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Whimbrel House #3
Boy of Chaotic Making
A boy like no other embarks on a transformative journey of magic and self-discovery in the next enchanting Whimbrel House novel by Amazon Charts and Wall Street Journal bestselling author Charlie N. Holmberg.
Merritt Fernsby’s life has changed considerably since he inherited Whimbrel House. He’s engaged to Hulda Larkin, who opened his eyes to the uncanny. And he’s grown quite protective of his uncle Owein—several generations, and iterations, removed. Owein is presently inhabiting the body of a mixed-breed terrier when Merritt receives a missive from none other than Alexandrina Victoria, the Queen of England: I am interested in your dog.
It’s the queen’s duty to the peerage to keep British wizardry empowered. Her offer: England will find a human vessel for Owein, marry him into the royal family, and add this remarkable soul-shifter to its lineage. For Owein, a boy trapped in the body of a pup, it’s a dream come true. How can Merritt refuse? However, once they are in London and in consortium with a necromancer, the situation doesn’t feel right, both with their hosts and the house they inhabit. Owein is having nightmares. And Hulda’s premonitions warn of danger in Merritt’s future. Clearly, someone doesn’t want them in town.
But after two hundred years of being cursed to drift, Owein is determined to chart his own destiny. He’s ready to defy whatever chaos is coming. After all, Owein is the master of chaos, and with Merritt and Hulda’s love and magical support, he can overcome anything.
Merritt Fernsby’s life has changed considerably since he inherited Whimbrel House. He’s engaged to Hulda Larkin, who opened his eyes to the uncanny. And he’s grown quite protective of his uncle Owein—several generations, and iterations, removed. Owein is presently inhabiting the body of a mixed-breed terrier when Merritt receives a missive from none other than Alexandrina Victoria, the Queen of England: I am interested in your dog.
It’s the queen’s duty to the peerage to keep British wizardry empowered. Her offer: England will find a human vessel for Owein, marry him into the royal family, and add this remarkable soul-shifter to its lineage. For Owein, a boy trapped in the body of a pup, it’s a dream come true. How can Merritt refuse? However, once they are in London and in consortium with a necromancer, the situation doesn’t feel right, both with their hosts and the house they inhabit. Owein is having nightmares. And Hulda’s premonitions warn of danger in Merritt’s future. Clearly, someone doesn’t want them in town.
But after two hundred years of being cursed to drift, Owein is determined to chart his own destiny. He’s ready to defy whatever chaos is coming. After all, Owein is the master of chaos, and with Merritt and Hulda’s love and magical support, he can overcome anything.
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53 books8,796 followersCharlie N. Holmberg is a Wall Street Journal and Amazon Charts bestselling author of fantasy and romance fiction, including the Paper Magician series, the Spellbreaker series, and the Whimbrel House series, and writes contemporary romance under C. N. Holmberg. She is published in over twenty languages and is a Goodreads Choice Award, ALA, and RITA finalist. Born in Salt Lake City, Charlie was raised a Trekkie alongside three sisters who also have boy names. A BYU alumna, she discovered in her thirties that she’s actually a cat person. She lives with her family in Utah. Visit her at www.charlienholmberg.com.
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March 5, 2025
In a Nutshell: The third book of the Whimbrel House series. Won’t work as a standalone. I enjoyed the story to a great extent, but it doesn’t match up to the earlier two books. This volume felt quite relaxed and light in comparison to their darkness.
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Story Synopsis: (Contains Spoilers about the first two books.)
This is the third book of the Whimbrel House series, with the first two being Keeper of Enchanted Rooms and Heir of Uncertain Magic. I adored the first book, loved the second book, and enjoyed the third book. The plot is sequential across the books, and hence this series is best read in order.
Bookish Yays:
😍 I must begin with my darling little Owein. While he was anyway the star of the first and the second books, I knew this book was going to be a gamechanger for his arc. I loved him and his track, and without revealing much, I can only say I am so happy the author heeded the stern warning from my review of the second book.
😍 Merritt is as amazing as in the earlier books. He knows what he wants, and he doesn’t fret about achieving it. He is the perfect rock to shoulder Hulda’s worries. Hulda has redeemed herself marvellously after her annoying uncertainties in the second book. Though still a workaholic, she has finally learnt to follow her heart and let go just a bit. I loved both of them, and their relationship, which is so organic and without any forced breakups or makeups.
😍 While this story doesn’t have as many humorous scenes as the first two books, there is still enough banter between Merritt and Hulda, and also between Merritt and Owein, to offer tiny moments of relaxation.
😍 A good sequel always stands on the shoulders of the earlier books and takes the subplots ahead without compromising on the earlier developments. This book does that perfectly. I love how the author never forcefully pushes in twists or changes her characters’ personalities in the sequels. They grow, rather than change, over the course of the series.
😍 Unlike the earlier two works, this one is quite fast-paced right from the start. I like how there wasn’t too much time spent on recounting the events of the earlier novels. Again, the mark of a good sequel.
