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The Anvil of the Craftsman
A doctoral candidate in Theological Studies accepts recruitment by a friend in the U.S. State Department for an initiative to the most troublesome province in 2006 Iraq. The many challenges of nation building expand the mission from diplomacy to a survival situation as local and international interests position themselves to oppose a State Department one vital to progress in an uncertain theater.
Terrorism and counter-terror operations threaten to keep the team from leaving the relative safety of Baghdad. Until, that is, a former USAF Special Tactics operative hunting the men who want to kill them draws duty as their protector. The simple questions posed during a tribal council threaten provincial and regional stability; the conclusions reached explode into a clash of faith, loyalty, schism and betrayal that will help shape the future of two nations.
The Anvil of the Craftsman, the debut novel by author Dale Amidei, will be appreciated by fans of a broad range of fiction; from aficionados of the haunting themes of Ernest Hemingway to readers of the tightly woven plots of Tom Clancy and popular titles of authors like Vince Flynn, David Baldacci, W.E.B. Griffin and Richard Marcinko.
Approx. 93,000 words / 312pp. print length.
© 2011 Single Candle Press
Terrorism and counter-terror operations threaten to keep the team from leaving the relative safety of Baghdad. Until, that is, a former USAF Special Tactics operative hunting the men who want to kill them draws duty as their protector. The simple questions posed during a tribal council threaten provincial and regional stability; the conclusions reached explode into a clash of faith, loyalty, schism and betrayal that will help shape the future of two nations.
The Anvil of the Craftsman, the debut novel by author Dale Amidei, will be appreciated by fans of a broad range of fiction; from aficionados of the haunting themes of Ernest Hemingway to readers of the tightly woven plots of Tom Clancy and popular titles of authors like Vince Flynn, David Baldacci, W.E.B. Griffin and Richard Marcinko.
Approx. 93,000 words / 312pp. print length.
© 2011 Single Candle Press
312 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 9, 2011
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About the author
Dale Amidei
16 books38 followersI have lived and written on the wind- and snow-swept Northern Plains of South Dakota, the Sonora Desert, and the beautiful Hill Country of central Texas. Novels about people and the perspectives guiding their decisions are the result. My fiction features faith-based themes set in the real world, which is occasionally profane or violent.
My characters are realistically portrayed as caught between heaven and earth. Not always what they should be, nor what used to be, they are like all of us. I hope that my work can entertain you, make you think, and touch your heart. My methodology is complex, but my motive is simple: I have things to say, so I write.
My characters are realistically portrayed as caught between heaven and earth. Not always what they should be, nor what used to be, they are like all of us. I hope that my work can entertain you, make you think, and touch your heart. My methodology is complex, but my motive is simple: I have things to say, so I write.
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June 27, 2017
Though some readers frown on authors rating their own books, I choose to use this forum to mirror the review results of the Kindle Edition, which currently holds 4.6 stars across one hundred and fifty reviews on Amazon. Should that change, I will revise my own rating here.
"Anvil" is the story of one young man with a vision, one friend with a mission, the men who want to kill them and the man who wants to keep them alive. As a personal note, I reiterate what I have written about the work elsewhere: graced to write but a single novel, I'd remain pleased to have it be this one.
Here is the blurb:
"A doctoral candidate in Theological Studies accepts recruitment by a friend in the U.S. State Department for an initiative to the most troublesome province in 2006 Iraq. The many challenges of nation building expand the mission from diplomacy to a survival situation as local and international interests position themselves to oppose the State Department initiative: one vital to progress in an uncertain theater.
Terrorism and counter-terror operations threaten to keep the team from leaving the relative safety of Baghdad. Until, that is, a former USAF Special Tactics operative hunting the men who want to kill them draws duty as their protector. The simple questions posed during a tribal council threaten provincial and regional stability; the conclusions reached explode into a clash of faith, loyalty, schism and betrayal that will help shape the future of two nations.
