Having read book #9 (yeah, I started reading the series from the wrong end, but the blurb sounded quite good) I decided to buy three first books as well. The first one was okay, I even kind of liked it, but this, oh boy, this was a total disaster! Ugh, I don't even know where to start. And I have only myself to blame for buying it in the first place.
So, why 1 star?
The whole story was highly unrealistic.
First of all, a straight guy suddenly becomes gay. Don't get me wrong, I love GFY stories, but what we have here is some kind of parody. In a good GFY story there's always some angst, what with questioning one's sexulity, being afraid of how others are going to react when they find out the truth, and all these things that should have been here as well. What we get instead is a straight turned gay assassin who gives BJs like a pro and who wants to marry the guy he barely knows. Just WTF is this?
Oh, and don't even get me started on the whole rape thing. There should have been drama. I think that flashbacks would have worked perfectly. Instead we read about a guy who was raped, now constantly sporting a hard on and salivating at the thought of having sex with another man. Again, WTF?
And why the hell at least one of the MCs in this series always giggle? Yeah, I'm not talking about this book only. The same goes for book #1 and I even took a peek at book #3. Most of them giggle!! Well, at least book #9 is giggle free, thank God.
As for the dialogues, ugh. Some of them were killing me.
“Just go slow, think of me as a woman but...not.” - Seriously??
And finally, the writing. Frankly, it's a mess. There's a lot of spelling mistakes. This is just one of them:
He ran his hands up and down Mark’s stomach softly; all while his tongue played with Mark’s naval. - Mark's naval? Really??
All in all, this is not a book I would recommend to anyone. But that's just my opinion. Obviously, some readers did like it and there will be more considering it a great read. I, however, am not one of them.
1 star