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Walkout
Gavin is a wealthy and demanding investment banker, the sort of power-hungry, driven man those in the professional world don’t question. When a beautiful young woman finds herself entangled with Gavin following his divorce of a year ago, things aren’t exactly as they first seemed. Now, nearing the end of an icy winter, she’s living in his luxurious home in a rich neighborhood just north of the sprawling city. She’s washing his sheets and tending to his every whim…but a mysterious boat house on the property calls to her and, in time, she may not be able to stop herself from answering.
- GenresShort Stories
34 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 29, 2011
About the author
Jason McIntyre
29 books172 followersJASON MCINTYRE is the #1 Kindle Suspense author of THE NIGHT WALK MEN, bestsellers ON THE GATHERING STORM and SHED, plus the multi-layered literary suspense THALO BLUE. His short fiction has appeared in numerous magazines and won several awards.
His debut novel ON THE GATHERING STORM earned McIntyre a spot in the Top 20 Debut Authors for the Goodreads Choice Awards.
THE DEVIL'S RIGHT HAND is the latest instalment in the THE NIGHT WALK MEN saga and it's available now.
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Acclaim:
"Five stars! Grows up around you like a vine."
- Art Lange, Smashwords
"Completely unpredictable! Like something out of a Quentin Tarantino film, a memoir, and something so bizarre...out of the Twilight Zone.”
- Jennifer Nessen
"I needed to keep reading (until four in the morning!!) to see how it would turn out."
- Will Kagan, Smashwords
"This is a roller coaster ride: you're in the hot sun, chugging to the top, anticipating the drop the whole way and then--boom--the drop comes and you're gasping for air. The hot wind blasts you and your guts are in your throat. In the last half of the book, some scenes had me by the larynx. Highly recommended!"
- Dvier, Sony Reader Store
"[McIntyre] writes some of the most beautiful sentences being published today."
- Vincent Zandri, author of "The Remains"
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His debut novel ON THE GATHERING STORM earned McIntyre a spot in the Top 20 Debut Authors for the Goodreads Choice Awards.
THE DEVIL'S RIGHT HAND is the latest instalment in the THE NIGHT WALK MEN saga and it's available now.
* * *
Acclaim:
"Five stars! Grows up around you like a vine."
- Art Lange, Smashwords
"Completely unpredictable! Like something out of a Quentin Tarantino film, a memoir, and something so bizarre...out of the Twilight Zone.”
- Jennifer Nessen
"I needed to keep reading (until four in the morning!!) to see how it would turn out."
- Will Kagan, Smashwords
"This is a roller coaster ride: you're in the hot sun, chugging to the top, anticipating the drop the whole way and then--boom--the drop comes and you're gasping for air. The hot wind blasts you and your guts are in your throat. In the last half of the book, some scenes had me by the larynx. Highly recommended!"
- Dvier, Sony Reader Store
"[McIntyre] writes some of the most beautiful sentences being published today."
- Vincent Zandri, author of "The Remains"
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Displaying 1 - 16 of 16 reviews
December 21, 2011
This story even though being short, grabs your attention and flows with a visceral pace. Married life the joys and the pitfalls, one businessman wants something from his wives that many would not give and tolerate. It should have been written in plain English his fetish, for the poor female protagonist. She soon realises why she's his second attempt at marriage. She seems to be stuck in limbo. Jason always produces slices of the darkness of the heart in a easy flow format of reading pleasure.
December 16, 2011
In many ways, Peach is a typical woman. And that, perhaps, is the scariest part of this story. Peach's ordeal made me think about how much women are willing to do for love, and how much of themselves they lose along the way.
Walkout is edgy and dark, with a paranormal twist and vivid imagery. Be prepared to step into the twilight zone.
Walkout is edgy and dark, with a paranormal twist and vivid imagery. Be prepared to step into the twilight zone.
