rather, obsessed) with each other. Insta-lust is not my favorite trope, but it can be executed well. In this case, however, I would have liked to see both characters introduced separately of each other first, gotten to know them on their own, then have them have their meet-cute.
As they spend more and more time together, they are only more drawn to each other, which results in Drogan constantly thinking about how Serena is just not like the other women he has met. How most women would be whining and complaining to no end about having to rough it on the road. But no, not Serena. Because Serena's not like other girls. Now, I could go on a rant about how this trope (combined with the nasty jealous behavior of the women in Drogan's town subject Serena to) is incredibly toxic and that by defining a certain type of women against others is at best reductive and at worst incredibly sexist, but I'm not going to do that. The only possible reason I can find for Serena's characterization is that the book was first written in 2008, when the trope had likely not been so highly dissected and criticized.
The mysteries of Serena and Drogan's past were another thing I took issue with. A good chunk of this story takes place on the road as Serena and Drogan try to outrun some kind of "great evil" from Drogan's past. This evil is only hinted at abstractly and occasionally, whether it's Serena's ominous warnings of the "great evil" getting closer, or if its the nightmares that plague Drogan. Now, some element of mystery is essential to a book, however I found myself feeling that this mystery was dragged on for too long. The "great evil" is not even given a name until the tail-end of the book, and the story behind the "great evil" is not revealed until even later. Have you gotten tired of how many times I've said "great evil" yet? Multiply that by ten (at least) and you've got how many times it was referred to in that way in the book.
The evil from Drogan's past is also something that has greatly affected him mentally, something that Serena notices as being a darkness about to claim him. However, I felt like this wasn't explored in any way that added depth to Drogan's arc. I sometimes found myself forgetting that Drogan was about to be lost to the darkness, and I don't know if this is because I wasn't emotionally invested in his character, or if it was because this darkness was not explored enough from his perspective (outside of the occasional nightmare and his feelings of being not worthy of Serena because of the darkness).
Serena's ghosts are a bit different than Drogan's. We learn over the course of the story that Serena's people have been cursed, and they are doomed to have the men they fall in love with ultimately leave them in some way. This curse has the potential for a lot of entertaining angst, however it instead becomes frustrating by the end of the book. Namely because there is not much change in Serena's feelings on the curse until the epilogue. The book ends with Serena resigning herself to the fact that Drogan will one day leave her, but chooses to enjoy the time she has with him while it lasts. Cut to the epilogue and the standard time jump, which ends with her realizing "huh, I guess we've lasted this long, the curse must not be affecting us," which is a wholly unsatisfying character arc.
The way Serena and Drogan's internal anxieties were mishandled (through the lack of exploration in any deep way), resulted in a lack of any character development that felt earned.
Finally, as I was reading other reviews, trying to find if anyone had a similar experience to myself, I saw someone point out how Serena's magical powers are relatively underused and I agree. Serena is hinted at being more powerful than Drogan can imagine. In fact, she alludes to intentionally keeping some of her abilities hidden from him so as to not overwhelm him. One would think that these abilities would be expanded upon as the story progresses, but aside from seeing the different futures that could play out for any given person, Serena does not seem to use her powers. Even the medallion that Serena gives Drogan which acts as a sort of deus ex machina in the final battle, miraculously saving them at the last minute, is not explained or examined at all. Will the mystery behind its power be unveiled in a later book? There's only one way to find out.
Long story short, do I recommend this book? Not really. It has some intriguing premises, but ultimately they are not delivered upon. I do want to give this series another shot, even though this first book was not a strong start for me, because I am definitely intrigued by some of the supporting characters.