I enjoyed this one much more than I anticipated.
I admit that it is far from perfect. Very far, in fact. However, the story was extremely addictive. I found myself able to overlook the faults because I wanted to see where things were going. I wanted to know how it would end. Due to these two factors, there were moments in which I felt as though I could give four stars yet at the same time there were moments in which I felt as though it needed to be dropped down to two stars. Mostly, it was a three star read with the occasional flicker up and down.
I’ll start by saying I haven’t read any western romances before. I haven’t read all that many romances, if I’m completely honest, but I’m trying to change that. In fact, I’ve probably read more pure romance novels in the last twelve months than I have in all the prior years of my life. I wouldn’t say I’ve become a romance addict or a true fan, but I appreciate the genre a lot more than I once did. I enjoy the genre more than I once did. As with every genre, you get the good and the bad along with those that sit in the middle. For me, this one sat somewhere in the middle. It’s enough to leave me wanting to read more in the western romance genre, but I won’t be going out of my way to do so instantly. I’m also happy to read some of the authors other works. After all, considering how this was a free book and it wasn’t the worst read ever, I’m happy to see what her other free books have to offer.
I’m allowing the tangent to pull me along, though. My apologies!
I’ll start with the inconsistencies in the read, as it’s best to get that out of the way. They weren’t so bad as to be screaming in your face with every turn of the page, but there were quite a few. Enough to be noticed, in short. If, like me, you find yourself pulled into the story they can be overlooked – but it doesn’t remove the fact that they are there. A good proofread and edit would have removed them.
The biggest thing, in terms of inconsistency, though, was the characters. I know the changes in their behaviour was supposed to cause drama – yet they seemed to be on an almost chapter-by-chapter bipolar mood change. One chapter our leading lady was acting as though she was the strong independent woman and the next she was acting like a damsel in distress, only to flip back to strong independent woman again when it suited her. I know these changes were linked in with the story in some ways – yet it did bug me quite a bit.
Still, the story was fun. I would have liked a bit more by way of action – it always seemed to be just out of reach, then whenever it came about it was gone too soon – but the story was a fun one. It kept me engaged, and I was curious to see how it would end.
Overall, a decent enough read.