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Unbroken

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Welcome back to New Orleans.
Where the streets swirl with jazz and beauty.
Where the houses breathe with ghosts.

A year ago, Rebecca Brown escaped death in a New Orleans cemetery. Now she has returned to this haunting city. She is looking forward to seeing Anton Grey, the boy who may or may not have her heart.

But she also meets a a troubled boy who insists only she can help him. Soon Rebecca finds herself embroiled in another murder mystery from more than a century ago. But as she tries to right wrongs, she finds more questions than Is she putting her friends, and herself, in danger? Can she trust this new ghost? And has she stumbled into something much bigger and more serious than she understands?

304 pages, Hardcover

First published February 1, 2013

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Paula Morris

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Paula Morris, a novelist and short story writer of English and Maori descent, was born in New Zealand. For almost a decade she worked in the record business in London and New York. She now lives in New Orleans, where she teaches creative writing at Tulane University.

Paula's first novel, Queen of Beauty, won best first work of fiction at the 2003 Montana New Zealand Book Awards. Hibiscus Coast, a literary thriller set in Auckland and Shanghai, was published in 2005 and has been optioned for film. Her third novel, Trendy But Casual, was published by Penguin New Zealand in 2005.

Paula's first short story collection, Forbidden Cities (2008) was a regional finalist in the 2009 Commonwealth Writers' Prize.

Ruined, her first YA novel, was published by Scholastic in 2009.

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166 reviews
April 23, 2014
WHAT THE FLIP???!!! I did not know she was writing a sequel to Ruined! Oh my freaking God, I am spazing out right now! I know the books arn't that long, but theyre so damn good! I need this book!
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That was great! I live in Louisiana and I visit New Orleans very often, so it's great when you can read something and visualize its settings so vividly. The rich history went even deeper and broader, expanding to well known history instead of pertaining to heritage of New Orleans alone. I find Rebecca to be a little cowardly, but that's what makes it very believable, because not all heroines are fearless. Most real people are not fearless. But the introduction of new characters like Raf, Phil, and Ling keep a lively feel to the socialization of the older characters like Anton and Aurelia. It helps with character development and plot bulk. It gives variety. Speaking of development, for anyone whom this is a large focus, there are minor advancements in the relationship between Rebecca and Anton. Not huge though. As it was in Ruined, the plot sticks mainly to the mystery, the horror, and the discovery. It was beautiful for such a short book, and I hope that Ms. Morris is planning on a third installment, and soon!
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55 reviews37 followers
June 4, 2024
It’s a good story. I liked it but probably wouldn’t read it again. It’s cute and for a younger audience but still enjoyable.
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July 6, 2012
Oh. My. GOD.

*explodes with happiness*
I cried on the first book(softy) and I could believe it ended :O
And now...*explodes again* *does a dance*
I can't wait!
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831 reviews41.6k followers
February 6, 2013
The sequel to Ruined. A year has passed since the events in Ruined, and Rebecca is back in New York City living with her dad, going to school, and hanging out with her BFF Ling. Rebecca's dad has business in New Orleans, so he plans to rent a house there and would like Rebecca and Ling to join him during his business trip, which coincides with their spring break. It's been awhile since Rebecca has seen Anton, and it feels like their relationship has cooled off, since they hardly see each other, and Rebecca is rather reluctant to return to New Orleans with Ling in tow, considering what happened to her there last year. As she finds out about the trip, Rebecca encounters a Frank, a ghost who begs her to return to New Orleans to help him, or he will spend eternity as a lost soul.

Rebecca and Ling returns to New Orleans and helps out by volunteering to clear up trash and debris from old neighborhoods. She has a lukewarm reunion with Anton and finds out that nutjob Toby from the previous book is trying to destroy her, while trying to solve the mystery of Frank and the necklace.

First, the positive. I had doubts about Ling tagging along, but I liked her a lot. She's practical, unspoiled, not whiny, and is an excellent companion to the mess that is Rebecca's life. The descriptions of New Orleans are excellent. This time around, we get more of a social commentary feel of New Orleans as opposed to the previous book's more atmospheric feel. There is a more realistic description of the poorer neighborhoods, the damage that still remains post-Katrina, and the social divide between classes that still exists between the rich and the poor, those who remain vs. newcomers.

