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Mentor to the Marquess

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She taught him about pleasure. He taught her about love.

A survivor of spousal abuse, matchmaker Olivia Heather, the Dowager Countess of Allen, devotes her time to preventing the young ladies of society from following in her footsteps—until a series of newspaper articles accuse her of murdering her late husband.

Her plan to use her feminine wiles to convince the man responsible for the attacks to stop is stymied when the man in question, the infuriatingly handsome Thellusson Vaith, Marquess Lowell, requests that she find a love match for his daughter.

Nonetheless determined to make him pay for his misdeeds, Olivia vows to ignore the attraction simmering between them—until she learns that he hasn’t bedded a woman since his wife’s death nearly twenty years prior. Unable to resist the sensitive, guilt-ridden marquess, she takes on a new role: Mentoring him in the ways of pleasure.

But when they discover letters that suggest someone is manipulating Thel’s daughter using the same techniques that Olivia’s husband once used against her, they must delve into Olivia’s wounded past and resolve old family conflicts before the marquess’s daughter is in danger and Olivia is arrested for a crime she did not commit.

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Published November 19, 2024

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Melissa Kendall

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Melissa lives in Regina, Saskatchewan; the capital city that feels like a small town. A passionate public speaker, board game enthusiast and lover of all things Halloween, she spends her free time writing and spoiling her two cats.

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Profile Image for Alexandra G.
724 reviews30 followers
November 13, 2024
A spicy age-gap second-chance romance with an intriguing mystery on the side.

~ Olivia & Thel ~
Once a naive girl who threw herself into what turned out to be an abusive marriage to a much older earl, she has reinvented herself as a society matron, successful matchmaker and sought-after private companion. But now a gossip sheet is ruining her new life, and the man responsible for it just hired her services for his daughter.
He’s a widowed marquess, heir to a duchy, doting father and terrified of the emptiness his departed wife left behind. Antagonising his brothers, but wanting to do right by his dear daughter, he hires the only matchmaker that will agree to his terms: his daughter will marry for love - just like he did, and his parents.

They’re an interesting older couple; he’s 45, she 30ish. He’s all things good - caring, loyal, attentive, tender - and she’s more of a wary cynic. He’s not looking for love but falls head-over-heels anyway, and she initially just wants to save his daughter from making the same mistake she did. That and unravelling the mystery of her secret accuser, brings them close, especially when both seem intertwined... or are they?

The writing was good and the story was compelling, maybe a little too crowded and messy for my taste. But, the wrap-up was done in a jiffy and I expected more after such a careful build-up. The bad guys barely get their comeuppance, the HEA was tepid and I would have liked closure for a side plot, or at least a set up for a next book. And while the kinky steam (bdsm light) was nice, it felt out of place in this story for me. I couldn’t imagine a mentally and physically abused widow and a widower with very limited experience enjoying such play.
So no, this one wasn’t for me, but it might be for you...
Profile Image for Anna Boliker.
69 reviews2 followers
October 30, 2024
Dear Reader of the review,

Thank you for taking and making the time to go over my humble words. I must confess that once again, in my quest for easy, funny, and light reading, I stumbled into the intimate relationship of a couple! (as an advanced reading copy by NetGalley. Thanks for that!)

It started quite slowly, although the mystery was presented right from the first words. But it unfolded slowly, mutating into two or even three (if we count the pursuit of happiness by the hero and heroine, which we now do) that needed to be bound together. And bound she was! The heroine— but first to the plot. To be certain, the logical glue of the stories was quite unconvincing, but it is an escape read—so off with too much logic! It wasn’t too hard to let the mysteries unfold. Becoming more exciting in the middle of the story, the rhythm of the narrative became quite soothing again in the second half. It was not due to the scenes of intimacy, mind you. Those were plenty. But since it was not what I personally was looking for, these just made me frustrated with the narrative. (Although the book description might have given it away, but alas, who knew the scale of the words!) Mysteries aside, the hero and heroine were still not at their HEA destination. But my, it was not an elegant wrap-up.

