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Eileen falls further down the rabbit hole, as her husband continues her training. A deep passion is ignited within her, and Eileen finds herself adapting to her new role more fully than she would have dreamed possible.

As her training continues, she is awakened to a world of new possibilities, more daring and exciting than she would have dreamed of.

285 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 20, 2011

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398 reviews67 followers
April 23, 2015
I rate Evocation 5 very moist stars! Book 2 continues the hot master/slave relationship started in book one, but it may even be better! (Read book 1 first.) I thoroughly enjoyed the kinky escapades detailed in this book. It was like the author shamelessly stole many of my most private fantasies and then put them to life on the pages of this book. I really think I should receive a book royalty for my fantasy contributions, LOL. Can you tell I enjoyed this book?

Evocation is pure sex fantasy. I don't think anyone could have that much sex and still be able to walk. There was a story too as the couple builds their master/slave, husband/wife relationship. Normally if I was to read a book with that much sex, I would get tired of it after awhile, but the sex scenes were sooo creative and well described that it was a pure joy to read. Just about everything is explored between the couple in these two books. You have humiliating predicaments that the slave encounters, bondage, anal, orgasm denial, spanking, a little fun time in wooden stocks, a cage scene, really hot (I mean HOT) doctor appointments, tattooing, group sex and the list goes on. However, it gets down and dirty so stay away if you only enjoy vanilla ice cream. This story has more flavors than a Ben & Jerry's truck plowing into a Baskin and Robbins ice cream store! (Sorry, my attempt at humor :D )

The book is well-written and as I said, the scenes are so well described. In fact, I thought I was being trained as a sex slave at times as my mind actively engaged in the fantasy. If you read this book alone prepare ahead of time by purchasing a large box of batteries and a fan. Enjoy.
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113 reviews25 followers
July 22, 2021
3.5 stars! ⭐

Disclaimer: this isn't a romance.

Unfortunately, I kind of got bored reading all the ✨rape scenes✨in this book. This book starts where the previous one ended, with both of them returning from their honeymoon.

The husband continues to train his wife to become the perfect sex slave, and there are also doctor's visits. I love medical kink so naturally I devoured this part. The doctor straps her in a chair and there are men and women who watch her as he rapes her. If you love voyeurism, you'll love this. The nurse sucks her breast, and the doctor shows the reactions of her pussy on computer screen to the people. It was so dirty and filthy lol.

The part I enjoyed immensely while reading was the gang bang. The husband knows his wife has pirate fantasies, where all the pirates kidnap her and rape her. So, like the perfect husband he is, he fulfills his wife's wishes.

He invites his friends at a house party after their honeymoon and takes his wife to their room. Their he strips her and makes her wear very short shorts and a top which doesn't hide anything. He makes her wear a blindfold and calls his friends. And, you guessed it right each one of them takes turn with her and rapes her. She doesn't want to first, but slowly she starts actively participating in her own gang rape.

I was liking this one too at first, and then it got repetitive. I just skimmed the last pages.
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663 reviews148 followers
August 18, 2014
I want to thank Layla, for introducing me to writer William Vitelli, I have devoured his books and they really hit my kink buttons.

This is the second of two linked novels that continues the story of Anthony and his new wife Eileen. Eileen through her upbringing is sexually repressed, but in talking to Anthony has divulged to fantasies where she is taken by strangers and forced to submit to sex with them.

This moves onto public display and further humiliation and other partners while her husband watches, so voyeur aspects too. As his continued training to make Eileen his ideal, the perfectly submissive wife, he continues to chip away at her repressions in the most delightfully erotic and titillating fashion.

For those into medical kink Eileen has continued medicals arranged by her husband with his doctor friend each month...and it will horrify some but be an erotic turn on for the rest of us and includes nurse and patient experiences too;)

I loved these books and can see me reading them again in the future, 5 stars.
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569 reviews61 followers
April 3, 2015
The training continues...

Again, I couldn't put it down and, again, I have no justification for why I was so enthralled except to say that it's ridiculously hot. Eileen endures one humiliating act after another and is utterly dominated by her husband. There's medical play, for those into that kink, but the whole of the book is TPE. She finally accepts who she is and is beautiful in her submission. Sizzling hot, this book is page after descriptive page of sex between a Master and his slave. If you enjoyed book 1, this is guaranteed book bliss.
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30 reviews
October 25, 2016
The first word that comes to mind about this book is WOW!! Secondly let me say that if you haven't read book 1 "Elicitation" you should do so before you read this one. While book 1 was an awesome book, "Evocation" (in my opinion) was a great deal better! Like book 1, this is Non-Con/Dub-Con rife with strong themes of Humiliation/Degradation/Objectification throughout the entire story. Also, again as in book 1, there is a tremendous amount of hot & steamy sex scenes (literally hundreds of them)! However, unlike the first book, "Evocation" contains a substantially larger variety of kinks! But what really makes it different, and more enjoyable, is the amount of time Anthony (Eileen's husband) spends conditioning Eileen's body and mind in order to turn her into the perfect slave. The great detail given from Eileen's POV (all the thoughts running through her mind, the denial of her body's responses to her training and even to her own fantasies) really make "Evocation" a thoroughly enjoyable and highly erotic read! Both of these books will find a place in my list of favorites. Five stars all around!! *****
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Author 13 books20 followers
January 8, 2014
Finished this just before the new year. My favorite all year! Great variety in the types of sex/training included. A fair amount of repetition in the dialogue and her inner monologue ("No! Anthony!"), which drew me out more than once, but there were more then enough good things to make up for it.
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296 reviews6 followers
October 13, 2015
Not as fantastic as the first book, but I still liked it a lot !

Some of the things he made her do! Oh boy!!

Again the books was in the females point of view, but it did also switch occasionally to the males.
291 reviews1 follower
February 7, 2018
This is one of the filthiest books I've ever read and I loved every word. It's dirty and smartly written. No inner goddesses need apply here.
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1,926 reviews54 followers
October 26, 2018
3.5 seriously smutty, Kindle melting stars!
Wow this was the sort of pure erotica that I can't do often.

Thanks so much to Nikki for treating me to this one, I finally got around to it and I'd never have found it without you!!!

Okay, need to find me a Christian or Amish romance to cool off with!! (yeah, I'm joking!)
Profile Image for Mery.
338 reviews
April 11, 2018
This is not easy to review since I both liked and disliked the series of the Training of Eileen. As a general rule I try not to think much when reading Erotica but it was hard sometimes considering the drastic and sudden change to Eileen's life and how it was all decided without her.

Overall, considering it is an erotica, book the scenes were sexy though they did push limits. I think my pushing mine went too far with these stories. I found interesting the conscious intent in the training and the changes as well as Eileen's reluctant willingness.

I wish things had happen more slowly, i wish she could had kept a more functional life. But... I did continue with the story.
80 reviews
May 28, 2015
I would have given the book a higher rating, but too many lesbian vibes killed the mood for me much too often.
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