😍 The British setting provides a pleasant change of venue, though I did miss Whimbrel House and Narragansett Bay. The Brit characters are typical of their status, thereby offering us some interesting comments about how seriously they protect their magical bloodline. Merritt’s interaction with the Brits, which is lacking in snooty etiquette, is fun to read.
😍 I loved the ending. It has everything I wanted for the characters, and it also showed me where the story might move next. Perfect! I can forgive *most* issues if a book leaves me with a smile on my face.
Bookish Mixed Bags:
😐 The pages go by quickly, but in terms of plot, there’s not much. Perhaps the purpose of this book was just to lay a foundation for the grand finale in the fourth book. (That is to say, I'm assuming the next is going to be the final book. I do hope the series isn't extended even further, though I love it so!) I wish there had been more meat to this story, though I did love the final quarter.
😐 It was nice to learn more about the magical houses and their history. Seeing elemental magic in action was also great. However, a new category of magicians has been added to the plot this time, and they somehow do not fit well into the core plot. Their appearance felt like a way of extending the book to novel length. Unless they have an important role to play in the next book, I’d rather not see them again.
😐 I would have loved to see more of Baptiste and Beth in the story, though I understand why their appearance was limited.
Bookish Nays:
😢 I'm really disappointed that the culprit’s identity was so evident. At least the earlier books offered some challenge in the mystery. This time, the secret is as clear as day. 💔
😢 While this story is relatively serious, it isn’t darker. The dangerous situations and the villains of the first and the second books had creeped me out. This one felt like reading a middle-grade fantasy in comparison (except for the romance, of course). I miss the creepiness of the earlier books.
All in all, I did enjoy this story a lot, but the first two books set such a high benchmark that this paled in comparison. This won’t be my favourite book of the series, though it offered me enough entertainment and even included two plot developments I had been awaiting since Book One.
I am a teeny bit upset that a fourth book has been planned in this series, something that was revealed just a few days ago by the author in her newsletter. I mean, I'm happy as well because I love these characters with all my heart, but I'm so eager to see the culmination of their stories without wrecking my TBR with add-ons.
I wonder whom Book Four, “Wizard of Most Wicked Ways”, will be centred on. After all, the first three book titles clearly indicate their central characters (Merritt, Hulda, and Owein respectively), but I can think of only one contender for this title, and I sure as heck don’t want to see *him* again! A long wait though, before this question will be answered. Fingers crossed until then!
Definitely recommended to all readers of historical fantasies, but to be read in the right series order so that you can enjoy the plot to the fullest.
3.75 stars.
My thanks to 47North and NetGalley for the DRC of “Boy of Chaotic Making”. This review is voluntary and contains my honest opinion about the book.
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This was a buddy read with Srivalli. Do check out her review to see if our opinions matched. 😉
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Story Synopsis: (Contains Spoilers about the first two books.)
1847, Ohio. Hulda Larkin, now the director of BIKER, is trying to sort out the mess left behind by the earlier director while also preparing for her upcoming nuptials with Merritt.
Merritt has just started feeling reassured that all dangers are behind him, when he receives a letter from the Queen of England, expressing her interest in his “dog” Owein. The Queen’s duty is to ensure that the royal lineage maintains its genetic dominance on magic, and she is sure that finding a human body for Owein’s spirit and marrying him into the royal family will work well for both parties. When the American duo lands in London, it is very clear that someone doesn’t want them around. However, with this being Owein’s only chance of lasting longer than his dog body will allow him to, he is determined to stay put, and Merritt is in no position to refuse.
The story comes to us through the limited third person perspective of Merritt, Hulda and Owein.
This is the third book of the Whimbrel House series, with the first two being Keeper of Enchanted Rooms and Heir of Uncertain Magic. I adored the first book, loved the second book, and enjoyed the third book. The plot is sequential across the books, and hence this series is best read in order.
Bookish Yays:
😍 I must begin with my darling little Owein. While he was anyway the star of the first and the second books, I knew this book was going to be a gamechanger for his arc. I loved him and his track, and without revealing much, I can only say I am so happy the author heeded the stern warning from my review of the second book.
😍 Merritt is as amazing as in the earlier books. He knows what he wants, and he doesn’t fret about achieving it. He is the perfect rock to shoulder Hulda’s worries. Hulda has redeemed herself marvellously after her annoying uncertainties in the second book. Though still a workaholic, she has finally learnt to follow her heart and let go just a bit. I loved both of them, and their relationship, which is so organic and without any forced breakups or makeups.
😍 While this story doesn’t have as many humorous scenes as the first two books, there is still enough banter between Merritt and Hulda, and also between Merritt and Owein, to offer tiny moments of relaxation.
