Respected Teacher, Important Teachings, Sometimes Stilted/Repetitive Presentation
This is an important book, and generally the ideas are presented in a way that clarifies Yogacara as best I can judge. That said, this book could have used the kind of writerly love and time that would more often go into such books. Usually, the book reads like a Reb talk, and that's all fine and good. But the glaring problems (needless--sometimes endless--repetitions, sometimes too-subtle leaps of logic) don't generally make for ideal reading. This book needs a strong editor with a commitment to the integrity of the original format of the dharma talks which spawned the book (minus asides and interruptions, but also without the repetitions that may have crept in over time). The weird, quasi-poetic tapdance into the wild blue yonder is such a jarringly vapid finish to a book treating such an incredibly weighty subject that it physically took the wind out of me.
A revision that brings these talks out of needless repeitions and steers clear of artificiality at the end may cause history (and the American Zen tradition) to judge this book as a serious English-language contribution to American Zen literature.