I only gave this book three stars because there is just too much going on. The mystery is rather tangled and poorly solved, the ghost is annoying, and I never felt like he was a fleshed-out character (no pun intended). None of the new ghosts are that great, to be honest. At times, the social commentary threatens to overshadow the plot of the book, and the relationship between Anton and Rebecca was almost nonexistent besides some awkward moments and a rather forced declaration of love. It was a good, quick read, but I don't think this is a great book.
31 reviews
December 6, 2017
This book was good. It got a little boring at times, but other than that I really enjoyed it and its use of vocabulary.
32 reviews
July 30, 2013
Since I'm a huge fan of Ruined , I thought it was worth it to give Unbroken a try. The story starts with Rebecca's visit back to New Orleans, this time with her father and best friend Ling. Although Rebecca is prepared to forget all about her supernatural adventures, she meets a ghost with an unfinished deed, and she's once again part of another paranormal adventure.

I miss Lisette! I thought Lisette's story was a lot more interesting...it was hard for me to be really engaged in this plot. I felt that it was just a bit scattered at times. My favorite characters were probably Ling, Phil and Raf. Ling's no-nonsense attitude was definitely endearing, and she was often one of the only sensible characters. Phil was just a sweet, funny guy and Raf was a really great character as well. I was hoping that Anton's character would be more well-developed and that his relationship with Rebecca would be more developed, but sadly I ended the book still not loving Anton- I have no idea what Rebecca sees in him. .

On a good note, I loved the descriptions of New Orleans and felt that Paula Morris did a great job at creating that festive, mysterious atmosphere that New Orleans always seems to evoke. I also thought bringing up the issue of gentrification and racial profiling was an interesting move by Paula Morris, and I think she handled it nicely. Rebecca's dad's opinions on the matter were great to read about, and I agree with him on the matter. The scenes with Rebecca and Ling volunteering and visiting Raf and Ms. Viola's homes were some of my favorite parts of the book, just because they seemed very funny and homey.

I actually liked Ruined and it breaks my heart to have to say this, but I don't think Unbroken is quite up to par with the first book. The story had potential and had a few lovable side characters, but I wasn't engaged with the story and the main characters at all. Unfortunately, for me at least, the plot and characters fell flat, and I don't think I'd like to reread this book again. Instead, I'll pick up Ruined and look back on how this book should have been.
Author 5 books32 followers
September 30, 2013
Getting back to business.

Rebecca had a hectic year after finding out after escaping a near death in a New Orleans Cemetery. Returning wasn’t her first choice, but she is hoping to see the one boy she can’t help thinking about Anton. Helping a ghost or two is apparently in the cards as well, much to her dismay.

The setting was perfect for the mysterious vibe that this story gives off and I was glad to return to it in the sequel. I love how everything is set up in “Unbroken” and that we get to figure out the mystery right along with Rebecca. We are giving bits and pieces of information at just the right pace, wetting our appetite for more before the final reveal comes into play.

Rebecca also has to do some serious soul searching in this book. She meets ghosts that she may or may not be able to trust. As well as having to really face her situation and thing about the danger she might be putting others in. Her character grows a lot and I really enjoyed seeing her learn more about herself and this world where ghosts actually do exist.

I also really liked getting to see a bit more of Anton. He is a hard character to pin down and I’m not sure at times whether he really should be with Rebecca or not, but he definitely adds to the drama.

For another ghostly adventure filled with intrigue and mystery check out Unbroken by Paula Morris!
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356 reviews2 followers
May 12, 2018
I finally finished it, after 3 months.....

I read this solely because I was obsessed with Ruined when I was younger and was so excited when I found out that there was a sequel. I should not have been excited.

Although I'm almost positive I would have loved this if I would have read this when I first read Ruined I did not enjoy it as much as I thought I would, since I am now 21.

The plot was slow and boring and the characters were nothing spectacular. The story was less than 300 pages but it felt like 800.

I do see the appeal and I wish I had read this when I was younger, but I didn't and I didn't like it as much as I was hoping to.
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May 15, 2012
I can not wait for this book to come out!! I'm anxious to see what trials Rebecca faces next and what happens with her dad, aunt, cousin, and most especially Anton!
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Author 10 books324 followers
August 7, 2015
I love Paula Morris writing style. Her stories are well thought out and flow like a river. I almost enjoyed this as much as the first book. I said almost.
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126 reviews13 followers
August 28, 2025
I enjoyed this YA duology. it gives cutesy thriller. the author explains New Orleans and the culture of the city (Black people!) in a meaningful, accessible way. the added tidbits of real history adds intrigue. even though this story is paranormal, it's realistic, which is something I appreciate in horror.
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April 27, 2020
2.5 stars

Read Ruined (the first book in the series and a 4-star read) but skip Unbroken.