😍 A good sequel always stands on the shoulders of the earlier books and takes the subplots ahead without compromising on the earlier developments. This book does that perfectly. I love how the author never forcefully pushes in twists or changes her characters’ personalities in the sequels. They grow, rather than change, over the course of the series.
😍 Unlike the earlier two works, this one is quite fast-paced right from the start. I like how there wasn’t too much time spent on recounting the events of the earlier novels. Again, the mark of a good sequel.
😍 The British setting provides a pleasant change of venue, though I did miss Whimbrel House and Narragansett Bay. The Brit characters are typical of their status, thereby offering us some interesting comments about how seriously they protect their magical bloodline. Merritt’s interaction with the Brits, which is lacking in snooty etiquette, is fun to read.
😍 I loved the ending. It has everything I wanted for the characters, and it also showed me where the story might move next. Perfect! I can forgive *most* issues if a book leaves me with a smile on my face.
Bookish Mixed Bags:
😐 The pages go by quickly, but in terms of plot, there’s not much. Perhaps the purpose of this book was just to lay a foundation for the grand finale in the fourth book. (That is to say, I'm assuming the next is going to be the final book. I do hope the series isn't extended even further, though I love it so!) I wish there had been more meat to this story, though I did love the final quarter.
😐 It was nice to learn more about the magical houses and their history. Seeing elemental magic in action was also great. However, a new category of magicians has been added to the plot this time, and they somehow do not fit well into the core plot. Their appearance felt like a way of extending the book to novel length. Unless they have an important role to play in the next book, I’d rather not see them again.
😐 I would have loved to see more of Baptiste and Beth in the story, though I understand why their appearance was limited.
Bookish Nays:
😢 I'm really disappointed that the culprit’s identity was so evident. At least the earlier books offered some challenge in the mystery. This time, the secret is as clear as day. 💔
😢 While this story is relatively serious, it isn’t darker. The dangerous situations and the villains of the first and the second books had creeped me out. This one felt like reading a middle-grade fantasy in comparison (except for the romance, of course). I miss the creepiness of the earlier books.
All in all, I did enjoy this story a lot, but the first two books set such a high benchmark that this paled in comparison. This won’t be my favourite book of the series, though it offered me enough entertainment and even included two plot developments I had been awaiting since Book One.
I am a teeny bit upset that a fourth book has been planned in this series, something that was revealed just a few days ago by the author in her newsletter. I mean, I'm happy as well because I love these characters with all my heart, but I'm so eager to see the culmination of their stories without wrecking my TBR with add-ons.
I wonder whom Book Four, “Wizard of Most Wicked Ways”, will be centred on. After all, the first three book titles clearly indicate their central characters (Merritt, Hulda, and Owein respectively), but I can think of only one contender for this title, and I sure as heck don’t want to see *him* again! A long wait though, before this question will be answered. Fingers crossed until then!
Definitely recommended to all readers of historical fantasies, but to be read in the right series order so that you can enjoy the plot to the fullest.
3.75 stars.
My thanks to 47North and NetGalley for the DRC of “Boy of Chaotic Making”. This review is voluntary and contains my honest opinion about the book.
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This was a buddy read with Srivalli. Do check out her review to see if our opinions matched. 😉
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Connect with me through:
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October 9, 2023
Publication Date: 13th Feb 2024
3.7 Stars
One Liner: Entertaining enough but not as good as the previous two
1847
Merritt and Hulda are all set to marry soon. Merritt is busy at the Whimbrel House, writing his next book. Hulda is now the head of BIKER. Owein is still a dog, having a nice time with Merritt, though he does wish for a better body.
When Merritt receives a letter from the Queen of England, showing interest in his ‘dog’, he has no real choice but to take Owein to England. The proposition they get is a dream come true. Merritt knows he cannot refuse. But all is not as it seems. Hulda’s premonitions about danger come true, and soon, they have to save themselves first and stay alive. However, Owein is determined to decide his future, come what may!
The story comes in the third-person POV of Hulda, Merritt, and Owein.
My Thoughts:
After enjoying books #1 and #2, I was quite excited (and waiting) for this one. It’s Owein’s story, after all! Oh, by the way, this is not a standalone. The series has to be read in order.
The narration is fast-paced, even if the plot is thin and padded with fluff. Some of it may make more sense in book #4, though it’ll be a long wait.
The different third-person POVs give a glimpse into the three main characters, which works well for the story. I like that the characters retain their core traits throughout all three books. There are surprise developments, too, which thankfully go with the flow.
What made the previous books stand out were the atmosphere and the darkness inching closer from the edges. However, this one is more like a cozy mystery (sans murders, of course) and milder until the climax. Even then, the drama doesn’t hit its peak.
I enjoyed the interactions between the characters and loved Hulda becoming more confident of herself (as a person. She is confident enough about her work). Also, we don’t get unnecessary conflicts between the lead couple. I like how the focus continues to be on Owein.
Owein is a darling. We cannot help but root for the poor boy. I like how the story ends, with HEA, but also enough intrigue about what’s to come. Hopefully, book #4 will also have more of Owein. He is the star of the series.
