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The Return
Thriller, suspense, action, intrigue: The Return is a story of the modern day fulfillment of the Grail prophecy.
The time has come for the prophesied return of Christ. Long thought extinct, the secret Order of Knights Templar battle the Dark Forces that fear His return.
At the center of this battle of good & evil are Sarah Davidson, an expectant mother with an unique heritage, & Peter Christos, her shipping magnate husband. The couple, who were married in the presence of the Ark of the Covenant, is confronted with a series of surreptitious schemes & attacks causing them to flee to seek a secure birthplace for their son.
They are aided in this endeavor by the Knights Templar, a clandestine organization that has, over the centuries, amassed enormous wealth & power & the organization to deliver it in anticipation of this day.
Ultimately, they engage in a grand battle for the prophesied birth.
The time has come for the prophesied return of Christ. Long thought extinct, the secret Order of Knights Templar battle the Dark Forces that fear His return.
At the center of this battle of good & evil are Sarah Davidson, an expectant mother with an unique heritage, & Peter Christos, her shipping magnate husband. The couple, who were married in the presence of the Ark of the Covenant, is confronted with a series of surreptitious schemes & attacks causing them to flee to seek a secure birthplace for their son.
They are aided in this endeavor by the Knights Templar, a clandestine organization that has, over the centuries, amassed enormous wealth & power & the organization to deliver it in anticipation of this day.
Ultimately, they engage in a grand battle for the prophesied birth.
317 pages, Nook
First published January 1, 2012
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May 29, 2013
As reviewed at Indie Books R Us:
Never having read The Da Vinci Code (I know, you can flog me later), I was able to go into Carter Vance’s book without any sort of bias. And while the storyline and ideas were engaging, the book simply didn’t work for me as a reader.
The book is told from multiple viewpoints. We meet Geoff, an American banker vacationing at his friend’s estate in France; Jacques, said friend and secret Templar Knight; and Sarah and Peter, whose relationship is vital to the story’s plot.
The idea behind this story is that Sarah is the descendant of Jesus and Mary Magdalene, and that her child with Peter is the second coming of Christ. Vance drops subtle clues and hints through Geoff’s obsession with the Templars, which leads him to various locations all over the globe.
One of my main issues with the book was that the plot moves so quickly that the reader never gets a chance to get to know the parties involved. There are multiple points where Vance could have provided clever insight or interjected more personality, but the plot overrules the characters, and we never get to see more than a basic two-dimensional representation of them. From what I could glean, I really liked Sarah’s character and her relationship with Peter, but the reader only gets brief glimpses. When one of the main characters died, I felt little more than a passing sympathy.
I understand what Vance was trying to do, but it didn’t work for me. The pacing was far too rushed for such a complex story, and I felt that that robbed the reader of what could’ve been an engaging and exciting read. However, the story beneath the plot is done well, and the book is very well-researched. I just wanted to see more.
Never having read The Da Vinci Code (I know, you can flog me later), I was able to go into Carter Vance’s book without any sort of bias. And while the storyline and ideas were engaging, the book simply didn’t work for me as a reader.
The book is told from multiple viewpoints. We meet Geoff, an American banker vacationing at his friend’s estate in France; Jacques, said friend and secret Templar Knight; and Sarah and Peter, whose relationship is vital to the story’s plot.
The idea behind this story is that Sarah is the descendant of Jesus and Mary Magdalene, and that her child with Peter is the second coming of Christ. Vance drops subtle clues and hints through Geoff’s obsession with the Templars, which leads him to various locations all over the globe.
One of my main issues with the book was that the plot moves so quickly that the reader never gets a chance to get to know the parties involved. There are multiple points where Vance could have provided clever insight or interjected more personality, but the plot overrules the characters, and we never get to see more than a basic two-dimensional representation of them. From what I could glean, I really liked Sarah’s character and her relationship with Peter, but the reader only gets brief glimpses. When one of the main characters died, I felt little more than a passing sympathy.
I understand what Vance was trying to do, but it didn’t work for me. The pacing was far too rushed for such a complex story, and I felt that that robbed the reader of what could’ve been an engaging and exciting read. However, the story beneath the plot is done well, and the book is very well-researched. I just wanted to see more.
March 13, 2013
This book was received thankfully from the author in return for an honest and fair review.
'The Return' is a story about the rebirth of Christ, the second coming. Only, as the dark forces are doing all they can to prevent this major event from taking place we find out that the Knights Templar are still in existence and have been waiting for this moment where they can use their resources to protect Him and His family.
The story begins with Geoff, an investment banker, having a holiday at his friend Jacque's house in Southern France. Here, Geoff finds a secret room full of literature. He discovers a book referring to the Knights Templar, written in modern day language and referring to the Templars as being in existence today. From here, Geoff quickly takes a plane back to London and carries out in-depth research regarding the Templars and their purpose, theories and background. He travels various places around the globe to carry out more, extensive research. And, gradually, certain people begin to get suspicious and track him down to find out what he knows.
I found Geoff to be a little naïve as there was at least one occasion when he felt that he was being followed. Later, he is approached by a woman, Regina, claiming to be a lawyer, who just happens to be inquiring about something in relation to the Templars and yet he doesn't add these situations up. He doesn't seem to think that it is too much of a coincidence. This was a little frustrating and he was subsequently killed.
Personally, I wasn't happy with the storyline at this point as Geoff appeared to be the main character, the hero, and yet here he was being killed off. I was left trying to pick up the pieces of the other characters to try and connect with them but this did prove to be difficult as up until this point Geoff and his findings were focused heavily on, making the other characters appear to be more brief, background characters.
The story then unfolds to reveal that Geoff's friends, Peter Christos and Sarah Davidson, become an item, marry and Sarah falls pregnant. Her baby is destined to be Him, the one that the human race has been waiting for for centuries. This seems to happen all too quickly with very little attention paid to connecting with these characters and feeling their relationship and romance grow. More description and detail were needed in these areas.
The reader is then taken on an adventure as the Knights Templar make preparations for the birth and protection of Him, whilst constantly under the threat of the dark forces. Both sides have very strong allies and support from the Vatican to scientists to drugs traffickers, etc. This adds intensity to the story as the reader is never sure which side will possibly win as they both seem fairly equal.
This novel is mostly written to the point. It is very direct and factual when it comes to theories, however it did lack some description in parts and emotion to the characters. On the one hand, it was nice to follow as theories were occasionally repeated, not too often, but enough to keep the reader in check. And, on the other hand, it would have been an idea to elaborate more with romance and emotion on the relationship between Peter and Sarah, thus helping the reader to engage with their characters and gain a great sense of how they became so close so quickly.
When it comes to the theories, it is obvious that Carter Vance has a great deal of knowledge in this area and he does explain these ideas well. This is the first book I have read covering this subject and I initally felt that this would be way over my head, however I did understand and enjoy the storyline.
My overall opinion of 'The Return' is a mixed bag. However, on the whole it is an enjoyable, well-written read. It has kept me entertained throughout and it is surprisingly a nice read to follow, as opposed to losing me with language and theology.
'The Return' is a story about the rebirth of Christ, the second coming. Only, as the dark forces are doing all they can to prevent this major event from taking place we find out that the Knights Templar are still in existence and have been waiting for this moment where they can use their resources to protect Him and His family.
The story begins with Geoff, an investment banker, having a holiday at his friend Jacque's house in Southern France. Here, Geoff finds a secret room full of literature. He discovers a book referring to the Knights Templar, written in modern day language and referring to the Templars as being in existence today. From here, Geoff quickly takes a plane back to London and carries out in-depth research regarding the Templars and their purpose, theories and background. He travels various places around the globe to carry out more, extensive research. And, gradually, certain people begin to get suspicious and track him down to find out what he knows.
I found Geoff to be a little naïve as there was at least one occasion when he felt that he was being followed. Later, he is approached by a woman, Regina, claiming to be a lawyer, who just happens to be inquiring about something in relation to the Templars and yet he doesn't add these situations up. He doesn't seem to think that it is too much of a coincidence. This was a little frustrating and he was subsequently killed.
Personally, I wasn't happy with the storyline at this point as Geoff appeared to be the main character, the hero, and yet here he was being killed off. I was left trying to pick up the pieces of the other characters to try and connect with them but this did prove to be difficult as up until this point Geoff and his findings were focused heavily on, making the other characters appear to be more brief, background characters.
The story then unfolds to reveal that Geoff's friends, Peter Christos and Sarah Davidson, become an item, marry and Sarah falls pregnant. Her baby is destined to be Him, the one that the human race has been waiting for for centuries. This seems to happen all too quickly with very little attention paid to connecting with these characters and feeling their relationship and romance grow. More description and detail were needed in these areas.
The reader is then taken on an adventure as the Knights Templar make preparations for the birth and protection of Him, whilst constantly under the threat of the dark forces. Both sides have very strong allies and support from the Vatican to scientists to drugs traffickers, etc. This adds intensity to the story as the reader is never sure which side will possibly win as they both seem fairly equal.
This novel is mostly written to the point. It is very direct and factual when it comes to theories, however it did lack some description in parts and emotion to the characters. On the one hand, it was nice to follow as theories were occasionally repeated, not too often, but enough to keep the reader in check. And, on the other hand, it would have been an idea to elaborate more with romance and emotion on the relationship between Peter and Sarah, thus helping the reader to engage with their characters and gain a great sense of how they became so close so quickly.
When it comes to the theories, it is obvious that Carter Vance has a great deal of knowledge in this area and he does explain these ideas well. This is the first book I have read covering this subject and I initally felt that this would be way over my head, however I did understand and enjoy the storyline.