November 20, 2012
Review of Walkout by Jason McIntyre
5 Stars
The author does a lovely job here of writing from the mind and spirit of a female character. Not an easy task, and not all authors can “change gender” like this (it’s not an easy job in Real Life to put oneself in the mind of someone of the other gender, either), but it’s very well done here. I loved the intricate details and imagery which so put each scene into place, and vividly so.
I truly did not at all expect the way this story played out; the author telegraphs no clues, and even after decades of reading mysteries and suspense and horror and priding myself that I can recognize what’s coming: well, I didn’t and couldn’t have done.
Review of “Through the Transom Light” ( a short story included in “Walkout”)
This is one of the most terrifying stories I ‘ve ever read, and over the decades, I’ve probably read umpteen thousands. I still am experiencing little spider feet dancing along my arms and spine. If you love horror, do read it; but if you’ve a child under the age of one, I recommend you postpone reading it until her or his next birthday.
5 Stars
The author does a lovely job here of writing from the mind and spirit of a female character. Not an easy task, and not all authors can “change gender” like this (it’s not an easy job in Real Life to put oneself in the mind of someone of the other gender, either), but it’s very well done here. I loved the intricate details and imagery which so put each scene into place, and vividly so.
I truly did not at all expect the way this story played out; the author telegraphs no clues, and even after decades of reading mysteries and suspense and horror and priding myself that I can recognize what’s coming: well, I didn’t and couldn’t have done.
Review of “Through the Transom Light” ( a short story included in “Walkout”)
This is one of the most terrifying stories I ‘ve ever read, and over the decades, I’ve probably read umpteen thousands. I still am experiencing little spider feet dancing along my arms and spine. If you love horror, do read it; but if you’ve a child under the age of one, I recommend you postpone reading it until her or his next birthday.
November 2, 2012
The good thing about having acquired a Kindle e-reader is that one can come across a great variety of works and authors. This is what happened to me with McIntyre's Walkout. Writing short stories is not easy and there are legions of constant readers who would be reluctant to read them, prefering long novels instead. McIntyre manages to engage the reader in an spell-binding story, full of mistery and a surprising ending. The first thing that called my attention is the style: fluent, engaging and at the same time poetic. The story is masterfully well written and although the readers may be confused at moments due to the complexity of the plot, McIntyre manages to lead them towards an amazing ending that won't leave the readers indifferent. Fans of this genre shouldn't miss this novella, it's a treat!
September 25, 2012
Loved it. I found it very hard to put the book down and on more than one occasion stole a glance at a page or two while at work. The story, the details, the characters, the author's voice...all were a perfect balance.
January 23, 2018
Peach is with Gavin a wealthy divorced business man. He is domineering . Peach is eager to please him . She soon realizes things aren't the way she wants them to be between them. One day she discovers a boat house she is drawn to it. She begins to wonder why he divorced his first wife? And what her future is with him? And why does she have this urge to go to the boat house? A dark edgy story with a paranormal twist.
May 27, 2016
Walkout by Jason McIntyre
Peach is with Gavin, a wealthy businessman. Once divorced and a bit domineering he knows what he wants out of Peach, and she is eager to please (him). She starts to realize things are not as she would like between the two of them. She soon discovers a boat house and is drawn to the place. She starts to wonder why he divorced and what exactly is her future with Gavin. Also what is this mysterious urge to continue to go to the boathouse.
Told through Peach's voice, I really got to experience everything she did and felt. Her emotions, her love, her confusion and the mystique of her unusual relationship with Gavin. With a paranormal twist and the mystery of the unknown (for Peach), I was entranced until the very end.
The writing is so intense, it is surreal. I strongly recommend Walkout to those who love a great chilling read. I suggest you check out the work of Jason McIntyre, you won't be disappointed!
Peach is with Gavin, a wealthy businessman. Once divorced and a bit domineering he knows what he wants out of Peach, and she is eager to please (him). She starts to realize things are not as she would like between the two of them. She soon discovers a boat house and is drawn to the place. She starts to wonder why he divorced and what exactly is her future with Gavin. Also what is this mysterious urge to continue to go to the boathouse.