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484 reviews45 followers
February 21, 2013
Once again Paula Morris has ghost seeing Rebecca in New Orleans now in the French Quarter for a week with her best friend, Ling, from New York City for Spring Break. The problem is she's seeing a ghost or ghosts again and one in particular needs her help. I loved Ruined Morris' first novel set in New Orleans and was hoping for more of the same, but this one just didn't quite live up to my expectations. At least part of it didn't.

The story starts in New York City, that's where Rebecca first sees the ghost and realizes that it's happening again. He briefly tells her his story and why she can see him and then he's gone. With quite a bit of trepidation, she heads to New Orleans with her dad and Ling. She's excited to see Anton again as they've been texting and talking through the school year. But then all the old drama with the Temple Mead girls comes up and Anton is being really weird. He was so supportive after the events in the last book and apparently throughout the year, but now that he has a chance to see Rebecca after so long, he doesn't seem to want to see her. He should be at the airport to greet her, but he doesn't see her until the next day at a lake clean up. And then there's that, Morris has the girls spending all their time cleaning up a lake, or fixing up the grounds at a school the whole time they are in New Orleans. This is Ling's first trip to New Orleans and instead of site seeing she's cleaning up. I would think there would be enough to see and do without being so altruistic. Save it for the next trip. No I'm not against altruism, I just thought it was boring to read about.

Finally, it starts to get interesting when Toby Sutton starts to rear his head and make a few attempts to grab Rebecca. He still blames her for everything and he's apparently escaped from the super strict military school he's supposed to be in. Furthermore, he knows what she needs in order to help the ghost get his final peace and he's trying to make sure she doesn't get it. And then there's Anton, he is hardly supportive. He's been talking to Toby despite his threats against Rebecca and then he finally says he's rid of him only after Toby injures someone. What kind of boyfriend is that? What kind of friend is that? Or even person?

It was only the climax of the book and the ending that saved the book for me. It was what I was looking for and it was what made the novel worth reading. Rebecca is absolutely herself in this novel and Ling is more than a loyal sidekick, she's up for anything and a kickass friend to have. Anton, hmm, I really didn't like him, but I did like his friend Phil and hope that if there are more novels to come, both Ling and Phil show up in them.

I felt like Morris was trying to piggyback on the success, if it was successful I wasn't blogging then, of Ruined a few years too late. And if she really wanted to make it a book set in New Orleans, give us the tour, don't stick us at a school cleaning up all day. The girls didn't complain, but I am. I'd give it three and a half stars just because the last third was so good.

I received a copy of this novel from the publisher through NetGalley for a fair and honest review. I was not compensated for my review.

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561 reviews55 followers
February 9, 2013
2.5 rounded to 3
Rebecca has returned to New Orleans for Spring Break with her father and her best friend Ling. before she can even enjoy the city, she meets Frank, a ghost who needs her help. She also learns from Anton that Tobey is out for revenge. She's on a mission to put a ghost to rest, keep herself and her family safe, and to reconnect with Anton.

Likes
-The sense of setting is great. This author really knows New Orleans, and she shares her love of the city and it's unique culture. I actually found myself using Google maps to get even a clearer idea if where the characters were.
-The teenagers in this story are really into social responsibility and volunteerim. I appreciated that they spent time discussing some real issues like urban gentrification and redevelopment.
-The way some real history (Degas' visit to New Orleans) was woven into the plot.
-Ling and Phil. Ling because she has no problem sticking up for her bestie, and Phil because he's so happy go lucky.

Dislikes
-Maybe it was because the story was told from the third person point of view, but I was detached from the characters. There just wasn't a lot of character development. For that reason, This book never gave me a sense of urgency or tension.
-The pacing...slow. Too much time was spent describing Rebecca's day to day activity which didn't really progress the story.
-The mystery aspect....not so much. I really didn't think Tobey's vendetta had weight., nor understood why it was so difficult to help this ghost out.
-I was dying to find out more about Delphine, and I never really got it. Not enough background and resolution with this character.
-Very little romance. (too little for my taste.)

