I had to give it a one.
1.
Alright, first and foremost, I suppose it's partially my fault for assuming the book and style would be different than it actually is. I believed the books would be mostly set in the future, or at least have a bunch of robots walking around. I get it now, that I was mistaken, and that's not the author's fault. Although I Would have appreciated a somewhat more detailed synopsis, but that's not the point.
2.
After that, I'd like to say that something I find extremely irritating is a load of swearing in a book. Take Divergent by Veronica Roth as an example, and you'll find no swearing. It's an excellent book, well-known, and well-liked, and the need for swearing can obviously be disolved when you look at this book.
2.1
There are an excessive amount of words in the English language, and a multitude that could easily replace swearing. This book is not made for children, and yet the vocabulary is abundantly simple, and the swearing, in itself, is abundant.
2.2
Another thing I didn't appreciate when it comes to the swearing, is the fact that there was either none, or very little in the first hundred pages. I felt as though the author drew his readers in, and, when they were least expecting it, pounced on them with a bag full of it.
2.3
To sum up, if the author Had to have swearing in his book at all, limit it considerably, and use it sparingly, rather than dropping it in buckets.
3.
The characters. This is one thing that is extremely important, and if it's done well, it's obvious. When it's not done well, it seems to be less apparent, and a lot of people don't even notice until they happen to read a book where it Is obvious. In my opinion, most of the characters weren't developed very well. To give another example, let me point out a book called Bloody Jack by L. A. Meyer. This is a book where you discover the main characters' personalities right away, and not only that, but they grow and become stronger with the continuation of the series.
3.1
Freya Kallas as my fist subject. She was the most disappointing. How do I explain? She was... simple... dull... confused, but lifeless. Throughout the book, I feel nothing but confusion and... dimness... Yes, I understand the reader is supposed to be confused along with Freya, but there are so many other emotions the author could have developed. The few that are in here are dropped like a bomb without growing at all, and you can't get excited about it in advance.
Freya wasn't developed well at all... I don't know if she's brave or spontaneous or curious or clever. It seems all those feeling and thoughts and everything else was muffled and diluded.
It makes her character... unfulfilling.
3.2
Probably the second most important character was Garren. To be honest, his personality was somewhat more apparent. He's protective of his mother, frightened from the chaos, and determined enough to figure something out. A bit more could have been done, definitely. In all honesty, I'm not sure a character's personality could ever be overly grown, but I can see the author knew more firmly how he wanted this person to act and feel.
3.3
Everyone else, like Mrs. Kallas, and the two friends Freya gets upon entering school, are... not especially important. Thus, they are less developed. Even so, I can see a lot of what they stand for and feel for. I think what the author had a problem with for Freya, was that he didn't really know what he wanted to do with her, how to make her feel. Hence it all became muddled.
4.
I have to bring aforehand an example of a book which I was particularly impressed with: Birthmarked by Caragh M. O'brien. This book is written so exceptionally well, that any doubts I may have had about the storyline were quenched after a few chapters, and I was absorbed by the story.
You may have guessed, topic number four is about how Yesterday was written. A lot of the elements I've mentioned ahead of this relate, since they all work together for the same cause.
A. Storyline should be clear.
B. Vocabulary usage should be varietous
C. Characters should be interesting.
However, there's also a... style... in which an author writes that fits him, and him only, and is apparent. Take Skulduggery Pleasant by Derek Landy. If I had to describe the style in one word, I would call it witty. Some other book would be The Assassin's Curse by Cassandra Rose Clarke, which I would say is daring.
Yesterday is... I don't know... Dark? Strange? Befuddling?
It's hard to say because it doesn't have something going for it. It's depressing and dull, sometimes unbelievable.
To address these three renounces, I'll take a section for each.
4.1
Depressing.
In the first chapter, it's just scary, exciting, and horrifying. After that, the reader has a sneaking suspicion what has happened, but Freya is at a loss. She convinces herself some of the time that she's just upset about a happening, but sort of knows it's something else.
Hard to say... Sort of, she's confused, afraid, and doesn't know what to do. She's alone and does stupid things sometimes to try to distract herself.
After she sees Garren, there's nothing else she can think of until they're in action. Then, everyone is after them, there's hardly any hope, and neither of them know what to do half the time.
This doesn't pose for any kind of upbeat, or even sometimes happy, book.
4.2
Dull.
This could also be stated as "unoriginal."
Ok, they're not synonyms, but in the this case, they coincide frequently.
She goes to school. She comes home. She watches tv. So many Vague impressions that barely get the thought across.
Let me put it this way: imagine glass. Flat, smooth, yes, but that's not the important part. Close your eyes and think of what glass smells like... Is there anything? Anything at all? No, not really.
On the other hand, thing of a tangerine or an orange. You take a whiff..., and wow... Your mind erupts with the sharp and fragrant aroma. It's fantastic!
The tangerine is Birthmarked or Skulduggery Pleasant or some other book.
The glass is Yesterday.
4.3
Occasionally unbelieveable.
I'm afraid I just have to give an example from the donkey's mouth, if you'll pardon the expression.
*SPOILER ALERT*
When Garren and Freya have met up with their grandfather, and then they are running from the black vehicle, they burst into someone's house. This someone is a blind woman, and rather than calling the police or turning them in when the bad guys come to investigate at her door, she hides them. Why? Because she had some trouble with the police in the past...
Really?
They just *happen* to let themselves into the one house in which there's a person who has had trouble with the police in the past and is willing to hide away possible criminals? Not only that, but she gives them money and tickets. It's just... seriously?
I'm sorry, but there's no way that could happen. Robots in the future? Fine. This? No. Because it doesn't make any sensible or magical sense.
*SPOILER OVER*
4.4
There are two other subjects I must mention concerning the way Yesterday was written. The first, is punctuation. Some author's overload a story with periods and fragments. Unfortunately, Yesterday is just the opposite. Every other sentence is a run-on lacking a comma, period, or semicolon.
Without these necessary structural parts of any piece of writing, the reader becomes confused by what's being said, and sometimes has to skip over sentences without understanding their meaning.
This, of course, bodes ill for any struggling novel.
4.5
Lastly, I must say this is also a conglomeration of the other things that have been spoken on. This is how Yesterday, after that first chapter, suddenly becomes slow and disappointing. It started with a sugar rush but failed to keep the theme going. Hardly anything happens until, oh, about 150 pages into the story. After that, it gathers up it's strength slowly to push on and becomes a bit more exciting, true, but not as exciting as could be hoped for.
5.
I suppose, to sum it all up, I was... dismayed with Yesterday. Personally, I wouldn't suggest it to anybody, as there are many far better novels out there in my opinion, and I'm going to try to sell it to a used bookstore to get some of my money back...
If you're thinking about reading this book... Well, take a moment to reconsider and check out some other books first.
Yours truly,
Skyril