Thursday 4, 2014
Callum Ormond is very confused in his life. This sick and crazy stranger follwos him in the streets. The man finally reaches Cal and says to him, "They killed your father. They'll kill you. You must survive the next 365 days!"(Lord 183) This warning came out of nowhere. Cal didn't even know what the man was talking about. Cal was very confused. "My confusion and fear deepened. Them? Who was them? What are you talking about? I asked again. Who's after me?"(Lord 184) This part was what Cal asked the man, but the stranger was unable to answer the questions. Before the stranger could answer any questions, 2 men came in an ambulance and took him away. Cal didn't take the warning seriously because the 2 men said the stranger was sick and had to be hospitalized. This is a huge confusion in Cal's life. This warning will surley be brought again in the future if this novel/serie.
Cal's life is not easy. Cal's father is dead now and he lives with his mother, his sister Gabbi, and his unlce Rafe. Not having a father during his whole teenager life is very difficult for a child. " ... Dad, Mum, and Gabbi and I piled into the car and headed towards the coast for the beach house at Treachery Bay. But this year, Dad wasn't with us."(Lord 180) Cal is living without his Dad. For instance, he can be sure to have all the support from all his family. Another reason why Cal's life is hard is because his father's boat just shrank in the ocean. Cal was appreciating the vue with his uncle Rafe when huge waves attacked their boat. Cal is stuck in the water and got out, but didn't know if his uncle was able to get out of the freezing water. Therefore, Callum's life will become again more difficult to live.
"Conspiracy 365" is included a lot of questions. The questions are asked both by the reader and Cal. The reader and character don't know what is currently happening in the story. Both don't know who was the stranger in the streets. The author did a superb job by combining the excitement, suspense, and questional side for both the characters of the book and the readers. "Who are you?! I shouted, pushing himm off. What are you talking about?! How did you know my dad?"(Lord 184) These were the questions that Cal asked to himself. The reader also asked himself these questions. The readers could take Cal's place in the novel and do exactly the same thing. The author connected the reader with the main character trying to put the reader in the characters place. (Cal) Therfore being able to live what the characters are living is a very exciting sensation.
Callum Ormond is a very strong teenager. He is strong in two ways. He is strong mentally and physically. Cal lived part of his life with his father. All his adult life will be lived without a father. Being able to live without his father requires a strong mental and being strong in life and living on. Life should be lived on. He got helped from his family and he helped the family support this tragedy. He is also strong physically because when he was stuck in the water, he killed a shark alone. "...The shark charged and I wacked the hook down as hard as I could on its head. Its cold left eyes stared at me as it rolled underwater again." (Lord 170) This quote shows how strong Cal is strong physically. Therefore, being strong both ways is very important in lives like Cal's.
Thursday, December 11, 2014
Rafe is very suspicious about what is happening to Cal’s family. Rafe surly knows something about his brother’s death, but doesn’t want anyone to know about it. Cal discovered a clue about his father’s death. Cal broke in Rafe’s house and found something written on a piece of paper. That same day in the evening, Cal asked his mother about the Ormand Riddle. It was written on a piece of paper in Rafe’s house. “Well, did Dad ever say anything to you about something called the Ormand Riddle? I asked.” “Who told you about that?” “Rafe’s voice made me jump. I swing around. He’d crept in behind me, quiet as a cat, and was standing in the doorway…..” “I want to know where you heard about it!” (Lord 113). Rafe became very furious and aggressive when he heard Cal talk about the Ormand Riddle. Another reason how Rafe knows about something is that he has a gun. The only reason he had a gun was to protect himself or someone. It meant that he or his family was in trouble. Rafe didn’t say anything to Cal or Winifred. Rafe is absolutely hiding something. Therefore, Rafe is creating danger by hiding important things to his family.
Cal is taking a lot of risks in his dangerous life. He is doing everything to find out what really happened to his father. First, he broke into his uncle’s house. Breaking into a person’s house is against the laws. Cal proves that he will do everything to find out what happened to his father. Another reason is that he will be meeting a person he doesn’t even know. A woman called Cal saying she had something Cal’s father wanted to give him. “…..Your father gave me something to give to you.” (Lord 133). “Well I don’t want to say much-especially over the phone. Can you meet me tomorrow at the cenotaph in Memorial Park? Do you know it?” (Lord 133). Call accepted to see Jennifer the nurse. Cal wasn’t sure to trust her, but he took the risk because it was one of his only clues about his father. Therefore, being trustworthy will be proved in the next few chapters.