Recommendation
If you enjoyed the first book, it's worth a try. If you love stories set in New Orleans, also try it. Probably most enjoyable for a middle grade reader.
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770 reviews119 followers
October 4, 2016
Like the first book~ Ruined:A Novel, this second book was a 5-star read for me.

From School Library Journal
Gr 8 Up-In this sequel to Ruined (Scholastic, 2009), Rebecca is back in New York maintaining a long-distance relationship with Anton; hanging out with her best friend, Ling; and trying to put last year's horrors in New Orleans behind her. But the ghosts can't seem to leave her alone. She soon learns that she is the only one who can see Frank, and he begs Rebecca to help him find a lost locket that he hid in the final moments before he was brutally murdered centuries ago. The locket, Frank affirms, is under the floorboards of a house in New Orleans that is scheduled to be demolished. If he cannot recover it and return it to its rightful owners, he will be stuck haunting the city forever. Rebecca is not in a hurry to start helping another ghost, but then her father surprises her with a trip to New Orleans for spring break. Once she returns to the magically haunted city of her past, Rebecca can't resist helping Frank. Love-interest Anton is more concerned about the resurfacing of Toby Sutton, Rebecca's nemesis from last year who is now obsessed with revenge. Morris's tale culminates in a just and satisfying ending.

I enjoy how this author thoroughly develops her characters and is able to draw me into the story.I also like how she describes the city of New Orleans, and much of the culture there, now I have to look up a recipe for "Crawdad Bread" that I think my daughter would love, since she loves eating crawdads!

These two YA paranormal books were really engaging mysteries, and good ghost stories.Plus a bit of interesting history. Nice clean reads,too.

I highly recommend both books to those who enjoy a good ghost story.
10 reviews
February 25, 2015
In this book Unbroken , it has to an end with my favorite series . Rebecca is returning to Orleans , which I think is kind of odd since her last trip didn't end to well. She meets a new ghost , Frank ,which is strange but cool since i mean she is the only person who can see ghost . Once she meets him at first back in New York it really caught me off guard since no ghost has been as desperate for help as much as Frank . But honestly can she really trust him ? He may seem creepy at first but when i started going more into the book he appears different and kind of nice . As for Rebecca it seems like she may get herself into deep trouble for having contact for yet another ghost .

As you start reading more you find out what Frank wants and who he is . In my personal opinion it had seen as if Frank had liked her . When Rebecca goes to New Orleans with her father and best friend Ling , She gets greeted by her Summer romance fling from her last visit in book one . I had been looking forward to reading more about Anton and Rebecca since in the last book they closed it off with them kissing .I somewhat think that all the cool things happen to her , except for all of her enemies . Most of the people freak out when they find out she is back and still getting together with Anton . But lastly this was honestly sad for me knowing that i wont be reading about them again.
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5,654 reviews340 followers
February 22, 2013
After a disastrous year in New Orleans - The French Quarter where Rebecca Brown discovered a lot of hidden secrets , one secret was so big that at first she was terrified as Rebecca can see ghosts. The second secret was finding out that she was in fact part of the Bowman family and that a curse was upon her and that either her or her cousin in order for the curse to be broken had to die. Fleeing from New Orleans, Rebecca has been living in New York for the past year and now it's time to head back and she isn't exactly overjoyed about it. On her first day back she meets Frank - a ghost with a mission on his hands and he needs the help of Rebecca. However it won't be easy as it seems there are some deadly ghosts at work that don't want Frank's mission to be completed and Frank has been waiting since 1863 for it to happen. If the ghost whispering business wasn't bad enough, Rebecca has also got a mortal being after her- the boyfriend of her dead cousin Toby and he wants Rebeca to pay for what has happpened to her cousin Helene that fateful night - a year ago.
Another fast paced story and one that will have you guessing what will happen next . It is also in a way a light-read , so readers can also sit back , relax and enjoy the flow and pace of the novel.
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October 14, 2014
I really enjoyed Unbroken. I liked it better than the first book, Ruined. The detail was just right and the plot was captivating. I held my breath in parts and when you thought you knew what was going to happen, it surprised you with something else. I felt more connected with the characters than I did before and I absolutely loved how the end came together. This book is haunting, brings mystery, adventure & brings you the magic of the south. I hope the author writes another book to add to the series, I enjoyed it and recommend it.
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495 reviews
January 17, 2013
"Unbroken" wasn't nearly as good as "Ruined", in fact I could have done without this second installment. While there was still a creepiness factor to the story, it was missing the magical element of the first book. I was excited when I discovered that the setting was once again New Orleans, which I still desperately want to visit someday. Overall "Unbroken" is good, but not great.
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3,182 reviews46 followers
July 6, 2016
This was a quick read which is always nice. Rebecca comes back to New Orleans but this time with her good friend Ling. Yet again when she shows up all the people she had to deal with were terrible to her because apparently they all like to hold a grudge. Like in the last book she is confronted by a ghost who asks for her help. Although this time she has some help from her friend and cousin.
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December 22, 2017
I hate this book sorry you guys! I just never liked it.
4 reviews
October 26, 2023
SPOILERS