All in all, dear reader of this humble review, be prepared for a sweet, mostly credible romance, where we get a glimpse into the intimate habits of the heroine and hero who are past their youthful bloom for a change (she is in the beginning of her 30s and he is 45, gasp!). That brings me to one other surprising aspect of the hero, besides his name, which is really a great find!: he is not only a believer in true love but also writes fan fiction! Now that is a pastime I wager you would not associate with a marquess! Makes him interesting and provides some information on how he might spend his day without going to the club or gambling his fortune away (he could, if he would, but he is too good). To you, you avid reader of Regency romances, it might become an inspiration, might it not? As I am thoroughly at a loss to come up with a "business deal" that one of the gently-bred young men in the story might have had with a thief. Additionally, the thief, while being no gentry, could impeccably behave in the august company of dukes and duchesses. So lo and behold! There might be a story behind the story in it.

That is not for me to tell, so don't worry, dear reader, as you have reached the end of my slightly lengthy reflections on this work that unfortunately did not provide me with any mental respite. Not even in the slightest, when comparing to the physical satisfaction the hero and heroine were obviously getting throughout the whole book.

Until we meet again with hopefully some thoughts on a more light, happy, easy, sex-less, brainless-but-logical-and-also-mostly-realistic story.
Profile Image for Shaina.
1,173 reviews6 followers
November 19, 2024
Thank you so much to NetGalley and Melissa Kendall for providing me with a complimentary digital ARC for Mentor to the Marquess coming out November 19, 2024. The honest opinions expressed in this review are my own.

A survivor of spousal abuse, matchmaker Olivia Heather, the Dowager Countess of Allen, devotes her time to preventing the young ladies of society from following in her footsteps—until a series of newspaper articles accuse her of murdering her late husband.

Her plan to use her feminine wiles to convince the man responsible for the attacks to stop is stymied when the man in question, the infuriatingly handsome Thellusson Vaith, Marquess Lowell, requests that she find a love match for his daughter.

Nonetheless determined to make him pay for his misdeeds, Olivia vows to ignore the attraction simmering between them—until she learns that he hasn’t bedded a woman since his wife’s death nearly twenty years prior. Unable to resist the sensitive, guilt-ridden marquess, she takes on a new role: Mentoring him in the ways of pleasure.

But when they discover letters that suggest someone is manipulating Thel’s daughter using the same techniques that Olivia’s husband once used against her, they must delve into Olivia’s wounded past and resolve old family conflicts before the marquess’s daughter is in danger and Olivia is arrested for a crime she did not commit.

This is the first book I’ve read by this author. I thought it was nice Thel and Olivia were older than the usual pair in historical novels. It was a second chance at love. It was definitely a short read, but I really loved it. Historical romance is one of my favorite genres. They were both fun characters. I would check out more books by this author.

I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys historical novels!
1,450 reviews
November 17, 2024
Olivia Heather, the Dowager Countess of Allen, having been victimized by spousal abuse, is determined to prevent this from happening to other young ladies of society. When a series of newspaper articles accuse her of murdering her late husband, she is determined to go after the main person responsible for the attacks, Thellusson Vaith. She is thrown when Thel, the Marquess Lowell, engages her as a matchmaker for his daughter, Constance. The attraction between them is instantaneous, and Olivia sees a new side to Thel, when she uncovers that he hasn’t had a partner since his wife died. When they discover letters that suggest someone is manipulating Constance using the same trickery as Olivia’s husband, they join together to find the person so determined to ruin their lives.
Whilst there is a reasonable age difference in this romance, with Thel at 45 and Olivia in her 30s, they are a good match. She is quite cynical, while Thel is a romantic, yet they do seem to work well together. While their romance had plenty of chemistry, I found the storyline at times too chaotic, with some quite conflicting ideas. Ultimately, the plot did detract from my enjoying this romance.
I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book from NetGalley. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
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926 reviews36 followers
October 27, 2024
Tropes: MFC is a matchmaker for MMC's daughter
Steam level: 4

Interesting premise and solid writing style, with an uncurrent of psychological darkness. Intriguing characterizations as well, particularly of MFC, who seems to be on what we would call on the spectrum today but has been forced to hide her mannerisms. MMC is also different, a bit of a cinnamon roll but controlling in his own way when it comes to his family.

I fully expected to like this, but a couple things dampened my enjoyment:

--MFC underwent what amounts to severe psychological and sexual abuse by her late husband and I didn't feel that her behavior with MMC really reflected this. She gets physical with him pretty quickly. The scene in her old bedroom made me uncomfortable. Eventually the sex scenes start to overpower the plot. They tend toward erotica and include a "power exchange" theme. Not my thing; might be yours.
--The mystery isn't too tough to figure out and is resolved abruptly and rather unsatisfactorily. The motive isn't all that convincing.

Overall: if you like your HR's darker, with erotica involved, this could be for you.