My overall opinion of 'The Return' is a mixed bag. However, on the whole it is an enjoyable, well-written read. It has kept me entertained throughout and it is surprisingly a nice read to follow, as opposed to losing me with language and theology.
February 18, 2013
Carter Vance took a real risk, stepping into a difficult genre that is ruled by Dan Brown. The author is to be commended for an excellent story line and superb research.
I found the "Dan Brown-esque" style to be engaging and the strong point of the novel. I am a reader who loves Biblical prophecy, end times eschatology, and especially when it is rolled into a modern day tale. Who doesn't enjoy reading about the Knights Templar, and their place in history?
I, too, enjoyed the short chapters, ala James Patterson. Good breaking points if one cannot read the book in one or two sittings.
I agree with one earlier reviewer who said that the pace was fast to the point that we didn't get to really know key individual characters. It was more like a written recap of the happenings. Like Sgt. Joe Friday used to say, "just the facts ma'am". I enjoyed the facts, but I wanted more depth of character.
All in all it was a pretty good read. The only major distractions to me were the numerous typos. Words left out or just plain missing. And also some prevalent facts of the day. Early in the book, the story recounts two of the protagonists "kissing at the airport gate". That hasn't happened in a dozen or more years. While it doesn't really sidetrack the story, it does question the writer's attention to detail.
Like I said, THE RETURN is a good read. This is not an advertisement for my services, but I would suggest that for future works, the author retain the services of a proof reader, like myself, to eliminate the glaring typos. Our services are very reasonably priced. Enough of my advertisement....
If you like the subject matter at hand, I think you will get a few good evenings of good, entertaining, and informative reading. The Return challenges you to think "what if?"
I received "The Return" as an ARC directly from the author. I accepted the book with the understanding that I would produce a timely and fair review of the work. I have no personal or professional ties with the author. In my reviews, I try to point out my observations without giving any SPOILERS. You may also read my reviews at JonReviewsBooks.wordpress.com and on Amazon.com.
I found the "Dan Brown-esque" style to be engaging and the strong point of the novel. I am a reader who loves Biblical prophecy, end times eschatology, and especially when it is rolled into a modern day tale. Who doesn't enjoy reading about the Knights Templar, and their place in history?
I, too, enjoyed the short chapters, ala James Patterson. Good breaking points if one cannot read the book in one or two sittings.
I agree with one earlier reviewer who said that the pace was fast to the point that we didn't get to really know key individual characters. It was more like a written recap of the happenings. Like Sgt. Joe Friday used to say, "just the facts ma'am". I enjoyed the facts, but I wanted more depth of character.
All in all it was a pretty good read. The only major distractions to me were the numerous typos. Words left out or just plain missing. And also some prevalent facts of the day. Early in the book, the story recounts two of the protagonists "kissing at the airport gate". That hasn't happened in a dozen or more years. While it doesn't really sidetrack the story, it does question the writer's attention to detail.
Like I said, THE RETURN is a good read. This is not an advertisement for my services, but I would suggest that for future works, the author retain the services of a proof reader, like myself, to eliminate the glaring typos. Our services are very reasonably priced. Enough of my advertisement....
If you like the subject matter at hand, I think you will get a few good evenings of good, entertaining, and informative reading. The Return challenges you to think "what if?"
I received "The Return" as an ARC directly from the author. I accepted the book with the understanding that I would produce a timely and fair review of the work. I have no personal or professional ties with the author. In my reviews, I try to point out my observations without giving any SPOILERS. You may also read my reviews at JonReviewsBooks.wordpress.com and on Amazon.com.
October 27, 2013
I received this book to give an honest review.
I am giving this book a 4 1/2 star rating. It was really good, but there was a part that didn't make me really believe this person. What happens if the Holy Grail was not a cup or something material but more of a person? How would that change things. With The Return, we follow the Templars and how they go to the ends of the Earth to protect the Holy Grail. We follow Sarah and Peter and their journey of bringing to the world someone who is very important. Now what I didn't see as believable is when Peter was told of Sarah's family history. He just seem to go with the flow and didn't ask questions. Didn't seem bothered much by it. So that was kind of hard to believe.
I want to know who this mystery man is. He seems to be the one that is wanting to put a stop from the prophecy but you never get a name just that he is calling the shots.
There are parts within the story that had me going wow the bad guys will stop at nothing to stop the good from proceeding with their plan because in comes Regina and let me say you will remember who this lady is.
But other than that the book had me captured into reading it.
I have read on some of the reviews that it is almost like The Da Vinci Code. I wish I could say I remember exactly what the Da Vinci Code was about, but I do not think I ever finished the book. So I can not make that reference. If you like reading about prophecies being fulfilled, evil trying to stop the good. Some bad-ass protectors. A little bit of mystery then you should pick up this book. Now mind you there is religion in this book, but it is not the kind of religious book that is being stuck down your throat.
I am giving this book a 4 1/2 star rating. It was really good, but there was a part that didn't make me really believe this person. What happens if the Holy Grail was not a cup or something material but more of a person? How would that change things. With The Return, we follow the Templars and how they go to the ends of the Earth to protect the Holy Grail. We follow Sarah and Peter and their journey of bringing to the world someone who is very important. Now what I didn't see as believable is when Peter was told of Sarah's family history. He just seem to go with the flow and didn't ask questions. Didn't seem bothered much by it. So that was kind of hard to believe.
I want to know who this mystery man is. He seems to be the one that is wanting to put a stop from the prophecy but you never get a name just that he is calling the shots.
There are parts within the story that had me going wow the bad guys will stop at nothing to stop the good from proceeding with their plan because in comes Regina and let me say you will remember who this lady is.
But other than that the book had me captured into reading it.
I have read on some of the reviews that it is almost like The Da Vinci Code. I wish I could say I remember exactly what the Da Vinci Code was about, but I do not think I ever finished the book. So I can not make that reference. If you like reading about prophecies being fulfilled, evil trying to stop the good. Some bad-ass protectors. A little bit of mystery then you should pick up this book. Now mind you there is religion in this book, but it is not the kind of religious book that is being stuck down your throat.
January 17, 2016
While vacationing at his friend’s chateau in France, Geoff, an American banker, discovers an ancient library belonging to the Knights Templar, an organization that is supposed to have disbanded years ago. Out of curiosity, he decides to learn more about the Templars, and learns that their society is actually still active. Meanwhile, Maria Davidson-Morales makes a deathbed confession to her only child, Sarah: the Davidson-Morales family is descended from Jesus Christ Himself. The family has produced only girls for generations, but legend has it that one day, the line will finally yield a male child that will signal His second return.
The Return traces much of the legend that was covered in Dan Brown’s The Da Vinci Code, a controversial bestseller that employed the premise that Mary Magdalene was not a prostitute, but the wife of Jesus Christ and mother of his child. It further explores the idea by introducing other historical elements, such as the Ark of the Covenant.
Unfortunately, The Return just doesn’t work as a novel. The plot is rushed from beginning to end, compressing 500 or 600 pages worth of material into just under 300: holy artifacts are tracked down and Satan’s legions line up to prevent the second birth of Christ. Characters are stunted by time constraints and never really manage to come to life. The reader is allowed to catch brief glimpses of interesting things, but the story never slows down to focus on any of it. So while it has an interesting storyline, The Return still needs a lot of work.
The Return traces much of the legend that was covered in Dan Brown’s The Da Vinci Code, a controversial bestseller that employed the premise that Mary Magdalene was not a prostitute, but the wife of Jesus Christ and mother of his child. It further explores the idea by introducing other historical elements, such as the Ark of the Covenant.
Unfortunately, The Return just doesn’t work as a novel. The plot is rushed from beginning to end, compressing 500 or 600 pages worth of material into just under 300: holy artifacts are tracked down and Satan’s legions line up to prevent the second birth of Christ. Characters are stunted by time constraints and never really manage to come to life. The reader is allowed to catch brief glimpses of interesting things, but the story never slows down to focus on any of it. So while it has an interesting storyline, The Return still needs a lot of work.
February 10, 2013
Disclosure statement: The author sent me a Kindle for this review. I have tried to be honest in this review.
While Geoff is taking a vacation at Jacques Chevalier's house, he finds a hidden room with book shelves lining the wall. One of the books draws his eyes and he reads some of it and photographs some of it. The book appeared to be a new member manual for the Order of the Knights Templar. History said that the secret group was eliminated a long time ago. However, this book seemed to claim that they were still active. He researched the Templars for awhile until he was tortured to death. Others continue his research and become involved in the present day Templars.
I found the story to be exciting although there was some missing words, extra words and typos. These errors didn't distract me from the story. The author repeated himself in some areas because he was telling story from a different character's point of view. This gave me a chance to read parts of the story from three different character's points of view. I found myself fascinated by the corruption in the Catholic church and the thinking of the enemies of the Templars. I would recommend this book to any Christians who loves thrillers. I would not recommend the book to people who want to get to know the characters.
While Geoff is taking a vacation at Jacques Chevalier's house, he finds a hidden room with book shelves lining the wall. One of the books draws his eyes and he reads some of it and photographs some of it. The book appeared to be a new member manual for the Order of the Knights Templar. History said that the secret group was eliminated a long time ago. However, this book seemed to claim that they were still active. He researched the Templars for awhile until he was tortured to death. Others continue his research and become involved in the present day Templars.
I found the story to be exciting although there was some missing words, extra words and typos. These errors didn't distract me from the story. The author repeated himself in some areas because he was telling story from a different character's point of view. This gave me a chance to read parts of the story from three different character's points of view. I found myself fascinated by the corruption in the Catholic church and the thinking of the enemies of the Templars. I would recommend this book to any Christians who loves thrillers. I would not recommend the book to people who want to get to know the characters.