The mystery (if we can call it that) is quite bland despite the dangerous events and life-threatening incidents. The culprit is too easy to identify even without Hulda’s augury skills. However, the pages fly by, making the book seem a lot more entertaining.
There’s a small error, which will mostly be edited in the final copy. The publishing date is a long way away!
To summarize, Boy of Chaotic Making is a good continuation of the series and provides some forward movement to the story. Looking forward to book #4.
Thank you, NetGalley and 47North, for the eARC. This review is voluntary and contains my honest opinion about the book.
#NetGalley #BoyofChaoticMaking
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This is a buddy read with Rosh. We’ve read book #2 together and decided to do the same whenever book #3 became available (we had to read it ASAP). Now that we know there will be book #4, too, we hope to continue the tradition. Check out her review to know what she thinks about this one.
3.7 Stars
One Liner: Entertaining enough but not as good as the previous two
1847
Merritt and Hulda are all set to marry soon. Merritt is busy at the Whimbrel House, writing his next book. Hulda is now the head of BIKER. Owein is still a dog, having a nice time with Merritt, though he does wish for a better body.
When Merritt receives a letter from the Queen of England, showing interest in his ‘dog’, he has no real choice but to take Owein to England. The proposition they get is a dream come true. Merritt knows he cannot refuse. But all is not as it seems. Hulda’s premonitions about danger come true, and soon, they have to save themselves first and stay alive. However, Owein is determined to decide his future, come what may!
The story comes in the third-person POV of Hulda, Merritt, and Owein.
My Thoughts:
After enjoying books #1 and #2, I was quite excited (and waiting) for this one. It’s Owein’s story, after all! Oh, by the way, this is not a standalone. The series has to be read in order.
The narration is fast-paced, even if the plot is thin and padded with fluff. Some of it may make more sense in book #4, though it’ll be a long wait.
The different third-person POVs give a glimpse into the three main characters, which works well for the story. I like that the characters retain their core traits throughout all three books. There are surprise developments, too, which thankfully go with the flow.
What made the previous books stand out were the atmosphere and the darkness inching closer from the edges. However, this one is more like a cozy mystery (sans murders, of course) and milder until the climax. Even then, the drama doesn’t hit its peak.
I enjoyed the interactions between the characters and loved Hulda becoming more confident of herself (as a person. She is confident enough about her work). Also, we don’t get unnecessary conflicts between the lead couple. I like how the focus continues to be on Owein.
Owein is a darling. We cannot help but root for the poor boy. I like how the story ends, with HEA, but also enough intrigue about what’s to come. Hopefully, book #4 will also have more of Owein. He is the star of the series.
The mystery (if we can call it that) is quite bland despite the dangerous events and life-threatening incidents. The culprit is too easy to identify even without Hulda’s augury skills. However, the pages fly by, making the book seem a lot more entertaining.
There’s a small error, which will mostly be edited in the final copy. The publishing date is a long way away!
To summarize, Boy of Chaotic Making is a good continuation of the series and provides some forward movement to the story. Looking forward to book #4.
Thank you, NetGalley and 47North, for the eARC. This review is voluntary and contains my honest opinion about the book.
#NetGalley #BoyofChaoticMaking
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This is a buddy read with Rosh. We’ve read book #2 together and decided to do the same whenever book #3 became available (we had to read it ASAP). Now that we know there will be book #4, too, we hope to continue the tradition. Check out her review to know what she thinks about this one.
July 24, 2024
Diese Reihe ist wirklich wundervoll. Cozy, cute und magisch. ✨
January 12, 2024
"They will plague your life. Sometimes, the gift of future-seeing is not seeing."
The third and I think the last part of Whimbrel House, an enchanted house was quite relaxing compared to the previous two books, and I did not surprised since Merritt, Hulda, and dear Owein are off to England and visiting the royal family.
In the 19th century, Hulda Larkin was a Keeper of Enchanted Rooms, and being sent to the Whimbrel House was one the best things that happened in her life and changed it forever. Merritt Fernsby, Heir of Uncertain Magic inherited a hundred years old houses and with that found all the things he was looking for.
And Boy of Chaotic Making is the lovely Owein who will learn to fight the darkness and grows up, although I know and he knows that too, It’s easier, as a kid, dealing with the . . . hurt.
These three stories are interconnected and should be read in sequence. I don't want to give away any spoilers, especially to those who haven't read the entire series, but I can say that this series is indeed an enchanted one. Full of magic, love, and friendship.
“Do you believe in heaven, Merritt?“
“What’s the point of all of it if there isn’t something beyond? Seems life would be pretty dismal if it were strictly sealed cover to cover.”
My huge thanks to 47North via NetGalley for giving me a chance to read this beautiful book, Boy of Chaotic Making (Whimbrel House #3) by Charlie N. Holmberg, I have given my very honest review.
