Let’s start with Trevor is a statutory rapist, shall we?
I’ll give this book credit in that it has a good flow and story, and I liked the twist at the ending where Jane discovers she has inadvertently uncovered her family roots. However, there are far too many holes in the plot and the characters are poorly written. I understand this book is part of a series that I haven’t read, and it almost does well enough as a standalone book, but there are too many unanswered questions that cause confusion.
First, Trevor and Jane are a bad couple. He is a stalker almost on the level of Christian Gray in that he has BUGGED Jane’s residence and devices without her knowing or consent and claims it’s for her safety. He also has all the details of her dating life since their first affair. Neither one of them has any love, tenderness, or chemistry for each other, just lust. There’s no other connection, and Trevor makes it clear on several occasions that he means to claim her and will keep inviting her to his bed even after she tells him no. If he truly cared about her safety, he would have clued her in on what was going on. There are brief glimmers of humanity in him in wanting to keep her safe, but not enough to make him not appear to be a creeper.
Then there’s the dialogue. There’s nothing great about it, and being someone who travels, I am a fan of accents. EVERYONE in this book talks like they’re from California. Trevor is South African, MacDuff and Jock are Scottish, Mario is Italian, Reilly is Irish, and Brenner is Australian. Could’ve fooled me, not ONE of these characters talks in a voice that indicates speech from their country. MacDuff says, “aye,” here and there, but that’s the end of it. They could all be from the west coast of the US for all I know. And Johansen REALLY need to dial back on inserting “dammit” everywhere. That’s not even the right way to spell it!
And now there’s Jane. Jane is not a good protagonist. She is a jerk and always thinks she knows best. She works on her own agenda and decides she knows better than anyone else. And what the heck is up with her dreams? Her having such vivid dreams involving Cira makes no sense, and even though it’s discussed at the end of the book there’s still no explanation and that’s really frustrating. Is she a reincarnation of this woman? Does she have some kind of psychic link to the past? Was the site she dug at enchanted and it gave her the power to channel memories from the person she was researching? That makes zero sense. And she’s not bothered by the fact that Trevor took advantage of her when she was 17, 1 year below the legal age of consent, even if she was in another country. That’s creepy. And she lets the fact that Trevor has been stalking her slide. Like Ana in 50 Shades of Gray, she probably would’ve been smarter about his actions if he wasn’t RICH. And when she’s captured by Reilly, she keeps insisting that she needs to find Trevor. She KNOWS he’s a psychopath and won’t let her, and yet she thinks she can change his mind??? She’s such an idiot!
Finally, the time frames are driving me nuts. It’s made clear that everything happens post-9/11, a time where going through airport security was tighter than ever and took about 2 hours. Somehow, when characters use the regular airport terminals and not private jets, they get to their destinations within a matter of hours. HOW DOES THAT WORK??? I flew to Italy from NY last year and it took 10 hours. How does Eve get there in the same day flying out of the east coast? And Jane is a student at Harvard, and she’s pulled from there in mid-December when she should be in finals week. What happened to her finals? Did she really skip out on finals week at Harvard without putting up an argument for that?
This book frustrated me too much. I only rushed through this book because I was doing a reading challenge. Under normal circumstances, I would’ve found something better to read.