I don't know if maybe I wasn't in the right mindset for this one but it was a tough read.
The book started off very strong and quite enjoyable. We meet Krish, a young Mauritian boy, living in an oppressive household with overbearing parents that are constantly fussing over him and thus stifling him. It's his HSC results day, he fails and is sent on a mission for him to forget his bad results. Great premise, lovely and accurate depiction of life in Mauritius and a young protagonist whom we can relate to and who, we can guess, will be going on a journey to 'grow up'.
So much potential which unfortunately all fell flat for me. It all starts going downhill when Krish leaves his uncle's place. From then on, we don't really have any specific plot line, we just follow Krish as he goes from 'adventure' to adventure.
The first flaw, I will say is Krish himself. This book is told using stream of consciousness, through Krish's point of view. If you are going to tell a whole book from the perspective of one character, please make the character interesting, funny or charismatic. Make the readers if not appreciate, at least tolerate being in his head. Being in Krish's head was a tedious, grating torture. Krish is a whiny, uninteresting, self-centered boy with no agency. Things happen and he just lets them happen, he does not take any decisions, never knows what to do, just goes along then endlessly complains and acts scared/angry about things he is allowing to happen. I understand that maybe this no-agency part is done on purpose and might be part of his character development, but at least his whiny tone, the absolute flatness of his narrative voice could have been avoided. He could have been written as lacking confidence, but at least being witty, or funny or something, anything but the insipid character we got.
To add to this, for me, Krish was also a very self-centered character who was at the source of his issues. It is his lack of agency and his lack of courage that made his unhappiness. Yet, at the end of the book, how does Krish change? He pins all the blame of all his previous woes on his parents, seems to consider them as simpletons, acts incredibly entitled and goes from one extreme to the other with them ; before he just accepted everything they said without saying anything, now he just completely disregards them, seems to think he knows better and they know nothing (why should his parents know why he was arrested? why should his parents know where he, as an underage child, is going out at 04.00 am in the morning? he can do anything he wants!). It was baffling to see the book trying to pass this as character development, and, worse, positive, when he just went from bad to bad. From an extreme to another.
Another negative was the plot itself. From the moment Krish leaves his uncle's house, there is no particular direction. Krish does not know where he is going and we readers don't know either. A lot of the situations Krish stumbled upon seemed really absurd and inorganic. The most surreal things happen to Krish in succession, and for me all these situations felt incredibly contrived. I felt like the author wrote these situations in simply for specific messages/agendas. Stumbling on the body for a criticism of the police, stumbling on the union worker to prop up left-wing ideas... And this feeling is very much consolidated by the fact that a lot of these plot points are not resolved and do not seem to matter anymore once the message is told ; like how once Krish is freed from the station, all thoughts of his arrest, of Captain and Kid suddenly vanish from his head; instead of thinking of going to court as instructed, of thinking of his unjustly arrested friends, Krish is now making the rounds of sugarcane fields, to encourage workers to unite. Why? Just because! I feel the author could have done a better job of weaving what she wanted to say in a more organic way into the story.
I won't even talk about the insta-romance with Girl...
All in all, just a bit of a mess.