There are two reasons why Callum has a hard life. First, his father died six months ago. Not having a father in his life is very hard. He will have to live with his mother, sister, and uncle. Cal doesn’t think much about his uncle because Rafe is mean to Cal and Cal doesn’t life him much. Another reason why his life is harsh is because he fell in a set up. When Cal attended the meeting with Jennifer, he got kidnapped. “Two men hauled me up against the car-it looked like a dark Mercedes-and threw a heavy sack over my head. My arms were wrenched behind me and tied up tight, then I was lifted off the ground and tossed like garbage into the trunk.” (Lord 107). Cal thinks that Jennifer may have kidnapped him, but he still doesn’t know for sure. The kidnappers brought him in a closed unknown place and interrogated him about the Ormand Riddle, but Cal didn’t know anything about it. Therefore, Cal fell into a trap by going to the park.
Boges is the Cal’s only and best friend. Boges gave a lot of advice to Cal, but Callum is too distracted into finding the truth. Cal doesn’t hear anything that Boges says to him. There are two reasons why Cal should listen to Boges more often. First, Boges said to Cal not to attend the meeting with Jennifer. “Yeah, but it could be a setup. Don’t forget your dad’s warnings. He mentioned a dangerous woman in his letter remember?” (Lord 130). Boges warned Cal about the danger, but Cal didn’t listen. Another example is when Cal entered his uncle’s house. Boges was outside guarding if anyone would come home. Rafe was coming home. Boges sent a text to Cal saying to come out. Cal says the message, but chose to ignore it because he was still searching for evidence. Therefore, Cal should get more involved in his friends advice and not think only about himself.
Wednesday 17, 2014
Cal's life is getting worse and worse day after day. His life is getting miserable. First, all the money his mother had saved was gone. People had stolen the money that was kept by Callum's father. "'All our money's gone, Call! Dad withdrew just about everything when he was in Ireland.'" (Lord 93). Cal got abducted, and now, all the money his father had saved for the family was gone. Cal's mother worked at a part-time job. She can't pay the mortage and buy the groceries. Another reason is that Cal is really suffering. When Cal was kidnapped, he was brought into an interrogation. The people that kidnapped him tortured him to get information about the Ormand Riddle. Cal managed to escape successfuly, but these people are still looking for Cal. Cal is safe no where like his mother and sister. To sum up, Cal's situation couldn't get worse.
Even if Cal wasn't the one to have done this to his uncle and sister, the police and anyone else would think it was him. When Cal arrived home from Boges, his instant reaction was to touch his uncle and sister's body. This was a huge mistake made by cal. The police would surely examin the bodies and find Cal's finger prints. If there are Cal's finger prints, there is a motif and proof on him. Second of all, cal's kidnappers came home to find him. At that same time, the police was arriving. Cal decided to run away from his kidnappers. Before escaping, he made sure his sister was alive. The police saw Cal running. If the police saw Cal running, they would automatically think it was him the peccant."I thought I'd run my best speed last night, but now I broke my own record. I raced across the road. Car blasted their horns as they braked." (Lord 79). The police would think he was escaping to not be arrested. Therefore, Cal's situation is very problematic.
In this situation, the most important thing Cal needs is a trustworthy friend. In this circomtances, Boges is Cal's best friend. Cal is know a hunted fugitive. He will need money, clothes, food, and other materials. Boges is the only person that can give Cal materials to survive. "....And when you come, please bring some clothes and some money. And I'll need a flashlight, candles, and matches too..." (Lord 67). Cal is favored to have a friend like Boges that doesn't let him go. Another reason is that Cal needs to trust someone. Cal is living a very difficult moment in his life. Trusting someone is important because it will help him into surviving and discovering the truth about his father. Therefore, Cal can't live this tragedy on his own.
Now that Cal is a hunted fugitive he needs a hideout. Like any other fugitive, he needs a secret place to hide. The hideout he chose is favorable. First, it is dark. The avenue where the hideout is placed is not surrounded by a lot of people. It is an old house very spooky and secret. "....I noticed a For Sale sign attached to number 38, a semi-derelict mansion with a very overgrown front yard." (Lord 62). This is a perfect spot for Cal to think about the drawings his father gave him. Second of all, the place Cal chose is small. Cal found out a secret way of getting out if someone tried to enter his hideout. Water is still available in Cal's hideout which is impressive because the hideout is very old. Therefore, Cal couldn't find a better hideout.
Thursday 8, 2014
Conspiracy 365 is a sequel. In this sequel, there are twelve books. Each book is a month. After reading the first book, there are obviously reasons why there should be another book after. First, Cal is kidnapped once again my Vulkan Sligo’s men. Vulkan Sligo was a dangerous criminal. He wanted information from Cal about the angel his father drew. Callum didn’t know anything about the angel. He was actually trying to find out more about it. When Vulkan saw that Cal didn’t know anything, he decided to kill him. Vulkan put Cal in a black hole underground that was being filled with oil. Once the oil had filled all the tank, Cal would be dead. “ ‘You tell me what I want to know or I am going to throw you down into that empty storage tank and screw the manhole cover down real tight. Then we’ll pump in the tanker’s load, and fill it right up to the top. No one will ever find you down there. But don’t worry, you’ll die quickly.’ ”(Lord 5). Cal was dying and had no escape out. “Any minute now, the oil would completely cover my mouth, then my nose…and then I’d be gone.”(Lord 1). This was the last sentence of the story. Another reason is that Cal still didn’t solve the mystery. Cal still needs to find out what his dad was trying to say to him. Therefore, this is just the beginning for Cal.
