Under His Hands

by Michelle Fox

Sara has fantasized about erotic spanking for years and Luke is the cowboy who can make all her fantasies come true. A short story of 4000 words.

Genres: BDSM, Erotica, Short Stories, Romance, Adult Fiction, Westerns, Adult

13 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 15, 2012

About the author

A USA Today & NY Times bestselling author, Michelle Fox lives in the Midwest with her husband, kids, the occasional exchange student and two, sweetly disobedient dogs. She loves fantasy and romance, which makes writing paranormal romance a natural fit.

In her spare time, she's been known to shake her bon-bon at Zumba, make spectacular cheesecakes, hoard vintage costume jewelry and eat way too much ice cream (Ben and Jerry’s Karamel Sutra for the win!).

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Reviews

[Jessica · Rating 2 out of 5]

Hmmm..while the writing was good, it just wasnt what I expected. I have this problem when I download free books from BN, I don't read what the book is actually about. LOL, wish there was more story of them before their meeting. And of course more of their story after!

[Joelle · Rating 5 out of 5]

I found this book on a "free erotika for Kindle" list, but that certainly isn't a comment on its quality. I enjoyed details she brought to the book, including things like mentioning FetLife- as described in the book, by myself in real life, and other places as "the Facebook for kink." Many lines I enjoyed enough to underline and share on Facebook as I was reading. I was instantly enamored of Luke's straight forward, blun style of domination. I loved the direct comments about BDSM terms such as "safe words." I only have two compliments, which are more about me than the author or the book. 1) I don't like the word "core" when it's used to talk about the female sexual experience. 2) I would have loved a longer story. On the second point, I just need to see what else this author has written.

[BookAddict ✒ La Crimson Femme · Rating 2 out of 5]

This is sweet with it's spanking. It is more than okay. It's a 2.5 star book. I truncate so it is down to 2. The story flowed fine. The reason why it is just a 2.5 is because it's forgettable. Will I remember this in a month w/o reading my review or blurb? Probably not. This doesn't mean it is a bad book. It just means it didn't hold my attention. For spanking enthusiast this is a little something to tide you over until the next spanking book.

[Kelly · Rating 3 out of 5]

Nicely naughty spanking story with some parking lot sex thrown in for good measure. Have I mention that I like cowboys lately?

-Kelly @ Reading the Paranormal

Under His Hands was a free Kindle book I downloaded on 01/31/13 for the Why Buy the Cow? reading challenge.

[Arlyn · Rating 4 out of 5]

I seem to be more generous in my reviews than the average. Anyway, this was pretty hot. The male lead, Luke, was just affectionate enough and commanding enough. By the end, I found him very sexy. Spanking is a big theme here...though I find it growing on me the more I read about it, I think I'll just live vicariously for now.

[Becca · Rating 4 out of 5]

This short story is the first time meet between Sara and Luke who have been communicating on line and by telephone for several months. The spanking scene is hot and well written. It would be wonderful as part of a longer book.

[Annie · Rating 4 out of 5]

I enjoyed this story. Usually my complaints with shorts are that there was not enough story, but not for this one.

There was just enough story and just enough sexy. :)

The spanking was well wrote and very steamy. I even liked the hero and the heroine.

[Daisy Sloan · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a really short story (17 pages). It was hot and erotic! Sara and Luke met on FetLife. He likes to spank and she wants to be spanked. They finally meet at a bar for the first time. They head outside where Luke spanks Sara to ecstasy.

Only problem? Too short to get into the characters.

[Tina · Rating 3 out of 5]

Ok you have to suspend your disbelief here because what she does in the real world could possibly get her killed. HOWEVER since this is lala land I didn't have much of a problem with it. Pretty good dispite the problem with the situation in the real world.

[Michelle · Rating 3 out of 5]

Sara has fantasized about erotic spanking for years and Luke is the cowboy who can make all her fantasies come true.

A good erotic read but it was too short (only 17 pages) - very good but I wanted more of the story.

[Angela · Rating 3 out of 5]

this is a hot little quickie if you enjoy a little spanking. (I too would like to see a full story around this one scene)

[Cearthangel · Rating 1 out of 5]

Seariously!!!! It was just sex, nothing romantic about this book.

[Betsie · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a good short story if you are into spanking and submission. The last line was cheesy, but overall well written.

[Rabbit {Paint me like one of your 19th century gothic heroines!} · Rating 3 out of 5]

I mean this book get's to the point it's just spanking and sex.

AT LEAST THERE IS A SAFEWORD.

This book also doesn't act all pretentious, it is what it is. It served it's purpose.

[Nikki · Rating 3 out of 5]

A spanking good time! ;)

[ForbidenFruit · Rating 4 out of 5]

So hot

[Jane · Rating 3 out of 5]

Under His Hands was a story with anticipation, control and fantasy fulfilled. This spanking story is a hot well-written short. If spanking is your thing, this one gets it going; don't miss it.

[Kimberly Walter · Rating 4 out of 5]

Short story but oh so very hot.

[Diane · Rating 2 out of 5]

Didn't really care for it

[Carrie Garza · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short. Just a short story about spanking. Nothing deeper than that.

[Donna Rae · Rating 4 out of 5]

Short but hot!

[Natalie Walker · Rating 3 out of 5]

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