The Anvil of the Craftsman, the debut novel by author Dale Amidei, will be appreciated by fans of a broad range of fiction; from aficionados of the haunting themes of Ernest Hemingway to readers of the tightly woven plots of Tom Clancy and popular titles of authors like Vince Flynn, Brad Thor, David Baldacci, W.E.B. Griffin and Richard Marcinko."
"Anvil" is available on Kindle, Nook, iTunes, and Kobo in addition to Smashwords. Paperback editions can be ordered from Amazon and CreateSpace. Approx. 93,000 words / 312pp. print length.
"Anvil" is the story of one young man with a vision, one friend with a mission, the men who want to kill them and the man who wants to keep them alive. As a personal note, I reiterate what I have written about the work elsewhere: graced to write but a single novel, I'd remain pleased to have it be this one.
Here is the blurb:
"A doctoral candidate in Theological Studies accepts recruitment by a friend in the U.S. State Department for an initiative to the most troublesome province in 2006 Iraq. The many challenges of nation building expand the mission from diplomacy to a survival situation as local and international interests position themselves to oppose the State Department initiative: one vital to progress in an uncertain theater.
Terrorism and counter-terror operations threaten to keep the team from leaving the relative safety of Baghdad. Until, that is, a former USAF Special Tactics operative hunting the men who want to kill them draws duty as their protector. The simple questions posed during a tribal council threaten provincial and regional stability; the conclusions reached explode into a clash of faith, loyalty, schism and betrayal that will help shape the future of two nations.
The Anvil of the Craftsman, the debut novel by author Dale Amidei, will be appreciated by fans of a broad range of fiction; from aficionados of the haunting themes of Ernest Hemingway to readers of the tightly woven plots of Tom Clancy and popular titles of authors like Vince Flynn, Brad Thor, David Baldacci, W.E.B. Griffin and Richard Marcinko."
"Anvil" is available on Kindle, Nook, iTunes, and Kobo in addition to Smashwords. Paperback editions can be ordered from Amazon and CreateSpace. Approx. 93,000 words / 312pp. print length.
January 16, 2012
What can I begin to say about this book?! Anvil of the Craftsman was so well written that it's hard for me to grasp that this is Mr. Amidei's first book. Right from the beginning I liked Jon Anthony. But I fell in love with Matt. The suspense and adventure kept my interest throughout this book. I found myself getting angry at the bad guys, and rooting for the good guys! When an author evoke real emotions from their readers, that's the mark of a great author. I look forward to reading more from Mr. Amidei.
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August 2, 2014A book that grabs me by the throat and doesn't let go is a very rare thing these days but Dale Amidei managed to do just that with The Anvil of the Craftsman. It's thrilling read which actually made me cry. Thanks for that, Dale.
This book more than deserves to be in the best seller lists.
Unlike Ridley Scott in The Kingdom of Heaven, Dale's attention to fact in his fiction is riveting. His use of language is a master class in descriptive prose as is the character development, especially of the hero Jon Anthony. Something that sucked me in and made me feel as if I was right there was the attention to detail of how the State Department works along with espionage, the complex mind of a terrorist and the core values and belief in humanity of the man charged with the task to stop him. I'm not going to write a synopsis of this book because that's been done by fans of the genre a hell of a lot better than I can.
However, what I will say is that I can see a film in this book's future. And remember you heard that here first.
This book more than deserves to be in the best seller lists.
Unlike Ridley Scott in The Kingdom of Heaven, Dale's attention to fact in his fiction is riveting. His use of language is a master class in descriptive prose as is the character development, especially of the hero Jon Anthony. Something that sucked me in and made me feel as if I was right there was the attention to detail of how the State Department works along with espionage, the complex mind of a terrorist and the core values and belief in humanity of the man charged with the task to stop him. I'm not going to write a synopsis of this book because that's been done by fans of the genre a hell of a lot better than I can.
However, what I will say is that I can see a film in this book's future. And remember you heard that here first.
