Carrying the same storyline across all three books of there being mate acceptance drama is lazy writing. The first two books is understandable since Sage and Coral grew up human and knew nothing of shifters, believing there being only mutants, packs, and mates. To have it with two full-on shifters was very disappointing and eyerolling that Jareth would do as he did when Kera and he met. Putting it off on Kera was even more ridiculous. He’s the one with a Luna and should have immediately cleared that up. Idiot male was on full display.
And stop with miscommunication, the lack of hearing somebody talking to you, especially whenever mind linking and Kera conveniently doesn’t hear Coral telling her the truth of things? That trope is so tired. And Coral first words are oh good! You’re up. There’s something I have to tell you.? something that important would just immediately being said. Period. Convenience writing is also lazy writing. Saving grace was the foolishness didn’t last any length of time, was done the next morning thanks to Ophelia since Coral lacks ability to relay important information.
Jareth is a grade A arse towards Kera. He doesn’t see how can be mates with her being they’re both alphas. Mate bond pulls strong, Jarerh trying to resist but failing. Kera was resistant and got on board sooner. Throughout the book there is lack of relationship built between the two, just a they just are feel.
Ophelia is in a room and able to say what room she’s in but doesn’t say who and what is in there with her? MAKES ZERO and I mean absolutely zero sense. So because she does not say what any, and everyone would say Jareth bursts in and gets a needle in the neck. Sorry, not sorry, That has to be the stupidest thing I have ever read. What kind of ridiculous foolishness would possess writer for such to be written? IT WOULD NOT HAPPEN. Then later Ophelia is written to be stupid in saying how she thinks they can trust the woman who’s participating in atrocities?! Seriously? WHY would she think that, let alone express it to her brother who is at that time be g subjected to that woman’s participation? And say to him when he RIGHTFULLY says they can’t trust any of them humans, how he’s going to have to trust in people eventually!!!! WTF is she smoking or drugged up on? She’s giving Stockholm Syndrome. Don’t know about others but that just pissed me right the hell off. More, allowing that same woman to continue living. Babies and children were in cages, experimented on and that woman was part of that!! Same woman who was fine with the experimentation, expressed it, because it’s fascinating. WHY WOULD SHE BE ALLOWED TO COME WITH THEM, Ophelia’s urging?!!! Sickening really. And the doctor heading atrocities is let go to just walk away with a “message” to the government?!
There wasn’t really much to this story really. Shifters and Purists clash towards the end but it was very limited and senseless. Too much going on that made zero sense actually.
Overall, the story was eh. This was poorly written