Not Proper Enough

Reforming the Scoundrels #2

by Carolyn Jewel

A woman should always keep her standards...

Meant to be?

The Marquess of Fenris has loved Lady Eugenia from the day he first set eyes on her. Five years ago, pride caused him to earn her enmity. Now she's widowed, and he's determined to make amends and win her heart.  But with their near explosive attraction, can he resist his desire long enough to court her properly?

After the death of her beloved husband, Lady Eugenia Bryant has come to London to build a new life. Despite the gift of a medallion said to have the power to unite the wearer with her perfect match, Eugenia believes she won't love again. And yet, amid the social whirl of chaperoning a young friend through her first Season, she finds a second chance at happiness.

Unfortunately, the Marquess of Fenris threatens her newfound peace. Eugenia dislikes the man, but the handsome and wealthy heir to a dukedom is more charming than he has a right to be. Constantly underfoot, the rogue disturbs her heart, alternately delighting and scandalizing her.  And when their relationship takes a highly improper turn, Eugenia must decide if the wrong man isn’t the right one after all.

Genres: Historical Romance, Historical, Romance, Regency, Enemies To Lovers, Historical Fiction, Erotica

296 pages, Mass Market Paperback

First published September 4, 2012

About the author

Carolyn Jewel was born on a moonless night. That darkness was seared into her soul and she became an award winning and USA Today bestselling author of historical and paranormal romance. She has a very dusty car and a Master’s degree in English that proves useful at the oddest times. An avid fan of fine chocolate, finer heroines, Bollywood films, and heroism in all forms, she has two cats and a dog. Also a son. One of the cats is his.

Reviews

[Mandi · Rating 4 out of 5]

Favorite Quote: “I don’t like you,” she whispered. “Not even a little.”

“I know.” He lowered his head to hers, and he thought, To hell with decency. And to bloody hell with caution, “Isn’t it delicious this way?”

I’m a huge fan of Carolyn Jewel’s historicals. Last year I read Not Wicked Enough and I loved it, so when Not Proper Enough showed up in my mailbox, I couldn’t wait to start it. I feel like she is an expert at building wicked sexual tension. Her characters are so alive and engaging. This one really worked for me on all levels.

Lady Eugenia has been widowed for four years. She deeply loved her late husband and while she is moving on with her life, she will always hold him in deep regard. She has taken the young Hester, under her wing for the current season to help her find a husband. Hester has a large part in this book. She is not drop dead beautiful, although she has a nice figure people seem to enjoy. She is a bit clumsy, but extremely intelligent. Eugenia knows she will have her hands full trying to find a suitor for her. Being at many social engagements means she will run into her nemesis, The Marquess of Fenris, or Fox. Fox has had feelings for Eugenia for a long time. When it became clear to Fox years ago that his best friend Robert had won her heart, Fox didn’t handle the situation well. Instead of being happy for his friend, he slung Eugenia’s name through the mud, losing a best friend in the process. Fox has matured since then, and after having an illicit dream staring Eugenia he sets out to try to seduce her once again. He knows she is not living her life as fully as she can, and he wants to show her just what a future with him can be like.

This seems a very brief summary of a book that is so full of intense emotions. When this book starts, Eugenia truly hates Fox. He was so cruel to her years ago, and it is very hard for her to see any good in him. Fox knows this and starts the arduous process of wooing her, which starts by coming to Hester’s defense when she is publicly embarrassed at a ball. Eugenia is grateful that he helped the situation, yet is stubborn to assume Fox is now a better man. While Hester and Fox’s father (a duke) start a very unlikely friendship, Eugenia and Fox start to spend more time together too. Fox is very devilish. He knows just what to say or do to get under Eugenia’s skin. I think Eugenia realizes much faster than she would ever admit that Fox is a now a honorable and decent man. What I really like is that the author lets their relationship unfold at such a slow, torturous pace. Eugenia can’t deny her physical lust for Fox, but she still has to come to terms that she is attracted to someone other than Robert. At the end, when she has to admit she loves Fox, it may have felt a tiny bit rushed, but that is just a little niggle I have.

I love how blunt this romance is too. It’s dirty and fierce. Eugenia almost revels in the fact that she hates him, yet can’t seem to shake him off. They take pleasure from each other, sometimes rough, sometimes drawing it out as long as they can. The romance in this book is so intense that you can’t help but feel the chemistry between these two. I feel like this is where Carolyn Jewel shines. Not just her amazing sexual relationship she builds for her characters, but their overall interactions. Their banter is so smart and fast. Humor, put downs, sarcasm, it all comes through so well. These are two mature people who have been through a lot in their life and watching them come to terms with each other is really a treat.

I found this book to be a clever, very sensual romance. Well done.

Rating: A-

[Sammy Loves Books · Rating 3 out of 5]

*****3.5 Improper Stars*****



The Marquess of Fenris wanted Lady Eugenia from the moment he laid eyes on her. But when she showed no interest in him, and fell in love with his friend, Robert, he publicly talked down about her.

Lady Eugenia is now four years a widow, but she still hates Fenris. How could she not? He publicly degraded her and said that she was not worthy of his friend. Eugenia doesn't know that his actions were inspired by immature jealousy.



Eugena is disgusted with herself for even fining Fenris attractive. She hates him with a passion, but every time he smiles at her the ice around her heart melts.

Fenris is obsessed with Eugena. He royally screwed things up between them when he was young. Now he not only hopes to gain her forgiveness, he hopes to win her heart. The sexual chemistry between these two is off the charts. And their behavior is scandalous.



The only problem is that Fenris may be able to seduce Eugena sexually, but her heart still belongs to her late husband. I thoroughly enjoyed Fenris' inner dialogue. He was always honest and an open book. And he was such a gentleman. I loved him more then Eugena. She was a bit rigid and stubborn for my tastes. But that made for great angst, as Fenris worked at winning her heart.

There was a second romance that budded in the background with the young girl Eugena was chaperoning. I would have loved more details of how they professed their love to each other, but no time was dedicated to how they finally came together. Maybe they will get a novella. I would love to read about Camber falling in love.

This was a solid 3.5 stars. I love Carolyn Jewel's heroes and heroines. The secondary characters were vibrant and well developed. I look forward to the third book in this series.

[Lisa · Rating 4 out of 5]

Lady Eugenia has come to London to continue on with her life after the death of her beloved husband by sponsoring a young lady. What she does not expect is to run into the man that caused her so much pain when she married her husband. The Marquess of Fenris was her husbands best friend and did not think Eugenia was good enough for his friend. It also didn't help that he was immensely attracted to her himself but he stood aside and it cost him his friendship for some rude comments he made about Eugenia. Seeing Eugenia again at a ball, he knows that he can not let her slip away again. Fenris sets about to seduce Eugenia in any way possible. Eugenia absolutely can not stand Fenris though and is frustrated by her attraction, both body and mind, to the man that seemed to despise her so long ago. With Fenris' wicked touches and words whispered to her, she soon finds herself sharing part of herself with him. However, can Fenris break down all the shell that Eugenia has surrounded herself in and show her that true love can happen twice, that one does not need to be proper at all times?

This was another delicious, detailed, smoldering romance from Carolyn Jewel. Just like the previous book, Not Wicked Enough, I loved the attention to the fashion detail and surroundings. I loved the snappy, almost bitter banter between our couple in the beginning and how that quickly turned into a smoldering, passionate affair that led to a whole new slew of emotions. Eugenia loved her husband deeply and finds it hard to bear that she is moving on, and with a man that hurt her years ago. She finds Fenris hard to resist though as he is always showing up, taunting her with promises of what they could share together. Eugenia is always proper and then Fenris shows up, teaching her to smoke, sharing her first whiskey...tempting her to loosen up and let in a bit of un-properness. The love they share is blazing hot yet tender and romantic all at the same. There is a bit of a side story featuring Eugenia's charge and Fenris' father that adds in a dose of humor as the pair of them are enamored with botany. I quickly saw where that relationship was headed and I would have liked to have seen a bit more of that, odd as it was. Overall, a very strong battle of wills romance that is deeply sensual and breathtakingly enduring. A satisfying treat for all romance readers! 4 stars

Review copy won from the author, thank you!