August 16, 2013
A man named Geoff stumbles on a secret room inside his mentor's house where he is vacationing. He reads private documents not meant for his eyes and begins an obsessive search for the Knights Templar. We are soon introduced to Sarah and are told how important she is to this quest. Her blood line dates back to the time of Christ, and if she has a son she will be the future mother of His return.
The Return had a lot of telling rather than showing for me. Also, I know this is fiction, but I had a hard time with the thought of a Roman Catholic Cardinal employing Regina, who disguised as a nun is also a dominatrix, murderer, and the Vatican's private attorney for special matters, as well as there being a secret soundproof room in the Vatican used for evil rituals, eluded sexual romps, and the worship of dark forces. For those who like to take breaks at a chapter's end, this book provides ample opportunity to do that; there are 102 chapters in all.
The author seemed to squeeze too much into the story line and the love that Sarah and David had for each other read a little forced, we are told but never really feel it. But the author finds his voice for storytelling in the action. While the beginning contained impersonal dialogue between the characters, the end action made it worthwhile to keep reading. This book is the first of a series.
The Return had a lot of telling rather than showing for me. Also, I know this is fiction, but I had a hard time with the thought of a Roman Catholic Cardinal employing Regina, who disguised as a nun is also a dominatrix, murderer, and the Vatican's private attorney for special matters, as well as there being a secret soundproof room in the Vatican used for evil rituals, eluded sexual romps, and the worship of dark forces. For those who like to take breaks at a chapter's end, this book provides ample opportunity to do that; there are 102 chapters in all.
The author seemed to squeeze too much into the story line and the love that Sarah and David had for each other read a little forced, we are told but never really feel it. But the author finds his voice for storytelling in the action. While the beginning contained impersonal dialogue between the characters, the end action made it worthwhile to keep reading. This book is the first of a series.
July 30, 2012
Title: The Return
Author: Carter Vance
Genre: Religious Fiction
Publisher: Self-published (unknown date)
Available: $2.99
Rating: 4 stars
Rater: Dihanna
From the publisher:
The Return is an action thriller that challenges us with the possibility that Jesus Christ is returning now. “The world currently in a state of upheaval and getting more chaotic everyday,” states Carter Vance, author of The Return. “Many of the prophesized signs of the end times are here, now, and are an indication of the possible return of Christ.”
What if the Knights Templar never disbanded and have amassed, over the centuries, virtually unlimited resources in anticipation of His return?
What I liked: This books is most assuredly about Good versus Evil and the return of Christ. Here the author speculates about what the Templar’s status has historically been and what it is now. I enjoyed this author’s characters as they were so kind, and the portrayal of the KT made me completely sympathize with them. I loved that in the end good does indeed conquer! I found this a good, well written story.
What I didn’t like: I felt great sadness that several characters, including one I adored, died.
In sum: Very well worth the read.
Author: Carter Vance
Genre: Religious Fiction
Publisher: Self-published (unknown date)
Available: $2.99
Rating: 4 stars
Rater: Dihanna
From the publisher:
The Return is an action thriller that challenges us with the possibility that Jesus Christ is returning now. “The world currently in a state of upheaval and getting more chaotic everyday,” states Carter Vance, author of The Return. “Many of the prophesized signs of the end times are here, now, and are an indication of the possible return of Christ.”
What if the Knights Templar never disbanded and have amassed, over the centuries, virtually unlimited resources in anticipation of His return?
What I liked: This books is most assuredly about Good versus Evil and the return of Christ. Here the author speculates about what the Templar’s status has historically been and what it is now. I enjoyed this author’s characters as they were so kind, and the portrayal of the KT made me completely sympathize with them. I loved that in the end good does indeed conquer! I found this a good, well written story.
What I didn’t like: I felt great sadness that several characters, including one I adored, died.
In sum: Very well worth the read.
December 20, 2012
Review of The Return by Carter Vance
4 stars
Readers who enjoyed “The Da Vinci Code” and its sequels, and readers of Baigent and Lincoln’s “Holy Blood, Holy Grail” (of which I am one) will really benefit from author Carter Vance’s “The Return.” Mr. Vance takes the traditional “what if” question and spins it on its head. What if: the “Holy Grail” isn’t just a chalice? “What if” there is a human bloodline of descendants of the Christ? “What if” the Knights Templar WEREN’T dissolved after the torture and execution of Jacques de Molay, purportedly last Grand Master”? “What if” the Templars continued to exist, in secret, right up to the present day, masters of a vast horde of funds? “What if” an entity existed in opposition to the Roman Catholic Church and to all forces of good?
If that doesn’t whet your appetite, Constant Readers, consider yourselves jaded. If it does, by all means, get “The Return” and learn the answers to these and other pressing questions.
I reviewed an e-book copy provided by the author in return for my fair and impartial review.
4 stars
Readers who enjoyed “The Da Vinci Code” and its sequels, and readers of Baigent and Lincoln’s “Holy Blood, Holy Grail” (of which I am one) will really benefit from author Carter Vance’s “The Return.” Mr. Vance takes the traditional “what if” question and spins it on its head. What if: the “Holy Grail” isn’t just a chalice? “What if” there is a human bloodline of descendants of the Christ? “What if” the Knights Templar WEREN’T dissolved after the torture and execution of Jacques de Molay, purportedly last Grand Master”? “What if” the Templars continued to exist, in secret, right up to the present day, masters of a vast horde of funds? “What if” an entity existed in opposition to the Roman Catholic Church and to all forces of good?
If that doesn’t whet your appetite, Constant Readers, consider yourselves jaded. If it does, by all means, get “The Return” and learn the answers to these and other pressing questions.
I reviewed an e-book copy provided by the author in return for my fair and impartial review.
March 31, 2013
My Review: This is an interesting book about the prophecy of the return or Christ. It delves into a lot of little known prophecy of the Holy Grail and the ark and the signs of the second coming. The author builds around the new Holy mother giving birth and the Knights of Templar(a group long thought to be extinct)protecting her and the babe from the forces of dark. It is a fast moving story maybe a little too fast. I would have liked to have the people developed a little more so I cared more deeply for them. There are quite a few editing errors, missing words and such. Most of them I could read through without too much distress. For anyone who likes things like searches for the Holy Grail and prophecy this a good read. There was a lot of research that went into this I think to include all kinds of predicting. I give this book 4 stars.
January 20, 2015
Oh My God!!! This was truly amazing. The concept of Jesus Christ coming back was truly nice. It reminded me a lot of Dan Brown's Da Vinci Code but only some part of it. The story is as original as it gets. The research done is impeccable and the narration goes well too.
Just at some parts, the narration gets a bit dragged along but that doesn't last for long. Carter Vance does a really nice job with the story and makes the reader really curious to step on to the next book. The second book "The Reawakening" takes up from the where this story leaves.
Must read for all who love thrillers and a bit of history in it
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Just at some parts, the narration gets a bit dragged along but that doesn't last for long. Carter Vance does a really nice job with the story and makes the reader really curious to step on to the next book. The second book "The Reawakening" takes up from the where this story leaves.
Must read for all who love thrillers and a bit of history in it
Source: The Return
July 17, 2012
This is a mystery thriller in the style of Dan Brown's The Da Vinci Code, so if you enjoyed it you might find this book interesting. It borrows some themes from Dan Brown's work, notably SangReal referring to Royal Blood and Jesus' progeny rather than the cup of the Last Supper.
The novel is fast paced, and the action keeps on coming. The characters are sympathetic if somewhat black and white. I did find myself engaged by the protagonists and wanting to read more of their story. This is the first in a series of novels, and I will likely read the others to find out what happens next.
I gave The Return three and a half stars out of five.
The novel is fast paced, and the action keeps on coming. The characters are sympathetic if somewhat black and white. I did find myself engaged by the protagonists and wanting to read more of their story. This is the first in a series of novels, and I will likely read the others to find out what happens next.
I gave The Return three and a half stars out of five.
December 12, 2012
This book comes off as trying to work in the stylized craft that Dan Brown’s The Da Vinci Code managed to achieve. The plot is extremely rushed right off from the beginning. While there are aspects of interesting historical interlude, the timing just does not allow for any reader focus. The concepts need to be further explained and a story developed.
Note: I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Note: I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
June 23, 2015
* Disclaimer: This book was provided by the author in exchange for an honest review. *
What would happen in the world as it is today if the prophecy of the second coming of Christ were to come true? What elements would be in play? How would religion as a whole, the military, civilians, and even the devil act? What exactly would happen?
It is apparent that these were the questions the author asked himself when writing the book. This is a story of layer upon layer of religious mythology, military protocol and much, much more. To describe all of the elements of this book would be like one sitting at an all day convention about what Da Vinci’s true intentions were when creating the Mona Lisa. There is just too much to tell.
Here is the premise:
Disclaimer: If you are a firm believer in your faith, and are not open to a fantastical story about what is in The Bible, then I would not recommend this book to you. Chances are that you will take high offense to its contents.
After over 2000 years the prophecy of the return of Christ is about to come to fruition. However, it isn’t happening in the way that most believe it is. He isn’t descending from heaven on a cloud accompanied by angels as most believe to be the case in accordance to the gospel of Mark in The New Testament of The Bible.
Of course, this is something widely debated within the biblical scholar and priesthood community. The priesthood believes the prophecy with come true verbatim, whereas biblical scholars thinks it’s more metaphorical. But that is besides the point.
