Rating: 2.5 Stars
Let me start out by saying that I won a copy of this book with First Reads, and I had my expectations set very high. In fact, I desperately wanted to like this book. I love romance novels and am always looking for a new author. However this book just didn't work for me. If I had to describe this book in one word, it would be confusing. To be fair, this is the 5th book in the series, so I'll give some leeway for that. However, there was just too much (characters, in particular) that appeared in story with little to no explanation of who/what they were. There was also the instance of two different people (I think? More confusion.) named Lettie. Probably not the best idea.
Then there was the romance. What can I even say? It wasn't that I disliked the characters, or the concept (falling in love with your brother's fiance). In fact, I thought the concept had extreme potential. The problem was how the romance progressed. All of the sudden, it's yes, I love you too even though I was just thinking about how marriage with your brother will be pleasant (if not passionate) because I love him. Then there's the sex scene. Can we discuss how he immediately pushes it in, with no foreplay. (she's a virgin for goodness sake!). Then stops, in the middle, foreplay ensues. Then the sex continues. Huh?
As for the rest of the book, the mystery of killed Sophia's mother and the identity of the mysterious Bishop, I feel it necessary to quote two former reviewers (you two nailed it). First, the story was overshadowed by the pacing. It was so disjointed, I had trouble keeping track of what was going on (and more importantly, why, since I couldn't follow the what). Secondly, it required a larger than normal suspension of belief than most novels, romance or not. First she suddenly remembers she used to draw as an little girl (and so amazingly accurate and life like too!). Even if I am going to pretend that she was a child prodigy, there is no way she forgot she used to draw. Murder or no, she was not that young. Then there was the scene they pretended to be actors. Then how they pretended to be someone else when they “broke into” Bedlam. Do I even need to explain how contrived that was?
All of that being said, there were some parts of the story that I enjoyed. I thought some of the secondary characters were wonderful. My favorite (and I imagine he will win over everyone who reads the book) was Singh. I also think that Langdon has the potential to be an interesting character (of course, we've seen what this author does with potential, so maybe not). Is he the perfect guy Nicholas seems to think he is? Or is there something hidden beneath the surface? And let's not forget the insane actress Maggie. I thought she was well written. Finally, the idea to include psychology was brilliant (though honestly, how it was brought in through Sophia was just plain ridiculous). Still, including the concept was interesting and something I haven't seen done before despite the many, many romance novels I've read. At some point, I will probably pick up the conclusion to this series (whenever it comes out) if only to satisfy my desire to know who killed Sophia's mother, and more importantly, why?