[ᑭᑌᑎƳᗩ [Punya Reviews...] · Rating 3 out of 5]

My review contains spoilers and they're mostly my thoughts as I went with the book...

Caution: More rants, disjointed ones at best. If you don’t like rants and snarky reviews, don’t proceed and all that...

I’m disappointed. Yes. So, I’ll just get to the point and my review. I was kind of enjoying Not Proper Enough, until about into 60% of the book. Then it started going downhill. I started hating Ginny and wanted to shake Fox, asking him to ditch her and come get me!!! I thought some of the stuffs in the end the convoluted the plot, made it boring. Dragging. Gosh, I really wanted to love this book because I LOVE a good love/hate theme. *sigh*

From book 1, Not Wicked Enough, we knew that Eugenia or Ginny lost her husband, Robert, a few years earlier. She’s Duke of Mountjoy’s younger sister. She also has another brother, Nigel. In book 1, Ginny’s friend Lily came to visit her and in the course of a few weeks ‘fell in love’ with Mountjoy (vice versa). Mountjoy was almost engaged to a local girl Jane at that time. FYI: if you don’t know already, I hated that book. It was also revealed that Jane and Nigel had ‘a thang’ for each-other and she already got pregnant by him. So, both pairs are married for some months now when this story starts.

We knew that Fox, the Marquess of Fenris, the heir to the Duke of Camber, was Robert’s best friend. But Fox is said to be a prude and very aware of his nobility. Ginny and her brothers were living in a farm with their aunt’s family when Mountjoy was sought out by the lawyers and given the title because he was the only remaining heir to a dying line. Fox and his noble father, the Duke, took a note of this and so, Fox didn’t think Ginny was a good enough for his best friend. He was vehemently against this match, and with that, his enmity, sort of, started with the Hamptons (Mountjoy’s family name). At least that was on the outside. In reality, Fox fell for Ginny from the first moment. But he was a confused young man, and angry that she, the most beautiful girl he’d ever met, chose his deformed friend and fell in love with, instead of him. But of course, Ginny doesn’t know any of this and still hates Fox from the bottom of her heart.

We don’t know much about Robert, but that he was soooo nice that Ginny can’t but mention him always. I understand that she was in love with her husband and it was reciprocated. It was also said that even though he was physically somewhat deformed, Robert was otherwise functional. Robert wasn’t good looking but he made it up with his genius mind. Everyone loved him. Ginny’s life with Robert or Robert himself was never explored well, unless from Fox and Ginny’s musings, so I felt that I didn’t know this man who was such a center of Ginny’s life that she tormented Fox about this until the very end. Thus, I’m not sure how much of the torment Fox went through was valid and how much of it was b*tching on Ginny’s part.

(I mean C’MON!!! He’s been dead for over 4 years. Isn’t that time to move on???? But, Ginny obviously didn’t.)

From book 1, it was pretty clear that Fox was determined to put all sorts of enmity behind. There is a bitter family history between his and Lily’s. I won’t waste my time on that (explained the my review of book 1) but Lily is actually his cousin. He made amends with her. Now, he’s determined to make amends with Ginny and possibly, convince her to become a part of his life. Most certainly he wants her in his bed, at any cost. When the story starts, we find Fox having an erotic dream about Ginny (proves just how much he was into her as dreams about Ginny were common to him) and afterwards, Robert coming to visit him, asking him to take care of ‘the love of his life’. Fox, the poor sod, agrees to his ghostly best friend’s orders. Their relationship fell apart after that debacle, so how can he say no?

Easier said than done! But, Fox is determined.

Then, we come to Ginny POV about Fox and it’s revealed that she was actually fascinated by Fox’s good looks, his perfect carriage and lifestyle, fastidiousness etc. She still is attracted to him, which makes her uncomfortable. With her brothers and their wives away, Ginny was helping this young girl, the sister of a friend of Robert’s, Hester, into the society. Ginny’s backing would really help the girl to get a husband, who is not the most good looking or graceful girl in the world. Hester might have her foibles but she’s smart and loves anything and everything about botany and gardening. But, alas! Botany and gardening isn’t the most interesting topic for the young beaus. So, Ginny is kind of worried about it. Then there are some who’d always try to disgrace Hester because she’s a country bred girl and doesn’t belong here. I really loved Hester. Anyway, along with her social schedules, that more often than not involved Hester, Ginny was also dodging Fox’s ‘unwanted’ attentions. He’d sought her out a lot. In book 1, the level of hatred Ginny harbored for Fox was revealed when she out and out cut him in front of everyone more than once. But here, in one of the balls, when someone was pestering Hester, Fox comes to her rescues, totally surprising Ginny. He was also genuinely glad to have met her when he learns of her identity. Hester’s brother was also Fox’s old friend. Ginny was scared that Fox would also cut Hester because of her background, and so, his defense of her impressed Ginny.

From there, Fox invites them both to Bouverie, Camber’s mansion-like townhouse. Ginny was very reluctant but Hester was not. She is a very open and artless girl. Her meeting with the fifty-something Duke becomes a hit. Yes, the Duke apparently is another connoisseur of anything botany and gardening! Both Fox and Ginny is surprised by the usually gloomy and cranky Duke’s change of demeanor where Hester was concerned. But they both (mostly Ginny) took it as if the Duke saw Hester as the daughter he never had. But I felt that his changes weren’t due to fatherly affection. It wasn’t out and out lust, because none was shown in that sense but he was nevertheless fascinated by Hester on an odd level. Even I, for the most part of the book, felt the suspense about what will happen to this relationship. Will it be someone else? Or will it be the Duke for Hester?

These meetings at Bouverie and other outings, bring Ginny and Fox somewhat close. They have their usual banters, with cutting remarks from Ginny and Fox trying to smooth it up. But Ginny was appreciative because she knew Camber and Fenris’s endorsement would help Hester in the society. One day at Bouverie, while Camber and Hester is busy with their discussions about plants, soils and temperature, Fox takes Ginny to these secret apartments of the house called the Turkish house. It was built by Fox’s grandfather and was used as his tryst spot. The apartments were consist of a Turkish bath and a big room full of Turkish harem setting, pillows and silk curtains (duh, so typical) and... mirrors! In almost every wall. (Don’t even ask!! The old man was a pervert!!) The room even had a secret doorway that led to the back alleyway to conveniently smuggle women through it. *shakes her head* Fox was trying to shock Ginny, who in his eyes is a proper young widow, with these details and blah-di-blah when Ginny suddenly realized that even though Camber, Fox’s father disapproves of this, Fox doesn’t. Instead, it was pretty sure from his obsession about the rooms that he shares his grandfather’s proclivities! (and CJ’s obvious attempt to prove us that Fox, indeed, isn’t as ‘prudish’ as we were led to believe. I wasn’t amused BTW.) But the scene was started out to be something sexy as Fox didn’t deny or confirm anything. He was focused on Ginny and yes, at one point they kiss and almost ended up having sex. Just when I thought OMG this is so freakin’ hot, Fox’s musing confirms that yep, he’s had whores in here. It felt like I was doused with ice-cold water.

