Victor Gischler’s 2006 thriller Shotgun Opera opens in New York City, 1965. Mike Foley, low-level mob thug and bad guy with a conscience, participates in a hit with his brother Dan. Machine guns are brandished, body parts fly, and an innocent young girl is killed. Jump to the present. Dan is deceased, Mike has fled to Oklahoma in an attempt to outrun his guilt, and we’re left with Dan’s son Andrew, a struggling student with money troubles. Following in his forebears' footsteps, Andrew takes a side hustle with some friends (another mob job), and they botch it, setting a terrorist free into in the country. After his friends are murdered for witnessing the debacle, Andrew flees the city, and Nikki Enders, a world-class assassin, is hired to take him down. Who does Andrew run to for help? To Mike, of course, the uncle he’s never met. And Mike, good bad guy that he is, takes Andrew under his protection.
What follows is a twist of adrenaline-pumping, blood-soaked plotlines. Mike comes out of retirement and goes after Nikki in the hope that saving Andrew will make up for his past sins. Nikki, with the help of her sisters (yes, she has two, both assassins as well) struggles to fulfill her assignment while fighting her own personal demons. Nikki’s handler, not happy with her performance, sends a couple of circus-performers-turned-killers to terminate her employment. And somewhere within the tangle lurks the terrorist. Events progress in a rush, sometimes predictably, sometimes not, culminating in a series of satisfying showdowns.
The novel’s 305 mass market pages could easily have been 500 in less skillful hands. Gischler’s strength is exactly this: his ability to give readers only what they need. His prose reads as if it’s on Ozempic. Nothing but muscle and bone. Take the following:
The man with the Eastern European accent had a name, but it didn’t matter what it was. He sat in a small room filled with filing cabinets and computers and fax machines and telephones. It didn’t matter where the room was. His office was the world.
He contemplated the problem of Jamaal 1-2-3.
It didn’t matter one iota to the man if Jamaal’s mission failed or not. What mattered to him was his own reputation and the fact that upset clients could be potentially dangerous. In his business, reputation was everything. He was a kind of broker. He made connections, put people with people. Filled in gaps. He promised Jamaal’s organization a completely covert insertion. Now he had a mess to clean up…
Gischler limits his use of flowery language and lengthy description. He avoids overly complex syntax, preferring to rely on quick, crisp, clear writing, which pairs excellently with his galloping narrative. He applies the same logic to his scenes, keeping them short and to the point. He even tells the reader in the above example--Hey, you don’t need to know this guy’s name, or his nationality, or his current location. That’s superfluous. You’re getting just the facts, Ma’am.
In a word, Gischler’s style is concentrated. Everything is condensed. With Gischler you get your story squeezed under pressure, like a form of literary espresso. In this case, though, it does come at a minor cost.
Condensing prose and scenes is relatively easy (though it takes a certain Strunk and White skill to do so effectively), but paring down plotlines is a whole different animal. Too often in order to get plotlines to converge sooner rather than later, Gischler relies on character actions or events that strain credulity. Would this character really do that to someone she just met? What are the odds that punch would not KO that character? Would the killer really postpone the inevitable to do that? With a less skillful writer, I’d answer no to all these and perhaps a few more. But with Gischler’s Shotgun Opera, I take it as part of the deal. Gischler appears to accept some potential lack of believability to maintain the pressure. But as it's done so well, those moments seem to come with a wink of a footnote: Just buckle up, enjoy the ride, and don’t take things too seriously.
And for Shotgun Opera, that advice is perfect. If you’re not a thriller fan willing to limbo below the le Carré bar, then Gischler, be it his Shotgun Opera or Gun Monkeys or Pistol Poets, might not be for you. But if you’re looking for a fast-paced, well-written, at times eye-rolling thriller that’s crammed with excitement, give this book a shot. You’ll get a buzz out of it.