Told through Peach's voice, I really got to experience everything she did and felt. Her emotions, her love, her confusion and the mystique of her unusual relationship with Gavin. With a paranormal twist and the mystery of the unknown (for Peach), I was entranced until the very end.
The writing is so intense, it is surreal. I strongly recommend Walkout to those who love a great chilling read. I suggest you check out the work of Jason McIntyre, you won't be disappointed!
October 5, 2013
This is a captivating and fully developed short story. Would make an excellent movie. The characters are three dimensional, the story is spooky and keeps you hooked until the final word.
April 15, 2020
Kept my attention throughout. Good pace and plotting.
May 8, 2014
The descriptive quality of Jason McIntyre's prose is such that he can make the reader almost 'feel' the characters' emotions, and this novella is a great example of that.
As well as feeling, we can also 'see' the events play out. He has a remarkable talent for illuminating scenes and making them almost real.
In this novella, McIntyre tells the story from the perspective of 'Peach', the protagonist; the prose is confused and disordered, reflecting the character's state of mind.
Be ready for a sometimes uncomfortable, but nevertheless, enthralling and compulsive read.
McIntyre sets the scene gradually in the opening segment. Stay with this story and you will be rewarded with a fascinating insight into the unknown. This book will keep you guessing until the very end. An enjoyable and scintillating read.
As well as feeling, we can also 'see' the events play out. He has a remarkable talent for illuminating scenes and making them almost real.
In this novella, McIntyre tells the story from the perspective of 'Peach', the protagonist; the prose is confused and disordered, reflecting the character's state of mind.
Be ready for a sometimes uncomfortable, but nevertheless, enthralling and compulsive read.
McIntyre sets the scene gradually in the opening segment. Stay with this story and you will be rewarded with a fascinating insight into the unknown. This book will keep you guessing until the very end. An enjoyable and scintillating read.
August 12, 2016
One sure detail that sticks out for me in McIntyre's writing is his... attention to detail. I think suspense works are sometimes lost in the thrill of the story, and not enough of the "world" bleeds through.
In Walkout, McIntyre's world building - his descriptions of surroundings and beauty and the cold - captivated me from first pages. His writing is flawless - from the standpoint of editing, flow or otherwise - Jason McIntyre is readable.
I enjoyed this novella as much or more than I enjoyed his other works, and would recommend it to anyone looking for a great piece to get lost in.
In Walkout, McIntyre's world building - his descriptions of surroundings and beauty and the cold - captivated me from first pages. His writing is flawless - from the standpoint of editing, flow or otherwise - Jason McIntyre is readable.
I enjoyed this novella as much or more than I enjoyed his other works, and would recommend it to anyone looking for a great piece to get lost in.
July 9, 2014
Jason McIntyre is a writer to watch, and I came late to discovering his talent. So many books to catch up with and I'm grateful. Walkout is a ghost story, a haunting, and it's the reader right along with the main character who is haunted. The mystery, the why, is what made me keep turning pages. Told from the point of view of a woman in distress, going about her normal life and facing more and more questionable circumstances. This narrative style isn't new, but the author does an admirable job exploring the idea, and succeeds. The perfect length too, and this is important because too many novels are padded unnecessarily. Well done.
July 18, 2012
Good quick read, although I have to say I was right with my thoughts as I read through this .. I know everyone says that but I "really" was :)
It does jump around a bit but that adds to the mixed up way she was feeling .. all in all a solid 4 star read for a short story.
It does jump around a bit but that adds to the mixed up way she was feeling .. all in all a solid 4 star read for a short story.
March 17, 2016
Dark disturbing short story.
May 18, 2012
Started promisingly but after the 10th page of finding the main character passing out and waking up outside in the cold, it got a tad monotonous...
June 10, 2019
Nicely done I approve.
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