(WHY OH WHY??? WHY do I have to know that? OH WHY, F*CK WHY??? *barf*)

But the ‘fun’ of proving us that Fox isn’t the prude (I believe proper is the word) we thought him to be continued, making me cranky as hell. There was nothing subtle about the whole process, just as book 1. In one of the outings with Fox and Camber, we were forced to endure a scene with one of Fox’s ex-mistresses. We are also forced to learn of the whole sordid details of his liaison with this widow older than him. I wasn’t amused, at all. It was said that he started the affair with her when he was quite young. He was so enamored of her that he even proposed to her but she turned him down. He never really broke off with her entirely and has had on and off sex with her, even when they were with other people. The last time he’s f*cked her was about a year ago, my guessing, just before we see him in book 1.

This scene was ENTIRELY UNNECESSARY, as was the whole not-so-amusing details of this liaison. Why on earth would I want to know about all these crap? She wasn’t even seen anywhere ever after that scene... No, actually she was, when Fox and Ginny would so cozily discuss Fox’s ex-lovers and whatever the f*ck he did with them (just like book 1 and other CJ HRs). Ginny was soooooooooo interested to know what he did, she’d ask him questions like ‘Did you ever do ‘it’ against the wall before?’ Or, ‘Have your lovers ever told you how beautiful your c*ck is?... I assure you they weren’t lying!’

(HOLY F*CK!! Someone hold me while I barf a bit more!!!!! I HATE this trend of CJ’s vehemently, as I’d do in any other novel. I don’t care to see or read or hear about H’s OWs, any sex scene, so help me God, if the H is discussing them with the h as if it’s a fun subject!!!)

The only thing that kept me going is the fact that whatever Fox felt for Ginny was very genuine. His musings would tell you so. His vulnerability about if he’ll have Ginny in his life or not, and then the fear of losing her once he did, would make you ache for him. More than once, he proved that he’s crazy, insane for her. Even when I was annoyed by the talks of his mistresses, his vulnerabilities that he won’t be able to live up to Ginny’s expectations tore at my heart.

But what did Ginny do? She kept on telling him she’d NEVER love him or care for him like her one true love, Robert. She kept it up until the very last chapter of the book. She didn’t like Fox calling her Ginny at first, even rudely said that to him. Come to think of it, she was rude to him or pushing him away almost always.

As Fox and Ginny’s relationship starts to improve (if I can call it that), she begins to like him and next would contradict herself by thinking how she could like this man whom she hated so loudly for such a long time. She was forever riddled with this confusion. (My reaction: GROW THE F*CK UP, B*TCH!!) Ginny was, at first, unsure. She even gave Fox that medallion, which is supposed to have magical powers. Lovers uniting with each-other or some such thing. Lily passed it on to her and I was instantly scared about this book. I must say, rightly so! The medallion is pure evil I tell you!!!! Of course, Ginny wanted a d*ck and Fox was a great candidate. He was just there, panting endlessly, wanting to give it to her (if it sounds familiar to my review of book 1, not my fault). Their ‘dance of seduction’ kept going with kisses and fondlings. Fox kept on seducing her with his words. Ginny can’t think of anything but having sex. Why not when he’s so willing? After all, no one will know. It’ll be just a secret affair. But Fox, the poor moron, he’d have Ginny in any term. He has a plan of his own. Ginny very plainly tells him their affair would go nowhere but sex, and would end as any affair does. Fox knew he’d never tire of her. Hell, he had springs on his step thinking about it, that at last he’d have his Ginny.

They visit the opera, courtesy of Camber and there is this odd incident, which was vague at best because I don’t know why Ginny was so mad at Fox. I just felt she wanted to blame someone for her stupidity and Fox was, again, the best candidate for it. Anyway, when she’s outside, trying to take fresh air, Ginny’s accosted by this drunkard, who confused her with a courtesan. Then suddenly, Fox to the rescue!! After that, they decide to have sex. I was glad that Fox didn’t take her to Bouverie and that freakin’ Turkish house. Personally, I would’ve ordered to have it tore down. Instead, he took her to his own bachelor quarters. And, boy oh boy, when they get down to the business, it was hot. Hands down, I give credit to Fox. He was sexy, really sexy and demonstrated his affections well. But, I didn’t like the forced f-words from him. He was this perfect Marquess, who’s suddenly spewing f-words almost like Colin Ferrell (not amusing at all!!). Once or twice, I did find it sexy but most of the times, not... I felt that CJ was still trying so hard to prove that Fox is not proper. Ugh!

(Damn it to hell!!! I get that already! If his sordid liaisons, crappy details and discussions didn’t prove it well enough, the sex scenes did. He did f*ck good as per his words! I bow down to his superiority... I might’ve even begun wanting his d*ck for myself and kick Ginny out of the story but enough was enough!!!!!)

The next parts of the story were full of sex scenes, quite a few back to back. Here and there, everywhere, wherever Fox could get his hands on Ginny. Can’t blame the man, he couldn’t get enough of his Ginny. He was already a fool in love and he expressed his feelings through his dirty words, his body... his d*ck for crying out loud, if not with out and out ILU. No, wait a minute, he actually said ‘my love’ to Ginny at one point, who was, at first surprised, and then just dismissed it. Fox’s feelings never really mattered to her IMO, or else she couldn’t have played with his emotions in such a way. She turned out to be this eeevail b*tch and robbed me off my speech! Whenever Fox tried to get into a deeper level of their relationship, Ginny would dodge his words. I HATED it! They would have this silly banter of ‘Ihateyou’s from Ginny, even when they were going at ‘it’ like bunnies.

It grew old and tiresome and started pissing me off even more.

We meet another of Fox’s close friends, a Lord Aigen. He’s a Scot by birth, a charming fellow. Ginny was hopeful at first that he’d be a good husband material for Hester. But Hester was totally into her gardening and by now, Camber. That’s what she called the Duke already. I wasn’t still sure what’s going to happen. We meet a few other candidates for Hester’s hands but she, apparently, isn’t really interested in any of them in that way. Confusing but at least, I liked her throughout.

Then some moron said something horrible about Ginny and Fox is mad as a hell cat. A duel ensued pronto. Ginny tries to make him stop, mostly because she couldn’t take it on her conscience if Fox or the other man die in the duel. Note, by now, Ginny was beginning to feel something for Fox and it was looking something horribly close to love. She still won’t come out and say it out loud, let alone consider marriage. I mean, of course she’d never love anyone like Robert. Yes, the sex is hot and Fox is a God in bed but OMFG, love him, marry him??? Impossible!! She can’t love or marry Fenris! I mean its FENRIS FFS. That FENRIS whom she hated with a vengeance! It’s not only impossible but abnormal!! <-- I’m not repeating myself but only stating Ginny’s thoughts plainly. When I said she kept this up till the end, I meant it. She ruthlessly mowed down anything that came close to love for Fox and might’ve ‘challenged’ her devotion to Robert.

(So b*tch, you can f*ck him all you like but you wouldn’t even relent and confess that you feel something for him, when he’s simply crazy for your affections and acceptance?? And I thought you were nice and smart. More fool me!)

God, I don’t know how I kept on reading, but I did. The story began to drag too. It should’ve ended after that duel IMO. When Aigen comes with the news that Fox is unharmed, she goes to him. Right now, Fox is thinking about pregnancy, something Ginny really didn’t care about. Not sure why. Fox wanted Ginny so much, if a pregnancy brought them together, he’ll have that too. But Ginny was not that sure. She kept dodging with ifs and whens. Poor Fox, I really begin to feel for him. Then there is a fire at Mountjoy’s townhouse... Ginny and Hester takes shelter in Bouverie. Ginny can’t but run to Fox when she’s distressed (and end up having sex). Somehow, in the all the hullaballoo, Fox convinced her to marry him. They did pronto, with a special license. You know what Ginny’s thoughts were? Read the paragraph just above this where I stated her thoughts for the whole book. She was again, like, ‘what the hell did I just do? I married Fenris????’

