Brianna Thomas is a stripper with a complicated life and an assortment of people in her circle that don’t mean her any good. With each turn, she is hit with hardships and must make on the spot decisions for her own survival. When she decides that the only way out of her current situation is murder, things only go downhill from there.
“Bittersweet” was good, but it would be great with developmental editing. The storyline offers a creative twist on an old topic, but it is never clearly developed. The dialogue and the scenes didn’t mesh well and were a little too choppy and random. Things were happening, plots were unfolding and conversations were taking place and the reasons why weren’t apparent.
Allison “Essence M” Edwards has all the right stuff, she just needs someone with an outside eye to connect the dots. With the right type of editing, “Bittersweet” could easily have gained a 5-Star rating, because everything is in there—murder, mayhem, sex, lies and betrayal. Comprehensive editing would have brought it to the surface.
Michelle Cuttino
AAMBC Reviewer