The third and I think the last part of Whimbrel House, an enchanted house was quite relaxing compared to the previous two books, and I did not surprised since Merritt, Hulda, and dear Owein are off to England and visiting the royal family.
In the 19th century, Hulda Larkin was a Keeper of Enchanted Rooms, and being sent to the Whimbrel House was one the best things that happened in her life and changed it forever. Merritt Fernsby, Heir of Uncertain Magic inherited a hundred years old houses and with that found all the things he was looking for.
And Boy of Chaotic Making is the lovely Owein who will learn to fight the darkness and grows up, although I know and he knows that too, It’s easier, as a kid, dealing with the . . . hurt.
These three stories are interconnected and should be read in sequence. I don't want to give away any spoilers, especially to those who haven't read the entire series, but I can say that this series is indeed an enchanted one. Full of magic, love, and friendship.
“Do you believe in heaven, Merritt?“
“What’s the point of all of it if there isn’t something beyond? Seems life would be pretty dismal if it were strictly sealed cover to cover.”
My huge thanks to 47North via NetGalley for giving me a chance to read this beautiful book, Boy of Chaotic Making (Whimbrel House #3) by Charlie N. Holmberg, I have given my very honest review.
February 12, 2024
LOVE THIS SERIES, BUT I HAD HIGHER HOPES FOR THIS BOOK
Whimbrel House is a series I have seriously fallen in love with. I love the characters, the setting, the magical universe and the delightful banter. However, this book feel a bit short of the rest. I hope this book is merely a build up for the next (and final?) installment.
👍 What I Liked 👍
Owein: My darling Owein. I adored him as a house and I adore him as a dog. His genuine connection with the people around him makes me happy to read about. But as much as I like his childlike qualities, I also really liked how we started to explore the possibility of him actually growing up. He deserves to move on with his life and not be stuck as a 12-year old. It's an exciting change for him.
Merritt and Hulda: Their relationship is so adorable. I am a total fan. I especially like how Merritt knows what he wants and isn't afraid to go after it. Hulda deserves to be wanted like that.
👎 What I Disliked 👎
Plot: Honestly, the plot was a bit thin. Compared to the other two books, which had dark twists and turns, this felt more fluffy. Not really consequential to the overall story. However, I hope to be proved wrong in the next book. I really hope this lays the groundwork for a heck of a story later on.
ARC provided by the publisher through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review
Whimbrel House is a series I have seriously fallen in love with. I love the characters, the setting, the magical universe and the delightful banter. However, this book feel a bit short of the rest. I hope this book is merely a build up for the next (and final?) installment.
👍 What I Liked 👍
Owein: My darling Owein. I adored him as a house and I adore him as a dog. His genuine connection with the people around him makes me happy to read about. But as much as I like his childlike qualities, I also really liked how we started to explore the possibility of him actually growing up. He deserves to move on with his life and not be stuck as a 12-year old. It's an exciting change for him.
Merritt and Hulda: Their relationship is so adorable. I am a total fan. I especially like how Merritt knows what he wants and isn't afraid to go after it. Hulda deserves to be wanted like that.
👎 What I Disliked 👎
Plot: Honestly, the plot was a bit thin. Compared to the other two books, which had dark twists and turns, this felt more fluffy. Not really consequential to the overall story. However, I hope to be proved wrong in the next book. I really hope this lays the groundwork for a heck of a story later on.
ARC provided by the publisher through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review
October 21, 2023
Boy of Chaotic Making is a fantastic fantasy about love and family. The book follows Owein, Merritt and Hulda on a fabulous journey across the ocean to try to find a body for Owein who has inhabited a house and now a dog. It's endearing and entertaining. The perfect novel if you love fantasy, love stories, history or all of them combined!
March 16, 2024
I think I've decided -- this is my favorite series now by Charlie. I've really enjoyed Merrit, Hulda, and Owein and this book just takes it to another level. I was delighted by the twists and wasn't able to predict the ending, which was fantastic. Can't wait for the next one - and yes, there will be a next one!
October 9, 2023
This book, and this series, is utterly beautiful.
Charlie Holmberg writes such wholesome, heartwarming relationships between her characters whether they be friends, family, or lovers. Your heart aches over their misfortunes and swells for their happiness.
I was so happy this book focused on Owein’s story because he’s such an endearing character, and I’m excited for his story to continue. Your heart breaks for him in the first book when you find out he’s a twelve-year-old boy turned house then you cheer for him in the second book as he gets to experience life again in corporeal form, and you hope so strongly for him that he will get to be a boy again with a voice of his own in Boy of Chaotic Making.
Whimbrel House is one of my absolute favorite found family stories. It’s a tender, moving story that has made me cry both happy and sad tears on many occasions.
Charlie Holmberg writes such wholesome, heartwarming relationships between her characters whether they be friends, family, or lovers. Your heart aches over their misfortunes and swells for their happiness.