(Kill me, someone. I was speechless. Fuming. Mad and just............. mad!!!)

I was never convinced she EVER loved Fox. No, just NO!! When she finally said ILU, it was after the consummation sex, felt forced, nonchalant... just a cue to end the story. Hester did end up with Camber, which was another mess. The story ended with the general idea that Aigen and Jane’s younger sister, Caroline would have the next book. By that time, I didn’t care and heaved a sigh of relief. The medallion has inevitably been passed on to Aigen by Fox. I’m scared, again... Would I read the later installments? Call me a glutton for punishment but yes, I probably will.

3.5 stars ONLY for Fox. I loved him and I stand by it. I’m ashamed that CJ paired him with that emotionally stunted b*tch.

[Ruth · Rating 2 out of 5]

I got this one from Goodreads Firsts, and was really looking forward to reading it. I've read a few by this author, and really enjoyed the writing and the characters.

Unfortunately, I was a bit disappointed with this one, and it ended up as a 2 stars "It was OK".

So, what did I like?

- This is a second-in-the-series and it didn't bother me at all. I didn't need to know anything about the characters from the first book to know what was going on, and there weren't more than a couple of sentences mentioning the hero and heroine from that one. I do like series that don't make you feel you HAVE to buy every single book to know what the hell is going on.

- The author has a nice, light touch with the plot. It flows and moves along without being boring, or insulting the reader's intelligence by laboring over every single little step.

What did I not like so much?

- Well, this one is a bit hard to explain, so be patient.. There was too much meaningless sex between the hero and heroine, and it spoilt it for me. I understand that he's an oversexed manwhore-god and she's a sexually-deprived widow, but they got physical far too quickly for my liking. The hero essentially won the heroine over by placing her in uncomfortable situations and then taking advantage of her, and the heroine going along with it against her better judgement. And they were at it ALL THE TIME. Sure, the sexy bits were hot, but I didn't much enjoy reading them.

- Most of the secondary characters were far more interesting than either the hero or heroine. From the gun-wielding maid to the duke obsessed with sketching violets, from the niece more interested in soil and horticulture than fashion to the lord who recites bad poetry with a broad Scots accent, they were all far more intriguing than the oversexed hero, who says "fuck" far too often to be interesting, or the grieving widow who spends the whole time hating the hero, but clearly liking everything about him. In fact, I'd much rather have had the secondary romance as the primary romance. I think it would have been far more interesting.

- There were a couple of irritating stylistic "ticks" which I found reduced my enjoyment. There was a lot of belly tugging, clenching or twitching (you know when the hero/heroine meets the gaze of the heroine/hero), and the hero spends a lot of time with his head inclined/cocked (poor chap, I wandered if he had a stiff neck). The dialogue was also too close to the fine-line between snappy and snarky for my tastes. There's witty and there's just unpleasant.

- I found a couple of historical inaccuracies which could have been cleared up in a matter of 5 minutes on wikipedia (OK, I'm being really pedantic here, but it does actually annoy me a bit). The daughter of a duke who marries a commoner is not addressed as "Mrs. Bryant", but as the "Lady Eugenia Bryant". Daughters of the aristocracy largely kept their status, lucky things. Also, the heroine would not have been wandering the streets of London with only a maid at one o'clock in the morning. It just wouldn't happen. She would have been accompanied by her maid AND a burly, well-armed footman (one of the main roles of a footman was as a private security/bodyguard), and teaching the heroine to defend herself is rather a contemporary American solution to the issue, and not one I found credible.

So, this could have been a nice little Regency, but didn't really work for me. Having said that, I do like what this author does, so I'll definitely be looking out for her next book.

[Jen · Rating 4 out of 5]

Fenris and Eugenia

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Off the top of my head I can only think of three possibly four really good historical romances authors. I am always trying out new books looking for that next author I can just gush over. Not Proper Enough by Carolyn Jewel just might have given me a new author to love.

Lady Eugenia hates the Marquess of Fenris. Ever since the day he called her a blowsy girl to anyone who would listen she has thought he was a cruel, unfeeling brute. He also attempted to ruin her true chance at happiness. Eugenia was set to marry Fenris’ best friend and Fenris made it clear he did not think she was good enough.

For his part, Fenris was young and dumb. He made the mistake of listening to his grandfather’s opinion about Eugenia. This was before he knew better, knew better to not listen to his grandfather and knew better that Eugenia was the one woman for him. By that time it was too late. Eugenia and his best friend were head over heels for each other and he was left with two fractured relationships. Four years after the death of his best friend, Fenris knows he will have only a slim chance at convincing Eugenia he can be the man for her. Fenris will use everything at his disposal to bring her around including her long dormant sensuality.

This was a really good book with really great characters. Fenris was such a complicated man. He almost had two personas. Outwardly, to Eugenia, he was a confident, bored jerkish aristocrat. Inside he was bumbling and scared to do or say the wrong thing that would chase Eugenia away. I loved the two sides of him. And I loved how sometimes he couldn’t help himself and he would just blurt out what he was thinking. He would tell Eugenia he loved her or ask her to marry him just because he couldn’t help it. He wanted Eugenia so badly and had waited so long for this opportunity that he was scared to blow it yet he knew he had to push her.

Eugenia is so confident in her hatred of Fenris she encourages him to do his worst. She believes she will marry again and thinks she can have a second chance at love but is pretty certain it won’t be with Fenris. She expends more energy trying to dislike him than she does with pretty much anything else she does.

Fenris tries his best to toe the line between pushing Eugenia for more and just letting her figure things out on his own. He is desperate for Eugenia. He wants her in his life for the rest of his life. He is able to push her into a very sensual sexual relationship but despairs of ever really having her love.


She was going to fall in love with some other man. He’d let her use him, willingly, and what she’d learned from him was not that he loved her, but that she could break away from her widowhood and be happy.

It is always an interesting book when the man is the one pining for the woman. In this case I felt for Fenris. He had been in love with her for so long that I didn’t want to see him lose this chance.

There were two things that kept this book from being just about perfect. One was the trope of one of our characters having already found the love of their life. I do not like that type of plot. Call me fanciful, but I like our hero a heroine to find love for the very first time with each other. In this case, Eugenia so loved Robert that there was almost not room for anyone else. There was a scene where Fenris and Eugenia are in the heat of the moment and Eugenia says:


“You’re not Robert.” Her eyes flashed. “It doesn’t matter how good you are with your cock, you’ll never be Robert.”

Ouch. Fenris never claimed to want to be Robert so this felt so much like Eugenia lashing out at him for daring to make her feel again. I ached for Fenris at this point even though he took the quote in stride.

The second thing I didn’t like was how Eugenia came to the realization she loved Fenris. It came after a life altering event and pretty much out of nowhere. I think Ms. Jewel attempted to show a build up of how Eugenia came to love Fenris but after hearing her say so many times how much she didn’t like him the “I love you” wasn’t as believable as I wanted it to be. I adored Fenris and he openness and honesty with Eugenia so much that I wished we would have seen something similar from her sooner than the last couple pages of the book.

Still even with the two things I didn’t care for this is a very good book. So good that as soon as I was done I went back and bought the first book in the series and plan on reading it soon. I highly recommend all historical romance lovers go out and pick up this book. You will not be disappointed. Final grade-B+

Favorite Quote:


God help her, she knew in her soul that Fenris would be magnificent in bed.

[Kelly22 · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.00 Stars - Historical Romance.

With charming plot, compound protagonists and distinctive dialogues, Carolyn Jewel writes yet another touching historically savvy romance.

