On the Bus

Sibling Lust #3

by Selena Kitt

Two stepsiblings on a cross-country trek to California find more stimulation than just the scenery! Emily is getting tired of listening to Danny practice trivia for his Jeopardy try-outs, and both of them are anxious about meeting Danny’s dad again after years of separation, but neither sibling could have predicted that a journey of forbidden sexual exploration would begin for them together on the bus.

Genres: Erotica, Adult, M F Romance, Short Stories, Contemporary, Smut, Romance

29 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 1, 2008

About the author

Selena Kitt is a NEW YORK TIMES bestselling and award-winning author of erotic and romance fiction. She is one of the highest selling erotic writers in the business with over two million books sold!

Her writing embodies everything from the spicy to the scandalous, but watch out-this kitty also has sharp claws and her stories often include intriguing edges and twists that take readers to new, thought-provoking depths.

When she’s not pawing away at her keyboard, Selena runs an innovative publishing company (www.excessica.com) and bookstore (www.excitica.com), as well as two erotica and erotic romance promotion companies (www.excitesteam.com and www.excitespice.com) and is now head of the Erotica Readers and Writers Association (www.erotica-readers.com).

Her books EcoErotica (2009), The Real Mother Goose (2010) and Heidi and the Kaiser (2011) were all Epic Award Finalists. Her only gay male romance, Second Chance, won the Epic Award in Erotica in 2011. Her story, Connections, was one of the runners-up for the 2006 Rauxa Prize, given annually to an erotic short story of “exceptional literary quality.”

She can be reached on her website at www.selenakitt.com

Reviews

[Exina · Rating 4 out of 5]

Steamy, affectionate, and amusing. For an erotic short filled with taboo fantasies, i.e. incest and sex in public, it’s absolutely satisfying. The writing style is smooth and enjoyable. Too bad it is short.



This story contains incest between twins. If you are not into that kind of thing, just skip it. Otherwise, enjoy! ;)

“What are you reading?”
“Porn,” he replied, still not looking at her.
She laughed. “Very funny.”
“Well, it’s not really...” he admitted, giving her a sheepish grin. “It’s just an e-book of useless sexual trivia.”
“More trivia, huh?” she smiled, shaking her head.
“It’s interesting,” he said. “How many orgasms do you think was the most ever recorded for a woman in 24 hours?”
“I don’t know... nine? Ten?”
His smile grew. “A hundred and thirty four.”
Her eyes widened. “Oh my god! I’d die!”
“For guys it was only sixteen… although I swear I’ve beat that...”

[I ♥ Bookie Nookie (bookienookiereviews.blogspot.com) · Rating 4 out of 5]

**THIS REVIEW IS OF THE ORIGINAL: ON THE BUS** The revised version depicts a relationship between step-siblings.

Twincest...that is what it's about. If you have an aversion to that, then do not pass go, do not collect $200.

What is wrong with me? I seriously am a normal person...why did I enjoy this book? Why was I rooting for the twins to have sex? Why on earth did that turn me on? I am just going to go with: It's Selena Kitt...she has a gift for making naughty stuff hot. That's my story and I'm sticking to it!

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[Raj]

2 stars

I've been kind of distracted while reading this so I wasn't able to really pay attention. I like Under the Stars better than this probably because it was written in 1st person POV. I just didn't feel much of anything while reading this. I didn't feel hot and bothered... so 2 stars..

[Carolyn F. · Rating 4 out of 5]

Short story.

Felt very naughty reading this but boy was it hot! Some hanky panky on the bus with two people who shouldn't.

[Shadow Jubilee · Rating 2 out of 5]

1.5 stars

This is a short, pseudo-incest story between step-siblings. I had read a review of "Sibling Lust: In the Barn" (I believe it was) which mentioned that the author had had to "tame" the taboo subjects into pseudo-incest rather than straight incest i.e. sex between siblings due to Amazon's policies, and looking at the three "Sibling Lust" short stories that I have read so far, I think that that reviewer had a point as the short story seemed to suggest exactly that. A reviewer for this story mentioned having two copies, one of which had the main characters as twins and the other as step-siblings. Having read that review, I read this short story with the knowledge that the author had most likely originally written Emily and Danny as blood siblings. She had also (most likely) deliberately not changed any references to sister or brother to step-sister or step-brother, which further enhanced the image I had had in my mind of Emily and Danny being blood siblings.

With this image in mind, I was once again reminded that sibling incest between brother and sister does squick me out a bit. I was also a bit scandalized by the fact that they were having sex on a bus, of all places. I could not believe that all the other passengers were sleeping and did not hear their damning words or their activity. Hello? There was still a bus driver, wasn't there? Unless they were seated alllll the way in the back right next to the bathroom....

The sex scene was in turn both erotic and unsexy. I didn't really care for the dirty words, especially as they kept emphasizing a closer, blood relationship between the two.

My favorite part of this short story was probably the trivia. It was interesting.

[Britta ★ Nachteule ★ · Rating 3 out of 5]

Read as part of Taboo The Collection. Story Nr. 1

Step-siblings on a bus trip to visit their dad. Some sex trivia and an almost nap later they get it on.