I was so happy this book focused on Owein’s story because he’s such an endearing character, and I’m excited for his story to continue. Your heart breaks for him in the first book when you find out he’s a twelve-year-old boy turned house then you cheer for him in the second book as he gets to experience life again in corporeal form, and you hope so strongly for him that he will get to be a boy again with a voice of his own in Boy of Chaotic Making.
Whimbrel House is one of my absolute favorite found family stories. It’s a tender, moving story that has made me cry both happy and sad tears on many occasions.
March 12, 2024
I did not realize that this was a series not a trilogy and boy am I happy. I could spend endless hours with Hulda, Merritt and Owein. These stories are cozy fantasy adventures with interesting magic, a touch of chaste romance and wonderful characters to bring smiles to my face.
Giving Owein his own story was perfectly timed for the Whimbrel House series. His character had a lot to unpack in this book.
I’m so excited by Holmberg’s writing I’m trying another series while I wait for book 4.
Giving Owein his own story was perfectly timed for the Whimbrel House series. His character had a lot to unpack in this book.
I’m so excited by Holmberg’s writing I’m trying another series while I wait for book 4.
February 10, 2025
'Boy Of Chaotic Making' is the third book of the Whimbrel House series, this one about Owein as anyone following the series might guess! We learn more about the world and the magic system as we follow Owein on a trip to London to explore the opportunity of being transferred to a human body again.
The sincerity of the characters, the novelty of the magic system and the straightforward writing - things that provided solid foundations for the first two books - were in this book obscured by contrived plots, prosy writing and age old elements like marriage contracts and insecurities. The book does not completely disappoint however, I was invested enough in Owein's story to read until the end to find out what happens.
Thanks to NetGalley, the publishers 47North and Charlie N. Holmberg for providing me with an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
[Half a star for the premise and the whole book; Half a star for the characters; Half a star for the story; One star for the world-building; Half a star for the writing - 3 stars in total].
The sincerity of the characters, the novelty of the magic system and the straightforward writing - things that provided solid foundations for the first two books - were in this book obscured by contrived plots, prosy writing and age old elements like marriage contracts and insecurities. The book does not completely disappoint however, I was invested enough in Owein's story to read until the end to find out what happens.
Thanks to NetGalley, the publishers 47North and Charlie N. Holmberg for providing me with an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
[Half a star for the premise and the whole book; Half a star for the characters; Half a star for the story; One star for the world-building; Half a star for the writing - 3 stars in total].
August 9, 2024
Another fun installment of the Whimbrel House series. I'm sure there are more coming and can't wait to read them. This lost a star because of
February 1, 2024
I want to give many thanks to 47North for providing me with an ARC of this book. I could not wait to get my hands on this book... "Over the moon" is an understatement!
Boy of Chaotic Making is the third book in the Whimbrel House series, and its expected publication date is February 13, 2024. ✨
Charlie N. Holmberg has been one of my favorite authors for quite some time now. Her writing is always a delight to read, and I love her creativity and imagination. This book was a great addition to the series.
The Whimbrel House books are very comforting to me. They bring me a lot of joy, and I adore the characters. I was thrilled when I learned that this book would heavily focus on Owein. It was nice to see how his story played out. I feel the author did a wonderful job with his character development.
There are so many beautiful moments, especially between Hulda and Merritt. Although some of the characters I loved from the prior books did not play a heavy part in the third book, I appreciated the tidbits of information that were sprinkled throughout - I found the "cheese" story to be hilarious. I adored that this series has magic coexisting in the current world, and it was cool to see places that I recognize being used as the setting. I find the magic system fascinating. Learning and discovering the different layers of magic, what "powers" correlate to each, and the lineage of it, was neat. It was just an all-around enchanting story.
There are a few things I didn't love as much with this book as I did in the past two. It was an easy read, a page-turner, but in terms of plot, there's not much. Since the plot was mild, I didn't feel as drawn or hooked as I have been with other books from her. The 'villain' was more predictable than I would have liked. There were parts throughout the story where I craved more depth and less fluff. All of this doesn't diminish the goodness of the book to me, but in comparison to other books from this author or in this genre, I would rate this one a little lower. Still in the 4-star range!
I will never grow tired of Charlie's worlds. I cannot wait to read more of her books.
I would 100% recommend these books. If you haven't read the first two books, definitely read those first, but don't forget to add this one to your TBR, too!
Boy of Chaotic Making is the third book in the Whimbrel House series, and its expected publication date is February 13, 2024. ✨
Charlie N. Holmberg has been one of my favorite authors for quite some time now. Her writing is always a delight to read, and I love her creativity and imagination. This book was a great addition to the series.
The Whimbrel House books are very comforting to me. They bring me a lot of joy, and I adore the characters. I was thrilled when I learned that this book would heavily focus on Owein. It was nice to see how his story played out. I feel the author did a wonderful job with his character development.