Lady Eugenia Bryant is in charge of a new debutante for the London’s season this year. But while attending one of ton’s party, this widow of four years suddenly comes face-to-face with the handsome and elusive, Grenville Foxman Talbot, Marquess of Fenris, someone she never forgot from past encounter and wishes to avoid in present or future. However the chemistry between them is so palpable that it doesn’t take too much time for these two to engage themselves in a clandestine affair. But Eugenia still believes she is in love with her deceased husband. When secrets are revealed, and passion is unwrapped, love may be the only thing to clarify all questions and confusions ever once surfaced.

Written thoughtfully, fans of Carolyn Jewel and hence the series, will definitely find it entertaining. However, may be I picked it up in a wrong time, the plot felt too sluggish and knowable for my taste.

[Karla · Rating 1 out of 5]

While I enjoyed the author's writing style, I became so frustrated with this that I quit halfway in. The story was set up very well in the first book of the series (which I enjoyed). I was looking forward to an angsty story in which the hero has to convince the widow to forgive his hurtful past behavior, to give him a chance. I was anticipating yearning and humility on the hero's part, confusion, guilt and longing on the heroine's part. I expected scenes of chance encounters, sly touches, internal debate, resulting in a lot of tension. Doesn't that sound like a great story? That is not the story here. The author glosses over that part of the story, and the heroine quickly forgives the hero in the first scene.

So once I realized that the story I was expecting was not the story I was getting, I still gave the book a chance and read through to halfway. I found it boring, lacking in tension. Also I found the timeline odd. One to two weeks pass between encounters, and there is an early sex scene that is out of place in the story and doesn't change their relationship. Pass on this one.

[Margaret · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fenris is a Marquess who has been in love with Lady Eugenia for a long time. He stood aside while his best friend married her and made her very happy. Now that the Lady is a widow, he is determined not to let her slip through his fingers again. He will do anything in his power to make her his wife; even if it meant trapping her by having her with child.
Lady Eugenia is a widow for a few years. She has come back to London as a sponsor for a friend’s daughter for the season. She is determined to find a nice, respectable man for her. Eugenia is also determined to fall in love ever again. She thinks that she should be alone for the rest of her life to honor her deceased husband.
Throughout the season, Fenris made time to flirt and spend time with Eugenia. He was determined to remind her that her husband wanted her to live life and be happy. Eugenia, finally relented that she should live her life and be happy. She also admitted that she was in love with him. Due to her unusual state, they married in secret. She knew that she would love him for the rest of her life because he promised that she would never be unhappy again.
I still cannot believe how Fenris convinced Eugenia that she was in love with him. Let alone marry him. But I guess that is what happens when you are in love with each other. I was not surprised with who Lady Eugenia’s charge ended up with. There are no two people more suitable for each other then they are. I am completely happy that both couples got their happily ever after. It is always nice to finish a bout that makes you smile at the end.
This book is completely amazing. I could not put it down until it was completely finished. It is an amazing sequel to Not Proper Enough. Carolyn Jewel’s writing is a wonderful read full of good humor and not stops entertainment.
I highly recommend this book to those readers who love historical romances. You will not be disappointed with this read.

[Jacqueline J · Rating 3 out of 5]

I liked parts of this really well, others not so much. The story mostly concerned the hero and heroine's relationship. There was very little in the way of action in the plot. Most scenes were them talking and/or having sex. I wanted to know a more solid timeline of their past history. How old was he when he was treating her badly when they were young? How many years had it been since then? How many years was she married before her husband died? etc.

I thought there was a little too much sex and not enough conversation. I really didn't like the whole thing with the heroine wandering around London on foot at night alone with only a maid. I just don't think it would have happened. I would have accepted it better in the country but ladies living in London at the time would have been more aware of the dangers they lived with than that.

I liked hero's angstiness. I loved how he kept offering the heroine his heart and everything he had. I didn't like how she was so wrapped up in her dead husband. She never really stopped to think of what she was feeling now.

I thought the hero's rationale for treating the heroine poorly years ago was weak. He was trying to convince his best friend not to marry her because she wasn't high enough class or good enough for either of them. Which just rang false when he was in love with her himself. I would have found it more plausible if he was doing it so that the friend would give up and leave the field clear for himself. As it was it just didn't make sense for me. I also wondered why it took him 4 years after her husband died to make a move on her.

I really enjoyed the hero most of all and he saved the book for me.

I like this author on the whole and enjoy her books.

[Firstpella · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fantastic, I was rereading 'Scandal' by Jewel which is a marvelous story and I realized I purchased 'Not Proper' years before but forgot to actually read it. Couldn't put this tale down. The H/h are on fire, the overall story is balanced with other characters and upheavals and I cried throughout. Wish Jewel wrote more historicals because what she does is a slight twist on the genre - Rochester devoted to chasing Jane...with a lot of smexy steam.

[gottalottie · Rating 2 out of 5]

I like high angst but when it’s angst without cause it’s just a lot of dithering and not entertaining

[Readsalot81 · Rating 5 out of 5]

Not Proper Enough is the tale of Lady Eugenia Bryant and the Marquess of Fenris.. or "Fox" as he instructs Lady Eugenia to call him. These two characters are briefly introduced in Jewel's previous novel, Not Wicked Enough.

I have been trying to pinpoint exactly why I think these books are very appealing and a fast read as well. There is a decided lack of inner monologues that I find immensely appealing. That is not to say that there isn't any introspection, there certainly is; it's just that the novel isn't bogged down with the inner musings of the titled characters in every single chapter. Jewel does a fine job at pacing the story and using the scenes and conversations between the two main characters to reflect the thoughts and actions of said characters.

In general, I am very fond of the trope of finding yourself attracted to someone you that have no business of having feelings for, or even someone that you don't honestly like. I like the inner turmoil and how they eventually reconcile themselves to having feelings that are not in line with what they had felt before.

There is one scene in which Fox is relating to a friend his past history with Lady Eugenia and I have to say it blew me away. It made my gut clench and I had to stop and the put the book for a bit (ie: a couple of days actually). It's rare, for me, to have a book evoke a memory that strong that it takes me out of the story for a bit. I'm used to smiling or laughing if I come to a good bit..but recalling something that's happened previously because the author does an incredible job of making a certain scene nuanced and poignant.. well that's a gift. And Bravo, Ms. Jewel.

If I had any qualms about the novel in particular, it'd be the character of Hester (Lady Eugenia's charge to watch over) and Fenris's father, the Duke. But that's mainly my issue. When the subject of botany comes up in anyway shape or form, I get visions of my mom (who's a plant & gardening fiend) telling me what is Platanus occidentalis (ie: Sycamore tree) and what isn't. The subplot with Hester and the duke isn't particularly subtle.. and it's easy to see the direction that it's going .. so really, I suppose, that's my chief complaint with the entire novel.

If you haven't read Not Wicked Enough, I'd say you should definitely check it out..it just adds an edge of layering to the story around Not Proper Enough.

Oh.. and I won a copy of the ARC through a blog contest on the author's website.

[Wollstonecrafthomegirl · Rating 4 out of 5]

So, I really, really like Carolyn Jewel. This was another great book for me. I really wanted Ginny to get her own HEA, and here it is with Fenris, another character I was intrigued by in Not Wicked Enough. It's hard not to compare with Not Wicked Enough, it wasn't quite as good as that for me, neither Ginny nor Fenris had the level of characterisation Jewel managed in that novel, but they were both still great and their banter was great. Jewel is not afraid to throw her H/H together as much as possible, so the reader gets to see their love and lust grow. The sex was, again, absolutely brilliant. Also must give a shout out to the very May/December secondary romance. In some ways I wish Hester and Camber had got their own novel because I am a sucker for an age gap and scientifically minded bluestocking heroines. It falls short of five stars because, as I've said, the characterisation wasn't quite there and Ginny's reasons for reluctance in the relationship were either too subtle for my primitive brain or just not fleshed out enough. Still great though, I'm going to be reading all of Jewel's novels in the near future.