A short steamy read.

Selena Kitt definitly know how to write smut!

[Ashley♥Alexis · Rating 4 out of 5]

I've never read intentional incest before but honestly it's all fiction so i;'m okay with it. Very STEAMY. Selena Kitt can do no wrong in my eyes. I love reading her stories.

[Sarah Elizabeth · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was another okay story, as long as you ignore the fact that the main characters are supposed to be siblings.

[kaleigh · Rating 3 out of 5]

short story
step siblings
safe (for me)
hero is a virgin- heroine is not

[Yusra Asaad · Rating 4 out of 5]

Emily and Danny are twins taking a trip on a bus to visit their dad. It starts innocent enough, but when they start talking about some sex trivia, they start exchanging thoughts and inquisitions.
When they fall asleep, they end up into each other.. literally!!

A short, fun and hot read. I enjoyed it although it's taboo and incest but it's fantasy. I liked both characters and wished to read more about them.
But that is not why I removed a star!! The star is because some of the dialogue was too corny, it just turns me off like a light bulb.. It wasn't too much but all I can say is that it was almost a perfect story :)

For those who don't mind twincest and ot erotica this is a fun fast read, so don't miss it!

[Funzee Shu · Rating 2 out of 5]

1.5/5 stars

I think am 'normal'.... - in whatever 'normal' it is....

I like taboo-step siblings-incest kinda story....

I hope this one will be 'another good-step siblings-taboo-incest' story, but unfortunately - it ended in just 'so-so' reading for me....

It's feels like....drinking strawberry smoothie but its just reach the tips of your tongue and then....it ended just like that...leaving your thirsty unsatisfied...

Way too short and lack of 'story' plus....not even hot at all.... :P

[Books & Vodka Sodas · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was another one of Selena's 'incest' stories. I believe that there are two versions of this because I see conflicting reviews. Well, I read the 'step' version of the story and you know what even if they had been blood related I still would have loved it. The connection in the short pages made the intimate moments really hot and made the story even more hot for me. You like taboo? I recommend this one!

[Arlyn · Rating 4 out of 5]

Delicious, naughty fun. A bit easier to stomach than blood sibling erotica, step-sibling erotica hold just enough subversive flavor that you can dig into a bit of the taboo and suffer non of the guilt...The setting also heightens the feeling of the forbidden as there is a public sex slant and these two mischevious youngsters are in real danger of getting caught!

Fun, short, sexy and satisfying read.

[Margaret · Rating 3 out of 5]

No, it's definitely the only game on their mind. It may seem like it's taboo and incest, but they aren't really related, so it's not really... But it is a quick, hot read. I love the setting but it was far too short for it to be anything but a quickie.

[Anesha †Curious & Obsessive Bookworm† · Rating 3 out of 5]

Another quick read.

I liked it alot. Love that it was in the open, the risk of getting caught was thrilling. Also love how it kept reminding you that they were siblings. So the guilty pleasure, the forbidden read would never be forgotten, right up the the very end.

[Isabeau Delaunay · Rating 3 out of 5]

I like the sibling ones where it actually starts out where they realistically talk & converse like real siblings. Love the dark bus setup - who hasn't thought about (or acted on) that one?? (Hopefully not with a sibling tho). After initial reluctance it turns nicely dirty. Hot.

[Megan Lynn · Rating 5 out of 5]

A very short read and it was like a spice to a flame. It definitely heat up between them and it's actually great to read about a brother in a story that is smart. Even though I don't believe in incest it was a good read.

[Skye Blue ☆*~ﾟლ(´ڡ`ლ)~*☆ · Rating 4 out of 5]

Twincest. Usually I read m/m twincest, something a little more taboo about m/f twincest. IDK why.
Very well done.

I read the original version. I know there is a step sibling version...but really, I don't understand why that would be all that taboo.

Nice, short, taboo pwp.

[Debbie · Rating 3 out of 5]

Lust and incest something that I had never thought about much. Not sure how I felt about the relationship, but putting that aside, there was nothing wrong with the time and place of it.

[♥Xeni♥ · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was a really yummy erotica! A bit of sisterly-brotherly love thrown in (not very usual) but interesting.

[Adele · Rating 1 out of 5]

1/2 star
hot and steamy inscest.... not my thing. i felt uncomfortable reading it.
Got nothing against the writer. i just didn't like the topic.

[Martha]

Nook.

[Aimee]

This one squicked me out.

[Katherine · Rating 3 out of 5]

Very taboo like, On the Bus describes the journey of two brothers in the sex.
Short and very Selena, kudos for her making the difference.

[Gale · Rating 3 out of 5]

Read in 2010.

[Mitzi]

Free 12/31/11 On my PC

[Sassafrass · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 stars

This was short and steamy. I think I have the original version which is really more taboo and I think I will read that one too.

[Tina C. · Rating 2 out of 5]

So short. With a topic this taboo, I think a longer story is needed to really start to like the characters and accept what they are doing.

[Lys · Rating 3 out of 5]

The best part of this was the trivia near the beginning.

[Charmaine Stephens · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a quick fun hot one!