I read an advanced reader copy of this book and this is my honest, voluntary review. Thanks to the author, publisher, and Net Galley.
Profile Image for Cassandra.
2,715 reviews24 followers
December 2, 2024
I thought the first in the series was okay. And I was planning on not reading this one and waiting to buy the third but when it was made available on NetGalley I decided to read it. It was so messy. So many sub plots and everything happens so quickly it made the book very messy and made the book confusing. At one point they are at a masquerade ball with the MMC daughter as this is her first season and the MFC and MMC wander off together and there is a naughty play they can just join in on? At an event that is okay for his young daughter? I think this book tried to do something in regards to the types of abuse women can face but never did any of it well or in a meaningful way. Final thoughts: the book tried to do too much and achieved not enough. Thank you for the ARC in exchange for my honest opinion.
Profile Image for Margaret.
3,236 reviews34 followers
October 17, 2024
Thellusson (Thel) Marquess of Lowell hires Olivia, the Countess Dowager Allen, to find his daughter a husband, but it has to be a love match. Olivia's reputation is on the line as articles in the newspaper are accusing her of her husband's death. Thel doesn't believe she's guilty, but it makes being a matchmaker more difficult. Her past is replayed in his daughter's future. It's a game she must win to prevent heart break. An erotic affair between Thel and Olivia starts from the beginning. Very explicit sex.
This is the second book in the series and is good reading.
I read and reviewed a copy of this book from NetGalley.
6,177 reviews30 followers
November 18, 2024
Second time around....

For both of them. Lady Olivia Allen is a widow. She is being slandered in the newspapers, at the same time she is a matchmaker and has been tasked with matching Constance, a daughter of a marquess. Thel is a reader, an introvert who is a widower who loves his family and keeps them all unconventionally close. He's only bedded one woman, his wife. He is marquess but will one day inherit his father's dukedom. Olivia did not have a good first marriage and there are things happening to Thel's daughter that happened to her. Thel is finally ready after twenty years to get some with Olivia. An interesting story with touch of intrigue and a dash of steam.
1,367 reviews11 followers
November 5, 2024
Oh man. I really wanted to like this book, but...

The writing was all over the place, the plotline a little worse for wear. The heroine Olivia, apparently sexually abused, but has a very robust attitude towards sex and bdsm (seems a little unrealistic). The hero Thel was all over the map. I get he wants to keep his family near so he's not all alone, but to the point of being a little neurotic.

I had a hard time reading this book. I think it's requires a good edit.

#netgalley #MentortotheMarquess
Profile Image for Margaret Watkins.
3,570 reviews88 followers
November 21, 2024
When someone deliberately sets out to harm another through libel and gossip, I find myself getting rather angry and upset throughout this book as Olivia had to face one disaster after another, through no fault of her own. I also felt sorry for Thel as his family also worked against him. Despite having a fairly convoluted storyline, this romance does come to a sweet conclusion. I received a copy of this book as a gift through Dragonblade Publishing and NetGalley and this is my honest and voluntary review.
1,274 reviews15 followers
March 9, 2025
Love and Deception

He hires her to find a match for his daughter, so why is he maligning her reputation? Love and deception collide in this entertaining tale. The truth is far more complicated than Olivia realizes. She wants to despise Thel, but she finds herself falling in love with him instead. What is the truth? Who is spreading lies about Olivia? Will the marquess and the matchmaker turn their attraction into love? If you like steamy historical romance with mystery, you might enjoy this story as I did.
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3,102 reviews88 followers
November 8, 2024
This is a steamy historical romance. 

Our heroine is a widow who had been happily enjoying her freedom until someone started a nasty rumour.

Our hero has been dedicating his life to keeping his family together since the death of his beloved wife. His daughter is now of age for a season in Town. He wants a matchmaker to find her a man she will love.

Lies, deceit, and danger are a big part of this story.  Getting to the roots of the problem takes a few unexpected twists. 

Great fun. 
702 reviews
November 23, 2024
A mystery filled with lies, deceit and rumors. Olivia is a widow living her life as she pleases until someone started horrible rumors about her. Thel is a widower with a daughter ready for her season. One of the interesting aspects of this story is that both main characters are older than we normally have, which gives them a background full of experiences that most characters don't have. I fully enjoyed this story and found is steamy, engaging and fully immersed in it until the very end.
137 reviews
December 15, 2024
Olivia is a matchmaker widow who helps young ladies find a love match, and to avoid the type of marriage she had.
Thel, Marquess Lowell approaches Olivia to have her find a love match for his daughter.
There are many facets to this story with lies, deceit, horrible rumors, and a mystery to solve. Determining all the answers takes the reader on an enjoyable journey.
1,210 reviews
November 26, 2024
Unfortunately, Mentor to the Marquess was a little too all over the place for me and thus I was never so pulled into the story that I really wanted to keep reading.

