This is a story with a lot of potential. I suspected when I saw that it was only 50 pages long that it might not be well developed, and I was right. However, I was surprised by how much the story tried to do. I would love to see the author rework this and make it into a novel in its own right - there is definitely enough material here for that, and it has a dark feel to it already that I suspect I would very much enjoy.
Was disappointed. Not really too much actually about a succubus. The story followed a woman who had a bad relationship and made her son her whole life. The succubus didn't come in till later and even then it was more about mother-in-law/daughter-in-law dislike.