[Robin Priddy · Rating 4 out of 5]

After the death of her beloved husband, Lady Eugenia Bryant belives she will never love again. After four years she is ready to leave her brothers home and rejoin the social sceen again. She heads back to London along with a friend who Eugenia has agreed to sponsor for her fist season. Eugenia's friend and now new sister-in-law gives her an Medallion and tells her that it will help her to find her perfect match, she doesn't belive it but takes it anyway. She was ready to return to the social whirl of a London season but what she was not ready for was running into the Marquess of Fenris.
Grenville Foxman Talbot ,Fox to his friends, is the Marquess of Fenris. He was also best friends with Eugenia's late huaband. They were together when they first saw Eugenia and both men wanter her but she fell in love with his friend. Fox tried his best to break them up and to stop their wedding. Now that Eugenia is free Fox is determined to make her his.

[Roub · Rating 1 out of 5]

this was tedious. the book had great potential but the author went on in too much mundane details, secondary characters and too much introspection from the main characters. i also wished we had a recap of the past so as to understand what happened between fenris, robert and eugenia. fenris never did explain to her dat he had loved her all along and dats why he was insulting in the past, but hurt as well.

[Amanda · Rating 2 out of 5]

This was beyond tedious. Jewel isn't a bad writer--I can understand why people like her--but I didn't like this book at all. I wasn't too big on the previous one, either, but I felt disappointed by how dull I found this book given it had so many things I love in a romance. Unrequited love: Fenris has been in love with Eugenia since she married her late husband, his former best friend. Enemies-to-lovers: I knew from the first book that she hates him because he apparently tried to stop her husband from marrying her and was cruel somehow. This led to his friend never talking to him again, something Fenris deeply regrets, especially since Robert passed away. And a grieving widow learning to love again: Eugenia was widowed young 4 years ago and has just started wearing colors again and going to social functions, mostly due to her best friend, Lily, meeting and falling in love with Eugenia's older brother in the previous book.

Fenris was presented as a bit of a villain in the previous book not because of anything we see him do, but because Lily (heroine of first book) and Eugenia assume he has the worst intentions. Lily is his cousin and she is scared Fenris and his father want to try to take her fortune. The duke is her uncle and iirc, cut off contact with Lily's mother (his sister) when she married Lily's father. However, Fenris introduces himself and says he wants to make peace and learn to know Lily as a member of his family. He's clearly in love with Eugenia but knows she despises him.

None of this is necessary information to read this book, but for me, it made Eugenia's behavior toward him frustrating because her animosity felt unwarranted. And this isn't helped by the fact that whatever he did in the past is never really explained fully. All we know is he called her a "blowsy girl" and despite falling in love with her right away, acted as if she were beneath him and his friend, Robert. When he saw them falling in love, apparently he tried to stop Robert from marrying her. I don't actually know what he did or said to make Robert stop talking to him, but Fenris only has good things to say about his former friend and misses him greatly. I honestly think a flashback scene or two could've improved this aspect of the book immensely.

Eugenia hasn't warmed up to him in the intervening years and assumes he's still a snob who hates her, even though he gives her no reason to think this. While I tried to remember she's been so blinded by grief that she's not been fully "living," I still didn't understand how she was so oblivious for good portions of this book. Oblivious about his feelings for her and in denial about them for almost the entirety of the book despite the fact that he tells her he's in love with her. Also oblivious to the feelings her friend, a young woman for whom she's acting as chaperone, develops for Fenris's father. This is a secondary romance that I found more interesting than the main romance, even though we don't see anything more than friendship on the page. But Eugenia is insistent that the duke only thinks of her friend as the daughter he never had even though it's obviously it's not the case.

I could forgive some of this if I hadn't been bored to death by most of this book. Fenris and Eugenia become intimate very early on, which felt out of character for Eugenia. Even as they have sex for the first time, she tells him he'll never compare to her late husband, he'll never win her heart, and she hates him. I guess it's supposed to be hate sex, but as a reader, I just felt like it was a mess. And then this sex scene dragged on for what felt like 50 chapters and it was awkward as hell. The hero keeps promising a "quick fuck" or a "hard fuck" and she loves his cock and he'd shave her vagina and write on her in purple ink??? Gag me. I love dirty talk in a romance but this felt so forced. Like I was supposed to find their encounters incredibly erotic instead of patently ridiculous. Fenris can give the grieving widow multiple screaming orgasms and fuck for pages and pages and PAGES. I was like...are y'all done yet??? And then she gives him the cold shoulder and says she hates him and they have sex again.

I don't usually complain about too much sex in books but my god the final 40% was nothing but sex, argue, sex, cold shoulder, sex, a duel thrown in, sex, hero tells her repeatedly he loves her and will do anything for her and she still muses whether he has a mistress when she's not with him (wtf??? first off his dick would fall off at that rate and second there's ZERO REASON TO THINK THIS). Oh, and more sex. She realizes she loves him during sex, of course.

Frankly, given we never see their interactions when he first falls in love with her a decade before the book starts, and given how she behaves toward him in the book, I never understood what he saw in Eugenia. And since she can't stop thinking about or comparing him to her husband as late as like 90%+ into the book, I never believed that she was actually in love with Fenris. Just liked having lots of sex.

Oh. And one last thing. We learn in passing that Robert was disabled somehow. He is referred to, at turns, as having been crippled, deformed, and of a "deficient body." I realize this book was supposed to take place at a time when people spoke about disabilities differently but fucking hell, I was so disgusted by the language used to describe him.

[MaryReadsRomance · Rating 4 out of 5]

3 1/2 Hot Stars

Rates 3 1/2 overall for the hero's devotion and romance (sex and angst).

Heat / Romance: 4
Plot: 3
Characterization: 3.5
Setting: 3

Widowed young wealthy heroine - wife of friend of Hero. Experienced wealthy older male (early 30s) looking to marry soon to her - if only she didn't hate him as he told his old friend not to marry her originally. Hero earns 4 romance and 4 character points for his devotion to the heroine. Heroine pulls down the character points to 2 points for her selfishness and lack of moral depth.

Insta-lust for heroine and angst love with lust for hero. Loads of sexual encounters between the H&H - with an emphasis on oral encounters, sex talk, and some improbable encounters with scandal potential. A bit too much, too soon, and too gritty for the historical timeframe for a lady and gentleman and for my personal tastes.

Rates 3 1/2 overall as loved the hero's devotion and liked the romance (sex and angst).

Liked this better than Reforming Scoundrels #1 but still less than Scandal or The Spare - both of which had heroines with depth and morals.

Even consistent plot with sexual excitement and just a few exciting external conflicts including an insulting cad and a duel.

Series continues with Reforming Scoundrels #3 - TBD.

For a more detailed review see:
http://dearauthor.com/book-reviews/ov...

Note: If the GR star rating could be interpreted as:
* = F, **=D, ***=C, ****=B, *****=A

Then the above reviewers C+ would be a 3 1/2 stars and equivalent to my own rating. As I like Carolyn Jewel my 3 1/2 is being expressed as 4 GR stars.

As with the above reviewer, I too would recommend Carolyn Jewel's Lord Ruin (4+ star bodice ripper), and Scandal (5++ star fabulous RITA nominee and period Romance with an incredible HOT hero) https://www.goodreads.com/review/show.... And a personal favorite in the rare Gothic Historical Romance genre, The Spare (4 Stars) https://www.goodreads.com/review/show....

Author's Website:
http://www.carolynjewel.com/chapters/...

For another review of Scandal (graded as an A):
http://dearauthor.com/book-reviews/re...

