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Mass Market Paperback
First published January 1, 1979
She filled her blue knit dress the way a miser fills his coffers. The strand of pearls around her neck shone like stars on a newly sewn flag. A thatch of auburn hair angled across her forehead and disappeared behind her ear. The tiny gold turtle pinned over her left breast was as smug as Governor Brown.Bad isn’t it? But it gets worse. A few pages later, another woman is described:
Her white blouse was as stiff as linoleum. The skin at her wrists and ankles was as brown and smooth as a well-licked cone.Chandleresque metaphors, certainly. But Chandleresque metaphors devoid of grace, aptness, or wit.
We stuttered our way down Nineteenth Avenue, wasting brakes and tires and gas and time. After ten minutes of that we turned east on Kennedy Drive and wound through Golden Gate Park. The park serves as a conduit for the evening fog, sucks it in from the ocean like a giant vacuum cleaner, and as I drove along the road the steamy clouds slipped reluctantly away from the hood of my car like the fingers of a drowning man.
It was dark in the park, as dark as despair. There were people in there doing everything from making love to plotting murder. I turned on my heater and drove a little faster.