February 29, 2012
I had a little bit of a hard time getting into this book, figuring out who the characters were and what was going on. Once I got beyond that point (and it was well worth it!), the book was excellent. Great story, great characters, and hard to put down. I would highly recommend Anvil of the Craftsman.
October 15, 2012
This is an excellent read. The beginning chapters were paced such that I was hard-pressed to put the book down. I was so immersed that as I finished I was hoping to find the next book in a series. My rating of 4 stars, a high 4 stars, is my way of persuading Mr. Amidei to give us more. The best I've read in this genre in quite awhile.
August 25, 2013
I won't be going into the specifics of this book but I can safely say this story will stay with me for a long time. It will be one of those books I will pick back up a year from now after finishing the series, and re-read. If you think this is just a basic thriller and war story, you would be mistaken. There are so many facets to it, so many thought provoking scenes, that I'm still reeling from it. Jon Anthony is, I think, the perfect hero, but there are many other interesting characters in this book. All are well sketched out, not simply "drive-by characters" we are not invested in. Sometimes something happens so shocking, that you have to put the book down and catch your breath. I learned a lot about human beings from this book - about their motivations, what drives them. We are all products of our culture and experiences but beyond that, we live in a connected world. What happens in one darkened corner of the Earth may have wider effects than we expect. This book, basically, is not just about a war, about good and bad guys - it is about PEOPLE, and about the consequences of different actions. What is the price we pay to achieve a certain result? How far are we willing to go? This is a book you will not be able to forget, so if you're looking for an easy read, look elsewhere. It is well written though and flows beautifully. Amidei has a knack with crafting engaging narrative with some knock-out phrases that will leave you breathless. There are many scenes of fast action and suspense that I found riveting, especially the further you go in the story. So yes, this is a book of action/adventure and a thriller, but it's so much more than that. Amidei is truly a master of the craft in my mind, but most of all, this is a story you will want to read. It's one of those books you tell your friends about because it affected you so much, and it's one of the best books I've read in a while. That's how I feel about it anyway. Of course, I'll be reading the entire series.
December 2, 2012
4.5 stars. I don't normally read political thrillers, but I'd heard so many great things about this one, that I had to pick it up, and I'm so glad I did. Though the first quarter was a little slow at times, I was soon absorbed in an engrossing story about what it takes to win a war and rebuild a nation--in this case, Iraq.
One of the things I really liked about this book is that you don't just get the point of view of the good guys; you get many perspectives, and by the end, I felt that I had a much better understanding of the Iraq conflict and the various peoples involved in it.
I had been a little concerned that the book would be preachy, but the spiritual aspects were integrated well and presented in such a manner that I believe anyone of any religious faith could appreciate them.
Extremely well-researched, with taut, thrilling action scenes (I was ready to high-five the characters at the end) and well-rounded characters, Anvil of the Craftsman is a winner. I've already purchased the sequel and look forward to more from Dale Amidei. This book would make a great movie!
One of the things I really liked about this book is that you don't just get the point of view of the good guys; you get many perspectives, and by the end, I felt that I had a much better understanding of the Iraq conflict and the various peoples involved in it.
I had been a little concerned that the book would be preachy, but the spiritual aspects were integrated well and presented in such a manner that I believe anyone of any religious faith could appreciate them.
Extremely well-researched, with taut, thrilling action scenes (I was ready to high-five the characters at the end) and well-rounded characters, Anvil of the Craftsman is a winner. I've already purchased the sequel and look forward to more from Dale Amidei. This book would make a great movie!
August 29, 2012
Excellent book. Icould not wait to turn the page.
July 28, 2013
I both enjoyed this novel and admired the quality of the writing. At the end of every scene I felt the urge to keep reading. The story was revealed in an effortless flow. Characters were either easy to empathize with or mysteriously fascinating.
In the beginning the novel introduces Jon Anthony, a doctoral candidate in theology. His dissertation is rejected in a heart wrenching series of scenes that let me share in how bereft the character felt after having his life's work rejected. With student loan bills piling up, he ends up taking a contract position in the U.S. State Department headed by Colby, an old college friend of Anthony's. This is how Anthony ends up in Iraq, working as a cultural and religious advisor.