He is being born, just as he was the first time around.
Sarah Davidson & Peter Christos, are the parents of the would-be Christ. Their lineage alone is a fascinating one. Sarah descends from Jesus Christ himself. Peter, is a chosen vessel.
The Author uses several very interesting manipulative ideas in order to make everything sound feasible. I actually found it riveting. Of course, a person such as myself—that is compelled by all things mythological (including biblical theory)—would. I spent many years researching the bible and the beliefs therein, I also spent many years comparing those theories to other historical and world wide religions. Suffice it to say that a story that takes elements that interest me and plays with them, always catches my attention.
Within this story we find The Knights Templar, The Vatican, The Dragon, and many more facets. When reading the story I felt as though I were grazing through an encyclopedia written for religious fundamentalists. I have no doubt that the author implemented many hours examining all of the components of this story.
Sarah & Peter decide upon a name for their soon to be born son; Laz. Short for Lazarus Jesus Christos. I dug the name. Of course I’m a person that loves name meanings. If you were to break down the name of the child, it means the following:
The original meaning of Lazarus is:
God is my help.
The most recent meaning of Lazarus is:
He who rose from the dead.
The roots of the name Jesus come from Hebrew, which means:
God saves his people.
Then there is Christos which is Greek, and means:
The Messiah.
If you were to put the meaning of the name together you will find an appealing idea. It is “God is my help, who rose me from the dead, in order to save his people. I am the Messiah.” Pretty cool, huh? Yeah, I think it is.
Okay … so on with the review. Let’s break this down with Pros and Cons. Although, methinks, I shall start with the Cons first as it might help my overall thoughts make more sense.
CONS:
1. There were some punctuation errors throughout the story, although the spelling was correct. I suggest for the author to run through it again to perhaps fixing those in order to provide a smoother read.
2. The entire time I felt as though the story was being rushed along. Many times over it was like I was being forced through the read and was really desiring to establish a deeper connection with the characters. However, since everything was presented with expediency I never got the chance to.
3. While the characters were very interesting, as was the premise, a lot of the time I considered that none of them had any true emotions. Due to this it was hard from me to “feel” anything for them throughout the duration of the story. Not even when Sarah’s mother died or Laz was born. I would have liked a bit more investment in the emotional aspect of the story.
4. While the story is presented and described as a Thriller, there wasn’t much “of a thrill“. I think that this was attributed to the fact that everything was so rushed.
5. I found myself thinking several times over that the author devoted more time to the Military Protocol element than he did in the Character Development element. What this did was present a story that is somehow detached.
Pros:
1. The technical bits of the story were very well researched and many times the author took his time in “explaining” via the prose several elements of the story so as to not leave the reader confused at to what they could be. For example when he was explaining the Arch of the Covenant and it’s whereabouts, what/who The Knights Templar were and the like. All of it was provided with full descriptions.
2. The story had the air of “The Da Vinci Code”. Of course it has some major differences, but reminded me of the aforementioned story nonetheless.
3. There was tons of cryptic biblical innuendos which if you are history and mythology savvy you will pick up on immediately. For example, the mentioned above (Jesus come from the sky with angels). Well, it actually did happen in the story only presented differently than that which man kind expects. In the story there is a battle in the sky with military fighter planes named The Angels. I don’t want to say too much about it as I don’t want to ruin the story for you, but suffice it to say that I found all of those enigmatic suggestions very compelling. Good stuff.
4. I enjoyed the “multicultural” aspect of the story. This isn’t a story that is based in just one place, for one group of people, but it is a story that encompasses the entire world—as it should be. We find Europe, Mexico, America … many places. I enjoyed that.
5. My favorite character, albeit an evil one, was Sister Regina. I found her the most intriguing. Perhaps it was her many faces.
With all of this being said, and weighing in the good and bad, the fairest rating I can give “The Return” is 3 Stars.
If I were rating the book on premise alone, due to the fact that I am big into the subject matter, it could easily gotten 5 stars from me. Meaning that people whom appreciate this type of book might’ve given it the same score, or close to it. However, we have to be fair and look at the book as a whole. Not just premise but readability, character development and the like. Factoring in all of those elements ultimately changes my overall rating.
What would happen in the world as it is today if the prophecy of the second coming of Christ were to come true? What elements would be in play? How would religion as a whole, the military, civilians, and even the devil act? What exactly would happen?
It is apparent that these were the questions the author asked himself when writing the book. This is a story of layer upon layer of religious mythology, military protocol and much, much more. To describe all of the elements of this book would be like one sitting at an all day convention about what Da Vinci’s true intentions were when creating the Mona Lisa. There is just too much to tell.
Here is the premise:
Disclaimer: If you are a firm believer in your faith, and are not open to a fantastical story about what is in The Bible, then I would not recommend this book to you. Chances are that you will take high offense to its contents.
After over 2000 years the prophecy of the return of Christ is about to come to fruition. However, it isn’t happening in the way that most believe it is. He isn’t descending from heaven on a cloud accompanied by angels as most believe to be the case in accordance to the gospel of Mark in The New Testament of The Bible.
Of course, this is something widely debated within the biblical scholar and priesthood community. The priesthood believes the prophecy with come true verbatim, whereas biblical scholars thinks it’s more metaphorical. But that is besides the point.
He is being born, just as he was the first time around.
Sarah Davidson & Peter Christos, are the parents of the would-be Christ. Their lineage alone is a fascinating one. Sarah descends from Jesus Christ himself. Peter, is a chosen vessel.
The Author uses several very interesting manipulative ideas in order to make everything sound feasible. I actually found it riveting. Of course, a person such as myself—that is compelled by all things mythological (including biblical theory)—would. I spent many years researching the bible and the beliefs therein, I also spent many years comparing those theories to other historical and world wide religions. Suffice it to say that a story that takes elements that interest me and plays with them, always catches my attention.
Within this story we find The Knights Templar, The Vatican, The Dragon, and many more facets. When reading the story I felt as though I were grazing through an encyclopedia written for religious fundamentalists. I have no doubt that the author implemented many hours examining all of the components of this story.
Sarah & Peter decide upon a name for their soon to be born son; Laz. Short for Lazarus Jesus Christos. I dug the name. Of course I’m a person that loves name meanings. If you were to break down the name of the child, it means the following:
The original meaning of Lazarus is:
God is my help.
The most recent meaning of Lazarus is:
He who rose from the dead.
The roots of the name Jesus come from Hebrew, which means:
God saves his people.
Then there is Christos which is Greek, and means:
The Messiah.
If you were to put the meaning of the name together you will find an appealing idea. It is “God is my help, who rose me from the dead, in order to save his people. I am the Messiah.” Pretty cool, huh? Yeah, I think it is.
Okay … so on with the review. Let’s break this down with Pros and Cons. Although, methinks, I shall start with the Cons first as it might help my overall thoughts make more sense.
CONS:
1. There were some punctuation errors throughout the story, although the spelling was correct. I suggest for the author to run through it again to perhaps fixing those in order to provide a smoother read.
2. The entire time I felt as though the story was being rushed along. Many times over it was like I was being forced through the read and was really desiring to establish a deeper connection with the characters. However, since everything was presented with expediency I never got the chance to.
3. While the characters were very interesting, as was the premise, a lot of the time I considered that none of them had any true emotions. Due to this it was hard from me to “feel” anything for them throughout the duration of the story. Not even when Sarah’s mother died or Laz was born. I would have liked a bit more investment in the emotional aspect of the story.
4. While the story is presented and described as a Thriller, there wasn’t much “of a thrill“. I think that this was attributed to the fact that everything was so rushed.
5. I found myself thinking several times over that the author devoted more time to the Military Protocol element than he did in the Character Development element. What this did was present a story that is somehow detached.
Pros:
1. The technical bits of the story were very well researched and many times the author took his time in “explaining” via the prose several elements of the story so as to not leave the reader confused at to what they could be. For example when he was explaining the Arch of the Covenant and it’s whereabouts, what/who The Knights Templar were and the like. All of it was provided with full descriptions.
2. The story had the air of “The Da Vinci Code”. Of course it has some major differences, but reminded me of the aforementioned story nonetheless.
3. There was tons of cryptic biblical innuendos which if you are history and mythology savvy you will pick up on immediately. For example, the mentioned above (Jesus come from the sky with angels). Well, it actually did happen in the story only presented differently than that which man kind expects. In the story there is a battle in the sky with military fighter planes named The Angels. I don’t want to say too much about it as I don’t want to ruin the story for you, but suffice it to say that I found all of those enigmatic suggestions very compelling. Good stuff.
4. I enjoyed the “multicultural” aspect of the story. This isn’t a story that is based in just one place, for one group of people, but it is a story that encompasses the entire world—as it should be. We find Europe, Mexico, America … many places. I enjoyed that.
5. My favorite character, albeit an evil one, was Sister Regina. I found her the most intriguing. Perhaps it was her many faces.
With all of this being said, and weighing in the good and bad, the fairest rating I can give “The Return” is 3 Stars.
If I were rating the book on premise alone, due to the fact that I am big into the subject matter, it could easily gotten 5 stars from me. Meaning that people whom appreciate this type of book might’ve given it the same score, or close to it. However, we have to be fair and look at the book as a whole. Not just premise but readability, character development and the like. Factoring in all of those elements ultimately changes my overall rating.
February 7, 2015
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
(Spoilers within)
I'm just going to say it right off: This book didn't work for me.
I've read some other reviews and I agree with some of the things they said and disagree with others. First, I agree that there are no characters in this book. I can summarize everything about a character in one line.
