Good But Could Have Been Very Good
I enjoy the deserted island trope.
I thought this book had a good concept for varying what is otherwise a difficult one to retell: You get stranded on an island, you learn to survive as aptly as possible, maybe a love connection, you (hopefully) are rescued. This version uses two — on the verge of — young adults who are top scholastic students. One the beautiful popular girl who is within the popular social circle, one is the poorer boy who lacks the confidence to believe he could get close to a beautiful, popular (and from a wealthy family) girl. When two people from differing circles are thrust together in an isolated and ‘struggle to survive’, the walls of social circles become a very distant memory.
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Imho this book needed:
-just a bit more of the story from school/social circles and definitely more to the happy ending.
-they were growing close through the ordeal yet largely kept a firm distance even in close quarters. Maybe sex would be avoided(?) but the extremely limited affection (other than friends) just rings unreal given the circumstances. The lack of close human contact over this long a period with limited food etc would have mentally broken them down.
-he was just too good, too handy, too best behavior, too ‘expert survivalist’. While I saw realism in her character, he would have needed a very rural, mountain like, constantly out in the woods upbringing to be this good at 17 while also being a natural at math and English. I am good with a ‘man up’ situation to help save the day but this was Clark Kent carrying his geography homework.
-the use of “lad” didn’t seem appropriate given life and death survival as the back drop.
Despite the negatives I listed, I enjoyed the read overall. Big kudos to it bring from a self publishing author.