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389 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 1, 2011
""More editing would have produced a better result- there is an overuse of adverbs ending in -ly. "I jumped slightly," "I thought sarcastically," "feeling slightly uncomfortable," that weigh down the sentences and make the words lose their force. These words could be deleted and, not only would they have no negative affect, but would make the writing stronger, tighter, and more vibrant."