I wasn’t the reader for this one.



Thank you to Dragonblade Publishing #NetGalley for the DRC


Profile Image for Colline Vinay Kook-Chun.
779 reviews23 followers
December 8, 2024
I enjoy Kendall's writing - it drew me into the story and kept my interest. The book was the perfect weekend read for me and I loved that Olivia finds the happiness that she deserves. This book is part of a series and can be read as a standalone novel. Trigger warning - domestic abuse.
Profile Image for Jeriann Fisher.
777 reviews
February 24, 2025
not for me

Life is too short to read a mess like this. Too many characters. It’s a DNF for me before 50%.
Profile Image for PlotTrysts.
1,231 reviews478 followers
November 18, 2024
I was looking for some escapist reading, so this book about a marquess who's been celibate since his wife died (we're talking over a decade, here) and who falls for his daughter's matchmaker when she agrees to tutor him in the bedroom seemed like a great choice.

Unfortunately it was a miss for me: the book was messy with way too many plot points and a weird mystery. And on top of all that the spice was very non-spicy.

This objective review is based on a complimentary copy of the novel.
Profile Image for Erin Arkin.
1,937 reviews373 followers
December 9, 2024
Mentor to the Marquess by Melissa Kendall is book two in the Seductive Sleuths series. If you haven't read the first book, don't worry...you can still pick this one up and read it as a standalone with no issues. There is some reference and engagement with the characters from the first book but you don't really miss too much because it truly is a very small piece of this story because this one really focuses on Olivia and Thel.

Olivia is our fmc in this book and we quickly find out that as the Dowager Countess of Allen, she is seen by the Ton as a well-known matchmaker for the young ladies of society. What they don't understand is that her true motivation is that she is a survivor of spousal abuse and she does it to prevent them from following in her footsteps. Unfortunately, someone has been putting her livelihood in jeopardy but putting articles in the newspaper, accusing her of murdering her late husband and she is determined to put a stop to it. When Olivia finds out that the man responsible for the articles is none other than Thellusson Vaith, Marquess Lowell, she doesn't know what to think at first because he has also asked her to find a love match for his daughter.

Thel was an interesting character. Quickly on in the story, we find out that he is a widower and he actually hasn't been with a woman since his wife died...twenty years ago. When Thel finds out that someone is manipulating Constance, his daughter, he leans and Olivia begin to work together more closely and they also become more drawn to one another. At the same time, all he wants to do is have his family together and happy and he is quickly coming to realize that he may not be able to have this when all is said and done.

As Thel and Olivia resolve the question between them about whether he is sending the articles to the newspaper (he is not), they work together to try to figure out who truly is. The concern around whether Constance is being manipulated and by whom and how this all links into Olivia's past to come after her now makes for an interesting story.

Overall, I enjoyed this book and if you're looking for a historical romance with a bit of a mystery twist, consider picking this one up. I'll continue to check out books by this author as they have interesting characters and a story that kept me engaged.

Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for the copy in exchange for an honest review.
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140 reviews5 followers
April 29, 2025
***ARC review*** my thoughts are my own and not paid for in any way (thanks to NetGalley and Dragonblade Publishing!)

This was the regency romance I didn't know I was missing in my life. I loved the sleuthing, the romance, and the banter was top notch between Lady Allen (Olivia) and Marquees Lowell (Thel)! I am a fan of en medias res for stories and the backstory unfolding as we go along with the story. That was such a big turn on for Olivia's story; we get bits and pieces of what her former marriage was like, and we also see how she was viewed by the ton through the slanderous stories in the newspapers about her. Olivia was such a strong female main character and I'll be honest that I expected her to be as insufferable as some strong fmc's, but she was breath of fresh air with her realness and battles with the demons of her past. Her somewhat jaded behavior was very akin to what I would expect from her circumstance, but we also see her wondering about her skills as a matchmaker and if she missed the signs in others that she didn't realize were in her former husband until it was too late. Her protective nature, especially over Constance, makes her an endearing figure early on and one can empathize with her on a deeper emotional level.

