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288 pages, Mass Market Paperback
First published January 1, 1982
Patronizingly she had concluded it would attract the same sort of people who crowded similar places in the States. The reality had quite disarmed her, but she was not especially interested in the low-brow amusements like rides and arcades. In her youth she had been escorted to a number of amusement parks by doting parents and grandparents, and had been forced to ride in little cars that banged into one another, little airplanes that swooped sickeningly through the air, and little boats that glided monotonously around a stagnant circle of water. She had not liked them very much, but instinct had told her that she was supposed to enthuse, and she had courteously done so (33).Now, don’t you want to spend another two hundred or so pages with this snotty bitch? If she was riding “little airplanes” and “little boats” when she formed these opinions, then she was a joyless, snotty child who grew into a snotty, condescending adult. As one of those “sort of people” who enjoyed the low-brow amusements of rides and arcades (and still do, to some extent) (along with millions of other Americans), the author has early on primed me to dislike her intensely. Christian is also a condescending bore and treats his mother as if she were a wayward teenager instead of a mature, intelligent, successful woman. Granted, I think Peters is working on a theme here (as one of the villains does what he does due to his own boorish, overbearing adult child), but presenting both of the MC as unappealing snobs doesn’t encourage readers to keep reading. It’s possible that Peters is expressing her own opinion of amusement parks via Elizabeth because she has a weakness for authorial intrusion. I’ve read many of her books several times and I’ve noticed that Peters/Michaels (Mertz, really) will insert statements like this: “Eccentricity is permissible in the elderly, if they are rich enough or distinguished enough” (35). While that statement is connected the previous sentence (Margaret is eccentric), it’s plunked down on the page without being attributed to any of the characters. It’s odd and pulls you from the story because it’s clearly the author speaking, not Margaret or Elizabeth and definitely not Christian, since he’s the one scolding his mother for wanting to ride the carousel.