Sarah: She donates to charity and such and is horribly rich.
Peter: He runs a big shipping company place and is horribly rich.
Regina: She serves some guy and wears very impractical clothing. Also, as a woman who is sexual, she's of course pure evil and loves torturing and killing people.
This is honestly about as much as I can tell you about any of these characters. They're cardboard cutouts with names attached.
This book also desperately needs editing. It's not one or two errors. There are errors everywhere.
You're dad would be proud.
"Davidson"? Peter queried.
Today there were arriving at...
Thankfully, it was so expense that is was sold only in small jars.
The tenses will change, quotations marks are often missing, words will be missing and sometimes I'm not even sure who is talking. There's even at least one spot where it suddenly switches to first person POV, and doesn't have italics or anything to mark it off as thoughts. At another point a character thinks about doing something, and in the next two paragraphs announces that she's done it when she hasn't even left her spot yet.
Onto the plot. Geoff accidentally stumbles onto a Templar book while on vacation. For some reason this becomes the obsession of his life. Luckily, like all characters, he is ridiculously wealthy and can travel anywhere on a whim to research whatever he wants. Besides the fact that it doesn't establish why Geoff cares so much about discovering the secrets of the Templars, it also doesn't explain how he does a lot. For example, he goes to "library after library" and pours over books and manuscripts. Then we're immediately told that the pieces "were starting to fall into place". What pieces? I have no idea. We're just told he's discovering this stuff and figuring things out somehow. We don't know what he read in the books, how he read between the lines and came to conclusions he did or what people on the street tell him. We're just told he looked at books/talked to people and now he knows stuff.
At one point he's at Oxford University and leaving the library. He notices someone else is there and immediately thinks he's being followed. Like so many things in this book, I immediately ask, "Why does he think that?" There are plenty of people who go to that university, and lots of people stay late on campuses. I've even seen people sleep in random places like lounges or libraries. It's not that weird to see a person there.
One of the things I disagree with other reviewers on is that the book needs to be longer. While I understand their opinion and why they would say that, I would say that there is a ton of useless text that can be taken out and replaced, like one point where the bad guys deal with a crooked taxi driver which has no bearing on the plot. The majority of the book reads like a list of events.
When Peter and Sarah go out on a date, we're told things like what time Peter went to the hotel, what they ate, and a list of places they visited. We're even told:
They seemed to have endless things to say to each other.
But we don't see any of their conversations and we're not even told what they're talking about. The book tells us they have a lot in common, but I couldn't tell you what any of those things were. Then there's needless explanations, such as saying "It was obvious they had missed each other very much." after they hugged. We shouldn't have to be told that. It should be obvious when reading it, but it's not because the writing lacks any impact. There are no emotional connections to any characters.
Which is why I disagree that the book needs to be longer. Instead of telling the reader a list of places they went, the author could have focused on one place and shown and actual scene with them, talking and getting to know each other. It could replace the needless text with something that shows us who the characters are as people.
The roles Sarah and Regina play might be upsetting to some. Sarah basically exists to have a baby. On the other hand, Regina basically exists to be sexy and evil. I don't recall seeing any other female characters in the book, or, if there were, they were very brief. Whether they're good or evil is summed up quickly. "Sarah donates to charity, therefor she's good". "Regina likes kinky sex, therefor she's evil". It would be so easy to do more than the cliche with these characters. Maybe Sarah donates for shallow reasons or for basic good publicity, but isn't necessarily more generous than anyone else. Maybe Regina could have taken in "pets" who had been abused in their lives and she watches out for them. So much more could be done with them without making them flat characters, but it doesn't happen in this book.
Sarah is part of a long line of women who will supposedly give birth to the savior at some point, yet her mother doesn't bother to tell her anything until she's dying. Sarah takes it surprisingly well. Everyone takes everything surprisingly well.
Even parts of the story are flat like this. For example, in Chapter 97, "Pilot's Seat", I could have summed up the entire chapter in a sentence and skipped it. I already knew exactly what was going to happen. Follow along and see if you can guess:
Read the rest here.
(Spoilers within)
I'm just going to say it right off: This book didn't work for me.
I've read some other reviews and I agree with some of the things they said and disagree with others. First, I agree that there are no characters in this book. I can summarize everything about a character in one line.
Sarah: She donates to charity and such and is horribly rich.
Peter: He runs a big shipping company place and is horribly rich.
Regina: She serves some guy and wears very impractical clothing. Also, as a woman who is sexual, she's of course pure evil and loves torturing and killing people.
This is honestly about as much as I can tell you about any of these characters. They're cardboard cutouts with names attached.
This book also desperately needs editing. It's not one or two errors. There are errors everywhere.
You're dad would be proud.
"Davidson"? Peter queried.
Today there were arriving at...
Thankfully, it was so expense that is was sold only in small jars.
The tenses will change, quotations marks are often missing, words will be missing and sometimes I'm not even sure who is talking. There's even at least one spot where it suddenly switches to first person POV, and doesn't have italics or anything to mark it off as thoughts. At another point a character thinks about doing something, and in the next two paragraphs announces that she's done it when she hasn't even left her spot yet.
Onto the plot. Geoff accidentally stumbles onto a Templar book while on vacation. For some reason this becomes the obsession of his life. Luckily, like all characters, he is ridiculously wealthy and can travel anywhere on a whim to research whatever he wants. Besides the fact that it doesn't establish why Geoff cares so much about discovering the secrets of the Templars, it also doesn't explain how he does a lot. For example, he goes to "library after library" and pours over books and manuscripts. Then we're immediately told that the pieces "were starting to fall into place". What pieces? I have no idea. We're just told he's discovering this stuff and figuring things out somehow. We don't know what he read in the books, how he read between the lines and came to conclusions he did or what people on the street tell him. We're just told he looked at books/talked to people and now he knows stuff.
At one point he's at Oxford University and leaving the library. He notices someone else is there and immediately thinks he's being followed. Like so many things in this book, I immediately ask, "Why does he think that?" There are plenty of people who go to that university, and lots of people stay late on campuses. I've even seen people sleep in random places like lounges or libraries. It's not that weird to see a person there.
One of the things I disagree with other reviewers on is that the book needs to be longer. While I understand their opinion and why they would say that, I would say that there is a ton of useless text that can be taken out and replaced, like one point where the bad guys deal with a crooked taxi driver which has no bearing on the plot. The majority of the book reads like a list of events.
When Peter and Sarah go out on a date, we're told things like what time Peter went to the hotel, what they ate, and a list of places they visited. We're even told:
They seemed to have endless things to say to each other.
But we don't see any of their conversations and we're not even told what they're talking about. The book tells us they have a lot in common, but I couldn't tell you what any of those things were. Then there's needless explanations, such as saying "It was obvious they had missed each other very much." after they hugged. We shouldn't have to be told that. It should be obvious when reading it, but it's not because the writing lacks any impact. There are no emotional connections to any characters.
Which is why I disagree that the book needs to be longer. Instead of telling the reader a list of places they went, the author could have focused on one place and shown and actual scene with them, talking and getting to know each other. It could replace the needless text with something that shows us who the characters are as people.
The roles Sarah and Regina play might be upsetting to some. Sarah basically exists to have a baby. On the other hand, Regina basically exists to be sexy and evil. I don't recall seeing any other female characters in the book, or, if there were, they were very brief. Whether they're good or evil is summed up quickly. "Sarah donates to charity, therefor she's good". "Regina likes kinky sex, therefor she's evil". It would be so easy to do more than the cliche with these characters. Maybe Sarah donates for shallow reasons or for basic good publicity, but isn't necessarily more generous than anyone else. Maybe Regina could have taken in "pets" who had been abused in their lives and she watches out for them. So much more could be done with them without making them flat characters, but it doesn't happen in this book.
Sarah is part of a long line of women who will supposedly give birth to the savior at some point, yet her mother doesn't bother to tell her anything until she's dying. Sarah takes it surprisingly well. Everyone takes everything surprisingly well.
Even parts of the story are flat like this. For example, in Chapter 97, "Pilot's Seat", I could have summed up the entire chapter in a sentence and skipped it. I already knew exactly what was going to happen. Follow along and see if you can guess:
Read the rest here.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 15, 2015
I really struggled to get through this one. For personal and technical reasons. Let's begin with the technical ones, shall we? The writing is very dull. It very much reads like an itinerary. These are the events, this is what happened. I don't know what these people feel and how they think. They are all very one dimensional. The writing lacked any flair or creativity. For example, one sentence that really stuck out to me was "It looked old, because it was." Really? Come on now. Why not "The imposing stone structure was beginning to show its age. After hundreds of years serving as..."? Or something along those lines. That way we know it not only looks old, but is old without being bored to death.
This was quite a disappointment to me because I really liked the idea of the plot line. The follow through just wasn't there. I very much dislike when an author switches between several different points of view. I think it detracts from the plot line and makes it more difficult to fully develop a character. A good rule of thumb, in my reading experience is two or three POVs, tops.
I think the biggest draw back to this book was the writing style...or lack thereof. I mean, if someone is dying a slow, painful death I should feel something! I should understand that this is what's happening, I should want to rescue the character and help them. I'm not a heartless person by any means, but not only could I not connect with the characters, but I also couldn't connect with the scenes because they were written without any emotion and were very stiff and formal.
