This was better written than the 1st one was, but I can't for the life of me figure out how anyone could could call it brilliant by any stretch of the imagination. I've read a lot of books in this genre, but I'm not a fan of how this author's biases bleed through his character voices. For example, a new character is introduced who has a chip on their shoulder. Okay, I can buy that this single character might dislike someone on the premise that they're fat. It was taken too far where his inner monologue is requiring him to restrain himself from murdering the guy out of disgust. Fine. But now the protagonist shows back up and has the exact same attitude, despite the fact that none of the character development up to this point has painted him in this light. I just don't buy it and it makes the protagonist a douche.
I get that they are only a week into this crisis, but at which point will people be smart enough to stop wasting ammo and start carrying proper melee weapons?
One big thing that also stands out is all the zombie infants. Don't get me wrong I understand the necessity of realism, but I find it to be sensationalism to have so many in separate areas simultaneously. Also, how did they become zombies? No bite marks are described and as far as I know there has been no indication that they can 'turn' without them. Even if they had been bitten, how would there be enough left to reanimate a newborn? In the NICU (pronounced Nick-Yew), there us no explanation of how a zombie open the neo-natal bassinet, bite the infant without consuming it, and then close it back up. It is sloppy continuity... Meanwhile, we have a delta force operator who becomes overcome with grief and gets killed, but the whole room full of operators is too slow to act also?
There is also an irony to making fun of Duncan's prepper brother when he's clearly the only one who was prepared for shit. Like in a post apocalyptic zombies books you need to remind your audience that you'd never be caught dead with an RPG loser.🙄 The author's writing screams of insecurity.
Damon's character is black with dreads. Okay, not sure why he needs to be referred to as "the black guy" when his character has already been established 1/2 a book earlier.
I generally don't spend time writing negative reviews. Honestly, I rarely write them at all with so much to read. However, in this case I made an exception... I can only hope that the writer continued to improve over time.