[Melody May (What I'm Reading) · Rating 5 out of 5]

Also on What I'm Reading

A couple of months ago I got a chance to get an ARC copy of Not Proper Enough by Carolyn Jewel by commenting on another blog. Everyone that participated needed to finished a sentence that described a rutabaga. I must say I thought mine was cute and creative. Anyways let me tell you what it's about and what I thought about Not Proper Enough:

At the beginning of the story we meet up with Lady Eugenia Bryant, who happens to hate the hero. I think hate would be an understatement of the year. However, Grenville Forman Talbot, the Marquess of Fenris, understands the extreme loathing that Lady Eugenia has for him. I mean when you're young and stupid, you show your ignorance.

For instance, when Lady Eugenia had her first season, Fenris said some hurtful things about her. Surprise, surprise words actually hurt. However, when you have a serious crush on a gal and you don't want your friends to know the stupidness flies out.

Now she comes to London to sponsor young Hester Rendell, who happens to be a plant fanatic. If Lady Eugenia is able to launch Hester it will be a miracle. Seriously, who wants to be stuck with a girl who is only interested in plants.

Fenris has a tough task ahead. I mean when you are trying to convince a woman that has no interest in being with you that she is the love your life, I mean it can be practically impossible. Is there a chance that Fenris can convince Lady Eugenia that he truly loves her or die trying?

OH MY GOODNESS! What an awesome book! I loved every minute of it. Talk about a page turner that I couldn't put down. First off, the story line was moving and shocking at the same time. Not Proper Enough kept me wanting more. To be honest it would be one of those books to re-read again. That right there says a lot. So, I hope that you all get a chance to check this book out when it comes out. Plus, you all want to know if Fenris is able to change Eugenia's opinion of him.

So, happy reading!

ARC provided by the author

[Tracy · Rating 4 out of 5]

I received this book as a Goodreads First Reads giveaway.

I'm going to start out by stating that I have not read the first in this series, so my review is based totally on this book as a stand-alone. I imagine a lot of what I view as "low points" would be addressed if had had read them in order.

I love the way Ms. Jewel writes. Though not all of her dialogue is what I'd normally expect for the era, it still fit the situation. It stood out enough for me to think, "Would he really say that in that manner?" but didn't detract enough for me to scoff and think the author hadn't done any research or ignored the time period she'd chosen to write in.

The enemies to lovers plot has never been one of my favorite, but this one worked - or I think it would have if I'd read the first book. I was left thinking that perhaps Eugenia went from hate to love a little too easily to have been all that offended in the first place. At the same time, she never expressed any deep-rooted enmity towards Fox - just a bit of a tiff that he'd called her a name in the past. Given the setting and situation as it was explained, I'm sure it did affect her at the time, but as years go by (and since it never had any lasting effect), it's not all that far of a stretch to believe that she was just trying to hold on to the initial indignation.

I also liked the fact that this wasn't a usual historical romance with the innocent being chased after by a scoundrel and the ensuing scandal that occurs once they are caught in a compromising position and her reputation is ruined. Eugenia is a strong woman not at all embarrassed by her wanton side. The widow aspect as a great touch here since it allows her to be both proper and experienced.

"Not Proper Enough" is an enjoyable book, but I do think it would seem a bit more convincing if read as part of the series, rather than on its own.

[Heather · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is the first book Ive read of Carolyn's. I didnt have the pleasure of reading the first one of this series Not Wicked Enough. I will have to though.

I enjoyed her style of writing. Besides it being worded for that time period, her romance and humor was also for that time period. It made you feel like you were watching a movie with all the details and background she gave.

I hate spoilers so I wont share any good parts but I will say she has a way of starting books off! Very interesting indeed. Just made me think about if this is just the beginning whats gonna happen next. Plus I love the entire cast. There was alot of funny parts that I caught myself laughing aloud from.

Also it was nice that her love interests were fresh picks and not the same whiny females that swoon over big'o rough and tough mindless men.

Overall she a a very good author with a new fresh look to historical romances!

[Belinda · Rating 4 out of 5]

Carolyn Jewel's "Not Proper Enough" was a pretty good read. The storyline was entertaining and sensual. Even though the character showed more lust in the interaction, I felt it need to be more romantic. The Marquess of Fenris has loved Lady Eugenia from the day he first set eyes on her. But she married his best friend Robert. He knew no matter how many woman he took to bed, it would never be his Ginny. Ginny found love with her husband and was devastated when he died. She never forgave Fenris for the insult she was given. Now Ginny in back in society to help a girl with her coming out and therefore meets the dratted Marquess.
But then sparks ignite when they kiss and turns explosive. Ginny feels a surge of anguish because she still loves her husband. How can she betray him this way! Though Fenris loves his Ginny, he will not give up on them. He will show his love they belong together for ever.

[SaturNalia · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 but not enough to round up. Fanris hurt Eugenia's feelings, a long time ago, with careless comments and she hated him for it. Story started out with a steamy dream sequence, that hooked me, followed by a lot of "I hate you but love your body". Fanris has been in love with Eugenia and spent the story trying to convince her of his love. I didn't feel the spark between Fanris and Eugenia, they were together the whole book and I couldn't feel the chemistry between them. Eugenia's seduction felt forced, she would have inner monologue about hating Fanris and missing her dead husband, then proceed to have sex with Fanris. In the midst of having sex with Fanris, Eugenia would vocalize her hatred for Fanris and bring up her dead husband, but that seemed to turn Fanris on. This story was not for me.

[Chelsea B. · Rating 4 out of 5]

Quick and sweet: Can I can say real quick that a gentleman whose already in love with the lady is a personal favorite of mine? Because it is, and this book was. Clever and flirtatious bantering and lush and plentiful love scenes made this book a real joy to read.

POV: Hero/Heroine.
Heat: Hot, baby, hot. This book is not lacking in smexy times. But never do you feel the sex is only filler. A lot of this couples' most intimate moments comes come from, well, the intimate moments.
Follow-up? This is book 2. Book 1, Not Wicked Enough, was wonderful as well. However, I don't feel you need to read it to understand this novel. But I would recommend reading it, just for pleasure!

Sum it up: Carolyn Jewel has quickly become a favorite of mine when it comes to historical romance. If you, like me, adore quick quips and romantic love scenes, then please, pick up a novel by this author!

[Julie · Rating 4 out of 5]

As much as I love Carolyn Jewel, this romance had an odd relationship between the heroine and hero that was built on contradictions. Ultimately, I found it more annoying than endearing. She kept saying she hated him, yet she begins an affair with him. All the while she is pushing him away and acting like nothing was going on between them, they were having this secret affair! I liked him though, but it was just sort of weird, though some parts were very hot and sexy. I liked a lot about this book, but the push me pull you courtship took it's toll on me, to say the least. Plus the book felt rushed at the end.

3.5/5

[Karen · Rating 5 out of 5]

Love love love. Lily's medallion has been passed on to its next victim, and I'm really starting to like the conceit of it. Is it truly magical? Is it not? We're never really sure, but it adds a touch of delicious mystery to affairs. It DOES feature in a really erotic dream that Fox has at the beginning of the book, and I loved the way the dream is repeated for Eugenia's perspective when the amulet is in *Fox's* possession. Also, I don't normally remark on book covers, but I loved that the cover of the book almost perfectly matches Fox's dream.

This is most certainly a character-driven novel-- if you're looking for heaps of action and plot movement, this is not the book for you.

[Limecello · Rating 5 out of 5]

One of my favorite books I've read this year. Will review on my blog and also Heroes & Heartbreakers.

2019
Hm. I guess I need to do a more proper/thorough/awake re-read ... but I'm willing to let the 5 stars stand.
Oh, Fox, and you IDIOT smitten man and he loves her throughout and ... yeah.
I'm such a sucker for smitten heroes.