Now on to Thel...what doesn't this man do that makes me a mess? He's not looking for love for himself when he engages Lady Allen's services as a matchmaker for Constance, but slowly we see love bloom in him as his and Olivia's relationship changes from one of business to one of true love. The spicy scenes are also top tier between Thel and Olivia. There were some shocking things that I wouldn't have pictured during regency times (more Victorian historically for me), but I was pleasantly surprised by them as much as I imagine Thel was. The anxiety that Thel experiences made him most relatable and loveable to me because I can empathize with those feelings having experienced them myself. I think he takes his issues in stride and comes to realize that he can't control everything all the time and it's okay to give control over to others that you love and trust.

The only complaint I have is I want more of their story...perhaps in the next book they'll make another appearance. This was the historical romance I didn't know I was missing in my life. I loved the sleuthing, the romance, and the banter as top notch between Lady Allen (Olivia) and Marquees Lowell (Thel)! I am a fan of en medias res for stories and the backstory unfolding as we go along with the story. That was such a big turn on for Olivia's story; we get bits and pieces of what her former marriage was like, and we also see how she was viewed by the ton through the slanderous stories in the newspapers about her. Olivia was such a strong female main character and I'll be honest that I expected her to be as insufferable as some strong fmc's, but she was breath of fresh air with her realness and battles with the demons of her past. Her somewhat jaded behavior was very akin to what I would expect from her circumstance, but we also see her wondering about her skills as a matchmaker and if she missed the signs in others that she didn't realize were in her former husband until it was too late. Her protective nature, especially over Constance, makes her an endearing figure early on and one can empathize with her on a deeper emotional level.

Now on to Thel...what doesn't this man do that makes me a mess? He's not looking for love for himself when he engages Lady Allen's services as a matchmaker for Constance, but slowly we see love bloom in him as his and Olivia's relationship changes from one of business to one of true love. The spicy scenes are also top tier between Thel and Olivia. There were some pleasant surprises (nipple rings and chains) and I loved them as much as I imagine Thel does. The anxiety that Thel experiences made him most relatable and loveable to me because I can empathize with those feelings having experienced them myself. I think he takes his issues in stride and comes to realize that he can't control everything all the time and it's okay to give control over to others that you love and trust.

The only complaint I have is I want more of their story...perhaps in the next book they'll make another appearance. If you want a historical romance, with banter, spice, and potential murder, this is the read for you.
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1,219 reviews18 followers
December 30, 2024
This is a well written original, mystery, love story. The characters were complex and strong-willed. It has drama, action, intrigue, mystery, and many emotional issues that kept me engaged. The plot twists are exciting, and the delicious passion and the suspense of how everything would turn out was entertaining. I enjoyed the banter, sleuthing, and how lovely the ending was. I highly recommend reading!
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1,219 reviews18 followers
December 29, 2024
This is a well written original, mystery, love story. The characters were complex and strong-willed. It has drama, action, intrigue, mystery, and many emotional issues that kept me engaged. The plot twists are exciting, and the delicious passion and the suspense of how everything would turn out was entertaining. I enjoyed the banter, sleuthing, and how lovely the ending was. I highly recommend reading!
831 reviews52 followers
May 20, 2025
This review is short due to the fact that I forgot to review after I read the book, but I have two things to say: It felt rushed at times, and I just couldn't understand how Thel lived in a house with so many family members. I just felt like it was too much, even though it is a big house and kind of disrespectful to have so many people under one roof. Where's the privacy?
3.5-4 stars.

ARC was provided via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
Profile Image for Kellie Johnson.
136 reviews2 followers
July 14, 2025
DNF @ 49%. Received this book as an ARC. This is my honest - and voluntary- review. I just couldn’t get on with this book. The plot was extremely confused. I found myself constantly saying things like “are you serious?” or “what the hell am I reading?” It got to the point where I just plain got really pissed off with it.

I honestly can’t recommend this. Nor do I think it even deserves a 1 star. I wish I’d stopped reading sooner. I hope others got something from it.
702 reviews
November 23, 2024
A mystery filled with lies, deceit and rumors. Olivia is a widow living her life as she pleases until someone started horrible rumors about her. Thel is a widower with a daughter ready for her season. One of the interesting aspects of this story is that both main characters are older than we normally have, which gives them a background full of experiences that most characters don't have. I fully enjoyed this story and found is steamy, engaging and fully immersed in it until the very end.
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