I really did love Ellen Hopkins' earlier works, like Crank, Glass, and Impulse, but there are a few I didn't particularly like, and this was one of them (alongside Fallout, Burned, and Identical). The thing about these prose books is that the characters, realistic-ness, and the situations drive them. Scenery, detail, those things take a back burner as far as these stories are concerned. Sadly, this story falls short on both plot and character development, which drags the whole thing downhill right from the beginning.
Now, I did not read Triangles, but here is what we can gleen from the characters in THIS book without revealing the whole plot:
Mikayla: A seventeen year old girl who, like all of Ellen's female characters, knows that she is SO in love with a boy, and they are going to live happily ever after. Until she gets pregnant. Now, while I do have to give props for tackling the very real issue of teenage pregnancy and adoption vs. abortion vs. keeping the child, there were a few issues that just didn't sit. Dylan, the father, was not sympathetic. We didn't get anything from his POV that didn't paint him as a jerk, nor did we see anything from Mikayla's POV that didn't portray him as a moron. This is all mixed with the blandness of Mikayla's character telling the story, so of course, whenever I saw these chapters coming, I wanted to gag.
Harley: Probably the least sympathetic and hardest character in the book to connect to. Harley is a 13-14 year old girl obsessed with boys. And who could blame her? Her mother is completely irresponsible. She doesn't know her father and his new wife all too well, or she'd know Harley's soon-to-be stepmother is no one you'd want to leave a child with. Harley herself is as immature as they come. She purposefully dresses skimpy and puts herself out to attract guys, which is disgusting, and ... she's an idiot. What happens to her is the other character's fault, and it's a horrible thing, but at the same time ... Harley could have prevented what happened. If she'd just calmed down for three seconds and really looked at this person, she would have been fine. But of course not. Because all 14 year old girls are stupid and boy crazy.
Shane: Stereotypical gay guy from all Ellen's books. Sweet and sympathetic, while raving about how gays are still not accepted anywhere. And by the way he writes, I mean anywhere, because every gay he meets is not accepted by anyone. What, are we living in the 1800's again? Why didn't I get the memo? His schtick is that he ends up going out with someone with HIV. And that would be a really original and interesting plot if the HIV served more a purpose. It's worried about for maybe 1/4th of the book, and then, not much. Alex, the HIV kid, is just your typical nice guy boyfriend, with the added tragedy past of molestation, simply for shock value's sake.
All in all, the characters are either boring, stereotypical, or stupid. The issues Ellen tries to tackle come across wrong half the time, or aren't addressed as thoroughly as they could have been, and by the end of the book I was glad to put it down. She could make due with doing more research next time, and rather than adding so much shock value, maybe Ms. Hopkins could focus on the problems she actually puts forth and explore them based on real interviews she has with people who have experienced it, not on how she thinks people think or might handle it.