Nothing worked for me with this book, the plot or the writing, nor the hurried 'telling' rather than 'showing' ending. But I know what effort it takes to write anything so I'm not going to say more than that about the writing, but I am going to take issue with the copy editing:
- towards the end of the novel one of the character begins to think in the present tense (all the rest is in the past tense)
- many words are repeated (the word 'all' appears in the space of three sentences, six times)
- there is a character called Tacita (unusual name, yes?). Three people are in a car, one of whom is Tacita's husband, while the other two don't know that fact, and would be surprised to learn it. The husband mentions his wife's name aloud in the car. The other two characters don't mention it. Three pages on, and the husband mentions Tacita again, and now the other two say 'Tacita!' 'Your wife is Tacita'! Something went badly wrong there.