The setting in the early years of the Iraq War make the stakes high and the landscape dangerous. The character of Matt Kameldorn enters the story in Iraq. He's a U.S. Air Force Major who stalks Al Quaida agents and plotters, gathers intelligence, and sometimes assassinates targets. He reminded me a little of the main character in Apocalypse Now, but Kameldorn was not as troubled. He was good at what he did and worked hard to try to save the lives of the people on his side of the war. Kameldorn is presented with fascinating technical accuracy as he employs various surveillance devices and uses weapons. The street scenes in Baghdad came across as very authentic too, and the danger was palpable.
The way the novel also peered into the minds of terrorist cell leaders and the people they recruit was quite gripping. The evil manipulative nature of these leaders who cared nothing about spreading ruthless bloodshed was darkly interesting.
Later in the novel when Kameldorn and Anthony become acquainted and work together on a State Department mission, I was very impressed with the flowering of the Kameldorn character. He had initially been interesting because he was a lone wolf warrior and good at what he did. But in Anthony's company more of his personality came out. The two men hit it off a bit and develop a mutual respect for each other. The warrior and the philosopher created stimulating foils for each other and I enjoyed the chance to see a bit of humor in Kameldorn instead of just the deadly serious stuff.
The Anvil of the Craftsman is a political thriller. It's not the type of novel I usually read, but the title caught my eye. Yes, the title. I just loved that phrase and discovered that the author writes novels as well as he names them.
For a thoughtful, exciting, and well crafted read, I recommend The Anvil of the Craftsman.
In the beginning the novel introduces Jon Anthony, a doctoral candidate in theology. His dissertation is rejected in a heart wrenching series of scenes that let me share in how bereft the character felt after having his life's work rejected. With student loan bills piling up, he ends up taking a contract position in the U.S. State Department headed by Colby, an old college friend of Anthony's. This is how Anthony ends up in Iraq, working as a cultural and religious advisor.
The setting in the early years of the Iraq War make the stakes high and the landscape dangerous. The character of Matt Kameldorn enters the story in Iraq. He's a U.S. Air Force Major who stalks Al Quaida agents and plotters, gathers intelligence, and sometimes assassinates targets. He reminded me a little of the main character in Apocalypse Now, but Kameldorn was not as troubled. He was good at what he did and worked hard to try to save the lives of the people on his side of the war. Kameldorn is presented with fascinating technical accuracy as he employs various surveillance devices and uses weapons. The street scenes in Baghdad came across as very authentic too, and the danger was palpable.
The way the novel also peered into the minds of terrorist cell leaders and the people they recruit was quite gripping. The evil manipulative nature of these leaders who cared nothing about spreading ruthless bloodshed was darkly interesting.
Later in the novel when Kameldorn and Anthony become acquainted and work together on a State Department mission, I was very impressed with the flowering of the Kameldorn character. He had initially been interesting because he was a lone wolf warrior and good at what he did. But in Anthony's company more of his personality came out. The two men hit it off a bit and develop a mutual respect for each other. The warrior and the philosopher created stimulating foils for each other and I enjoyed the chance to see a bit of humor in Kameldorn instead of just the deadly serious stuff.
The Anvil of the Craftsman is a political thriller. It's not the type of novel I usually read, but the title caught my eye. Yes, the title. I just loved that phrase and discovered that the author writes novels as well as he names them.
For a thoughtful, exciting, and well crafted read, I recommend The Anvil of the Craftsman.
July 21, 2013
After failing to make an impression in his doctorate for theological studies Jon Anthony accepts a position in the U.S State Dept. Recruited by an old friend the two of set out a plan to try and change diplomatic relations in war torn Iraq.
Terrorism threatens, and they find themselves a protector, a special tactics operative whose real name can never be given freely.
Their diplomatic mission will reach a conclusion with explosive consequences for both sides shaping the future of two nations.
