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Legacy of the Dreamer #1
Winds of Fate
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A girl with dreams that are not her own, a king not long upon his throne and the fallen knight that binds their destiny. Alina has spent her entire life at Dawnslight Temple, fumbling her way through her duties, avoiding the Matron by day and the strange dreams that haunt her at night. Dreams of places she’s never been, people she’s never met, monsters that couldn't possibly exist. When a Baron from Vayne comes to the tiny island her reality is turned upside down. Her visitor is not who he claims to be, the real noble is floating face down in the docks and he's a bloodthirsty warrior with a singular purpose; her. Suddenly, everything she knew about the Gods, the world, and even herself, is wrong. Her dreams are much more than they seem, and her destiny, her abilities, too impossible to be real. Hunted by remulants, creatures born from the dark God Nottciset, for reasons she doesn’t understand, Alina has no choice but to follow the handsome yet haunted stranger across the realm to Saphir. A harsh northern kingdom where a young king with a mysterious power struggles to protect his people from the calculating Prince of Vayne, who is determined to claim the lost chal’sei, essence of the departed gods, in his own quest for immortality by any means necessary.
A girl with dreams that are not her own, a king not long upon his throne and the fallen knight that binds their destiny. Alina has spent her entire life at Dawnslight Temple, fumbling her way through her duties, avoiding the Matron by day and the strange dreams that haunt her at night. Dreams of places she’s never been, people she’s never met, monsters that couldn't possibly exist. When a Baron from Vayne comes to the tiny island her reality is turned upside down. Her visitor is not who he claims to be, the real noble is floating face down in the docks and he's a bloodthirsty warrior with a singular purpose; her. Suddenly, everything she knew about the Gods, the world, and even herself, is wrong. Her dreams are much more than they seem, and her destiny, her abilities, too impossible to be real. Hunted by remulants, creatures born from the dark God Nottciset, for reasons she doesn’t understand, Alina has no choice but to follow the handsome yet haunted stranger across the realm to Saphir. A harsh northern kingdom where a young king with a mysterious power struggles to protect his people from the calculating Prince of Vayne, who is determined to claim the lost chal’sei, essence of the departed gods, in his own quest for immortality by any means necessary.
362 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 30, 2011
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January 22, 2016
Actual Rating: Did Not Finish (DNF)
Winds of Fate is an unmitigated disaster. I can make it through books that have rough plots, awful characters with no life or personality to them, worlds that feel empty, and dialogue that seems simple at best. What I can’t do is read an entire book, and a nearly 400-page one at that, which has so many technical issues as well as the aforementioned stylistic problems.
This book desperately needed an editor. Grammar mistakes, spelling errors, sentences that made no sense, words used incorrectly, formatting problems, and a myriad of other issues were a constant presence in Winds of Fate. Aside from that, the actual writing was poor at best, and there was little-to-no cohesion in the plot, nor a single interesting character to be found.
In short, I found nothing redeeming in Winds of Fate, and after I felt like I had read far enough (~100 pages) that I could give a reasonably fair review (and also not gouge my eyes out) I gave up.
Winds of Fate is an unmitigated disaster. I can make it through books that have rough plots, awful characters with no life or personality to them, worlds that feel empty, and dialogue that seems simple at best. What I can’t do is read an entire book, and a nearly 400-page one at that, which has so many technical issues as well as the aforementioned stylistic problems.
This book desperately needed an editor. Grammar mistakes, spelling errors, sentences that made no sense, words used incorrectly, formatting problems, and a myriad of other issues were a constant presence in Winds of Fate. Aside from that, the actual writing was poor at best, and there was little-to-no cohesion in the plot, nor a single interesting character to be found.
In short, I found nothing redeeming in Winds of Fate, and after I felt like I had read far enough (~100 pages) that I could give a reasonably fair review (and also not gouge my eyes out) I gave up.
January 14, 2013
I struggled with what I would rate this book. On one hand, it had as many typos and word misuse as my brother's homework, but at the same time, I really feel the writer is talented! Why do I say that? Because I couldn't get the story out of my head, I kept wondering "what will happen next?" This story reminds me of why I fell so madly in love with true fantasy to begin with.
One thing I really struggled with is how blurry the line between good and evil is. In the first half, it was really hard to discern who I should be rooting for with all the shifting perspectives. The shifts weren't distracting, they just showed all sides of the story, which I think was the author's intent.