Now, for the personal reasons this was a tough one for me. I'm Catholic. I'm a devout Catholic that reads theology for fun and has priests that are friends. They say in this book that the Blessed Mother wasn't a virgin when Jesus was conceived in her womb. And Jesus had a daughter. I about flipped a lid. I have priests that are dear and close friends and the line "It was not a place for the average pedophile priest or lesbian nun." is seriously written in there...implying that most priests are pedophiles and nuns are lesbians? Not to mention the insane amount of corruption at the Vatican. I understand fiction and needing it to work for the story line. I guess my faith is a hard line for me. The divinity of Christ is very much underplayed, and that really bothered me.
I feel awful, I like never do this, but I'm giving this one two stars. Even without all of the jabs at my faith I don't know that I'd be able to give it three with writing style alone.
This was quite a disappointment to me because I really liked the idea of the plot line. The follow through just wasn't there. I very much dislike when an author switches between several different points of view. I think it detracts from the plot line and makes it more difficult to fully develop a character. A good rule of thumb, in my reading experience is two or three POVs, tops.
I think the biggest draw back to this book was the writing style...or lack thereof. I mean, if someone is dying a slow, painful death I should feel something! I should understand that this is what's happening, I should want to rescue the character and help them. I'm not a heartless person by any means, but not only could I not connect with the characters, but I also couldn't connect with the scenes because they were written without any emotion and were very stiff and formal.
Now, for the personal reasons this was a tough one for me. I'm Catholic. I'm a devout Catholic that reads theology for fun and has priests that are friends. They say in this book that the Blessed Mother wasn't a virgin when Jesus was conceived in her womb. And Jesus had a daughter. I about flipped a lid. I have priests that are dear and close friends and the line "It was not a place for the average pedophile priest or lesbian nun." is seriously written in there...implying that most priests are pedophiles and nuns are lesbians? Not to mention the insane amount of corruption at the Vatican. I understand fiction and needing it to work for the story line. I guess my faith is a hard line for me. The divinity of Christ is very much underplayed, and that really bothered me.
I feel awful, I like never do this, but I'm giving this one two stars. Even without all of the jabs at my faith I don't know that I'd be able to give it three with writing style alone.
June 29, 2015
So it seems that in much of the visual media that permeates today’s culture there is an underlying theme of religion. Even if not factored explicitly into the plot of the work itself, it exists in the murmurmings of secondary characters or in the historical context of the birth of a story. The DaVinci Code? Yup. Pi? To a certain extent. The Chronicles of Narnia? Duh. What is the value of this religious presence? Is it to present a certain level of comfort for the fickle, aged and 1%’s who are active readers? Or is it to permeate the reader’s subconscious and appeal to the oft-religious upbringings that many of us can relate to?
Questions such as these filled the nooks and crannies of my analytical mind as I began reading The Return, an ‘action adventure not about religion’ by promising author Carter Vance. Despite the tagline that accompanied the book review request, I instantly knew that Mr. Vance’s explanatory words were indeed a warning that it was the omnipresence of the religion that would fill the pages of his work.
Borrowing certain elements that have made Dan Brown’s massive bestsellers so successful, Vance creates an intriguing, suspenseful tale commencing with the death of a young man who makes the discovery of a mysterious library housed with books about the infamous sect The Knights Templar not long before his demise. This is not a spoiler as it is the accompanying tale post-murder that comprises the majority of the work. The man’s death sets into motion a battle between the often thought long dead Knights Templar itself and with the man’s friend, Peter.
This battle contains components not so unfamiliar to readers of this type of fiction. Carter manages to bring a unique voice to the narration, however, choosing to wane prosaically on humanity itself instead of strictly focusing on the search for the eponymous Holy Grail and the Ark of the Covenant. Carter’s “action adventure not about religion” is nothing but. The hunts that comprise the book itself sets up for the second book in this proposed series that sees, well, The Return of one of religions most easily identifiable figures.
Vance’s central consruct of Good Vs. Evil is effective and maintains the reader’s interest from page to page and from each well-researched situtation to the next. This book is a bit like apple pie: a lot of people will enjoy it, the reader can enhance it by adding something, and it can be just a little different from the other pies one has eaten. A good read for conspiracy theorists and religious fanatics alike, with a smattering of techno-paranoia.
Questions such as these filled the nooks and crannies of my analytical mind as I began reading The Return, an ‘action adventure not about religion’ by promising author Carter Vance. Despite the tagline that accompanied the book review request, I instantly knew that Mr. Vance’s explanatory words were indeed a warning that it was the omnipresence of the religion that would fill the pages of his work.
Borrowing certain elements that have made Dan Brown’s massive bestsellers so successful, Vance creates an intriguing, suspenseful tale commencing with the death of a young man who makes the discovery of a mysterious library housed with books about the infamous sect The Knights Templar not long before his demise. This is not a spoiler as it is the accompanying tale post-murder that comprises the majority of the work. The man’s death sets into motion a battle between the often thought long dead Knights Templar itself and with the man’s friend, Peter.
This battle contains components not so unfamiliar to readers of this type of fiction. Carter manages to bring a unique voice to the narration, however, choosing to wane prosaically on humanity itself instead of strictly focusing on the search for the eponymous Holy Grail and the Ark of the Covenant. Carter’s “action adventure not about religion” is nothing but. The hunts that comprise the book itself sets up for the second book in this proposed series that sees, well, The Return of one of religions most easily identifiable figures.
Vance’s central consruct of Good Vs. Evil is effective and maintains the reader’s interest from page to page and from each well-researched situtation to the next. This book is a bit like apple pie: a lot of people will enjoy it, the reader can enhance it by adding something, and it can be just a little different from the other pies one has eaten. A good read for conspiracy theorists and religious fanatics alike, with a smattering of techno-paranoia.
May 22, 2015
There are two types of fiction writing: plot-driven, and character-driven. 'The Return' takes plot focused novels to a whole new level. There was nearly nothing in terms of character development. They were cold, one-dimensional, and entirely emotionless. I also have a confession to make. I didn't read the entire book. I just couldn't. I have never not finished a book. I've always tried to make a point to read the entirety of books so I can give fuller comments, and try to find something else that's positive. I just couldn't do it. I read about a fifth of the book before I skimmed through the majority of it to get basic plot points.
It's obvious that Vance started with an interesting concept. While not unique, it's still interesting. I was initially drawn to the book because I've taken courses in medieval pseudohistory and how false histories and conspiracies are developed is really quite fascinating. I had hoped this would be a new twist on the Templars, and in a way it was. The background is mostly the same (although how the characters come to this conclusion isn't described at all other than Geoff going to libraries) and I would have liked to have seen a new theory. But the concept of Christ's second coming through his bloodline was a new and welcome addition to the popular Holy Grail theory.
Unfortunately, that's about where the positives stopped for me. As I mentioned before, the characters are basically non-existent. Two of the characters fall in love, and get married...at least, I'm told they fell in love. I didn't really see it. I was told a lot of things. Actually, I was told pretty much everything. It read more like a list of events rather than a novel. There was absolutely no emotional or personal connection with any of the characters. One was told about her bloodline going back to Jesus, and her response was "Okay Mom I have to go now." And we're told she said this cheerfully. Yeah...I don't think so. This probably doesn't matter to many people..but I hate the names of the characters. They're so obvious, it made me angry. I mean, seriously...Peter Christos?
I'm sure someone somewhere out there will enjoy this book. Maybe they'll like point form style writing with no characters. I am definitely not one of those people.
It's obvious that Vance started with an interesting concept. While not unique, it's still interesting. I was initially drawn to the book because I've taken courses in medieval pseudohistory and how false histories and conspiracies are developed is really quite fascinating. I had hoped this would be a new twist on the Templars, and in a way it was. The background is mostly the same (although how the characters come to this conclusion isn't described at all other than Geoff going to libraries) and I would have liked to have seen a new theory. But the concept of Christ's second coming through his bloodline was a new and welcome addition to the popular Holy Grail theory.
Unfortunately, that's about where the positives stopped for me. As I mentioned before, the characters are basically non-existent. Two of the characters fall in love, and get married...at least, I'm told they fell in love. I didn't really see it. I was told a lot of things. Actually, I was told pretty much everything. It read more like a list of events rather than a novel. There was absolutely no emotional or personal connection with any of the characters. One was told about her bloodline going back to Jesus, and her response was "Okay Mom I have to go now." And we're told she said this cheerfully. Yeah...I don't think so. This probably doesn't matter to many people..but I hate the names of the characters. They're so obvious, it made me angry. I mean, seriously...Peter Christos?
I'm sure someone somewhere out there will enjoy this book. Maybe they'll like point form style writing with no characters. I am definitely not one of those people.
September 22, 2013
This book came to me comparing it to the Da Vinci Code, so I'm expecting NOT to like it. The cover is Christian and in keeping with the theme of the book, but the title and author name is lack lustre. It doesn't stand out among the rest in its genre. The blurb was full of 'If you like a great story you will like The Return', which irked a bit. Basically, the story is good verses evil.
The 'look inside' opens to an investment banker called Geoff having a holiday in France with his friend Jacques, but on his last day he finds a secret room (bookcase swings round to reveal another room! Gosh, now that hasn't been done before!) and he finds a room full of books, and coincidently discovers a lost book called the Templar out of the many that's there and he's only been in there a few minutes!
Finding the Templer leads Geoff to places such as Jerusalem searching through old libraries, but unbeknown to him he is being followed. 'Friend' Jacques isn't a friend after all and there is a good build up to that as Geoff thinks he's being paranoid. Personally, I think the author favoured the research to the emotion of the characters, and even though the research of this book seemed thorough, the characters (with the exception to Geoff) weren't fleshed out enough.
Anyway, Sarah and Peter were supposed to fall in love, marry and have a baby (which they did) but their characters were cardboard. So much so that I was surprised that they were the real main characters when Geoff sadly died (it was at this point where I stopped reading).