My book was Unbroken: A Ruined Novel by Paula Morris. This book is about a girl named Rebecca, the main protagonist. What made Rebecca so special was she could see ghosts. Although she could see some ghosts, she couldn’t see all ghosts, the ghosts she did see allowed her to see them. One day a ghost approached her and said he needed help receiving something, and if he didn’t get it he would be stuck as a ghost forever. This ghost was named Frank, he was also a protagonist. Rebecca decides to help him, she has to go to New Orleans (the main setting) in order to help him. Coincidentally her dad already made plans for him, Rebecca, and her best friend to go to New Orleans during spring break. There are many troubles trying to receive this item, including a ghost trying to stop her from helping Frank, a real person named Toby (antagonist) threatening to kill her because he thinks that she killed his ex-girlfriend, and finally, she is trying to avoid everyone knowing that she is talking to ghosts. In the end, she is able to receive what the ghost needs and he is able to be free from the ghost body form.
My book doesn’t have many connections, considering the book is mainly about ghosts. If I had to choose one connection in this book it would be me relating to Rebecca’s best friend. Her best friend was so kind and considerate to everyone. She only wanted to help others and not to hurt anyone. She was always so happy and wanted to adventure and see the best in life. I relate to her because she is basically me. The way she acts treats people, and her output in life is how I live my life.
This book was amazing, definitely one of the best books I have ever read. The way the author puts everything in order is definitely how she plays every character's part. One thing that would have made this book better would be if Rebecca was more of a kindly person. Sure she was kind, but if the author had made her one of the nicest people on this planet this book would have engaged me even more. Just think, if Rebecca had put others first instead of herself she would have put more effort into completing multiple things at once. Besides that the tone, mood, theme, and everything about this book was magnificent.

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160 reviews2 followers
January 21, 2018
That was the way it was in New Orleans, and in every old haunted city across the world. Ghosts vanished, and new ghosts arrived to take their place. Things changed. Things stayed the same.

Well dang, this book, like its predecessor, is nothing if not a 300 page advertisement for New Orleans.

Liked:
Delphine, "the girl in the gallery"--a specific scene actually made me teary eyed. And she wasn't even really a character!
Ling--a cutie.
Raf and co.--also cuties
General spookiness
The ending...very bittersweet and fitting.

Disliked:
The lack of character development. This book really put the flaws of the last one on full display. So many of the characters served only as plot devices with no personality that it was difficult to read an entire book about them. The ghosts were the real characters here.
Anton. He was useless in the last book, but brought new meaning to that term in this book. Why are you making up a fake locket story for Toby? CALL THE POLICE.
Anton and Rebecca as an item. There's no chemistry, they cannot communicate, she apparently still thinks he had a thing for Helena? What are y'all doing?
The fact that Aurelia is apparently dumb, all of a sudden. Probably because she barely had a personality in the first book and served only to provide exposition, but y'know.
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March 11, 2025
Let me tell you when I say, I searched everywhere for this book! I am such a huge fan of the first book (Ruined), that I had to find this! I was not going to give up, until I finally found it. Thank goodness I did.
I really wish this author would write more of the Ruined series, they are so good and I can never seem to put these books down. This book, like the first, has the same characters, New Orleans mystery, and thrills. Though, these books are considered young adult, I still think they are books people should read, no matter how old you are.
I am completely drawn to the New Orleans history in the book. The author does a fantastic job at a history lesson in the books about the style of the city and events that really took place there. This book would have got 5 stars, if it weren't for the obsessed, weird Toby character that just seemed too chaotic for the story. He just was too much this time for me. I really enjoyed the ghost parts and wish there were just a little bit more about some of them.