Theology plays a huge part in this story, it’s a subject that has always intrigued me. Eagerly I threw myself into it.
A few chapters in I was thrown into war torn Baghdad and what seemed to be soldiers’ story.
As a genre of books I only occasionally read I tried to take my time, with terminology I am unfamiliar with and a foreign language I wanted to understand as best as I could.
I must admit I was surprised that I began to enjoy it.
With strong characters, defined by their own surroundings. Although I wondered how a theologian and military personnel would work together the writing made it easy to see a way they could.
Although seeing Iraq in the news an awful lot the descriptive in this novel gave me a new environment to consider, imagining places we as civilians are not privy to see.
The scenes of war can feel horrifically real when reading and have a way of making the reader consider the true danger our military face daily.
The dialogue has an intensity that almost makes you catch your breath in apprehension of the final outcome.
I really did enjoy this book once I got stuck in and has become a genre that I don’t intend to shy away from in future.
Terrorism threatens, and they find themselves a protector, a special tactics operative whose real name can never be given freely.
Their diplomatic mission will reach a conclusion with explosive consequences for both sides shaping the future of two nations.
Theology plays a huge part in this story, it’s a subject that has always intrigued me. Eagerly I threw myself into it.
A few chapters in I was thrown into war torn Baghdad and what seemed to be soldiers’ story.
As a genre of books I only occasionally read I tried to take my time, with terminology I am unfamiliar with and a foreign language I wanted to understand as best as I could.
I must admit I was surprised that I began to enjoy it.
With strong characters, defined by their own surroundings. Although I wondered how a theologian and military personnel would work together the writing made it easy to see a way they could.
Although seeing Iraq in the news an awful lot the descriptive in this novel gave me a new environment to consider, imagining places we as civilians are not privy to see.
The scenes of war can feel horrifically real when reading and have a way of making the reader consider the true danger our military face daily.
The dialogue has an intensity that almost makes you catch your breath in apprehension of the final outcome.
I really did enjoy this book once I got stuck in and has become a genre that I don’t intend to shy away from in future.
September 4, 2013
What a suspenseful & thought provoking book! I couldn't put the book down. And, there were parts of the book where I shed tears.
The year is 2006. Jon Anthony, a theology PhD candidate, is recruited by his friend, Tom Colby, to work for the State Dept. Specifically, he is to help Colby's team go to Iraq to help bring the sheik of the Anbar Province into the parliamentary process. Problem is that the Anbar Province is still controlled by the insurgents and Al Queda. USAF Major Kameldorn (fake name) works for military intelligence gathering information and often using force (sniper rifle, pistol, and whatever else he can get his hands on). Major Kameldorn is after two insurgents: Abu Bakir Raad which is a Sunni cover name for an Iranian Revolutionary Guard who is funding the insurgency in Iraq. Muhammad Qasim al-Khafji is a Saudi who runs one of the al Queda networks in Iraq.
Colby's team is gong to meet a bunch of the sheiks and their followers in their province. Of course, the "bad guys" find out about the convoy route and date. Who will come out alive? Will the sheiks work with State Dept?
This novel is full of details. It's as if I was reading a real-life report of what is happening in Iraq. It's thought provoking because Jon Anthony, as a theology candidate and well versed in Islam, speaks to the sheiks of religion. He told them that they have a choice based on Muslim and Christian beliefs: to love (stop the killings), to hate (assist al Queda), or do nothing.
This is the first of the Jon Anthony trilogies. I'll have to read the others now.
The year is 2006. Jon Anthony, a theology PhD candidate, is recruited by his friend, Tom Colby, to work for the State Dept. Specifically, he is to help Colby's team go to Iraq to help bring the sheik of the Anbar Province into the parliamentary process. Problem is that the Anbar Province is still controlled by the insurgents and Al Queda. USAF Major Kameldorn (fake name) works for military intelligence gathering information and often using force (sniper rifle, pistol, and whatever else he can get his hands on). Major Kameldorn is after two insurgents: Abu Bakir Raad which is a Sunni cover name for an Iranian Revolutionary Guard who is funding the insurgency in Iraq. Muhammad Qasim al-Khafji is a Saudi who runs one of the al Queda networks in Iraq.