There are so many beautiful moments, especially between Hulda and Merritt. Although some of the characters I loved from the prior books did not play a heavy part in the third book, I appreciated the tidbits of information that were sprinkled throughout - I found the "cheese" story to be hilarious. I adored that this series has magic coexisting in the current world, and it was cool to see places that I recognize being used as the setting. I find the magic system fascinating. Learning and discovering the different layers of magic, what "powers" correlate to each, and the lineage of it, was neat. It was just an all-around enchanting story.
There are a few things I didn't love as much with this book as I did in the past two. It was an easy read, a page-turner, but in terms of plot, there's not much. Since the plot was mild, I didn't feel as drawn or hooked as I have been with other books from her. The 'villain' was more predictable than I would have liked. There were parts throughout the story where I craved more depth and less fluff. All of this doesn't diminish the goodness of the book to me, but in comparison to other books from this author or in this genre, I would rate this one a little lower. Still in the 4-star range!
I will never grow tired of Charlie's worlds. I cannot wait to read more of her books.
I would 100% recommend these books. If you haven't read the first two books, definitely read those first, but don't forget to add this one to your TBR, too!
February 21, 2024
After falling in love with the Whimbrel House squad last year, Boy of Chaotic Making was HIGH on my anticipated reads list, and I'm happy to report that I loved it so 👏 much 👏
The series is just so FOR ME, I adore it. Historical fantasy + found family + soft magic systems + a pretty writing style? it's perfect. This installment did not disappoint, building on questions posed in the earlier books, and taking our cast on a transatlantic adventure. The stakes were high enough to keep me riveted, but not too high to where I was stressed out the whole time, lol! There were so many wholesome moments building the relationships between these characters, I love them SO MUCH. I already can't wait to see where their stories take them next. 5 stars from me, for sure!
*content warnings for mild language and some innuendo, and 1 fade-to-black scene between a married couple.
**I received a copy of this book from the publisher via Netgalley. A positive review was not required. All opinions are my own.**
The series is just so FOR ME, I adore it. Historical fantasy + found family + soft magic systems + a pretty writing style? it's perfect. This installment did not disappoint, building on questions posed in the earlier books, and taking our cast on a transatlantic adventure. The stakes were high enough to keep me riveted, but not too high to where I was stressed out the whole time, lol! There were so many wholesome moments building the relationships between these characters, I love them SO MUCH. I already can't wait to see where their stories take them next. 5 stars from me, for sure!
*content warnings for mild language and some innuendo, and 1 fade-to-black scene between a married couple.
**I received a copy of this book from the publisher via Netgalley. A positive review was not required. All opinions are my own.**
April 23, 2025
Another cute installment in this cozy series! I’m glad Owein got his book. I enjoyed how everything wrapped up at the end. Hulda and Merritt are precious as always.
I listened to the audiobook and couldn’t stand the male’s interpretation of literally every female character.
I listened to the audiobook and couldn’t stand the male’s interpretation of literally every female character.
October 20, 2025
Those last 40 pages were a rollercoaster of emotions (EEEEKKKKKK!!!!!!! HULDA AND MERRITT!!!!!!) but the rest was just not enough punch to bump this up to a 4 star
January 27, 2024
Absolutely loved!! Loved seeing all the characters again and loved Owein! Loved the mystery vibes this one had. Such a great addition to the series! I can’t wait to see where it goes!
Romance: closed door
Romance: closed door
February 24, 2024
I’m absolutely in love with this series! It was one of those books that I wanted to devour, but I also didn’t want the book to end
January 26, 2024
I was so happy and excited to continue the story of Merritt, Hulda, and Owein again! This third book in the Whimbrel House series made me fall in love even more with this continuing story and characters.
An engaged Merritt and Hulda are in the midst of planning their wedding when a familiar yet mysterious messenger shows up to Whimbrel House with a letter from a very prestigious monarch. The letter pertains to only one thing: Queen Victoria is interested in Owein, a human soul trapped in the body of a dog. Merritt, Owein, and Hilda set off for London, England, to further investigate a life changing offer made to Owein by the Queen herself. But upon arriving to England, all is not as it seems and someone close to the royal family doesn’t want the Queen’s offer to come to fruition, and sets out to threaten Owein’s life.
I absolutely loved every second of this story! The setting of London and the intricacies of magic being a prominent part of everyday life in England was such a fascinating development in this story. Owein has always had a huge place in my heart, but his kind, caring, and observant nature made me love him even more. I see so many qualities in Hilda that I relate to and her blossoming relationship with Merritt was so heartwarming to watch and I am so happy we get to celebrate their wedding in this story!
I am now anxiously awaiting book 4 of this series and cannot wait to have another adventure in this story!
I received a complimentary copy of this story but am leaving my thoughts and review happily and voluntarily.
