Submissive One

by Susie Taylor

*******************!!!!!!PUBLISHER WARNING!!!!!!!*********************The contents of this book are known to cause spontaneous wetness in women and hardness in men.This story contains shockingly explicit and sexually charged scenes.It is NOT your mother's erotica!Buy at your own risk (and read alone!) the course of the past two years, through several relationships, I’d come to realize I needed more from sex. At first, I didn’t know what ‘more’ was until I’d come across a BDSM site on the internet several months ago. I read all the erotic stories and explored the profiles and just couldn’t get enough. I began recounting my past sexual experiences and everything began to make sense – the brief asphyxiation, the odd spanking, the momentary restraint and physical play. I was submissive. It was like being a member of a club I didn’t know existed.Excited and curious, I created a profile on the site, stated my desires as best I could, and entered into a few chat rooms with various Doms. Strangely, I found it easy to share my fantasies with a stranger and discovered much more than even I knew about myself. Now I was faced with a dilemma -- how could I ever share my submissive fantasies with Marc. I was curious to try a scene but what would he say. I didn’t want to jeopardize our relationship so I resigned myself to the internet and focused on what I had with Marc....Before I could respond, he’d stood over me and with a menacing look and sneered, “So, little one, we’ve been playing on the Internet have we? Let’s see what we have learned. Greet your Master properly then.” My heart stopped. How did he know? What was going on here? My mind was racing. Instinctively I knew that if I didn’t please him I would regret it. I tried to remember the stories I’d read and what the women had done but it was all a blur. “Well?” he bellowed. I snapped back to reality and reluctantly slid off the couch onto the floor. I sat on my haunches, back straight, chest out, hands behind my back, and lowered my head. “Yes, Master,” I whispered.

9 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 23, 2011

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Reviews

[carol · Rating 3 out of 5]

Just 3 stars for a short story...I feel it should have been and still could be developed into at least a good novella and instead of one short experience link into the training of both the female as a submissive and training of Marc into her Dom by Jan the Master. It shows how the female needed more from her relationship with Marc even though it was pretty good in Vanilla terms. How she researches BDSM links on the inet and communicates with an unknown Master, who sometime later down the line appears as Marc's guest and initiates her into the start of her role as a submissive....then hands her to Marc but here the story ends...leaving the reader feeling a little let down....maybe it will be continued. English standard is above average with very few errors.