Colby's team is gong to meet a bunch of the sheiks and their followers in their province. Of course, the "bad guys" find out about the convoy route and date. Who will come out alive? Will the sheiks work with State Dept?
This novel is full of details. It's as if I was reading a real-life report of what is happening in Iraq. It's thought provoking because Jon Anthony, as a theology candidate and well versed in Islam, speaks to the sheiks of religion. He told them that they have a choice based on Muslim and Christian beliefs: to love (stop the killings), to hate (assist al Queda), or do nothing.
This is the first of the Jon Anthony trilogies. I'll have to read the others now.
August 7, 2014
I must admit that this title decorated my Kindle for over a year before I read the first sentence. My preconceptions about The Anvil of the Craftsman as a Christian novel kept me from starting what I feared would be a thin veneer of a story wrapped around a preachy message. I couldn't have been more wrong.
Dale Amidei has masterfully, almost magically created the total literary package. This book is meticulously edited and formatted, and thoroughly researched. The level of detail goes beyond building an utterly believable world. It pulled me into the story so seamlessly that some of the scenes feel more like personal memories than something I read.
With a fairly large cast of characters, I am impressed by the apparent ease with which Mr. Amidei gives each a distinct voice, not only making them real, but making them so engaging that I feel like I know them, both the good guys and the baddies.
What I did NOT get from this book was any confirmation of my foolish preconceptions about this genre. This is a beautifully crafted, exciting, thought provoking ride, and any true master of his craft, Mister Amidei makes it look easy. I could kick myself for not reading it sooner. This author has jumped right to the top of my Must Read list.
Dale Amidei has masterfully, almost magically created the total literary package. This book is meticulously edited and formatted, and thoroughly researched. The level of detail goes beyond building an utterly believable world. It pulled me into the story so seamlessly that some of the scenes feel more like personal memories than something I read.
With a fairly large cast of characters, I am impressed by the apparent ease with which Mr. Amidei gives each a distinct voice, not only making them real, but making them so engaging that I feel like I know them, both the good guys and the baddies.
What I did NOT get from this book was any confirmation of my foolish preconceptions about this genre. This is a beautifully crafted, exciting, thought provoking ride, and any true master of his craft, Mister Amidei makes it look easy. I could kick myself for not reading it sooner. This author has jumped right to the top of my Must Read list.
August 7, 2014
For those who have an interest in stories of the Iraq War, this is a must read. Jon Anthony, disappointing denial of his dissertation for his doctorate finds himself offered a temporary job with the State Dept. in Iraq. In the notorious Anbar Province his life takes now direction and alows his faith a new outlet. It also teaches him a new respect for his State and Military companions. This author seems to leave an opening for a sequal. I hope there is one.
January 2, 2013
I don't often read this type of genre, but I was pleasantly surprised by the quality of the writing and how engaging the story was. Jon Anthony was an appealing character, and I think it masterful that the author chose him as the vehicle through whom we experience the wild land that is Iraq. I particularly liked the spiritual and philosophical themes that were laced throughout the story.
August 30, 2013
Truly excellent reading - an insight into the war in Iraq, from a fictional perspective based in the reality of what's happening and happened there. Practically couldn't put it down.
October 9, 2014
This book was rather interesting. I have no memory of how I got this book: I think I saw it for free and thought it sounded interesting. However, it was quite engaging Christian fiction: by which I mean fiction written from a Christian perspective that was not at all trite, preachy or stupid. Very rare in "Christian fiction". In fact, a non-Christian reading it might not even realize that it's written from a Christian perspective.
