The opinion on this book seems pretty evenly divided, whatever stars have been given. I'd like to do my review just a tad bit differently to clarify some things to anyone thinking about purchasing this book. Bear in mind that I did end up fairly happy with the story overall, and intend to look further into the series.
First, three things regarding negative points mentioned in other reviews.
1. The "overuse" of information about mushrooms and hunting them: I am NOT a mushroom hunter, nor did I know anything about the activity prior to reading this book. Was there a lot of mushroom mentions? Sure, since that is the major hobby of the two senior characters. However, as someone who loves mysteries in the cozy genre, the mushrooms were no more distracting than if the lead characters were endlessly referring to their animals, scrapbooking, cooking, or soccer mom activities. It is an integral part of the characters' personalities, and quite honestly, I didn't think there actually was an overabundance that detracted from the story.
2. The speech of the 20-something males: Again, I did not see a problem with this. Do they talk like characters on Jersey Shore? Nope, they actually related in FULL sentences without a ton of vulgarity or slang. I think this may be a regional thing for readers, since there are still parts of middle America where young men can speak without sounding illiterate.
3. The improbability of "two old ladies to the rescue": First of all, since both characters were part of the local search and rescue team, it isn't that big of a stretch that they would be called in. Additionally, others had already been involved in the search prior to their arrival on the scene. And since many smaller communities rely on volunteers, it is not a stretch that the police would have utilized their resources first, since they did arrive due to a 911 call of injury.
Second, a few things I really liked about the book:
1. I liked that the author did not fully describe the "monster in the woods" in great detail. Although there are minor descriptive details, the sense of evil comes from atmosphere, allowing the reader to create their own picture of WHAT the monster might be.
2. Although some may be disappointed in the ending, I like the throwback to a Twilight Zone story-within-a-story-within-a-dream. It adds a sense of macabre to the whole tale, as well as setting up nicely to come back for more in the series.
3. This is a good beginning for a continuing series. If you liked everything tied up neatly at the end of a book, this will not be the one to purchase. Since I find that many books rush to tie up loose ends, I liked the fact that there is more out there to discover about the Black Woods.
With all that said, the reason that I only gave this book three stars is quite honestly the lack of style in the writing. The story was obviously thought out and drawn together, but the language was flat, and real descriptions of any sort were minimal at best. I think the author has potential with this series, but it needs to flow with the words, instead of so many short, choppy sentences. I'm hoping that the following books will contain more lively drama, because the author has a chance to develop an enjoyable series.