There were a few errors that could and should have been spotted before it was published, with a huge blooper in chapter four where the author failed to name the chapter and use question marks instead.
All in all I found that the chapters were just waffle and I barely reached half way through the book. There was just too much scene building and back story for my liking. If you don't mind a slow build, then this book is for you. I've not read the De Vinci Code so can't compare. Some nice character building of Geoff, though, and detailed scene setting if you like that sort of thing.
Just not for me. De VInci Code readers might not agree though.
The 'look inside' opens to an investment banker called Geoff having a holiday in France with his friend Jacques, but on his last day he finds a secret room (bookcase swings round to reveal another room! Gosh, now that hasn't been done before!) and he finds a room full of books, and coincidently discovers a lost book called the Templar out of the many that's there and he's only been in there a few minutes!
Finding the Templer leads Geoff to places such as Jerusalem searching through old libraries, but unbeknown to him he is being followed. 'Friend' Jacques isn't a friend after all and there is a good build up to that as Geoff thinks he's being paranoid. Personally, I think the author favoured the research to the emotion of the characters, and even though the research of this book seemed thorough, the characters (with the exception to Geoff) weren't fleshed out enough.
Anyway, Sarah and Peter were supposed to fall in love, marry and have a baby (which they did) but their characters were cardboard. So much so that I was surprised that they were the real main characters when Geoff sadly died (it was at this point where I stopped reading).
There were a few errors that could and should have been spotted before it was published, with a huge blooper in chapter four where the author failed to name the chapter and use question marks instead.
All in all I found that the chapters were just waffle and I barely reached half way through the book. There was just too much scene building and back story for my liking. If you don't mind a slow build, then this book is for you. I've not read the De Vinci Code so can't compare. Some nice character building of Geoff, though, and detailed scene setting if you like that sort of thing.
Just not for me. De VInci Code readers might not agree though.
October 11, 2013
Opening this read "The Return", Geoffry Allen is seeking answers for the historical puzzle of the Ark of Covenant between humankind and the royal bloodline coming from the Holy Grail. Through his research, discovers Templars are dated 1118 and sees a connection to other bloodlines. However, the Orders realizes that Geoff has possession of confidential information. (Yet for me, the opening of the novel is quite a bore for me. I am also waiting for the thriller aspect of the novel, since I like these type of reads).
This book appears to be following the similar notion found in Dan Brown books about Mary Magdalene having Jesus Christ child, or bloodline which follows centuries thereafter. I surely wanted to stop there but said, okay this is fiction and see where this book is going.
I'm so glad I continued to read, there is a secretive society as the Knights of Templar which protect the family heirloom of Christ, and dark forces are hoping to stop the second coming of Christ. Ironically, Sarah Davidson Morales Christos will give birth to the next Christ. I liked how the name Davidson (maternal family of women came from the bloodline of Christ, means son of David).
Towards the middle of the book, around 100 pages and beyond, it went a bit off course for me. There were numerous events and characters added that lost its touch for me as a reader. Instead of a refill, it left me nearly empty.
Yet I still felt the emotional factor and connections between the main characters wasn't presented in this novel. As other reviews stated, this novel was a bit rushed in some scenes, tying the character's chemistry and other factors that underlie the connection as a whole was missing. When one of the main characters were killed off early, it left me speechless but then seemed forced to find out about Sarah Davidson and how Geoff knew of her and his friend Peter. Hopefully the next book in the series will tie up these loose ends.
*I received a PDF copy from the author to review (Willing to Review Christian books Goodreads group). I don't think I want to read the next book in the series.
Adrienna Turner
www.adriennaturner.webs.com
This book appears to be following the similar notion found in Dan Brown books about Mary Magdalene having Jesus Christ child, or bloodline which follows centuries thereafter. I surely wanted to stop there but said, okay this is fiction and see where this book is going.
I'm so glad I continued to read, there is a secretive society as the Knights of Templar which protect the family heirloom of Christ, and dark forces are hoping to stop the second coming of Christ. Ironically, Sarah Davidson Morales Christos will give birth to the next Christ. I liked how the name Davidson (maternal family of women came from the bloodline of Christ, means son of David).
Towards the middle of the book, around 100 pages and beyond, it went a bit off course for me. There were numerous events and characters added that lost its touch for me as a reader. Instead of a refill, it left me nearly empty.
Yet I still felt the emotional factor and connections between the main characters wasn't presented in this novel. As other reviews stated, this novel was a bit rushed in some scenes, tying the character's chemistry and other factors that underlie the connection as a whole was missing. When one of the main characters were killed off early, it left me speechless but then seemed forced to find out about Sarah Davidson and how Geoff knew of her and his friend Peter. Hopefully the next book in the series will tie up these loose ends.
*I received a PDF copy from the author to review (Willing to Review Christian books Goodreads group). I don't think I want to read the next book in the series.
Adrienna Turner
www.adriennaturner.webs.com
June 25, 2014
An unexpected find sparks an American banker's interest in The Templars. The happened upon book appears to be an original and even though he only manages to capture a few pages, Geoff's curiosity is ignited.
Could the Knights Templar still exist today?
Being a mutual friend of the banker, Sarah Davidson-Morales and Peter Christos meet at a celebrity fuelled event. There's a connection and soon they are dating. Geoff has started an investigation based on his findings, one he hints at to Peter. But this has not gone unnoticed. It is soon confirmed that his interests has created awareness and awkward questions. What will he do with the information that he has discovered?
Meanwhile, Peter and Sarah confirm their affections for each other and make plans to marry. As they make this happy announcement, Geoff is found dead. With his death, the happy couple are curious and they soon pick up where Geoff leaves in his investigations. During this, Sarah's family history is revealed and the shocking discovery soon finds them being hunted by a sinister adversary simply known as 'Sire'.
To use a television term, Vance's 'docu-drama' is filled with tense drama and historical references. As more is revealed about Sarah and her chosen path, her mother passes on advice that only she can know about. With situations arising quickly, being followed by a nun with a secret and faith being tested, can Sarah and Peter really bring a 2,000 years wait to fruition?
Perhaps a little stilted in flow, the novel is fast paced - little time is given to details - and so it would be easy to lose 'comradery' with any of the characters. However, with this style it perhaps lends itself to be more intuitive to how a character looks or imagine their surroundings. It would be easy to make comparisons to other 'conspiracy' authors (the subject matter is quite similar to a few previously published books), but Vance's story is in itself a compelling and fascinating read and a great start to a series. A recommended read.
I received a complimentary copy of this book to review. The opinions expressed are my own and I am not required to give a positive critique.
Could the Knights Templar still exist today?
Being a mutual friend of the banker, Sarah Davidson-Morales and Peter Christos meet at a celebrity fuelled event. There's a connection and soon they are dating. Geoff has started an investigation based on his findings, one he hints at to Peter. But this has not gone unnoticed. It is soon confirmed that his interests has created awareness and awkward questions. What will he do with the information that he has discovered?
Meanwhile, Peter and Sarah confirm their affections for each other and make plans to marry. As they make this happy announcement, Geoff is found dead. With his death, the happy couple are curious and they soon pick up where Geoff leaves in his investigations. During this, Sarah's family history is revealed and the shocking discovery soon finds them being hunted by a sinister adversary simply known as 'Sire'.
To use a television term, Vance's 'docu-drama' is filled with tense drama and historical references. As more is revealed about Sarah and her chosen path, her mother passes on advice that only she can know about. With situations arising quickly, being followed by a nun with a secret and faith being tested, can Sarah and Peter really bring a 2,000 years wait to fruition?
Perhaps a little stilted in flow, the novel is fast paced - little time is given to details - and so it would be easy to lose 'comradery' with any of the characters. However, with this style it perhaps lends itself to be more intuitive to how a character looks or imagine their surroundings. It would be easy to make comparisons to other 'conspiracy' authors (the subject matter is quite similar to a few previously published books), but Vance's story is in itself a compelling and fascinating read and a great start to a series. A recommended read.
I received a complimentary copy of this book to review. The opinions expressed are my own and I am not required to give a positive critique.
December 11, 2013
When the author of The Return contacted me for a review of his novel I was intrigued. This is, quite frankly, not usually the type of novel I'd read, and though some other reviewers have compared this to The Da Vinci Code, having never read that myself I cannot make that comparison. All I can do is give my opinion on this book in and of itself.
To start, you were thrown immediately into the action, without very much of a build up, Geoff finds the book that sets off the whole story on the first page. The book then keeps with that pace the entire length, and I'm just not sure this was a good thing. There are many places within the book that I found myself really enjoying the story line, and the idea itself is a fascinating one. Yet, I truly regret to say that it just did not work for me. Besides the pace, I just didn't find the emotion that I strive to find to make a novel a favorite for me. Mr. Vance certainly has it, "it" being the ability to draw readers in and make them keep reading, and because of this I feel that I would read more from him in the future. It's just in this one, I feel like it could have been twice as long and so much better.
All that being said, if you happen to be a fan of this type of novel then by all means do read it, the story that it tells despite the small short-comings is riveting. Although this type of novel isn't usually my thing, and even though there were those parts I didn't like, I cannot say I find myself at all regretting having read it. I honestly look forward to seeing what Carter Vance has in store for us next!