The story was interesting and well-researched, and moved quickly. Some flaws were the obvious one-sidedness of all the characters: every single character was either 100% good guy (democracy-loving and -promoting visionaries), or 100% bad guys (Al Qaeda, and Iranians). There was nobody in between. I stopped even worrying about them getting back-stabbed by anyone because I quickly realized that plot twists weren't something that was going to happen in this book: if you were looking at a good guy, he would always be good, and if it was a bad guy they'd never do anything honorable. Another flaw was excessive detail: we read about clicking in Excel spreadsheets, and him buying a Compaq Presario laptop, and even the brand name of the scope that the sniper uses. I mean, good research and all, but a bit excessive.
Overall, though, an enjoyable read that I would recommend to anybody: not the best ever, but pretty good, especially for a self-published book.
The story was interesting and well-researched, and moved quickly. Some flaws were the obvious one-sidedness of all the characters: every single character was either 100% good guy (democracy-loving and -promoting visionaries), or 100% bad guys (Al Qaeda, and Iranians). There was nobody in between. I stopped even worrying about them getting back-stabbed by anyone because I quickly realized that plot twists weren't something that was going to happen in this book: if you were looking at a good guy, he would always be good, and if it was a bad guy they'd never do anything honorable. Another flaw was excessive detail: we read about clicking in Excel spreadsheets, and him buying a Compaq Presario laptop, and even the brand name of the scope that the sniper uses. I mean, good research and all, but a bit excessive.
Overall, though, an enjoyable read that I would recommend to anybody: not the best ever, but pretty good, especially for a self-published book.
July 31, 2014
The Anvil of the Craftsman is a well-written and researched book that highlights the difficulties of working under the most difficult of circumstances in a war torn land. I echo many of the sentiments expressed in the 5-star reviews here. My only quibbles are personal, stylistic ones. At times the drama did not build, causing actions scenes to fall a little flat. Character development was well done overall, although the early focus on Jon and the conspicuous absence of any relevance through much of the middle of the the novel was jarring to me. Lastly, there was a touch too much narration in certain parts of the story for my tastes.
That said, Dale Amidei clearly did his homework. The book gives you insight into a culture foreign to most Americans, and does so in an entertaining way. His approach reminded me of Tom Clancy, insofar as the ability to weave so much detail into a narrative while still keeping a readers interest.
It's not a light read, but it is one I enthusiastically recommend people check out if they hold an interest in diplomacy, military operations, or military history.
Well done, Dale. I look forward to reading your other works.
That said, Dale Amidei clearly did his homework. The book gives you insight into a culture foreign to most Americans, and does so in an entertaining way. His approach reminded me of Tom Clancy, insofar as the ability to weave so much detail into a narrative while still keeping a readers interest.
It's not a light read, but it is one I enthusiastically recommend people check out if they hold an interest in diplomacy, military operations, or military history.
Well done, Dale. I look forward to reading your other works.
March 23, 2015
Jon Anthony was up for his thesis defense but the head of the committee had the votes to request that he revise it. While Jon is contemplating his next move he Is contacted by an old friend who was working at the state department and offered a job as a contractor with a mission to Iraq (this is towards the end of the Iraq war). The mission is to diplomatically reach out to local sheiks and prominent leaders and gather them together as a group to influence the national government. The mission, the brainchild of Jon' friend soon runs in to trouble from the international (and US) military as well as the local Al-Qaida forces. Its an interesting story and based on some actual events its quite believable. Having a quiet long weekend, it was a quick read.
