Deroes kan Ingan is the Margrave of Arcanis, a self-proclaimed bachelor who plans to stay that way. Deroes has decided it’s time to undertake a diplomatic mission to the planet Terra. His advisors are not happy, but Deroes will not be swayed from his mission. How was Deroes ever to imagine that what seemed an innocent diplomatic mission, would lead to marriage, treason, and the loss of one of his own beloved family members.
While on Terra, Deroes meets young Elizabeth Sheffield, a southern belle who is a teaching assistant at the University of South Carolina. For Deroes, it is love at first sight, for Elizabeth it is a way off Terra and a way into a completely different life. Much to the dismay of Deroes’ council, Deroes decides to marry young Elizabeth and make her his queen.
Deroes’ nephew Aric, who Deroes had previously designated as his heir, is none too pleased about the current turn of events. Determined to dislike Elizabeth on principle alone, Aric goes out of his way to make life difficult for her, and makes no apology about how he feels about his uncle’s upcoming marriage.
Elizabeth and Aric are natural enemies from the first moment they meet. These feelings burn and fester as time passes. Imagine their utter surprise, when they actually fall in love with each other and begin to have an illicit affair. The stage is set for disaster. Is it possible for anyone to come out the winner in this battle of love and desire?
Ms. Sweeney takes us on a journey to a different time and place, and gives us a varied and interesting cast of characters to guide us on this journey. Written between, Deroes, Elizabeth and Aric’s point of views, we get different sides to the same story and get to see how the drama unfolds from all sides. All three of the main players in the story are richly fleshed out, and we get to know them so well that the world they live in seems real.
In most stories you have the good guy, the bad guy; the hero and villain, all of whom you recognize almost immediately. Ms. Sweeney has given us a story where the lines between good guy and bad, hero and villain are blurred and not easily discernible.
Deroes is a good leader; he understands his duties and follows them right up until it comes to his love of Elizabeth. I would go so far as to say he is obsessed with her, possibly to the determent of his country. There were times I liked him, times I felt sorry for him and times I felt he really just needed to look closely at this woman he has fallen so hard for.
Elizabeth – oh what to say about Elizabeth – she was spoiled, she wanted what she wanted, and didn’t mind doing whatever it took to get what she wanted. I had a hard time liking her and must admit, I never did truly warm up to her.
Aric was at times the bad guy, the way he treated Elizabeth in the beginning was unforgivable, and at other times I got the sense that he is truly a man that cares about his country, and only wants what is best for it and his family. Like Elizabeth and even Deroes to a certain extent, Aric could be self-centered and arrogant.
I enjoyed this book, but even through the end had a hard time warming up to the principle characters, which made my enjoyment in the story a little tainted. I’m assuming since the title of the book is Book One, that there is a sequel in the works and I’m a little stumped as to how Ms. Sweeney is going to bring together the issues from this book. We are left with a little bit of a cliffhanger, but it makes sense and didn’t leave me with the feeling that I was missing something and some cliffhangers often do.
There are a few unsettling graphic scenes where Aric’s family curse comes to the forefront, but they fit into the story. There are some love scenes, not too graphic, but enough detail is there that makes this most definitely not a YA book. Science fiction and fantasy lovers will enjoy this book, as well as anyone who just likes a good journey of love and political intrigue.
Reviewed as a Member of the Paranormal Romance Guild Dual Review Team