Things I wish I had realized when I was reading the synopsis of this book:
1. It's not a fantasy, but a romance novel.
2. It's not just a romance, it's a Christian romance.
3. It's the fourth book in a series.
Even without these three hits against it (to be fair, I probably could have figured out the first one by looking at the cover a little more closely), I still would not have cared for this book at all.
It's been a long time since I've read a romance novel, but do all of them have such a transparent plot? I don't think that there was any question of a happily ever after happening here, and I'm sure Ms. McCalla would say that it's because the good guys kept (or reaffirmed) their faith in their imaginary friend. I mean, seriously: other than a single broken arm, nothing bad of any lasting value happened to the good people in the story, and all of the bad guys got what was coming to them. Life just doesn't work that way, regardless of what deity you do or don't believe in. Bad things happen to good people, for no reason, and bad guys get away with doing terrible things all the time. It's sad, but also more believable than this tripe.
Also, I've never seen anyone more wholly unfamiliar with what a nurse actually does; the author portrays King Philip's nurse like a moron. No nurse that I have ever met (I work in the healthcare industry) would ever not know what a medication in an IV drip would do, since it sounds like she's given it to other patients before. Giving three times the normal amount of a medication would also raise questions from the nurse, particularly for a Very Important Patient. Finally, "...but what do I know? I'm just the nurse" is perhaps the most insulting part of the whole scene. That kind of gross ignorance is why we continue to have a nursing profession in this country: people assume (wrongly) that a nurse is someone who really wanted to be a doctor, but wasn't smart or determined enough to do so. Nurses are incredibly dedicated professionals who went into the field because they had a calling, not because they weren't good enough to be a doctor. Anyone who has watched a nurse work for more than five seconds would realize that. It's a dirty, emotional, harrowing job, and those who do it, do it because they love it.
Please, someone stop me if I ever pick up another book written by this woman. Please.