An engaged Merritt and Hulda are in the midst of planning their wedding when a familiar yet mysterious messenger shows up to Whimbrel House with a letter from a very prestigious monarch. The letter pertains to only one thing: Queen Victoria is interested in Owein, a human soul trapped in the body of a dog. Merritt, Owein, and Hilda set off for London, England, to further investigate a life changing offer made to Owein by the Queen herself. But upon arriving to England, all is not as it seems and someone close to the royal family doesn’t want the Queen’s offer to come to fruition, and sets out to threaten Owein’s life.
I absolutely loved every second of this story! The setting of London and the intricacies of magic being a prominent part of everyday life in England was such a fascinating development in this story. Owein has always had a huge place in my heart, but his kind, caring, and observant nature made me love him even more. I see so many qualities in Hilda that I relate to and her blossoming relationship with Merritt was so heartwarming to watch and I am so happy we get to celebrate their wedding in this story!
I am now anxiously awaiting book 4 of this series and cannot wait to have another adventure in this story!
I received a complimentary copy of this story but am leaving my thoughts and review happily and voluntarily.
May 12, 2024
Charlie does it again!
She was my number one author last year and I eagerly awaited this instalment of the enchanting Whimbrel house books — which follow deep and engaging characters through a world not unlike our own, a magical retelling of Victorian life, up to and including Queen Victoria in this instalment; who hit just the right number of notes at just the right pitch, neither taking over the story nor muddying it.
Charlie is a master of her craft and as per usual, I have completed this book wishing that it could be a never ending story.
Five glorious and well earned stars!!!
She was my number one author last year and I eagerly awaited this instalment of the enchanting Whimbrel house books — which follow deep and engaging characters through a world not unlike our own, a magical retelling of Victorian life, up to and including Queen Victoria in this instalment; who hit just the right number of notes at just the right pitch, neither taking over the story nor muddying it.
Charlie is a master of her craft and as per usual, I have completed this book wishing that it could be a never ending story.
Five glorious and well earned stars!!!
October 15, 2023
Loved it. I love the characters, and the adventures! Can’t wait for more of the story.
December 29, 2023
I absolutely love this series and I loved seeing Merritt and Hulda and, of course, Owein, and the way their lives change again.
This is book 3 in the series and you'll need to read the other two books and I guarantee you won't regret it.
The writing is superb, as always, and the universe is very unique and well built.
Highly recommend this book and the whole series.
I received a copy from the publisher via NetGalley and this is my honest opinion.
This is book 3 in the series and you'll need to read the other two books and I guarantee you won't regret it.
The writing is superb, as always, and the universe is very unique and well built.
Highly recommend this book and the whole series.
I received a copy from the publisher via NetGalley and this is my honest opinion.
January 4, 2024
Another wonderful installment in this series! I really loved getting some of Owein's perspective, and I enjoyed the setting change (England!). It was really interesting to explore Hulda's magic a little bit more.
I can't say much more without spoiling the first two books, but this series is definitely becoming a favorite!
*I received an ARC of this book from the author. All opinions are my own.*
I can't say much more without spoiling the first two books, but this series is definitely becoming a favorite!
*I received an ARC of this book from the author. All opinions are my own.*
February 18, 2025
Another adventure with Hulda, Merritt, and Owein this time far from home and in Great Britain at the request of Queen Victoria.
Fun packed with danger and intrigue. I think this is my favourite book in the series yet.
Merritt, as always, the gung ho hero and Hulda, the sensible hero, make an awesome team.
Fun packed with danger and intrigue. I think this is my favourite book in the series yet.
Merritt, as always, the gung ho hero and Hulda, the sensible hero, make an awesome team.
October 30, 2024
Loved the next installment of this story, and a glimmer of what the next one may hold! Solid mystery, too. I couldn't guess whodunnit.
December 31, 2024
This is my favorite one so far. I love Owain ❤️🐶
January 6, 2025
Nice entertaining read. Very detailed magical system in this world. Recommended
February 17, 2024
What a wonderful third installation to the Whimbrel House series! I genuinely love reading these books. This latest book follows Owein’s story as we learn more about his future and his powers.
I highly recommend this series if you are looking for a magical heartfelt read!
Thanks to Netgalley for the ARC!
I highly recommend this series if you are looking for a magical heartfelt read!
Thanks to Netgalley for the ARC!
January 9, 2025
3.5 - My favorite of the series so far. Magical realism is a tough genre to get right and this author does it well. Lovable characters, 1800s Boston and London, diminishing magic, royalty and Druids. I mean, what more is there? 😊
January 22, 2025
3.5⭐️🎧 Don’t get me wrong, this was a good book. BUT when the first two books in the series are So So good, my expectations are high. This addition to the series was nice for the answers and closure it gave to some characters but it was drawn out and somewhat boring through the middle. I want to feel the whimsy again like the first book!
June 17, 2024
Bizarre book where the reader must believe that the characters are still so trusting after so many unexpected events. I struggle to believe that the characters in the first two books would go along with what happens in the third.
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