Margaret Mary Parker aka Daisy, a suburban housewife in New York State commandeered by her erstwhile school friend , Irene Day, into looking after Keiko Kitigawa an eighteen year old Japanese Hiroshima maiden who came to the USA for surgery on her deformed face . Keiko was chosen to be given the opportunity of surgery as part of the Hiroshima Project headed by Mr. Atchity and Dr. Carey because she was a beautiful young woman who spoke excellent English and had the intelligence to recognise this was a way to settle in USA and leave behind a place where her mother, grandfather and neighbour had died. The uncle and aunt who were responsible for her didn't love her and she felt totally isolated. Also because she was racked with quilt (survival) and did not help a lady with a baby at the time of the bombing Keiko developed into a manipulative girl who wanted everything her own terms. As the story progresses you wonder whom is more manipulating -Keiko or the Project. In all of this childless Daisy gives her love and commitment to Keiko but all in vain.
The inhabitants of Riverside Meadows were great – they could be representative of any Residents Association in any part of the world. They all kept themselves to themselves until there was a possibility the outside world was going to turn their world upside down. Walter going to prison did it and Joan Palmer was the Lawrence’s defence and stopped the Residents Committee kicking them out of Riverside under the ‘grave misconduct clause’. Joan turned from enemy to friend, talking about Keiko and the Project, the snub by Keiko and the gathering of 800 people at Carnegie Hall who listened to Keiko and how afterwards she had sung with Paul Robson. None of this was shared with Daisy who poured so much of herself into the care of Keiko after her operation.
Trying to bring the event of 6th August 1945 to my attention was ill-conceived using the Hiroshima Maiden is the tool. The novel never really me to think there was any reason for Keiko to destroy, or at least try to destroy Daisy without some sort of half-unravelled life. Ultimately I didn’t get it. Hiroshima I got, the guts of the story I got, but put the two together and they remained two stories running in parallel.
The story unfolds as life does – with ethical issues speeding up the process only for it to de-accelerate when least expected. The dream that Daisy had for this girl to become a ‘daughter’ was unrealistic with Keiko having no relationship with her at all, always calling her Mrs Lawrence, never showing any warmth, no instinctive clutching for a person full of empathy and care. The reader was always trying to get some contact between Keiko and Daisy and that was why I finished the novel. It never came – perhaps that was the author’s intent.
The American characters seemed very real – even dear Tom the photographer and especially how I imagined 1950’s American sophisticate – Irene and home loving Daisy who was destined to remain childless. The real problem was with Keiko Kitigawa who I could only see as some sort of spectre, unreal, untouchable, uncontained. It felt as though you could walk right through her. She lied, she cheated, she manipulated as they all did but she didn’t seem real, not young or old, even getting Walter into jail was something she felt empowered to do.
Hiroshima’s Maiden was chosen by sponsors to come to the USA and have her disfigurement removed. Keiko seemed the ideal choice when she was examined by Dr. Carey and talked to by Mr.Atchity at the bomb Casualty Commission at the end of 1951. beautiful, good spoken English, eighteen, said all the right things to the men interviewing her, but she had her agenda , it seemed to get away from ‘survivors’ guilt, her aunt and uncle, her own conscience for not helping the woman with the child. The men also were not as they seemed, the great and the good who were prepared to prey on this young person‘s shattered life.
The story took me from March 1952 to December 1952, all about Keiko in America although details about Tom and Daisy continued until 1968. So where is the end? I guess it is the moment Keiko and Daisy meet for the last time near Irene’s apartment, just before Keiko goes on her tour after the Hydrogen Bomb Test on the Atoll in the Marshall Islands.