I initially reviewed this at 4 stars but, having read many many many more graphic novels, I do have to drop it down to 3. Let's call it a 3.5 if you'd like.
I do adore Page by Paige, but to my eyes Will and Whit is just kind of a rehash with some of the heart taken out. You have a loner not-like-normal-teens protagonist (even down to preferring old things to new) who struggles to socialize despite her objectively cool artistic hobbies... but in this case the narrative seems a lot more random, because instead of having a linear arc of learning to be more outgoing in a new place, Will has to heal her fear of the dark, which seems to have come from the death of her parents in a car crash.
It was never really clear to me if this was the case, actually-- Will is afraid of the dark, and this is illustrated in some occasionally fun ways, but it wasn't clear to what extent this was or was not related to the death of her parents, and why. It wasn't clear, either, how her journey through the book led to healing-- or if it did at all. We don't get to see a clear difference in behavior from beginning to end. Things just sort of happen, and Will's fear of the dark gets brought up, and occasionally she thinks about how she's still not over the thing she won't talk about, and then at the end many warm things are said that imply a resolution when nothing really happened in the way of one. She just went from not talking about it to talking about how she arguably should. I really struggled to make it through the book, especially the beginning, with the lack of connection between the different events happening.
I still love the art style and the big chunky lines, but especially rereading this in the 2020s, it's hard to make a case for a black-and-white graphic novel. Especially one that so frequently references color! I do genuinely wish it was possible for books like these to get color reprints, because it's missing an entire world of potential right now. I also wish that the Whitney scenes felt... well, darker, because I didn't have much to go on outside of black page borders, and it was clear the characters felt the storm a lot more.
There's also a bit of mildly uncomfortable nice-guy stuff that only really works if you get on board with the "obviously this girl should be dating her friend, not that random other guy who actually made a move!" vibe early. I'm also not sure how I feel about the white characters trying to encourage the one Indian girl to not wear blue contacts because she ~doesn't need to change herself~ and referring to her "Indian princess eyes" (?!) and praising the fact that she "looks Indian again" when she removes them. I mean, yes, she doesn't have to change herself, and I'm glad she ends up feeling comfortable with her dark eyes, but is this really the vehicle?
Still, I'm glad I bought myself a copy, and I do see myself likely reading it again. It just didn't pull me through this reading slump.