Would I recommend? YES!
4.5/5
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2,066 reviews19 followers
October 7, 2017
This was a rare feat, a sequel more detailed, advanced, interesting and entertaining than its predecessor. Rebecca, the young woman who can see ghosts is back in New Orleans with her dad, and best friend Ling. The spirits still seek her out though, in this case it is the ghost of a young boy named Frank. He needs her help to find a locket that was intimately connected to his life. Once Rebecca to help, the story becomes so multilayered and fascinating. From the history in New Orleans, to Frank's life and the people he met, to a plot-line involving the artist Edgar Degas, Morris pulls out all the stops. Here writing excites you, keeps you interested. It is very vivid and descriptive. Her characters are full of life and energy, you really get wrapped up in them, and love going on their journey. I had no knowledge about Degas ever having a link to the US, much less New Orleans, and the Historical Note at the end expounds on that tidbit of history.
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43 reviews2 followers
March 1, 2017
I absolutely loved Ruined and I finally got around to reading Unbroken. I wish I could say this was a sequel that didn't require reading the first, but I feel like there would be a ton of missing or confusing links if the first is skipped over. Please, do not read this one before reading Ruined.

That said, let's start with the good. I was super happy to be back in New Orleans again. I think it's a place that's important to Rebecca and who she is as a person. I loved the new characters introduced to the reader such as Ling (I didn't expect much out of her at first but was pleasantly surprised as I went along) and Phil (OH MY WORD! Phil and his 3 years of Judo, hah!) and of course Frank. Though it's difficult to do, I feel like Paula did a great job with Frank and getting his character across for the most part throughout the novel. I fell in love with him. I was super excited to see the return of Aunt Claudia and Aurelia and Anton as well.

Despite mostly enjoying this sequel, I could only give it 3 stars. I think the major downfall of this novel was setting it during Spring Break instead of a month or two during the summer. Because of this, it felt very rushed. There were many points I thought could be fleshed out and improved upon, such as the relationship between Anton and Rebecca. I was really let down with their interactions and personally felt like it was the wrong time when they kissed. It just felt very off and I wasn't as invested this time around which was disappointing. I was also extremely disappointed in how the potential Frank-Rebecca romance was kicked off into the dust. A romance between a ghost and a human, come on that's gold, or maybe that's just me. What was sad to me about the romance in this book was how I found myself shipping Ling and Phil way more than anyone else.

I was also disappointed in how very little we saw of Aunt Claudia and how when we did see Aurelia all I wanted to do was smack her. She drove me insane throughout the story and I didn't feel like she really learned anything from her behavior in the end. The same goes for Toby. While I had suspected Gideon Mason would try to lure at least one of them in, the way it was written out was a little odd to me.

Anton didn't really get much development either. Considering this took place in a matter of a week, I expected him to be there everyday with Rebecca. They hadn't seen each other in a year and she's in town for a week and he only sees her for maybe 3 days? If it was me, I'd be dragging him to everything and wanting to spend as much time together as possible before leaving.

Overall, it wasn't a bad book. It was an easy and quick read as well. I just think it would have been a lot better if it was fleshed out a little more as far as developments in characters and relationships were concerned. It felt too rushed in the end and all that did was leave me feeling a little sad and disappointed.

That's not to say if I happen to pass by another Ruined book in the future I won't pick it up. I have loved the idea of this story and I wish there were more to go with it. I think this could have turned into a huge series and perhaps that could have improved the way I feel about the relationships more. At least with multiple books there would have been opportunities to flesh the characters and relationships out. Perhaps that's why I'm so sad: the fact that this is likely the end and I was hoping for so much more.
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October 13, 2017
I think that the book is very good because of the amount of suspense that the book puts out and the generalization of the book's origin is good. One other thing I would like to say is the book is not so informal if you haven't read the first book Ruined. Some other thing that I would like to say is the books equal balance of surprise and mystery is good it just needs a little bit more romance just to even out the factors a bit more. To end my review I would like to say, don't make the mistake of reading the second book before reading the first book.
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June 11, 2019
Enjoyed the first book better. This is my first-ever (subjective) spoiler review. 1. Couldn’t buy into teen girls giving up such a large chunk of their Spring Break week to dredge lakes and pick up trash. Yeah. 2. A year later, despite their frequent phone contact, Rebecca and Anton’s relationship is still painfully awkward, and distrustful (on Rebecca’s part). Barring the three or four kisses (shared over the span of two books) and some hand-holding, it seems that complete strangers have more chemistry than these two.


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