A or A- I guess

[Keri · Rating 4 out of 5]

I hope to high heaven that she continues this series, because I really like it. The dialog isn't run of the mill and doesn't have that mainstream feel to it. My only niggle, is the ending was too fast. Fox had struggled for so long to get his Jinny as to not see him as the bad guy, that I would have liked to have spent more time with them, after the I Dos.

[ReneeW · Rating 5 out of 5]

Very sexy read. It took me a couple chapters to get into it but I thoroughly enjoyed it. I may need to read more from this author.

[Kaetrin · Rating 4 out of 5]

Why I read it: I didn't read much historical romance last year. I wasn't in the mood and if I'm not in the mood, I'm less likely to enjoy the book. I try to pick up books I think I will like and sometimes that is merely a matter of timing. I won this book from the author around the time it came out and the deal was that I would post a review - no big deal because I review everything I read anyway. It's certainly a book I would have bought if I hadn't won it. Ms. Jewel writes such beautiful prose. And it is precisely because I have such respect for her words, that I waited until now to read the book.

What it's about: (from Goodreads) A woman should always keep her standards...

Meant to be?

The Marquess of Fenris has loved Lady Eugenia from the day he first set eyes on her. Five years ago, pride caused him to earn her enmity. Now she's widowed, and he's determined to make amends and win her heart. But with their near explosive attraction, can he resist his desire long enough to court her properly?

After the death of her beloved husband, Lady Eugenia Bryant has come to London to build a new life. Despite the gift of a medallion said to have the power to unite the wearer with her perfect match, Eugenia believes she won't love again. And yet, amid the social whirl of chaperoning a young friend through her first Season, she finds a second chance at happiness.

Unfortunately, the Marquess of Fenris threatens her newfound peace. Eugenia dislikes the man, but the handsome and wealthy heir to a dukedom is more charming than he has a right to be. Constantly underfoot, the rogue disturbs her heart, alternately delighting and scandalizing her. And when their relationship takes a highly improper turn, Eugenia must decide if the wrong man isn’t the right one after all.

What worked for me (and what didn't): There is something very attractive to me about a man desperately in love who has to work for his lady (without being an alpha hole). Hence, Fenris (aka Fox) is very attractive to me. He's been in love with her for years - his attraction led him to say something awful about which ruined his friendship with his best friend Robert (the man Eugenia - Ginny- married). Ginny is now a widow and is starting to re-enter society. She still misses Robert but life goes on (as she has discovered) and she is lonely - for companionship, for physical passion.

Ginny believes Robert was her one true love and it is not in her to love again. It is essentially the same conflict that Lily had in Not Wicked Enough. It worked better for me in this book, possibly because Ginny and Robert had happy years together and while it has been some years since he died, it has not been all that long. Added to that, Ginny hates Fenris because of the awful things he said about her and the damage he did to her reputation and the hurt he caused Robert in doing so.

At the start of the book, Fox has a dream of Ginny in the exact dress which is on the cover. How awesome is that? I tweeted the author about it and she replied that she'd had an opportunity to see the cover and added the description in but whether it or the text was first, I love when the cover has a meaning and is not just some random sexy girl in a period costume. The main significance of the dream is that he dreams Robert comes to him and asked him to take care of Ginny, to see to her happiness. Armed with Robert's non corporeal blessing, Fox sets out to do his best to change Ginny's mind and win her heart.

Ginny, for her part, is quite genuine in her dislike of Fox, but is equally cognisant of his superb face and figure. And then Fox starts to be nice. How irritating that he cannot be consistently boorish - it would be so much easier for her to maintain her dislike of him.

Even long after the dislike has faded and been forgiven and after they start a very sexy liaison against her better judgement, Ginny does not believe she can ever love Fox - she also doesn't believe he loves her, despite him telling her so on more than one occasion. But, he makes her laugh and she is irresistibly drawn to him and his six pack (and what lies below it).

The prose is beautiful, as I've come to expect from Ms. Jewel. My highlighter got quite the workout. And there is some wonderful snark too (Ginny and Fox share a dry and sometimes cutting sense of humour).

Half a dozen fobs, dangled from his watch chain, which, in Eugenia's opinion, was five fobs too many. His cravat was a confection of linen so thoroughly starched he could not move his chin without danger of slitting his throat.

(this does not refer to Fox by the way).

I loved how Fox, skilled with the ladies and clever with words, was always putting his foot in it with Ginny. I also loved how he recognised it and tried his best to change things.

"You may do whatever you like. I'd prefer that you defer to my expertise, though. If you don't like what I choose for you, by all means buy another weapon more to your tastes. I hope to God you'll at least consult the gunsmith before you do. " Lord but he sounded an ass. He stopped the words that would have followed and made him sound an even bigger prig than he had already. He took a breath and waiting until he was confident he could speak in a manner that wouldn't get her back up. "Allow me to restate. If you'll permit me to purchase something for you, I will be easier in my mind, knowing you've a quality firearm that suits you. You may reimbursement for the expense if you like."

I liked the push/pull of the relationship between Ginny and Fox. Ginny doesn't want to like him, doesn't want to want him. Fox wants her anyway he can get her and will use any tools reasonably at his disposal, including her unwanted but definite desire for him.

"I don't understand why I've remained so besotted with you over the years. But I have done so, and here you are, Ginny, in my private home. Quite alone and just drunk enough that you haven't slapped me."

"I don't like you," she whispered. "Not even a little."

"I know." He lowered his head to hers, and he thought, To hell with decency. And to bloody hell with caution. "Isn't is delicious this way?"

Ginny is always completely consenting in their encounters, Fox does not importune her. And once Ginny decides to go for it, she doesn't hold back. There is a very interesting scene involving some purple, scented ink...

I enjoyed the secondary story of Hester Rendell (a young girl Ginny is sponsoring for the season) and the Duke of Camber (Fox's father).

However. The end felt abrupt to me. For almost the entire book, Ginny had been convinced she could not love Fox. But then something clicks into place and she realises she already does. While that sort of thing absolutely does happen - something just clicks (in fact something similar happened to my very own self), I needed a bit more explanation of how that happened and why it happened at that very moment. It seemed unfortunately like it happened because the book was ending rather than anything else. Ginny had a similar dream (albeit near the end of the book) to Fox's dream, and I wondered if she would also dream of Robert giving her permission and whether that would be the key. But she didn't and it wasn't. (Was that too spoilerish?).

It took Ginny a very long time to accept that Fox did love her, even though he was quite frank about his feelings. Accepting her own feelings for him, accepting that loving Fox did not mean that she loved Robert any less - they were necessary for the HEA but the shift just seemed abrupt to me.

I did absolutely love that Robert was in no way demonised. He was also not elevated to sainthood. Definite bonus points for both.

What else? I'm someone who doesn't like to not know the end of a story. The surest way to annoy me and bring out my inner terrior is to start a sentence or a story and not complete it. (It is part of my love/hate relationship with panel talk shows and why I HATE cliffhangers). Very often in this book, something provocative would be said or done at the end of a chapter and the next chapter would commence the next day or week later. While the story itself was complete - I always wondered what happened after those provocations. This one is entirely on me though, because, like I said, the story was complete.

My main 'complaint' with Not Wicked Enough was that it lacked conflict. Looking objectively back on Not Proper Enough, I could probably say something similar, but this book worked better for me. I have enjoyed both books and get happily carried away in the lyrical prose and sense of place in the stories. Not Proper Enough had more conflict IMO but not loads of it. The medallion played only a tangential part in the story and that worked better for me here too. But the big winner for me was the characters and the beautifully put together words used to describe them. I recommend.

In addition, I look forward to Lord Aigen's story with bated breath.

Grade: B

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