The mother of Cal doesn’t believe a words he says. She thinks Cal shot Rafe and that he aggressed his little sister. There were proof that stated what Cal’s mother thought. First, the police had found important evidence on Cal. When the police arrived on the crime scene(Cal’s house), they found a gun. On the gun, the police found finger prints that belonged to Cal. “ ‘…and the police found your fingerprints on the gun, Cal.’”(Lord42). Cal’s mother didn’t trust him, even though he said he didn’t attack Rafe and his sister. Another reason is that Cal ran away from his home when he heard steps in the living room. Cal escaped because there were his previous kidnappers in his home. He didn’t escape because of the police. When the police arrived, they recognized Cal running away. To sum up, there are many evidence that prove that Cal was the one harming his sister and his uncle Rafe.
Cal lives in Richmond, Virginia. He doesn’t stay in the same spot because he is now a wanted fugitive and it is risky to not move. Boges brings supplies to Cal such as food, clothes, flashlights, etc. Boges cannot meet with Cal a lot. The police know that Boges is Cal’s best friend, so the police watch Boges attentively. At a moment, Cal will need more food and water. He will have to go in a café or buy some food. The main place where Cal stays is his hideout. It is the most secure place for him in the moment. He also moves a lot because he is finding clues about his father and he has to move to many places to discover new information about his family. It will be very hard for him to stay unseen and at the same time work out his father’s mystery. “….I noticed a ‘For Sale’ sign attached to number 38, a semi-derelict mansion with a very overgrown front yard.”(Lord 62). Therefore, Cal moves a lot in his fight versus the police, family, and kidnappers.
There are two types of conflicts in Conspiracy 365 January. First, it is a person versus person conflict. Cal is facing many people such as the kidnapers. Many people want to know about the Ormand Angel. Another conflict is person versus society. Person versus society conflict may be a person that has a conflict with the law. Cal surely has a problem with the law because he is a wanted fugitive. “…while I was forced to live like a criminal-on the run.”(Lord22). Being a criminal may surely make the law part of it. Therefore, this novel may include a lot of conflicts.
Friday 16, 2015
There are two examples of personification in my novel. First, “Cal must somehow uncover the truth….” (Lord 39). People can’t actually uncover the truth. To uncover the truth means to discover the truth and to know what happened. Another example was, “Uncle Rafe…lying in a pool of blood.” (Lord 82). Uncle Rafe wasn’t actually in a pool of blood. A pool of blood simply means that there was a lot of blood on the kitchen floor. Rafe was lying on blood which seemed to be a lot of blood for Callum. Therefore, personification was used several times in the novel Conspiracy 365.
The Ormand Angel is a huge part in the message of Cal’s father. It is very important, but Cal still doesn’t know it. First, Cal is kidnapped by two groups. Both of the groups ask Cal what he knows about the Angel. “‘What do you know about the Ormand Angel?’ ‘I don’t know anything!” (Lord 10). It seems like a lot of people want to discover the truth about the Ormand Angel. Another reason is that Cal’s father sent him drawings that included an angel. When Cal’s dad was sick, he managed to send drawing’s to Cal. Behind those drawings was a message that Cal had to uncover. One of those drawings included an angel. Therefore, the angel meant a lot, but Cal still didn’t know it.
Since the day a stranger came to call and warned him about the danger he is accounting, a lot of people want Cal dead. “They killed your father. They will kill you. You must survive the next 365 days.” (Lord 135). Cal has put himself in a situation very difficult. First, Cal possesses the most important material into discovering his father’s message. The drawings of his father are the key to discover the meaning behind. A lot of people would kill to get these drawings. This is why the person to have them is in real danger. In addition, Cal managed to escape from his first kidnappers. Cal was also able to see his kidnappers face. The kidnappers are now in danger because Cal has seen their face which compromises their mission. Therefore, Cal has a lot of problems in his life and is far from solving them.
The only person to trust Cal is Boges, his best friend. Even Cal’s mother doesn’t believe him. First, Cal’s mom believes everything that Rafe says to her. “‘Cal please just come home.’ ‘Rafe heard your sister shout at you’.” (Lord 53). Cal can’t do anything to make his own mother believe him. Cal’s mom obviously believes Rafe because he was attacked and Cal is on the run. Another reason is that Rafe is obviously against Cal during this conflict. It is a person versus person conflict because Rafe is lying about Cal and Rafe knows something about the drawings, but doesn’t want to say anything. It is also a person versus society conflict because Cal is wanted by the police. Therefore, even the family can sometimes not be trustworthy.