Alina, the main character, is alright. She's not my favorite heroine ever, but she still had some of those little quirks that make you worry about her. There were a few parts where I wanted to slap her and ask her what the $&@#! are you doing?!" but it was because I was worried about her. I particularly don't understand why she would .
Arn, her sort-of love interest, was a mysterious and fascinating character. He was probably my favorite character, mainly because he was so dedicated to honor and to me that is a very endearing trait for characters to have. He also seems to care for Alina a bit more than he lets on, but I think I've figured out why he isn't pursuing her. (YOU will have to read the book, ha-ha!)
Now let's talk about Liane, the newly-made king who travels with Alina and Arn for most of the latter portion of the book. He's a creep. And I think I'm being generous. He holds very little/no respect for women in that he uses and loses them like toys, but I could forgive that if it weren't for him slaughtering the old king's rightful heir and supporters to claim the throne and then taking the heir's betrothed into his bed and essentially raping her. There were parts where it was easy to forget Liane's rather icky background, but he's more the kind of guy to beat up than hang out with. That sounded mean. I'm sorry, I just...ugh!
Overall, this book did had some redeemable qualities--intrigue, action, mystery, magic, a dash of almost-romance. It was enjoyable and I do want to read the sequel. I hope that the author keeps writing. She's got talent!
One thing I really struggled with is how blurry the line between good and evil is. In the first half, it was really hard to discern who I should be rooting for with all the shifting perspectives. The shifts weren't distracting, they just showed all sides of the story, which I think was the author's intent.
Alina, the main character, is alright. She's not my favorite heroine ever, but she still had some of those little quirks that make you worry about her. There were a few parts where I wanted to slap her and ask her what the $&@#! are you doing?!" but it was because I was worried about her. I particularly don't understand why she would .
Arn, her sort-of love interest, was a mysterious and fascinating character. He was probably my favorite character, mainly because he was so dedicated to honor and to me that is a very endearing trait for characters to have. He also seems to care for Alina a bit more than he lets on, but I think I've figured out why he isn't pursuing her. (YOU will have to read the book, ha-ha!)
Now let's talk about Liane, the newly-made king who travels with Alina and Arn for most of the latter portion of the book. He's a creep. And I think I'm being generous. He holds very little/no respect for women in that he uses and loses them like toys, but I could forgive that if it weren't for him slaughtering the old king's rightful heir and supporters to claim the throne and then taking the heir's betrothed into his bed and essentially raping her. There were parts where it was easy to forget Liane's rather icky background, but he's more the kind of guy to beat up than hang out with. That sounded mean. I'm sorry, I just...ugh!
Overall, this book did had some redeemable qualities--intrigue, action, mystery, magic, a dash of almost-romance. It was enjoyable and I do want to read the sequel. I hope that the author keeps writing. She's got talent!
April 18, 2016
So glad I read this book
This story is fresh, not just reusing of well worn characters from other authors fantasy works. It's not that I've not seen the vile ones in other books but they are not as overused as some fantasy or horror creatures. Michaela has written a story that I found hard to put down and I may hate her now because I'm not wealthy and will have to release some of my limited income to buy futures stories in this series. My one complaint and the reason I didn't give 5 stars was the use of modern English slang in what otherwise is well written story such as when Alina calls her to male companions " you guys" , ( to me at least) it jars me out of the story temporally. I believe the idioms used in a story should match the apparent time period.
This story is fresh, not just reusing of well worn characters from other authors fantasy works. It's not that I've not seen the vile ones in other books but they are not as overused as some fantasy or horror creatures. Michaela has written a story that I found hard to put down and I may hate her now because I'm not wealthy and will have to release some of my limited income to buy futures stories in this series. My one complaint and the reason I didn't give 5 stars was the use of modern English slang in what otherwise is well written story such as when Alina calls her to male companions " you guys" , ( to me at least) it jars me out of the story temporally. I believe the idioms used in a story should match the apparent time period.
July 10, 2013
I love this book. Be prepared, it is long, yet so worth it. I absolutely loved the story. It is filled with so much detail. It is well thought out and carried itself throughout. The characters are very good. I love the humor between the main characters. This novel is well written. A definite must read. Recommended! Looking forward to reading more of this story.
February 28, 2015
Holy moly. It's books like this that make me wish I could put them down as soon as I knew they'd be a miserable experience. Unfortunately, once I start a book I have to finish it. The author on the other hand didn't feel the same it seems, and this books reads worse than a first draft. I fear even if she took a basic grammar class and was given a dictionary it wouldn't save this piece of work.
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