The author again fails to write a credible story. Most of the story suffers from only being held up by the stupid nonsense of mushroom feedstock. The fact that it is in the MC's power to invalidate this whole book by a single action, that of changing the feed, which was her intent in the previous book, and that she seems to forget about doing just so, disgusts me. This fact straight up invalidates the whole book as I see it but authors got to write right!?
This brings us to the story itself, when we are already trying to ignore a massive plot-logic-hole.
This thing is so specked with contrivance as to choke a goat.
- The MC, she is ineptness, passivity and non entity personified for purposes of inane plot. Not that the mc is alone in this for the author sure has his other characters bearing part of the load but it does not improve the story when just the nonsense the MC is labouring under is beyond absurd.
Kris Longknife is very wealthy and accounting for everything else she aught to have accumulated varying forms of power by now. So to the point that she could, hypothetically, personally design, have built and crewed a serious warship out of liquid assets and influence, made it the equivalent of a mobile home, or done whatever other sort of thing she could dream up. Come to think of it she did actually own the ship Wasp, that she picked up on the cheap so to say, but that seems to have been conveniently glossed over. As if someone scrapping ones ship without the meerest "by your leave" wouldn't register for a real person as a major blip of annoyance-anger-rage.
Same goes for being shipped away to be abused by thugs and whatnot. There is barely any reaction or response to these things by the MC. She just comes across as a mudroom boot scraper/brush. The title is again annoying with the only Furious in this book being a ship, and not a furious MC which I'd think valid. I did though find myself rather Infuriated while listening to the audiobook. So another book title in this series that falls more flat than not.
Another example.. with all her issues, worldly experience, perverse love of Government and following the law like a goody goody, having the top lawyers on her home planet on retainer for need would seem like the obvious thing. I would have expected a character like this to have any number of other things going on, fleshing things out, like have her own home on planet with personal retainers and so on. No, instead she is for some sicko reason still doing the equivalent of living in her parents house. People who only cause her trouble nine times out of ten.
She has no back-up plans or anything and this is with having been burnt before and more than once. She Never Learns, never takes the least precautions and so on.. this makes the character unbelievable
The story is weak and falls apart even when I have the audiobook running in the background while focusing my mind on playing a strategy war game.
Then came the absurd, something through a goose, wrap up of the book. Even the audio narrator made it feel like she was speed reading things. It starts getting silly from around the end of the so called legal proceedings against Kris Longknife on Musashi until the last few minutes of the book. Ludicrous does not suffice as a descriptor for the hash the author made of it.