**I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review, which in no way affected my opinion.**
To start, you were thrown immediately into the action, without very much of a build up, Geoff finds the book that sets off the whole story on the first page. The book then keeps with that pace the entire length, and I'm just not sure this was a good thing. There are many places within the book that I found myself really enjoying the story line, and the idea itself is a fascinating one. Yet, I truly regret to say that it just did not work for me. Besides the pace, I just didn't find the emotion that I strive to find to make a novel a favorite for me. Mr. Vance certainly has it, "it" being the ability to draw readers in and make them keep reading, and because of this I feel that I would read more from him in the future. It's just in this one, I feel like it could have been twice as long and so much better.
All that being said, if you happen to be a fan of this type of novel then by all means do read it, the story that it tells despite the small short-comings is riveting. Although this type of novel isn't usually my thing, and even though there were those parts I didn't like, I cannot say I find myself at all regretting having read it. I honestly look forward to seeing what Carter Vance has in store for us next!
**I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review, which in no way affected my opinion.**
November 4, 2013
The author, Carter Vance, gave me a copy of this novel in exchange for my review.
The premise is a good one. While there are definite similarities to the premise of The Da Vinci Code, The Return” is unique. The novel starts with Geoff finding an introduction manual to the Knights Templar while visiting a friend’s castle in Provence. Geoff is stretching out his back and finds a hidden room. The Return is a swift read with extremely fast moving action. There are readers that will love this novel for its cheeky approach to religion and ideas held sacred.
The Return reads so swiftly because it reads very much like an overview. The story could have benefited greatly from development. The idea presented could have been a five star masterpiece with a bit of expansion and care to writing style ensuring that readers are immersed and involved. Vance, as we follow Geoff, has events stated as fact and while we may be there with Geoff we have a sense of being told what happened rather than the language and setting leading us to feel we’ll a part of the scene. A fly on the wall. We get little looks at key characters that mostly fall flat due to lack of expansion of motivation. It seems we are to believe that certain people are who they are and things are happening as they are without reason. Simply because we’re told that’s the way these things are.
There are people who will love this novel. Those who enjoy the ability to walk away from a novel and come back several hours later will love it because review will be brief. This is a premise worth exploring.
The premise is a good one. While there are definite similarities to the premise of The Da Vinci Code, The Return” is unique. The novel starts with Geoff finding an introduction manual to the Knights Templar while visiting a friend’s castle in Provence. Geoff is stretching out his back and finds a hidden room. The Return is a swift read with extremely fast moving action. There are readers that will love this novel for its cheeky approach to religion and ideas held sacred.
The Return reads so swiftly because it reads very much like an overview. The story could have benefited greatly from development. The idea presented could have been a five star masterpiece with a bit of expansion and care to writing style ensuring that readers are immersed and involved. Vance, as we follow Geoff, has events stated as fact and while we may be there with Geoff we have a sense of being told what happened rather than the language and setting leading us to feel we’ll a part of the scene. A fly on the wall. We get little looks at key characters that mostly fall flat due to lack of expansion of motivation. It seems we are to believe that certain people are who they are and things are happening as they are without reason. Simply because we’re told that’s the way these things are.
There are people who will love this novel. Those who enjoy the ability to walk away from a novel and come back several hours later will love it because review will be brief. This is a premise worth exploring.
February 7, 2015
Okay..
The Return is a modern fantasy novel in the vein of Dan Brown. It starts with the discovery of a modern Templar manual, takes in a healthy dose of Vatican conspiracy, worldwide evil and ends up with the second coming.
Okay.... the problems I had with this book were numerous, extremely so. For starters, the text is bland and the characters more so. We are told that Geoff is a financier and how he stumbles upon this Templar text, but not his back story. He takes this text from a hidden library in his friend's house, doesn't mention it and is suddenly enthused with the idea of finding the Templar history for no discernible reason. There's also no reason why he thinks he's being followed.
Another issue comes with the villains. They are cardboard cut outs with no menace and the dominatrix killer nun (don't ask) is so random, I can't even think about it.
Then there's the fact that the 'last scion of Christ' plot is lifted directly from Dan Brown, in a book where Dan Brown's novel is alluded to.
And I will stop there before I begin to rant.
My recommendations for improvement are: Give the characters some initial motivation and let us get to know them. Unless you're starting the story in the middle of some action, give us some kind of intro before the story kicks off. Pace the book a little better and lay off the 'beige prose'. I cannot overly stress the importance of a good editor
The Return is a modern fantasy novel in the vein of Dan Brown. It starts with the discovery of a modern Templar manual, takes in a healthy dose of Vatican conspiracy, worldwide evil and ends up with the second coming.
Okay.... the problems I had with this book were numerous, extremely so. For starters, the text is bland and the characters more so. We are told that Geoff is a financier and how he stumbles upon this Templar text, but not his back story. He takes this text from a hidden library in his friend's house, doesn't mention it and is suddenly enthused with the idea of finding the Templar history for no discernible reason. There's also no reason why he thinks he's being followed.
Another issue comes with the villains. They are cardboard cut outs with no menace and the dominatrix killer nun (don't ask) is so random, I can't even think about it.
Then there's the fact that the 'last scion of Christ' plot is lifted directly from Dan Brown, in a book where Dan Brown's novel is alluded to.
And I will stop there before I begin to rant.
My recommendations for improvement are: Give the characters some initial motivation and let us get to know them. Unless you're starting the story in the middle of some action, give us some kind of intro before the story kicks off. Pace the book a little better and lay off the 'beige prose'. I cannot overly stress the importance of a good editor
April 30, 2014
The plot line in The Return was a very interesting concept, one that I hadn't expected. Especially hearing that it involved the Knights of the Templar. I think in most of the books I've read they tend to be portrayed as the bad guys so it was interesting to have that flipped. I enjoyed the basic plot behind the book but the book itself could use some work.
The writing seemed a little awkward at times, with the wording and it could use a little editing to fix some simple mistakes.
The book jumps around a lot which helps to keep the readers attention but this also means that the readers have a tough time forming any emotional connection to the characters. One of the main characters died and I felt little about it one way or the other, instead viewing it as something that had to happen.
As I've said before, The Return has an interesting concept but could use a little work to bring it up to it's full potential.
The writing seemed a little awkward at times, with the wording and it could use a little editing to fix some simple mistakes.
The book jumps around a lot which helps to keep the readers attention but this also means that the readers have a tough time forming any emotional connection to the characters. One of the main characters died and I felt little about it one way or the other, instead viewing it as something that had to happen.
As I've said before, The Return has an interesting concept but could use a little work to bring it up to it's full potential.
October 27, 2014
I was super excited to read this book. I love these types of stories and they really get me involved. This one had so much potential. It is good but not great. It was short and seemed a little too rushed to really get me involved in the plot. A lot of really great historical facts thrown in that intrigues me but at times I was a little overwhelmed by the amount of information packed into so few pages. The characters have a great base but they are kind of glossed over so that you get all of the information needed to get the story. This story really has too much going on for so few pages.
That being said, I really enjoyed it and hoped for more. I read it fairly quickly and came away wanting more. To me that is a winner! It has it's issues but if you truly love this type of book then it is a must read for the genre. I think most will enjoy this story if they love the genre.
That being said, I really enjoyed it and hoped for more. I read it fairly quickly and came away wanting more. To me that is a winner! It has it's issues but if you truly love this type of book then it is a must read for the genre. I think most will enjoy this story if they love the genre.
June 16, 2016
Did I enjoy this book: The topic is interesting enough: Knights Templar, the Holy Grail, some folks who get married in front of the Ark of the Covenant . . . The writing, though, just isn’t up to par. The Return reads like a school history paper — it’s got all the details, but it’s missing that emotional draw that gets (and keeps) readers reading.
Would I recommend it: If you’re a fan of reading long, dry police reports I’d give it a go, but there are several far-superior grail books.
As reviewed by Melissa at Every Free Chance Books.
Disclosure: I received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
http://everyfreechance.com/2015/03/me...
Would I recommend it: If you’re a fan of reading long, dry police reports I’d give it a go, but there are several far-superior grail books.
As reviewed by Melissa at Every Free Chance Books.
Disclosure: I received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
http://everyfreechance.com/2015/03/me...
August 20, 2014
Full review at 'Katherine's Corner' - http://wp.me/p4Dssh-kK
I thought the plot of this book was interesting and though that the mix of world history and fiction was good. However, this book got 2 stars from me for two reasons.
Firstly, it annoyed me that the characters (particularly Peter and Sarah) were so understanding and accepting of their position from the moment they found out. This made them seem largely unrealistic to me. Secondly, the story moves so fast that I found it impossible to get to know the characters. Because of the story moving so fast, the characters lacked personality and dimension.
I thought the plot of this book was interesting and though that the mix of world history and fiction was good. However, this book got 2 stars from me for two reasons.
Firstly, it annoyed me that the characters (particularly Peter and Sarah) were so understanding and accepting of their position from the moment they found out. This made them seem largely unrealistic to me. Secondly, the story moves so fast that I found it impossible to get to know the characters. Because of the story moving so fast, the characters lacked personality and dimension.
May 7, 2012
I won a copy from Librarything and here is my review.
I had a really hard time getting into this book. It felt rushed to me, and I kept thinking, that although it was being compared to The Davinci Code, that's not what I was thinking while reading The Return. I won't be continuing with the follow up unfortunately.
I had a really hard time getting into this book. It felt rushed to me, and I kept thinking, that although it was being compared to The Davinci Code, that's not what I was thinking while reading The Return. I won't be continuing with the follow up unfortunately.
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February 14, 2013I had tried three times to read this book, I just couldn't get into it, I would lose my focus quickly. Now I am not saying that it is a bad book, it is not just something I could get into. Other's may like or love this book, but again it just wasn't for me. If a book doesn't hold my attention after multiple attempts are reading it, I generally will just set it down, and move on.
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