I really really wanted to like this book. I really really did. And I guess I kind of did like it, because I read until the end. If I'd have read this book when I was thirteen, I'd have sighed and given it a 5 star rating, but I'm a going on eighteen and I now know the craft of writing much better.
It started off promising. The situation was intriguing, and I could sympathise with Eliana upon her situation. It continued to look quite promising, but there got to a point where there just weren't enough things happening - let me explain.
The whole point of novel structure is that a person is put into a situation and spends the majority of the novel overcoming it. Well, Eliana seemed to achieve her goal quite easily, and the issues with Sasha all so quickly becoming quite insignificant. To me, the novel lacked much complexity, depth or direction. There were quite a few opportunities for subplots but none of them surfaced.
Another thing that could really be improved is the characterisation, which was a bit mediocre - and where it was good, the character was not likable. There's a fine line between being stubborn and being a bit of a cow, and for me, Eliana crossed that line. Maybe that's just me, but I didn't like her and I didn't really think she deserved Lucas.
On the positive side, Schofield's writing showed so much potential! Which is sad, really, because she could've pulled of something better than this if it had a little more work. Some of her descriptions were fantastic, and the voice was pretty good, but it was too rushed. Another few edits - doing more showing, instead of telling - could have really brought it on. Then it might have been worth a few more stars. Having said that, it's a very easy read and, had my inner writer not been alive and kicking, this book might have achieved more stars. However, I do believe some younger teens might really enjoy this book.