Deflowering Debbie

by Gia Blue

Debbie is heading to F.U.C. in two days and she doesn't want to go off to college as a virgin. Seriously. Enter Mr. Walker, the town's resident deflower-er. So, yeah, Debbie has a cherry and Mr. Walker's getting ready to pop it.

Genres: Erotica, Short Stories, Smut, Erotic Romance

ebook

First published December 17, 2011

About the author

Gia Blue writes smut because she's been cursed with an unbelievably dirty mind. Every erotic thought has her putting pen to paper and then releasing the stories to all of the naughty people in the world. A self-proclaimed whore, nympho and ex-stripper now that she's traded her pole for a Mac. She's embarked on an important mission to convert everyone who reads her books into jolly, one-handed readers. She'd shake your hand, but it looks like you're busy.

Reviews

[Megan Riverina Romantics · Rating 4 out of 5]

4/5 hotness rating

Damn Debbie has some balls! After learning that her two friends were deflowered by her father's friend, Debbie decides to see if he'll do the same for her. She goes about this in the funniest way though. She break into his house with plans to seduce him. And seduce him she does.

This shorty was severly hot! At first I was thinking it might not be but I really liked it. Debbie taking her virginity into her own hands was very refreashing. Plus, lets face it, the first time for women usually sucks. I applaud her decision to go after a man that will show her a good time and not hurt her. I'm just wondering how she's gonna hide it from her dad LOL!

There was some dirty talk in this story that could have been better. Of course, maybe the author wrote it that way to show Debbie's innocence. It was just very basic stuff, a lot of "dirty girl" comments. It would have been nice if our man of the hour, Mr. Walker, spiced it up a little more.

It was nice that Ms. Blue put in that Debbie was 18 and on the pill. I know that sex without protection can irk some readers. Also, her being legal was cool to know. Though I would never consider what happened in this story to be rape, if Debbie was 17, some would.

I was sorry that this ended so fast. After all, Mr. Walker (I find it hilarious that Debbie called him this the whole time) did promise Debbie that he was going to have sex with her more than once. It would have been awesome to read more about him schooling her.

A great fast read that will leave you with one hand busy LOL!

[Readdick · Rating 4 out of 5]

Everything Gia Blue writes is hot. They are all short stories that can be finished in an hour or so. Just don't read them in public unless you want to be embarrassed. The steamy factor makes you squirm.

[Heather in FL · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was on the short side. Debbie was singularly focused on her goal. She didn't want to be a virgin when she went to college, but none of the boys in her town would touch her because of her older brother, so she sneaks into her dad's friend's home and seduces him into taking her virginity. And when I say seduces, she really didn't have to try very hard. And apparently Mr. Walker is particularly adept at taking virginities. Based on what I read of his technique, I'm not sure what makes him special? Sure he's a hot older guy, but it didn't seem like he made it particularly comfortable for a first time. But with the dirty talk that was flying out of their mouths, maybe pain was just a secondary thing. :-) She enjoyed everything he did to her, so he did something right.

[Angela · Rating 3 out of 5]

Deflowering Debbie is a short erotica by Gia Blue. In this story, we meet Debbie, a virgin who's ready to go to college a woman. Her two friends have told her that Mr Walker deflowered them and is amazing in bed. She takes his key, hidden outside, and lets herself into his house. She waits until the shower stops and sneaks into his room. She's wearing only a man's dress shirt with one button done. She tells him she wants him to take her virginity before she leaves for school. He gives her a chance to change her mind and when she gives him the go ahead, he gives in. They have hot sex and she can leave a happy, happy, woman. The story was good, short, and hot.