Listen to Me

by Alessia Brio

A sexy bit of girl-girl BDSM play. This is a SHORT story (1,460 words).

Genres: BDSM, Erotica

7 pages, Kindle Edition

First published February 2, 2010

About the author

My name is Alessia, and I write about sex. Sometimes it's pretty sex. Sometimes it's... not. I write about sex because I'm sick of preachy people using it to control others by turning it into something shameful. Sex is a crucible. It's a prayer, a celebration, an affirmation, and a motivation.

** If you are interested in reviewing any of my publications, I would be happy to email a copy to your Kindle address. Since it's likely a Goodreads message will get lost amongst the group message traffic, please email me directly at alessia.brio [at] gmail.com if interested. Thanks! **

Here's the obligatory 3rd person promo bio:

Take one part Appalachian redneck, one part aging wet dream, and one part filthy-minded wordsmith. Mix well and serve with chocolate-covered cherries. There you have the one and only Alessia Brio. Alessia writes all colors and flavors of erotica, from heterosexual to ménage to same sex, and from twisted to humorous to deeply touching. Her work has earned her critical acclaim in the form of an EPIC eBook Award for Best Erotica (fine flickering hungers), two EPIC eBook Awards for Best Erotica Anthology (Coming Together: Against the Odds & Coming Together: Into the Light), two Next Generation Indie Book Awards for Best Erotica (Coming Together: For the Cure & Squeeze Play with Will Belegon), and a Romantic Times Top Pick (Coming Together: For the Cure) in addition to a plethora of glowing online reviews.

Reviews

[Marie · Rating 1 out of 5]

Way too short and not much action. I wish the story had carried on.

[Ronnae Stately · Rating 4 out of 5]

This little story makes you hot for what is supposedly coming but when you get to the end you are still not satisfied.

[Thom Swennes · Rating 2 out of 5]

The reader is witness to a clandestine meeting between two women. Darkly and mysteriously one manipulates the other leaving the reader breathless in anticipation of what to comes next and then….NOTHING! The author wasn’t only manipulating the woman in her story but also the readers of her book. Her same sex ménage brings her readers to the edge and like a game of grab, takes it away and leaves only an unfulfilling memory of what might have been. I felt cheated. This could have been so good and fell flat as a pancake. Reputed to be a romance and a story (although admittedly short) it didn’t match up to expectation. I have read other works by this author that have positively surprised me but this doesn’t even come close. In all fairness even the greatest ball players can’t score big all the time.

[Laura · Rating 5 out of 5]

Erotic short story with light BDSM and F/f

I loved this story but it was way to short and left me wanting to read so much more. Great details.

She is looking for a mistress and she finds one in a magazine. She writes a letter and the mistress writes back with her phone number. When she calls all the fun begins, as least she hopes.

[Jane · Rating 2 out of 5]

In Listen to Me two women are alone, one dominating the other. Hot and sexy encounter just started and ends in midair... It had great potential but isn't finished! Alessia Brio could continue with the story and have a good or even great short story, as it is now, it is a good beginning.

[Tandri Reviews · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.5 Stars

My worst read of 2012

[Pierre Lyne Desgrottes · Rating 2 out of 5]

Too short

It was too short. Some words are repeated too many times. Didn't know it was that short
Thank you for a minute read

[Michelle · Rating 2 out of 5]

I liked the style of writing but the story was just far too short!!