April 23, 2013
A heart pounding ride…
This book grabs you by the seat of the pants and won't let you go as it drags you by through the IED-laden provinces of Iraq along with the hero/protagonist Jon Anthony and his spooky Special Forces protector, Matt Kameldorn. Along the way we are given fascinating glimpses into the minds and motivations of not only the Al Qaida operatives, but also some of the ordinary people and tribal leaders who eventually rally against the foreign terrorists in their midst. I will definitely be continuing on with this series, but first, I think I'll go write me some serious Kameldorn fanfiction :-)
This book grabs you by the seat of the pants and won't let you go as it drags you by through the IED-laden provinces of Iraq along with the hero/protagonist Jon Anthony and his spooky Special Forces protector, Matt Kameldorn. Along the way we are given fascinating glimpses into the minds and motivations of not only the Al Qaida operatives, but also some of the ordinary people and tribal leaders who eventually rally against the foreign terrorists in their midst. I will definitely be continuing on with this series, but first, I think I'll go write me some serious Kameldorn fanfiction :-)
April 22, 2014
The mixture of characters in this story kept me engaged throughout. I appreciated how the author used a character that drew from common aspects of different religions to bring about the beginning of consensus within a group of local leaders in Iraq. Although radicals were certainly a great part of the story the plot of the story drew upon the similarities found in humanity rather than the differences.
March 16, 2015
Great Read
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and look forward to reading more from Mr. Amidei. I have spent many years in the Middle East including a just returned trip from Iraq. The book is well written and captures many of the nuances of the area. It's an exciting, true-to-life, well written adventure. Although the book is part of a trilogy it is also a stand alone book. I recommend it highly.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and look forward to reading more from Mr. Amidei. I have spent many years in the Middle East including a just returned trip from Iraq. The book is well written and captures many of the nuances of the area. It's an exciting, true-to-life, well written adventure. Although the book is part of a trilogy it is also a stand alone book. I recommend it highly.
January 18, 2015
A man is asked by his long time friend to go to Iraq. He agrees so he can get his school expenses paid. When they get over seas they begin to try to convince the Iraqi people that making a government like the U. S. would be benificial to their country. They encounter terrorists and many dangers around every corner they go.
July 23, 2014
I wasn't sure about a war book...but I kept reading and it brought home the fact people are people and the God they worship doesn't have any other desire but for the good of people of faith...LOVE and compassion. If more people could bring out the good in others and not the anger and hostilities...think what a GREAT world we could have!!
June 1, 2015
While this book is not one that I would have usually picked up to read, I'm so glad I did. It's an awesome book, and the writer is a fantastic writer. His writing is of the caliber of Edgar Rice Burroughs, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, and H.G. Wells; albeit being in a different genre.
I enjoyed the book very much. One heck of a good story.
I enjoyed the book very much. One heck of a good story.
June 13, 2015
This was a very realistic novel that kept your thinking and also kept you on the edge of your seat. It deals with issue going on in the far east and might be a tough read for some. I really enjoyed and and have gained a better understanding about what are troops go through over there. It is fiction but deals with real issues.
August 2, 2018
Fantastic. You can find few authors who can weave fiction with reality, action, and the I feel there,' that readers want. This is not a breezy read- this is intrigue from the war room to the field bad to the call for peace. Eloquently written, you'll find full fleshed characters, intense pressure und
er fire, and truly touched by the understanding Dale brings to this book.
er fire, and truly touched by the understanding Dale brings to this book.
July 20, 2014
A well written,researched and documented novel
A well written,researched and documented novel
A thorough understanding of the Muslim culture, religion and the geographic area of Iraq. As it is now being shown there are centuries of history that are hard to change
A well written,researched and documented novel
A thorough understanding of the Muslim culture, religion and the geographic area of Iraq. As it is now being shown there are centuries of history that are hard to change
August 10, 2014
Marvelous book.
Marvelous book.
One of the finest I have ever read. A real page turner. Gives an understanding of what we are facing in that part of the world. 5 stars. Very authoritative. Well done.
Marvelous book.
One of the finest I have ever read. A real page turner. Gives an understanding of what we are facing in that part of the world. 5 stars. Very authoritative. Well done.
June 25, 2016
Incredibly amazing work
This is a well written story about the struggles in Iraq and the attempts to unite and settle the area. The development of the characters gives you a sense of knowing them, the story gives you a sense of being there. Eagerly anticipate the next edition.
This is a well written story about the struggles in Iraq and the attempts to unite and settle the area. The development of the characters gives you a sense of knowing them, the story gives you a sense of being there. Eagerly anticipate the next edition.
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